Akdha SS: United By Fate

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Akdha ss:- United By Fate

Hello people. This is my first story. I hope u like the story. This story is dedicated to some important people misty22, sho123, Rajat_loverr who were constantly pressuring to write any story, so here I present my story. Now, enough of my bak-bak.
So, here is my story.

Part 1(No proof reading)

A girl is sitting under a tree wid a boy. Her head is on his shoulders n their hands mingled wid one another. The boy turned n held the face of the girl n they kissed passionately as there was no end. After a few minutes they parted as there was short of breath. The girl moved her face little to see the clear view of her love.

"Ahh!!" a little shriek escaped Jodha's mouth. The Girl got up wid a jolt n found herself in her room. This was the first time that she saw such a dream. She started blushing while dreaming of her prince charming n was a little upset as she cud not his face.

Reality struck her when she heard her alarm ringing. She quickly got up n took bath n after doing her morning chores, she hurried downstairs to meet her dad as she was very excited as there was a big party organized by the company in the success of her father. She was a very enthusiastic girl, hard working n full of life.

Jodha: Good Morning Papa.

Bharmal: Good Morning beta!! Come n sit wid me n hv breakfast.

Jodha: Yes papa. U know I am very excited for today's party.

Bharmal: I know ur excitement beta but hv u completed ur shopping?.

Jodha: Omg!! How can I forget this. Papa actually some necessary things are left. May I hv some money?

Bharmal: Y not beta. (He gives her his credit cards n a huge amt of money also.)

Jodha: Papa I don't need this much money.

Bharmal: Please take it beta.

Jodha: OK! (n accepts the money)

(Jodha quickly has breakfast, goes to her room n call's her bestie Moti to come wid her to the shopping as there is a party tonite)

Moti (irritated): Jo y u always remember things at the last moment. I wonder how u top in the university.

Jodha : Y u always make fun of me Moti. R u coming to the shopping wid me or not ? N if u r not coming I am not gonna talk to u.

Moti: Have u left any option for me? So where do I hv to come n at what tym?

Jodha: No need of coming I'll pick u up at 11 .

Moti : Ok!!

N they hung up the call. Jo makes a list of everything so that she doesn't forget anything which needs to be bought n gets ready for shopping.

Now at KHAN INDUSTRIES

Abdul (vice president of the company) was waiting for his bestie(Jalal) at the office to discuss wid him something important.

Jalal driving his favourite car (Lamborghini Aventador) on the route to the office. Abdul had already informed him abt the important discussion

As soon as Jalal got down from his car all girls started drooling over him. Why not, as he was the eligible bachelor of the town. It was a dream of every girl just to marry him for his money, status n lavish life style.

Anyone cud fall for his perfect brown orbs, well built body. All men were jealous of him as there was no girl who can resist his charm. But when he was angry everyone including his bestie feared him. He couldn't control his anger n he even didn't care abt others feelings. Circumstances had made him a cruel, angry young man. He was a pure work-holic man.

Jalal straight away went to his lavish cabin. He had pulled this industry to such a great height by his hardwork. It was dream of his father to reach such a great height.

While entering his cabin Jalal called to Abdul to come there.

Abdul(without knocking the door went inside): Good Morning Jalal.

Jalal: Good Morning buddy.

They started discussing n got distracted as they heard a knock on the door.

Jalal: Come in.

Ruqauiya: Good Morning Sir

Jalal: Good Morning!! What's the schedule for today?

Ruquaiya: Sir u hv meeting scheduled n most importantly u hv to go to the party organised by SINGH GROUP of INDUSTRIES.

Jalal: okk! U may leave now.

Ruquaiya thinks very highly of herself. Although there r men who can't resist her beauty but she thinks she can make Jalal fall for her that is why she tries to seduce him with her cheap tricks. She wants to live a lavish life style n have status.

After discussing for a while Abdul went from his cabin n whole day went in a jif. Jalal returns home at around 7pm and informs his mother not to cook for him as he is going to a party. Jalal takes shower n dressed in his Armani black 3 piece suit. He gelled his hair. He wore his rolex n shoes n was abt to leave. He was looking no less than a Greek God.

Jalal: Ok Ammijaan I am abt to leave.

Ammijaan: Ok Beta! Enjoy

Being the vice president of the company n the best buddy of Jalal Abdul too had to accompany him to the party.

Jalal picked up Abdul from his house n headed towards the venue.

Pre - cap:- Jodha n Jalal first meeting

INDEX

Chapter 1:- Above

Chapter 2(a):- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4717897/akdha-ss-united-by-fate?pn=5

Chapter 2(b):- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4717897/akdha-ss-united-by-fate?pn=8

Chapter 3(a):- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4717897/akdha-ss-united-by-fate?pn=11

Chapter 3(b):- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4717897/akdha-ss-united-by-fate?pn=15

Chapter 4:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/138776733

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eshalli thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm second
Congrats for ur first story dear
Awesome start
Eagerly waiting for joja first meeting
Continue soon
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Edited by eshalli - 9 years ago
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wonderful update
I loved it yaar
good going, who can say its your first trial it looks u r skilled writer
please update soon and pm me accept my buddy request too
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amazing
waiting for JJ meeting
update asap
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Awesome update.
congratulation for your new story dear...
waiting for joja first meeting...
plz, update asap ...
thanks for pm...😊
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congrats fr ur 1st story..amazing start..gud intro of jo ja..waiting fr the next part..
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First of all congrats for your first story dear.
Nice start dear.
Plzzz update next chapter soon
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amazing start ..totally love it and eagerly to read more ..at first i though jodha and jallu kissing in the park and i felt blusing 😳 but oh god its a dream ..me and jo were so loving it😆oh my jo will go shopping with moti ..i wonder what will happen ?..oh jo father is just amazing ..😆 he pressure his girl to take money ..well i wish my father do the same but he pressure me for the opposite reason🤣oh so jallu is prince charming ,he he that is for sure all the girls drawling on him ..i wonder if jodha will??? moti is so cute teasing our top student😳 oh i definatly hate ruk from the begining 😡..i want to read more espically the meeting😉
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name it soon😳 and pm me 😳 thanks fr pm
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congrats for new story
beautiful start

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