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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter4

At Jaipur after 1 day (Kabir's presentation is over) in hotel

Kabir: kuch yaad hai bachpan ka?
Nisha: vague
Kabir: ok to kaha se shuru karna hai
Nisha: pata nahii
Kabir: pata nai matlab ?
Nisha: pata nahi matlab pata nahi
Kabir: arey par kuch to bata address vagarah?
Nisha: tujhe kya lagta hai address pata hota to chale nahi jaati khud?
Kabir: hmm... koi ni... yaha tak takdeer le ayi h to aage b le jaegi
Nisha: hmm... kabir Shaadi kyu nahi kari tune?
Kabir: kya?
Nisha: Shaadi kyu nahi kari ab tak?
Kabir(mutters under his breath): kyunki tune nai kari
Nisha: huh?
Kabir( chuckles): koi mili hi nahi
Nisha: parents ne nahi bola?
Kabir: are puch mat! jodhpur jab b jaata hu to ladkiyo ki photo haath me rehti hai unke
Nisha( chortles): to kar leta na kisi se
Kabir( sighs ):dekte h
Nisha: Shaadi karega mujse?
Kabir looks at her in astonishment
Nisha( laughs): just joking yaar
Kabir(frowns): I don't like such jokes
Nisha: ok ok fine sorry ye le

Nisha forwards a photograph
Kabir: ye kya h?
Nisha: humari ancient haweli thi
Kabir: par ye to
Nisha: ha hotel hai but ye 2 saal pehle bana hai hotel, yaha se kuch pata chal skta h
Kabir: hmm chal

At hotel

Receptionist: no sir that's not in our hands
Nisha: please it's about my life and death
Kabir: please try
Receptionist: let's see once

After some time

Receptionist: sir you can get some information from this file
Nisha: it mentions about some orphanage
Kabir: let's go there

At orphanage

Kabir: mam please it's personal, we won't tell anyone
Receptionist:I' m sorry
Nisha's eyes develop tears
Kabir holds her hand tight
An old woman comes
Receptionist: mam these people asking about Ramesh Sir
The old woman looks at them
Nisha: I'm his daughter
Woman: go away !
Kabir(pleads): mam she's done so much... came here from London
Woman(to Nisha): does your mother know about it?
Nisha: no
Woman: whatever! Go!
Kabir(requests): mam please we won't tell anyone
Woman: but I don't want to tell you
Nisha(in tears): please
Kabir: Once think about it mam, would Ramesh Sir ever wish to leave his daughter crying
Nisha looks at Kabir who is looking at the old woman
Woman( tears well up in her eyes): no! he never wanted so
Kabir: please tell us where is he
Woman: come
Woman: he's there
Nisha drops on floor seeing his dad's photo with wreath
Kabir closes his eyes
Woman :you shouldn't have come here
Nisha is sitting on floor blankly
Kabir( shakes her ):Nisha! Nisha! kuch bol!
Woman(crying): nishaa
Nisha( starts crying again) :chod ke chale gaye ek baar phir
Kabir grips her shoulder tight

After some time

Nisha: what is the truth?
Woman:your mother will tell you better
Nisha: she always lied to me !she's a liar!
Woman: no! don't say like this! she did because I said so
Nisha: means?
Woman(Sighs): after Ramesh passed away, we didn't had any option. You were just 13, it could have affected you very badly so, I told her to take you to London where your mother's brother lived.She isn't at fault! She has suffered more than you.

Nisha: who are you?

Woman: I'm your grandmother
Nisha cries in Kabir's embrace while Kabir consoles her
Woman(sighs): I knew that this day would come but never thought like this
Woman: who's he?
Nisha(wiping tears):He's Kabir
Woman:yours?
Nisha: we'll go! kabir let's go!
Kabir: nisha
Nisha(shouts): let's go kabir !
Kabir (nods ):we take ur leave thank you so much
The old woman nods
Nisha to her grandmother(requests): don't tell about this to my mom please
The old woman nods again

