Devakshi FF..Love finds its way!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi I'm Soumya...I love the show KRPKAB and I feel Shaheer and Erica are doing a great job...
I have always been a silent reader of this forum...
But today I am unable to stop myself and so writing this OS on Devakshi...Hope you like it...😊


Love find its way:
Sona knew her mom wanted her to get a good gift for Neha- Ishwari aunty's daughter.
Sona's mom and Ishwari aunty were childhood friends...
After a long time they met each other in the godhbharayi of their common friends daughter...
Ishwari aunty was a bit sick these days and itseems she needs good rest and food as told by Neha when she met her..
Being a nutritionist and a friend's daughter,Sona offered to help her immediately...It's almost a week that Sona is going to Ishwari aunty's place...She is managing to visit her in the evenings...Neha,Riya and Nikki became good friends to her in such a short span..

Sona could understand that Ishwari aunty was very concerned about her son...Dev Dixit... That's adding to Ishwari aunty's health. Sona never met him but heard a lot from aunty ji as well as the girls...They all seem to love him a lot...Sona somehow for no reason felt uncomfortable with this guy's name...She feels somewhere Ishwari aunty is being over anxious about his son and her son is not even realizing...

She came to buy some gift to Neha as it's her birthday today..She knew Neha liked butterflies so she selected the butterflies chimes which she knew Neha would adore...She was about to pay the bill when a man's voice interrupted her, "excuse me...if you don't mind,I would like to buy this..my sister adores these things and I have gift her this." Sona herself was pretty tall and she is often used to people calling her beautiful,but,the guy speaking to her seems to be towering over her and his eyes are so transparent that Sona could see her reflection in them...For a minute, Sona was lost in his eyes...Rebuking herself for her foolish behaviour,she spoke to him consciously avoiding to make an eye contact,'"Look Mr. If you need one I think you can go and check...there are more like this"...
I already checked...there's only one butterflies chimes...This is the last piece itseems...please understand...my sister loves such things...
Look Mr. I am also taking it to gift it to someone... I'm sorry I cannot give...with that Sona turned to the counter when the guy snatched the gift from her hand and said "I don't mean to be rude but this is very important to me you can give your people whatever they want but for me...its the one...you buy whatever gift you want how much ever costly it is I will pay..
Excuse me Mr. Firstly I have never seen such a rude person as you. Secondly,how dare you offer me all that nonsense...And if you are so rich buy them for your sister only...
The guy replied rather haughtily "You don't need to give me those advices Miss whoever you are...but I'm in a rush and I cannot disappoint my sister..."
Feeling irritated with all the happenings Sona said "To hell with you and the gift..Mr.obodro..."and left the counter. Sona could feel the guys eyes boring into her.
Sona bought butterfly ear rings for Neha...and she thought of gifting them to her when she goes to her today...


It was a very hectic day and Sona didn't have time to go home and freshen up also...so she directly to Ishwari aunty's house...She was parking her scooty when she heard Ishwari aunty exclaiming," kitna dubla hogaya mera beta kuch khata bhi hai ya sirf kaam kaam bolke lage rehte ho"..."maa mein accha hu..tu bata tu kaisi hai...apna khayal rakh rahi hai ki nahi"...
Suddenly the eyes of that obodro flashed in Sona's mind..Sona pushed her thought away and went inside...
Neha came to the living room just then...she was talking to her brother
"Maa kaha apna khayal rakthi hai bhayya shukr hai Sona ki Jo mamma ka khayal rakh rahi hai..dekho Sona aagayi mamma ko dekhne..."...




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Posted: 9 years ago
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LOVELY!!
Please consider making it a fanfiction and continue it.
It will be something worth exploring (:
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb start... Next part update soon dear Oh I forgot one thing... Welcome to the forum dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a lot guys... Yeah will update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely start dear .
Sona Dev Nok-Jhok is nice.
Plz pm me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start dear
Fight on first meeting
Now they come face to face again in his house.
Update soon plz
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its great!!
Do cont soon and plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow... amazing dear.👏
continue soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys...here's the continuation..
I see many views but no replies...please do post your comments...

