MGFF Broken Mirror-Love That Make You INSANE( DISCONTINUE )

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payal.gupta177

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Congrats for new ff. Interesting prologue and cs.

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tania90

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Posted: 8 years ago

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nice prologue
sach main jab dil tuta hai to unhe bhi nhi ota chla jo dil main hote hai
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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 8 years ago

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congrats for new story

nice cs

interesting prologue

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Mahika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Part 1

In Delhi
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Mamma...mamma... hume college bhi jana hai...nashta ready hai kya ?

Ranu(murmur) : ye ladki bhi na...niche abtak aayi nahi...aur upor se chilla rahi hai...
Ha beta pehle niche to ayea...

Geet : lo hum agaye...

There is standing Geet look like a fairy...hazel eyes , round face , plump lips with smil, wearing kurta & jeans, hair open attach with a clip...

Ranu : Kal jo maine kaha tha woh yaad hai na ?

Geet : kya kaha tha ? Mischief in her eyes...

Ranu slap on her head...

Ranu : tum kabhi sudhrogi ya nahi...hamesha masti...pata nahi sadhi k baad kya karogi.?

Geet : Mamma hume sadhi nahi karni...hum hamesha aapke aur Papa k sath rehna chahte hai...

Ranu : Acha agar kabhi humari iss Pari ko kisise pyar ho gaya to...tab bhi nahi karogi sadhi...Ranu said that caressing her cheek...

Geet : Nahi mamma aisa kabhi bhi nahi hoga...aap 2no hi bas humari duniya hai...hume aur kisiko pyar nahi karna...aur nahi kisika pyar chahiye

Ranu : acha thik hai...aab der nahi ho rahi hai kya?

Geet : Ok mamma...I have done...bye mamma...

Ranu : arre ye kya...abhi to kuch khaya bhi nahi tumne...

But Geet was rushed...

Ranu : ye ladki bhi na...pata nahi kya likha hai iski kismat main...Babaji meher karna meri bachhi par...

Mohindar : Ranu Geet chali gayi hai kya ?

Ranu : Ha woh to kabki nikal gayi...kyu kuch kaam tha kya ?

Mohindar : Nahi, main soch raha tha dukan jate waqt ushe bhi college chor awo...

Ranu : Nahi rehne dijiye,,,waise bhi aaj ushe kahi ore jana hai ,college se pehle...

Mohindar (confuse) : Kaha ?
Ranu : Aap vool gaye aaj kya hai...?Choddo..aap bhi jao kaam pe...main aapka Tiffin leke aati hu...ruko...

Ranu come from kitchen with Tiffin & hand over to Mohindar...
Mohindar take Tiffin box & went for his Shop,,,he has small shop of clothes...

Ranu again busy in her work...

In Khurana Mansion
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Mom...mom...where is bhai ?
A girl screaming... mom...for her bhai...

Priya : How do I know Annie beta ? Go check in his room...he must be there...

Annie : Ok mom...
Now she is going to her big bro's room...
Bhai, bhai... are you inside ??
Koi awaz hi nahi arahi hai...
Main andar ajaoo.?
She is go inside...to check...where is her bhai...

Annie : Bhai kaha ho aap ?

Reply came inside the washroom...
Maan : Just 5 minutes Annie...

Annie : Ok bhai...
She seats on bed...waiting for her Maan bhai...to come out...

Opening the door Maan came out...wearing jeans pant & towel on his neck...he only come out after take shower...water dropping from his hair...looking really dashing...
He crossed Annie & go to cupboard to take his dress...

Maan : Ha Annie bolo tum kuch bolna chahti thi ?

Annie : Bhai mujhe aaj shopping jana hai...

Maan insert his head cupboard to choose his dress... & reply...

Maan : Ha to ? Jao tumhe kisne rokha hai...

Annie : Par bhai mujhe aapke sath jana hai...

Now Maan turn his head & look at Annie...

Maan : What ?

Annie : Ha...mujhe aapke sath jana hai...

Maan : Main jan sakta hu...kyu mere sath jana hai.? Aur waise mujhe aur bhi bohat kaam hota hai...
Maan said this & collect his dress & bingo...

Annie : (murmur) ha ha pata hai aapka kitna kaam hota hai...ush witch k sath...

But Maan heard everything...
Maan : Kya kaha tumne...come again...

Annie : Kuch nahi bhai...main akeli hi chali jayongi...bye see you...

Maan : Annie suno to...
Maan shake his head in sadly...he is ready... to go college...
He come downstairs to look for Annie...

Maan : Gd Morning Mom... Annie kaha pe hai.?

Priya : Gd Morning beta...ha woh to kabka chali gayi...aapse baat nahi huyi kya ? Subah subah toh aapke liye chilla rahi thi...

Maan : Hmm...he is doing breakfast...his mom served for him

Priya : Kya hua beta.?
Caressing his head...

Maan : Kuch nahi mom...he finished...ok bye mom...

Priya : Bye...hamesha jaldi rehtihai inko...pata nahi kab sudhrenge ye...pata nahi kya likha hua hai inki kismat main...mujhe to kabhi kabhi darr lagta hai inke barre main soch k...

Raj : Kis se darr lagta hai ?

Priya : ohh Raj aapne to dara diya mujhe...

Raj : accha ?
Ok bye Priya...main office ja raha hu...sham ko baat karenge...

Priya : Bye Raj...(smile)

Next : Hii Maan...

Edited by AnkushMahika - 8 years ago

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