Meet OS - Jaise banjaare ko ghar - HBD Nikhad

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Deshians, šŸ¤—

I'm back with a small OS on our cuties Meet. I dedicate this to Nikhad since it's her birthday today...😳so Happy Birthday Nikhad baby šŸ¤— wishing you loads of love and happiness! Girl you've become so special to me now ā¤ļø

I've tried my best to write something "readable". I've posted many OS here but I always feel uncomfortable when it comes to writing... uhhh !!!!😵 Well I guess you all know that by nowšŸ˜›

Ok I should end my blah blah here and post the OS before I receive chappals in advance! šŸ˜†

Like always, i would love to receive chappals and jhoote to complete my long collection🤣




Preet and Meher
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar

Meher sat and started to cry silently. Her tears couldn't stop. This couldn't be possible. Preet hasn't left. He'll be back. He'll be back for her, for their Gungun and for their most awaited baby. The cricket team had to be complete.

It's been one month since Prem announced to all the family that Preet was no more. The whole family broke into pieces, everyone has that deep pain in their hearts. Meher tried her best to deal with all this situation. She had to be strong for Gungun and for her baby. Prem mentioned only the death but they haven't seen Preet and they never gave him the last rituals.

Was it a sign that Preet could be still alive ? May be the police got confused when they were doing the investigations at Viren's house...Maybe someone else's life was taken ? Was it possible ?

From the past one month, Meher wasn't in a state to think properly. The hearbreaking news deeply affected her. Even if she knew that there was still a small ray of hope, she somehow accepted the fact that Preet will never come back...

Today they were going to celebrate their 7th wedding anniversary...

The day when they both accepted each other as husband and wife...

The day they promised they'll always love each other

The day when their hearts and souls became one...

Meher went outside to take some fresh air...she always loved going outside to the beachside and remember her memories...

- - Preet, I miss you so much ! It's been 7 years, but I'm still here...coming here everyday and sit on the same bench... I still remember Preet ! It's here that you proposed me to marry you !

Meher's strenght broke at this moment and started to cry... from all her heart and soul... She couldn't take it anymore !

She was still crying when suddenly her phone rang.

- Allo

- Hello Meher ! Oh it was Heer ! Realized Meher.

- You've missed your appointement for your check up today, Please come at the hospital now ! You can't miss your check up like this. Hurry up !

Meher forced herself to stand up, but she was feeling very weak due to all her emotions emerging up. She was about to fall when a strong yet known pair of arms caught her.

Her eyes were closed in fear then she heard a voice...

- MEHER...

This can't be possible ! Preet ? No ! She didn't wanted this dream to end ! Her Preet was talking to her !

- Meher ankhein kholo ! Please ankhein kholo...

Meher opened her eyes and couldn't believe it. Her Preet was here ! She has been missing hearing his husky yet sweet voice so much !

- Preet... Sach mein tum ho ? She said before fainting in his arms.

- Meher ! Meher ! Utho naa ! Tum mujhe aise chor ke nahin jaa sakti ! Meher ! Meher ! Meher !

Preet put Meher carefully on the bench and tried tomake herwake up by throwing some drops on water on her face...

Few moments after, Meher slowly opened her eyes...and was shocked to see Preet...

- Preet ! Is that you ? Sach mein ? Please tell me this is not a dream and you're back ! Preet ! Why are you silent ? Baat karo mujhse ! Meher was no longer shocked but now angry.

- Meher, please shaant hoja ! I'm sorry ! Let me explain you what...

- Shut up Preet ! Kahan the tum ? Itne saalon thak ?

- Meher, said Heer joining them... Calm down please calm down I'll explain everything to you...

- Kya ? Didi Aap ? You knew ? said a shocked Meher

- Meher, actually I knew everything. Viren tried to kill Prem but Preet came to save him. Prem could escape but Preet was surrounded by a huge fire. Almost all his body was burnt and he was rushed to the hospital. In which condition he was, I can't even tell you Meher. My doctors mate informed me few weeks back that it was Preet who has been brought to the hospital. I was shocked ! Because we all accepted the fact that Preet was no longer with us. But Meher, this is a miracle ! Preet is still with us and...

- You kept all the things for yourself Didi ? Why you haven't told me about this ?

- Meher, said Preet, I couldn't come back home in such a situation, I can't even imagine their reaction if they saw me like that... Especially Gungun... How would I face our baby and how would I face you ??? I have scars through all my body... and soul *sighed Preet*

Meher remained silent. She couldn't believe that Preet was back and Heer's team doctors took the duty to cure Preet in the best way possible.

- Meher, said Preet, it took me 7 long years to come back, please forgive me, I was missing you each second and each moment of the days... cried Preet. Dil maan kar raha that ke abhi me tumhare paas ajaahun lekin I just...