Contd...

Sona faltered in her steps when the guy turned to look at her and to her dismay it was the same light eyed guy...For a minute she found a mixture of guilt and surprise in his eyes which was immediately replaced by his cold stare...

Sona broke the eye contact with him and looked at Ishwari aunty...
She went to stand next to her...she knew that Mr.Dev Dixit was observing her every move and word...
" aunty ji aaj aap kaise ho...kuch khaye ki nahi...aur tablets liye"...
"Tablets...oh mein bhool gayi...abhi leti hu" replied Ishwari in a tensed tone to Sona.. Ishwariji quickly went into her room before Dev could say anything...
"ab tum aagaye ho bhayya tumhi dekhlo mamma ko...woh humari baat nahi manegi..." With that Neha left the room...

Sona who was standing there until then was suddenly aware that she was all alone with him...Without another word she escaped into the kitchen calling for
"Kichu bhayya...kichu bhayya..."

She stood at the kitchen counter and was about to recheck the chart when she heard his voice startling her.."thanks for not making a scene before my family"...he was standing at shoulder length distance from her...somehow it felt too cozy for Sona's comfort...
Sona immediately retorted saying "well I'm sensible Mr... Mr...aaa..yeah...Mr.Dixit...I know how to behave..unlike you..."
Whether it was her calling him Mr.Dixit that way or her comment Sona didn't understand but Dev stepped back a bit and standing to his full height spoke with a hint of suppressed anger..."well then...it's fine Ms...Sona...I will leave you to continue your work"...before she could reply he was gone...
"Sach mein kitna khadoos hai" thought Sona to herself...

"Kichu bhayya aap yeh dekhke banana shuru karlo...mein ek baar auntyji se baat karke aati hu"...saying thay to kichu Sona went to Ishwari aunty's room...
At the door she could overhear voices...it's Dev in a bit irritated tone
"Neha aise kaise kisi ko bhi...maa ke tabiyat ka sawal hai...aur tumhe pata hai na ki mujhe ma keliye sab best chahiye...yeh kaun hai...aur kitni acchi hai yeh sab jaane bina...he paused
Sona heard enough and without even knocking the door she barged in...she tried to keep her anger in check lest Ishwari Aunty might feel bad...just to make sure that neither Neha nor Ishwari understands what she said,she spoke between clenched teeth..." Dev ji"...she emphasized on 'ji'...I may not be as reputed and successful as you...but I am a good nutritionist and I'm proud of it...I dint get it just like that...I have earned it all and I don't like anyone degrading it and coming to aunty's health,I am here as a friend's daughter trying to help and not as a nutritionist...you are most welcome to find your own specialist..."
She turned to Ishwari aunty for a brief second and said "aunty ji meine kichu bhayya ko sab samjha diya hai...woh aapke dinner ready kardega...mujhe late horaha hai ...bye aunty and bye Neha..."with that she walked out of the room before they could see the tears glistening in her eyes...

Neha turned to Dev and said in an accusing tone " yeh kya kardiya apne bhayya...aap jante ho kya...ki mamma pichle hafte behosh ho gayi thi...aur unhe aspathal le jaana pada...apko bolne se mana kiya mamma ne taki aap pareshan na ho ithna door rehkar..mein bhi mamma ke hi beti hu bhayya aur unke phikar mujhe bhi hai..Sona se jab meri baat hui thi toh tab woh help karne keliye ready hui thi...lekin aapko na.. with a pause she continued...yahi problem hai ki aapne nahi chuna Sona ko mamma ke dekhbal keliye... aur mamma uske saath close bhi hogayi hai ithna jaldi yeh bhi nahi dekh sakthe ho aap...aap dono maa bete ek jaise ho...hum behnon ko beech mein nahi aane diya toh bechari Sona ko kyun aane doge tum log...ab aap hi doondlo kisi acche nutritionist ko...with that Neha left the room...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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fabulous dear. 👏 continue soon.😛

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