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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Res for all chapters
Srry for being late


Okay, Ritu! was waiting to read yours too. And no need to be sorry. do comment soon. would be glad to know ur views.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Awesome updates 👍🏼

Nisha and her family bonding was too good..
Nibir in the rain 😳
All update was cute and sweet 😊 loved them all..
Continue soon..!!


Thank you Anmol.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poornima_15

Loved all the chapters


Thank you friend.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Enjoyed all of the chapters!!😃😃
Nisha's convo with kirti about I'm in love with Kabir Kumar was mind blowing🤣🤣🤣
Bechaari ko jhoote sapne dikhaaye😆

"For the very first time Nisha felt that Kabir did a good job." I also felt the same🤣🤣
NiBir rain sequence was lovely😳
Sukku ekdum fast nikla😆
Nisha and Kabir were casually walking to irritate them further more.😆😆 itna pareshan karna banta hai dono ko akela chodne ko kaha tha pichli baar khud k romance k liye ab bhugto🤣
And what is revelation 😲 Full on suspense bana diya yaar!
Waiting for next update


Really telling u mate. i love to read ur comments. Sometimes u point out such lines that even i dont remember. Thanks a lot. And Revelation bahut sahi hai. read karlo.😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Chapter-10

Distribution of Work between the Youngsters

Ay- Okay!

As soon as Ayesha said that Suku was way too much delighted.

S- (over-excited) Really?

Ay- Yes!

Suku would have jumped in the restaurant but he managed to control himself. All of them saw it and were laughing inside because they knew that if they would laugh in front of Suku he would have beaten them black and blue. But Nisha was Suku's favorite as she was the only one who would dare to do something she knew was dangerous.

Ni- (Teasingly) Suku yaar aaj tu bada excited dikh raha hai. Kuch hua hai kya?

S- (glared, annoyed but said with a forced smile) Nahi Nisha! Woh bas it's my sister's wedding so that is why!

All of them giggled. The waiter brought the food in the meanwhile so they decided to eat first and then discuss about the jobs in the wedding. After having their food,

Ka- Guys! So let us start discussing!

Ay- Umm... Can I also join in with the wedding preparations?

Kar- You are our guest Ayesha!

Ay- I would love to help you all in any way I can.

Ki- I think we need your help.

Everyone was astonished for how could Kirti make a guest work. Then Kirti smirked looking at Suku and everyone except Suku and Ayesha understood what she meant.

Ni- Yes Kirti! you are right. We would surely need your help. (giggles)

Kartik understood that now Ayesha and Suku were supposed to be given the same tasks.

Kartik- So let us start with photography. I will get a photographer for the functions to be organized by both the families as well as a spereate one for the two.

Kar- The work of entertainment should be done by whom? For both the families as well as separately.

Ka and ni- I will do it.

All of them except for Nisha and Kabir giggled.

Ni and ka- I am not going to for it!

They glared at each other.

Kar- Are you two doing it or not?

Ka and Ni- I will!

They were now really annoyed with this sync thing.

Ka- Okay fine I will do it.

Ni- (Mockingly) I am doing it for your kind information!

Ka- For your information, I am doing it.

Ni- no! Wait! It is about entertainment na? So we shall ask the ones who live with us to tell us who is more entertaining between the two of us? What say are you ready? (In a challenging tone)

Ka- Well, I am for sure.

It was a one-one tie for Nisha and Kabir as Kartik chose Nisha whereas Kirti chose Kabir.

Ka- Ayesha?

Ay- Well I met you two for the first time. I don't know! (confused look)

Ni- Come on Ayesha give it a try. You are with us for the past one hour. You can think of it.

Ay- I will go with... Kabir!

While Kabir is elated Nisha is angry at Ayesha.

Ni- (monologue) Kabir! Rukk teri toh! Ab main bhi dekhti hoon tu kaise banti hai mere brother ki dulhan! Jab nanad (sister-in-law) hi khush nahi ho toh kuch nahi kar payega koi bhi kaazi! (The actual one is JAB MIYA BIWI RAAZI TOH KYA KAREGA KAAZI) Ab dekh Ayesha ki bacchi tere tote kaise udahti hoon.

Nisha became happy whereas Kabir became nervous because they realized that it was Suku's turn and they knew that he would pick Nisha.

Ni- (teasingly) Kabir, ab kiski baari hai?

Ka- (upset) Suku!

Su- It is definitely Nisha! (side-hugs Nisha)

Kar- 2 votes each! What are we going to do now? How are we going to get our winner?

Kirti texted something to Kartik being unnoticed by everyone and then smirked. Kartik read the message and smirked back.

Kar- (pretending to be serious) This means Nisha and Kabir would have to do this task together. (giggles inside)

Ka and Ni- (almost shouted)- What??? NO!!!!!

Ki- Yes! Because now that it is a tie you two will have to do it together.

Ka- Wait! I have an idea.

Nisha looked at him with hopeful eyes.

Ka- Waiter!