- SHHH PREET ! Aab kuch maat bholo ! shaant ekdam shaant ! I missed you so much Preet said Meher hugging him tightly ! I can't even imagine what you've been through ! I'm sorry !

- SHHH MEHER ! Don't be sorry baby ! I'm back now ! Main saab theek kardunga , he said as he put his arms around her.

Heer was watching the two lovers, and tears of happiness came to her eyes. She left the place without disturbing Meet who were lost in their own world.

- Preet, I love you so much, even after all these years you're still looking like the same Gulaab Jamun I fell in love with !

- And you're still the same Soni Punjabi kuddi who has stole my heart forever he said, while taking her into a warm and passionate hug.




Edited by lazychick.maria - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lazychick šŸ¤— ur such a cutie ā¤ļø
Beautiful banner / title / the merging of pics is fab.

Th ending was beautiful and cute like Preet and Meher in show. Nice of you to add their own dialogues here. It's the beautiful part.

One thing I'm confused - Meet were married 7 years even in show.
Did u go by that? In that case Preet was away for few months hai na and he returned to Meher?
Or
In ir story Preet had been away 7 years and just returned?

Other than thsi everything is clearly written and smooth.

Beautiful Maria šŸ¤—

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Happy B'day Nikhad our bubbly Cool active writer on Desh Forum.šŸ˜Ž
Best wishes 🄳 Many happy returns of the day
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Posted: 8 years ago
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^ Aww Athi thank you so much for your feedback šŸ¤—Always looking forward to read your comments😳

Actually I myself got confused while writing thisšŸ˜• I really don't know how to write properly... Actually wanted to follow the show in that sense but I guess I forgot to mention it
I guess the accident happened 1 month before their 7th Wedding AnniversaryšŸ˜•šŸ˜† aaah I'm confusing myself nowšŸ˜›šŸ˜†It's impossible kyunki I've said he was away for years😲🤣 NOT LOGICAL AT ALL 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful story Maria. šŸ‘šŸ¼
Yeah...I too got a bit confused...how could Preet come back after 7 years if the accident happened only 1 month ago? ...and Meher is still pregnant...that would be an awfully long pregnancy šŸ˜†

Okay okay...joking aside...a very nice story just the same. I loved the range of emotions you showed poor Meher having. And most importantly you gave Meet and the readers a happy ending

Good job šŸ‘


I do hope you write more.

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Happy Birthday Nikhad 🄳

Hope this day is as special as you are šŸ¤—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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By the way...I love the story's banner Maria...pic selection...so apt šŸ˜Ž
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Fatima: AWWW 😲😳
Your comment!😲EEEKS😳 *hugs you tight abhi issi waqt* šŸ¤—

Thank you so much baby! You never fail to make me smile😃
Actually I guess I just wrote aisi without checking again so I totally forgot the logic! šŸ˜²šŸ¤”

7 years pregnancy?😲 LOL you cracked me up 🤣

I'm really sorry kinda lost the logic thing midway šŸ˜†
AWWW YES THE BANNER 😳 thank you šŸ¤—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Athi and Fatima Heeey my lovely girls, I love you so so much *_* I am so blessed to have you all in my life. I am really sorry that I am replying like this but actually I am very busy. My birthday has turned out to be a birthday week. My birthday celebration is still on and I have a lot to catch up with here, I will try to do that on saturday as from tomorrow family celebrations for my birthday will begin.

Please bear with me, please please :( ā¤ļøšŸ¤—

Edited by Nikhad003 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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MARIA SISSSY, my HEER DIDIII *_*

This is like I want to scream so loud, this was out of the world. I don't know how to thank you enough. You actually did write for me. I don't even want to mention about any confusions, the thing I want to mention here is the love you have for me. This feels extremely blessed. I mean, I can't express di, you have made your Meher so happy. This naughty, bubbly sister of yours is very emotional now and want to hug you so tight. LOVE YOU A LOT.

The story was so nice too. Yaay, my Meet were together again. Preet is alive. This is what is the best feeling for a crazy Meetian like me. I loved Heer too. I loved every single thing.

Lastly, the banner is extra ordinary and I totally loved it. Hats off to you.

Love you, love you, love you. THANK YOU SO MUCH. ā¤ļøšŸ¤—

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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Nikhad
AWWW!😳
If you're feeling emotional right now then I'm FEELING USSE ZYADA EMOTIONAL TOO! ā¤ļø
In such a short time I'll repeat you became really very special to me! šŸ˜³šŸ¤—
I'm glad you liked it and again I'm sorry for the mistakes and confusions I made in this story.šŸ˜•

LOVE YOU! šŸ¤—
HUGS YOU TIGHTLY BACKšŸ¤—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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woww Beautiful os Maria di
love it
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