At hotel

Kabir closes door of Nisha's room
Nisha hugs him tight and Kabir reciprocates
Nisha(crying):why kabir why?
Kabir: hey! he's there with you always
Nisha: no, he isn't
Kabir: he is Nisha, look ! he's watching you cry which he doesn't want
Nisha breaks hug
Kabir (pointing to twinkling stars from window): he's there
Nisha (moves to window side): I love you dad
Kabir( hugs her from side) :if I let you cry, he'll kill me
Nisha covers his mouth and shakes head in a no
Kabir( removes her hand off his mouth ):smile then
Nisha( smiles and hugs him): thank you
Kabir hugs back
Nisha(breaking hug): bhook lagi h
Kabir: chal order karte hai


Next day morning
Kabir( softly): nisha, nisha, wake up!
Nisha opens her eyes
Kabir: get ready for breakfast

Nisha: hmm

After break fast

Nisha: mehal ghoomne chale
Kabir: chal

Back at hotel

Kabir: it was amazing yar!
Nisha: awesome !incredible India!
Kabir: yeah
Nisah: let's sleep
Kabir: hmm
Nisah holds his hand
Kabir: what?
Nisah: sleep with me
Kabir:huh?
Nisha: I...I mean this bed, that side, please
Kabir remains quiet
Nisha: please
Kabir( nods ):I'll come after changing
Nisha nods
Kabir finds Nisha sleeping quietly so adjusts himself at other side of bed which is quite short in width
Nisha turns in sleep over him
Kabir opens eyes but doesn't make her move


Next morning


Nisha finds herself over Kabir and smiles. She kisses his forehead.
Kabir opens eyes but closes before she sees it.
Nisha gets up and goes to washroom
Kabir gets up with a smile playing on his lips oblivious to him .He turns on bed and finds himself smiling in mirror
Kabir( thinking still smiling) :pagal kar hi daala mujhe tune nisha
Nisah comes out of bathroom and Kabir pretends to sleep
Nisah: Kabir, kabir! breakfast ke lie ready ho ja!
Kabir: hmm

After break fast

Kabir: kaha chalna aj last day in Jaipur
Nisha: kahi ni
Kabir: kyo?
Nisha: aise hi, bas man ni h, tujhe jana ho to chale ja
Kabir: akele ghoomo mai?
Nisha: ha, tujhe jana ho to
Kabir: koi ni... mai b ni ja rha... aram krte h aj vese b kal vapas jana h Delhi

Kabir turns to walk out of the room
Nisha: ha, aur mujhe London
Kabir stops hearing London'
Kabir(swivels with widened eyes): tu London ja ri kal ?
Nisha(not matching his eyes): ha, yaha rukke kya karungi?

Kabir leaves for his room and comes back to Nisha's room after some time bringing his laptop.
Kabir is working on laptop while Nisha is reading novel
They hear a door knock



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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Awesome update 👏
Itni jaldi sab kuch hogaya... Par mujhe pata hai kuch gadbad honewali hai 😛
Last wale part me 2 guess 😆
1st nisha ki mom aagai ya 2nd nisha ke death ki khabr jhooti hai aisa kuch hone wala hai kya 😆
Don't mind I'm just guessing😳 😆
Any ways continue soon 😊
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
😭
it was a mixed emotions update...
last nibir scene was awesome😊
update soonish😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Awesome update 👏

Itni jaldi sab kuch hogaya... Par mujhe pata hai kuch gadbad honewali hai 😛
Last wale part me 2 guess 😆
1st nisha ki mom aagai ya 2nd nisha ke death ki khabr jhooti hai aisa kuch hone wala hai kya 😆
Don't mind I'm just guessing😳 😆
Any ways continue soon 😊


Thanks Anmol😳😳
And thanx for guessing😆 but erm I hope you like what's coming next in the following chapter😉
Updating soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Niha0606

😭

it was a mixed emotions update...
last nibir scene was awesome😊
update soonish😊


Thanx Niha😳😳
Thoda fast forward kar dia😆
Updating soonish😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Thankyou poornima😳😳
Updating soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
NiBir SS: Destiny ne aise hi nahi milaya

Chapter5

Kabir: mai dekta hu
Man :Sir, today evening we have an event since our hotel is celebrating 20 years day after tomorrow.Please grace the event with your participation
Kabir: what's the event?
Man(Forwarding a pamphlet ): these are the events sir. Please tick in which you people would like to participate

