'Har Ek Wall ko Support ki Zaroorat Hoti hai':SHIVIKA

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'...har ek dard ko dawaa ki zaroorat hoti hai' -Omkara

Does she know he has stopped taking medicines ever since she blasted him about it?
Does she know he finds in her, all his daily entertainment now?
One smile from her, one line is all it takes to crack him up when he's down and low, or suffering from some serious emotional blackmailing?
The wall that was held together with pain, with broken shards of his family, pinching his roots, boots, and heart, he stood tall, until she broke him down with laughter, exasperation, and tenderness.
What could he do in the face of this support he had never expected to find?
The Great Wall of Shivaay, yearning for a miracle, right before the night of his wedding deal.
And there she was, hurrying towards him like one.
He saw in her the answer to his prayer, the reason for his next breath, and the little pin that would untie his knots of responsibilities.
There she was, his own personal miracle, shining with the conviction of her heart.

The next days were a blur for him, finding proofs, getting burnt by a child of 8, his brothers, and other assorted people.
But she, she was glorious and supportive. She was the cement that held him together, she made him focus on what was important, without pressurizing him. She let him breathe easy.
A child who never got her childhood, only a sister, an employee, a friend: never the subject of poetry (too many responsibilities).
But he, all he could see in her was beauty, madness, and genius. He saw love, he saw tenderness, and he saw loyalty. But she was merely a partner in crime-solving, wasn't she?

Then why did his heart sing as he held her hand, forgetting and RE-memorizing the feel of hers in his?
Why did he always forget to remember he had made promises to another, while his heart went on to repeatedly vow his heart and soul to her?

Anika: The answer to all his riddles; the cement that held together his broken shards and reinforced the tired, beloved, strong wall of Shivaay Singh Oberoi with her shining beams of light, love, and laughter.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yeh hui na darwajatod analysis of Shivika 👏
I knew you will come up with a beautiful piece 😳 ..."any good" pagal hain kya tu geet? 😆 This is perfect 😳...you always have this skills to portray Shivika in a artistic way ha 😳
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Originally posted by: Frozen.K

Yeh hui na darwajatod analysis of Shivika 👏
I knew you will come up with a beautiful piece 😳 ..."any good" pagal hain kya tu geeta? 😆 This is perfect 😳...you always have this skills to portray Shivika in a artistic way ha 😳


Teri wajah se kiya hai aaj!😆 IF you hadn't said, I'd not have, truly!😳

I'm so happy it was liked😆😆
Occupational hazard😳

And seriously, THIs stuff I have done with all my heart for GHSP, and for IPK. So much love for IPK that I was seriously invested. 😆
It was hard to figure out Nakul's acting style, because light eyes= hard to describe emotion for me, since i'm not attracted to that sort of thing, but I'm guessing I'm managing alright😆

Thanks for reading, love!🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a



Teri wajah se kiya hai aaj!😆IF you hadn't said, I'd not have, truly!😳

I'm so happy it was liked😆😆
Occupational hazard😳

And seriously, THIs stuff I have done with all my heart for GHSP, and for IPK. So much love for IPK that I was seriously invested.😆
It was hard to figure out Nakul's acting style, because light eyes= hard to describe emotion for me, since i'm not attracted to that sort of thing, but I'm guessing I'm managing alright😆

Thanks for reading, love!🤗



You are managing it just perfect 😳 And keep it up 😆
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Thank you! 😃
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Thank you! 😳
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Originally posted by: Frozen.K



You are managing it just perfect 😳 And keep it up 😆



😆 thankuz!! It'll get intense hopefully and not as repetitive in writing ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Geet.. you brought the feels .. right from the first sentence.. I could feel the happiness shivaay must be going through in his deepest corner of heart. I just posted the after effect of them on him and what a coincidence you posted the effect of them on him AT THE MOMENT..
Geet 🤗 dekha hamara connection.. 😆

Loved your post geet "AS ALWAYS"

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Originally posted by: pritzz

Geet.. you brought the feels .. right from the first sentence.. I could feel the happiness shivaay must be going through in his deepest corner of heart. I just posted the after effect of them on him and what a coincidence you posted the effect of them on him AT THE MOMENT..

Geet🤗dekha hamara connection..😆

Loved your post geet "AS ALWAYS"



Awww!
Hum awesome hain 🤗
And you say what I feel while I say what you feel!
So totally awesome!! 😳
I TRIED! Most of it is fictional but well, I'd imagine him feeling all of this at the moment, if not consciously then subconsciously 😳 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well said...
Aap ka title bohot hi genuine hai and that's true for the great wall of shivaay...

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