Everyone except Nisha looked at him in disbelief. Nisha would tolerate asking a waiter about their entertainment skills but not to work with him. The waiter came.

Waiter- (politely) What is it sir?

Ni- We need a small favor from you.

Everyone except Kabir nodded in a no but still Kabir asked.

Ka- Who is more entertaining between both of us?

All the others face palmed except for Nisha. Nisha and Kabir were looking at the waiter with eyes full of hope. The waiter smiled and replied, "I am sorry sir but I barely know the two of you. I cannot tell who is what just by taking orders and bringing them." The waiter left.

Ka- (frowned) I cannot work with this girl!

Ni- The feeling is mutual! (looked the other way)

Kar- (stern voice) You have to. (looking at Kabir)

Ki- (Stern voice) And that is our order. (looking at Nisha)

Kar and Ki- the bride and the groom's order!

Kabir and Nisha looked at each other with anger.

Ka and Ni- Fine!

Ki- (calm voice) Good! Now for the stylist, I will look after it. after all there should be something that I do at my own wedding and give credit to myself for its success. (giggled)

Kar- Dance? Well we have a choreographer. (looking at Kabir) So we do not need to hire anyone.

Kabir shows attitude. Nisha frowns.

Kar- So this is also done. Now Suku and Ayesha will supervise everyone.

S- This is not done Kartik. I am your future brother- in-law. You cannot just ask me to supervise! (frowned)

Ay- I think Suketu, that is the best job. To correct everyone's mistakes and get everything in order like some wedding planners. (Excited)

Su- you are right Ayesha! I was about to say that they cannot give us a job to supervise. I think I am not legible for it.

Everyone laughs at him. How quickly he changed his decision!

Ay- No Suku! I am sure you will do great. We will do great. (smiled)

Su- (monologue) Haaye! Yeh ladki toh mujhe maar hi dalegi apne pyaar bhari aawaz se. Yeh toh married bhi nahi hai. Try to marna banta hai.

Su- You think so?

Ay- I believe in it. I trust you.

Ni- (monologue) Life mein ek baar mujhe doubt kar sakta hai par khud ko kabhi nahi karta hai yeh Suku. Pakke se pyaar mein pad gaya hai yeh. Par iss Ayesha se pehle ki baat ka badla toh lena padega.

Kar- Guys! Now that we are done with these jobs we should also see the jobs our parents have discussed with us. (everyone nodded)

Ki- I am doing with the venue. Who is with me?

Kar- I am! (smirks)

Kar- Then for catering from our side Kabir is doing. (looking at Kirti) who is it from your side. (Nisha was shocked)

Ki- (smiles) Nisha! (now it was Kabir's chance to get shocked but they decided to go with it and not to fight again.)

Ki- Arrangements for the guests will ebb done separately so no need to discuss.

Kar- Now decorations? Kabir from our side.

Ki- (laughs) Nisha from ours.

Nisha and Kabir gave a NOT AGAIN!' look. Even Kartik joined Kirti in laughing.

(BIG REVELATION FOR NIBIR because they would not even in their wildest dreams, like to share any work. and here they are made to do almost all the work together.)

Ka- (looking at Nisha) Why do you always have to copy me?

Ni- Copy you? (smirks) Not even in my wildest of the wildest dreams.

Ka- Then you would dream wildest of the wildest of the wildest dreams quite often, won't you? (smirks)

Ni- (irritated) It can actually not be done! I cannot bear him again.

Ka- (smirks again)) The feeling is mutual, LOVE.

Ni- How dare you call me LOVE?

Kabir was about to say something but was cut off by none other than Kartik and Kirti who shouted, "SHUT UP!"Nibir were not embarrassed but were rather angry because they wanted a conclusion to the fight.

Kar- Now you two do not have any option. (Nisha and Kabir made faces) We are done with everything. Some things are there to discuss we will discuss them tomorrow. Let us go.

Suku signed Ayesha to help him make them go. Ayesha without asking any questions decided to help him.

Ay- I think the two of you should go. I have some work and I would need some help too.

Ki- What work?

Ay- actually I need to get my bags and baggages from the hotel. They are four and are quite heavy so I would need some help.

Kar- We can also help you.

Nisha and Kabir were not able to understand a thing but realizing that it was Suku and Ayesha's plan they decided to help them.

Ni- No jiju! I think that the two of you should go. Parents might have got something to discuss with you.

Ka- And when Ayesha is saying that there are only four luggage. So we will get it. you go!

Ki- If you insist!

Kirti and Kartik felt it weird but decided to ignore it.

Ka- Why?

Su- What why?

Ni- Why have you two made them go?

Ay- Because Nisha we wanted to discuss about something.

Ka- And what is that something?

Su- We need to disucss about their first night and honeymoon plans.

Ay, ni and Ka- (shocked) What???

Su- Hey! Don't take me wrongly. I mean that the decorations for their first night and their destination and package for their honeymoon. (defending himself)

They sighed in relief.

