Devakshi FF..Love finds its way!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start..
Update soon
Plz pm me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I see many views but no replies...I hope u like it...
So continuing with my next part...Please do post your comments would like to know your views:


Part 3:
Though Sona knew she would never go back to Ishwari mansion,her thoughts were on Ishwari Aunty's health...The next day she called Neha reluctantly and asked for Aunty's health...Neha seemed to be only too happy that Sona called and she took the full week plan from Sona...Neha also expressed her concern of making her mom have all this now that Sona is not there to convince her mom in a subtle way...It was almost 6 by the time she has reached her house...Sona could hear her mom speaking to someone even before she entered her house...Wondering who it might be at this time,Sona stepped into the house. Sona was shocked to see Mr.Dixit at her house speaking to her mom as if he knows her mom from a long time...His sheer arrogance in behaving that way after what he spoke about her added to her fury...She walked towards where he was sitting and was about to give him black and blue when her mom spoke,"Sona it's so good to know that your helping my friend..Dev came to tell me that she's doing pretty good now that your helping her...He wanted to speak to you about her health ..He was waiting from a long time...Speak to him...I will get something to both of you"..with that her mom went into the kitchen to make something for them. Sona was too shocked to speak anything...Here was the man who spoke non-sense about her just 24hrs before and now he's telling his mom totally a different story...'Ms.Bose don't give me that look...I know what I spoke yesterday that was only because I didn't know that you are so good...I came here to speak to you about taking care of my mom as a full time nutritionist..Before Sona could continue,he spoke,"Dr.Sinha already told me that you are not too occupied and you are actually asking for more work,so here I am trying to give you more work and coming to ur salary I would offer twice the one you get now"said Dixit..."You are so impossible Mr.Dixit...For a minute I thought you are apologizing, but I couldn't be more wrong...Mr.Obodro should have his way...is it?How dare you speak about my work without my consent?And your sheer arrogance that I would do whatever you want...I am not a doll Mr.Dixit and I don't like people interfering in my professional or personal life...I'm not accepting your offer...
Dev seems to be a no nonsense person he added sarcastically,"I thought when ur the best nutritionist you would have enough sense to keep ur Personal opinions away from ur professional life...Pity that you are not that way...You were ready to help my mom when I dint even know...Rest I will leave it to you..."Stepping too close for her comfort,he added in a whispering tone dripping acid with every word "Let me not make it difficult for you Sona..err...Ms.So na akshi Bose...I'm not ready to hear a No from you...My mom's health and happiness is very important and I promise I will go to any limits to make sure that is provided to her" With that he left the house without even a side glance leaving Sonakshi staring at his retreating back...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey its amazing their nok jhok hey do PM when u update next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4
The next day Sona got a call from Neha asking her to come home as her mom is not doing well.Never did sona leave any of her patients in between..but today because of this haughty head Mr.Dixit she had to do it...
Feeling a bit guilty about her personal opinions blinding her professiinalism,she decided to go and see aunty that day...

Sona went directly to meet Ishwari aunty who's in her room as informed by khichu bhayya...She was in a hurry to meet Ishwari aunty that she didnot observe that someone was coming out of aunty's room and she accidently hit the person.She was about to lose her balance but two strong arms circled her waist holding ner in position...Sona wanted to disappear somewhere when she realized that it was none other than Mr.Obodro himself...She quickly stood straight.

Dev looked straight at her,' Im impressed Ms.Bose,you are intelligent enough to not create problems to yourself'he said with a sardonic smile.
'Look Mr.Dixit,Im not here to let you make fun of me.I came here as its my duty.And it would be better if you stay out of this...'saying so she left to meet aunty without a second glance at him..

'Aunty ji aap phirse kaam karne lagi...mein aapse baat nahi karne waali hu and aapko na I will give bitter guard juice in your diet...'Sona was trying to speak to Ishwari aunty..For some reason aunty seemed to be very worried..

'Yeh bitra gard kya hota hai Sona beta'asked Ishwari jk innocently.
'Karela juice woh banwaadu aapkeliye' With the mention of karela,Ishwari ji made a face...Sona giggled at her expression and said, ''agar nahi chahiye tho acche bachhon ki ttarah aap yeh salad kha lee jiye'...

'Tum na Sona bilkul mere bete ke jaisi ho Ziddi,apne baat manwake rehte hai' said Ishwari ji complainingly nevertheless with love...

'Aunty ji mujhe ek baar yeh poora chart kisi ko samjhana hai...Neha hai ghar mein?' Asked Sona.
Before Ishwari ji could reply, a voice which Sona is getting used and loathing it has replied,'Neha went out for some work,please come down to my study,there you can explain me everything..'and then he turned his attention to a rather tensed and fragile looking woman befaore him and said 'dont worry maa...mein Sonakshi ji ke saath acchr se baat karunga...aur ab aap so jao...teek hai..'saying so he looked at Sona who moved out of the room with him and closed the door behind her.

So,Ms.Bose...before you make me to listen to your chart,relax a bit,what would you like to have..coffee or tea? he askes with a smile trying to be good after all that he has done.

' No Mr.Dixit if i wait for all that I will get late,so if you dont mind lets start looking at the chart' she said...

They both moved to the down floor and Dev asked her to get jnto his study room,he excused himself to talk to Kichu bhayya...
Kichu bhayya brought some snacks,juice to the room..

'Kichu bhayya please darwaja band karke jayiye'Dev said to Kichu bhayya who was going back to kitchen...

So Ms.Bose please have soem snacks and yiu. An parallely explain me the chart...he said looking at her.
Mr.Dixit,I am not sure if you have seen aunty ji's reports...she has low BP and also anemic.Shes getting dizziness because of lack of her proper diet.And also she has acidic problems because of her improper intake of food timings.You should make sure that she takes food in every two hours.For the next 10mins,Sona continued to explain him all the do's and don'ts for his mom...

Ms.Bose,I could see there are a lot of things which I or any of my family members would not be able to make her take.Sometime back I've seen how you made my mom take her food,so I need some favour from you'asked Dev

And what is it Mr.Dixit?she asked
Please become a full time nutritionist to my mom...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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so far the story is good. would like to see how it progresses.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all of it in one gooo...its good...please update soon...eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yaar it's very nice i don't know how i missed this read every part and it's awesome.
Pls pls don't discontinue i'm waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all the parts in one go..

It was really nice...

Looking forward for the next part

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