Kabir takes it but Nisha snatches it and starts to tick
Kabir frowns while Man chortles
Man( whispers to Kabir):aisa hi hota aksar Sir, biwi k aage kaha chalti hai kisi ki?
Kabir stares at him first but smiles as she's taken to be his wife by the man
Nisha gives back the pamphlet.
Man: thanks mam

The man leaves.
Kabir: kis pe kia tick?
Nisah: 4 events pe
Kabir(shocked): kya 4-4?
Nisah: ha easy hai saare
Kabir: kya kya hai?
Nisha: 1st is freestyle
Kabir: what freestyle ?
Nisha: couple dance
Kabir: what ?!?
Nisha(casually): yeah
Kabir(asserting): we aren't doing it
Nisha:why?
Kabir: you're a dancer, not I !

Nisha(Smiles): I'm dance teacher too! Let's start our practice! Event is in evening
Kabir: no!
Nisha(pouts): please last time... I won't be asking anything then, I'm going to London tomorrow
Kabir: emotional blackmail kar rahi hai?
Nisha: plz pretty plz
Kabir(scratching his head): fine but I know only baarati dance
Nisha(patting his shoulder): arey don't worry! I'm a fabulous teacher !
Kabir: what are other events you ticked by the way?

Nisha: 2nd is shooting balloons... 3rd is musical chair
Kabir: 4th?
Nisha( encircling her hands over his neck):it's kissing
Kabir: what!!!
Nisha(drawing her hands off laughing): just joking yaar ! Kitna dar jaata hai tu!

Kabir: you n your jokes!! out of the world!
Nisha(composing herself): 4th is passing the pass
Kabir: oh
Nisah: so, let's start
Kabir: what?
Nisha: dancing practice
Kabir: hmm which song ?
Nisha: this one

She plays the song on her mobile

Kabir: isn't there any simple song?
Nisha: I'll make simple steps for you don't worry
Nisha starts teaching Kabir

Practice over
Nisha: I've ordered costumes
Kabir: costumes ?
Nisah: yeah, I gave your clothes for size
Kabir: you didn't ask me that?
Nisha: keh to aise raha hai tune kapde pehne hai vo utaar de diye ho mene

Kabir: Kitni k hai yaar tu!

Nisha: Aur tu mere k se kitna j hai nahi

Before Kabir could retort they again hear a door knock

Kabir shakes his head and opens the door. Nisha follows him.
Man: here's your costumes; Event starts at 6; all the best to you people
Nisha nods taking the costumes
Kabir( opens his box looking at his attire): nice!
Nisha: indeed!
Kabir: what's yours?
Nisha( opens her box looking at her attire): lovely !
Kabir: you sure you would wear this?
Nisah: yeah why?
Kabir: no, I mean u haven't wore any Indian...
Nisah( cuts him off): I know how to wear this
Kabir: hmm ok
Nisha(winks): all the best !
Kabir (winks back):to you too!
Kabir changes his dress and dials Nisha

Over Phone

Kabir: hello, chale neeche?
Nisha: ek problem hai
Kabir: kya?
Nisha: vo actually ye lehenga...
Kabir: size right nahi h?
Nisha: No there's no problem with size
Kabir: phir?
Nisha: tum plz aao na help chaiye
Kabir: arey yaar tumhe lehenga nahi ata pehenna to video lagao, use karo kuch internet ka!
Nisah: aata h mujhe pehhenna!
Kabir: phir kya problem hai?
Nisah: phone pe nahi bta skti
Kabir: solvable h?
Nisha: ha
Kabir: thik coming!
Kabir enters Nisha room and gapes after looking at Nisha as she turns.Nisha smiles wide at him.

Hearing some noise of waiters outside,Kabir closes mouth and door too. Nisha too contracts her lips.
Kabir: kya problem hai?
Nisha( showing safety pin):ye!
Kabir(distraught face): pin?
Nisah: yeah, video me bata rahi chunni pin up karne ko, mujhe ni aa rha
Kabir: so let it be
Nisha: par dance me giregi phir
Kabir: hmm... lagao na phir!
Nisha: dekho kese lag raha h, uska nahi lag raha aise
Kabir( smiles ):tumhe safety pin andar se lagani hai upar se nahi idiot!