Ni- S0 what do you want us to do?

Su- I think we should distruibute this work also.

Ni- I won't do anything with this guy!

Ka- So would I.

Su- Nisha please na yaar samajh na. (indicating towards Ayesha, which went unnoticed by Ayesha)

Ni- Theek hai, I will do the first night preparations with this guy!

Ka- I won't.

Su- (hugs Kabir and whispers to Kabir) Bhai maan jaa please!

Ka- (whispered back) Aagaya na tu apni wali pe. Ek hi shart pe.

Su- Bhaunk (bark!)

Ka- Tu mujhe daantega nahi aur meri side lega.

Su- NO chance!

Ka- Soch le beta! Tera poora plan bigaad sakta hoon.

Su- (thinks) Done!

They break the hug.

Ka- Okay! I will do it with Nisha. So Suku and Ayesha you have to prepare for the honeymoon together. (they nod)

Ni- Let us also go.

Ay- But I actually have to get my luggage from the hotel.

Su- Okay! I will come with you. These two can take a taxi. (Suku pinched them so that they take his side)

Ni- (uninterested) We will go together.

Ka- (same way) We will.


Precap- Raat akeli hai...😉


Dekho mere precaps ka literal meaning usually nahi lena chahiye. Kabhi kabhi is okay.

And about Big revelation, it was a big revelation for Nibi but not for us. Because most of you might have thought that it might be some life-changing thing but I thought that lets just try to enhance the meaning of revelation. Sorry if i could not come upto your expectations.

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Just encountered with ur pm
10parts already posted!! 😲
Will start reading it today...
Will comment soon 😳
Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Res for part1 & 2

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on prologue n part 1

Interesting prologue!!
And character sketch also 😃
Kabir have a brother who love kirti , nisha's sis :)
Sukku the protective brother 😆
Jallad 🤣
Only vasu aunty can scold arjun uncle 😆
aww ramesh n arjun childhood frnds 😳
Chalo gharwale maan gye karthik k 😃
Kabir ne dil me nai zor se boldiya that his father is a jallad 😲🤣
Vasu n arjun uncle's antics were too cute!!
Aww kabir got work on Sunday also 🤔
He owns an academy!! Great 😃
Shit nibir nai mil payege isbar 🤔
Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Res for 3 & 4

unres
on part 2 &3

Umm kuch samaj nai aya mujhe!!
Kya kirti ko laga usko koi aur dekhne aa ra h? But karthik told her he is coming na??
Aww poor kirtu they fooled her 😆
she cried so much 🤔
Nishu kitni chulbuli hai 😆
capsicum 😲
Sachme looks like some evil witch 🤔
Mujhe b nai pasand !! Hi5
U n me r in shinchan gang now 😉
Pandit ko daraya gya h🤣
Match nai but inho shadi Ki dates Ki fixing kardali 🤣
Are I know sab date hi fix karna tha I mean... Match fixing type wali fixing 😆
karthik k kehne par Ki 😲
Haaye excited for nibir meet 😃
Going to read next!!
Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Ress

unres on part 4 & 5

Superb yar!!
M loving it!!
Its totally like a romcom movie 😃
Bhai behen ka pyaar!
Protective bro sukku
Two families Jo dost se rishtedar banne wali hain!!
And nisha n kabir dono equally ziddi 😆
Nibir Ki mulaqaat in accident! Muje laga hi tha wo kabir hi hoga!!
Loved their nikjhok
Sukku ne gaale laga k warning de dali 😉
But kabir to wahi karega Jo usey karna h 😆
BOTH want to avoid each other but saare bahane fail
Jab shuruwat me ye haal agey kya hoga 🤣
I m excited for their next meet 😃
Going to read next!!
Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Ek aur res b kar hi deti hu 😆

unres on part 6

Haha 😆
I knew it!! Ye Charo sath me jaa re hain but nibir ko alag Jane bolenge kirti n karthik to spend sometime with each other 😆
POOR NIBIR 😛
Both love coffee 😃
Mee too 😳
both hate love n stupidities ppl do in love 😆
I feel the same 🤣
They talked n laughed but looked here n there realising they actually talked 🤣
How can two enemies laugh together 😛🤣
Again sathme bole wo h same cheez 😆
simple yet elegant!! 😳
Gas wali problem 🤣
Aww nishu n chotu Ki talks!!
Mujhe khud Punjabi nai ati how can I judge it was correct or not 🤣
But it was surely cute 😳
Kabir ka confused yet cute face 😃
I can imagine it
They smiled at each other then.. Wat they smiled?but why? 🤣
Oh god this all is so cute 😳
Loving this story !! U write awesomely!! 👏
And chill babes!!
I love this story the way it is!!
Will love to read abt siblings bond also 😊
I know I m late to say it all coz u already wrote the next parts 🤣 but ab padi meine to abi hi bolungi na 😆 chalo let me read the cousins bonding wala part now!!
OK byee
Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 8 years ago

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