ShraMan TS: A Blessing in Disguise [Complete] - Page 12

Originally posted by: .SardiKiDhoop.

Wow! Beautifully done! <3

I really enjoyed this three-shot, it was so sweet and wholesome and satisfying to read. Loved how you made Aditya the "cupid", you're right, you can't hate him, he's got a good heart even if he can be a bit annoying at times. The first chapter with the accident was really well done - Suman would only have forgotten her promise/let go of what's holding her back if Shravan was hurt/in danger - like when she put that band-aid for him when she'd hurt him by pulling off the ring so roughly. Similarly to how Shravan's anger was totally pushed aside when she got into the accident. The way she unconsciously reverted back to her old self was really sweet and I loved the teasing and how easily they regained their comfort level back - of course until Ramnath interrupted.

I really appreciated how even before the whole Detective Aditya thing happened, Shravan could tell something was a little off with Suman and his dad, even if he wasn't quite sure what. And then bringing in Nirmala was much needed, I feel like she's so much of a mother-figure to Suman, much more than her own aunts, because of how understanding and compassionate she is and of course, how she treats her like her own daughter. My heart was just twisting in my chest when Suman had that breakdown - she really needed that, after bottling up all that grief and tension for so long. And using Kamini Chachi to indirectly reveal the truth to Shravan was brilliant! Even the way Shravan reacted was really well put, the running, the way he talked to Suman in broken sentences and that hug <3

I liked the ambiguous ending, to be honest, and I really appreciated the fact that you didn't have them spell their feelings out for each other at that point because, as you said "it didn't feel like the right time."

(I always end up typing up like an entire essay whenever I comment on your stories (I've commented previously as "KryanVirikaLuv"), whoops! I just end up having so much to say about the way you write and what you write :')