Nisha:aisa kya?
Kabir: matlab? kabhi safety pin nahi lagayi kya zindagi me?
Nisha (shakes head ):loose tops, one piece ,gowns, kisi me nahi lagti
Kabir laughs
Nisah: don't laugh! help me out idiot!
Kabir: ok ok, I'll show you, look
He takes a cloth and instructs how to do it
Nisha follows him
Nisah: ouch!
Kabir: what happened?
Nisha (throws pin): lag gayi
Kabir smiles
Nisha: idhar lag gayi mujhe! has raha hai bewakoof !
Kabir: to aur kya karu?
Nisah: laga de pin
Kabir: mai?
Nisah: nahi I'm talking to the walls here!
Kabir gives a stern look
Nisha: baitha kya h? late ho jaenge laga na ye le!
Kabir takes and pins up
Both heartbeats race and breathe heavily as they stand so close
Kabir(Stammers): la..laga d.di... mai mobile bhul gya room me leke ata hu
Kabir leaves

Nisha( jumps in joy ):ho gaya confirm nisha! ho gya! is time bhi your heart raced! you love him nisha!you love him!
Nisha looks herself in mirror grinning
Kabir: chale ya aur ghoorna hai khud ko?
Nisah: huh? ni chalo

Nisha( moves towards Kabir): but aise ni
Kabir: matlab?
Nisha (crosses her hand in his): aise
Kabir smiles and they leave.

They participate in other events first as couple dance is last activity.
Kabir and Nisha are called for dance.


Aankhon ko... teri aadat hai,
Tu dikhe na toh inhe shiqayat hai (x2)

Bin chhuey chhu liye hain
Tune mujhko diye hain
Pyaar ke ye taraane janiya

Ye jo ab ho raha hai
Kuch ajab ho raha hai
Kya yehi pyaar ka hai ehsaas

Sau aasmaano ko
Aur do jahano ko
Chhod ke aayi tere paas (x2)

Jaane kya hone lagaa
Mujhko nahi hai khabar
Kyun neend se door ye
Jaane lagi hai nazar

Chhodo ye saari baatein
Ab mili hain jo raatein
Inhe jaane na dena janiya

Ye jo ab ho raha hai
Kuch ajab ho raha hai
Kya yehi pyaar ka hai ehsaas

Sau aasmano ko
Aur do jahano ko
Chhod ke aayi tere paas (x2)

Aankhon ko... teri aadat hai
Tu dikhe na toh
Inhe shikayat hai

Bin chhuey chhu liye hain
Tune mujhko diye hain
Pyaar ke ye taraane janiya...

Ye jo ab ho raha hai
Kuch ajab ho raha hai
Kya yehi pyaar ka hai ehsaas

Sau aasmano ko
Aur do jahano ko
Chhod ke aayi tere paas (x3)


they win to Nisha's expectation and Kabir's surprise.
Both bid each other bye in order to sleep in their own room yet both are awake.

In their respective rooms

Kabir: arey yaar! mujhe pyar ho gya h usse aur kal vo subah chali jaegi London! kya karu?
Nisha: yar kal London jana h par mujhe uske sath b rehna h! kya karu?
Kabir and Nisha: propose kar du?
Kabir and Nisha: par vo mujse pyar karta/i ki nahi? oh no! Ye to socha hi ni mene! Ab?
Agar propose kia aur galat samaj lia usne to acchi khasi friendship bhi toot jaegi!
Nisha: jab b paas jati hu bhaag jata h! mujse pyaar nai krta vo !
Kabir: kitni baar Shaadi ka bolti hai phir just joking' kehke hazaaro tukde kar deti hai mere dil ke! mujse pyar nai karti vo!
Kabir and Nisha(looking up): God! ab mai kya karu????

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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Awesome chapter 👏👏
Awesome twist 😆😉 my guess was wrong 😆
Loved it...
Both idiot love each but not ready to confess 😆 waiting for their confession 😳
Update soon...
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Lovely excited to know how Will they confess continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: mkjr

Lovely excited to know how Will they confess continue soon

Thanks so much😳🤗
Confession coming in next
Will update soon 😃

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