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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sman2195

Laraaa,

where are you? Shraman is doing a registered marriage...not sure how its being lead to this.. but its a registered marriage, similar to this story!!! ..Sumo in the interview said something like going to work and then getting to go to the registers office and marrying Shravan...aaa... can't wait to watch it..

Finally, one of the many stories from the IF will come alive.. and i will get to see Shraman act it out..๐Ÿฅณ

I hope you are as excited as I am...Yahoo!!


I'm feeling like I'm a psyche!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿค— this is how I feel... Gosh! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
First... how Aditya was beaten into a pulp by Shravu gave me flashes of my Khurana scene in the hotel room. Then this upcoming registered marriage dhamal...

Well people - stand into a line, Lara's become a future teller. ๐Ÿ˜•

Excited? It's a nail biting situation. Thank God they didn't drag things more with Aditya ๐Ÿฅณ, though I secretly hope he'll come back to get some more beating later ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.

And also, I don't know why but I've the feeling that Ramnath's going to destroy Shraman's married life. And I'm crossing my fingers hoping for a long redemption track after that.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sman2195

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Hi Lara... (Hi!! )

SORRY AGAIN๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ (No need to say sorry, dear.)

๐Ÿ˜ณ became greedy after getting your pm...So couldn't resist the urge to reserve a place to comment..(And I got really excited seeing your res, glad you unresed it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ. )


OK, going back to your previous comment, nope you dont want us to die. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ but if you describe Mr. Malhotra like the way you did, that too in that particular attire (robe/dressing robe)...ahem! ahem! I am sure, his good looks plus your choice of his attire and your descriptions are surely will be the combined reason of my death someday.. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› dont worry.. i will come back from heaven only for the sake of reading the story.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† it wont be creepy.. ๐Ÿ˜› Kidding!!
(Reincarnated reader! - The Conjuring 3. ๐Ÿ˜†
Pleased to know you also enjoyed his parade in robe. ๐Ÿ˜‰)


Anyways, ok going back to chapter 27...Loveeed it... The following what made me crack up...

(That's another thing I love about you - you describe everything so straightforward and awesomely in points. It gives me better understanding of my own story. Thanks!)


1. The guy just couldn't function properly in anger... - hahaha... yes, true!! Especially if the guys is Hot headed like Shravan Malhotra. ๐Ÿ˜ณ (Yup. ๐Ÿ˜‰)

2. They've sent a stick man..--.hehehe๐Ÿ˜† mona couldn't come couldn't choose a better time to come by and announce it... Oh my..kinda felt what was to coming next..There was no way in hell, Shravan would let Sumon and the PCT crew to get the umbrella's and tables down from the van. So loved it how you have described one mishaps after the other and had Shravan present...and made him Shravan take care of it and at the same time impressing Sumon.. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ (Thanks!๐Ÿ˜ณ)

3. Besotted husband ... uh-lala...โ˜บ๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ kash.. humme aisa koi mil jata.. (Jaroor milega. My blessings with yaa chick. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ)

4. he is all yours, we all know that - *coughing *coughing..Wow!! of course he is hers.. :) (Ek duje ke vaaste ๐Ÿค—)

5. His hair was a mess.. forehead was covered in perspiration.. Suman watched his adam's apple bobbing up and down, and somehow made her feel thirsty.. Hai! Hai! Another lethal combination.. it not only made Sumo thirsty..It made me thirsty too.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Kya yaar... Told you..by the time, i am done with your story and this serial.. i will die infinite times, go to heaven and come back.. wish u were able to see my check to cheek grin.. (I can almost imagine that grin. ๐Ÿ˜‰ hee hee...)

6. must be the pain meds --- ahahahah๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ really Lara.. Blame the poor meds.. and Mr. Malhotra and You walk way free... Oh Lord.. Bechari Sumon and bechari me... !!

7. Hanky...If you sew me one..I really wanted one of those hankies where my name would be on one corner with little flowers surrounding intricately... Hai.. What do you mean, Sumon can't sew? ๐Ÿ˜ก oh well that is ok.. I can sew. If you want, I am happy to sew one and send it to Mr. Malhotra..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ˜†... Love this flirty Shravan.. too many wild ideas are running in my mind Lara.. when its Mr Malhotra, this woman (me) here doesn't function rationally ... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† (Ahem! Control your nasty thoughts... but then again - where's the fun in actually controlling them duh. So, go on... run your imaginations wild! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ )

8. Good Sumon is getting used to him.. and i also understand why she is afraid !! (Afraid of falling in... you know ๐Ÿ˜‰)

9. what a blunt reply.. "it would depend on who that someone is.. and what intentions..defense mechanism" ๐Ÿ‘ wow!! "a wall that seemed to be cracking because of his persistent attacks"... Nice tennis match.. very symbolic. (I'm super glad you got that. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ)

10. I hope, once the wall breaks, she is left with something instead, something beautiful.. (Fingers crossed.)

11. Cooking doesn't tire me out, it calms me when i come home and cook the food of my choice.. โค๏ธ this is why I love your imagination. This is where you have won my heart.. this is why i appreciate your words and work so much.. you have spoken my mind. Cooking de-stresses me... and its a fact...I cook, when i feel the need to clear my head and want to relax..๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— for mentioning this. (Wow... ๐Ÿ˜Š Then your future hubby is going to be be damn lucky yaar.)

12. She amuses him.. and felt all over the place.. Wow.. again brilliantly described..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ (๐Ÿ˜ณ)

13. Loved it how she made pasta to appreciate his help and effort.. again brought together by the pasta.. ahahhaha!! Love u for using pasta and not any other item.๐Ÿค—. (Mamma Mia)

14. hehehe.. Shravan Malhotra is the walking Epitome of the word - contradiction ๐Ÿ˜ฒ He too seems to amuse Sumo.. Amuse! Baffle!.. name it all.. great opponent she has.. ๐Ÿ‘

15. Oh lord.. what an imagination Sumo has.. "was he taking her to forest to murder her:"๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
(Suman's wild imagination. ๐Ÿ˜† By the way, try imagining Shravan running after her with a saw blade, I don't know why his that image came to my mind while writing this. ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜† )

16. Like Sumon, I am a bit puzzled and surpised!! I wonder what the occasion is? (๐Ÿ˜‰)

Cliff hanger? No!! Ok.. waiting for the next part.. i promise, I will be a good girl and wont make you wait for a feedback for this long.. I just don't want to end it with saying "beautiful update"... I want to take time to appreciate each word and sentence and tell you in details... coz all are connected.. ! (Yes, you got it right, I kind of weave every thread of words and they leave clues for the future. And I love how you discover it all and then tell me so beautifully.)

YEAH .. I am again blabbering... Ok chalo.. Thank You and Loads of Love for writing this beautiful chapter.. so beautifully.. Hugs.. (Hugs back ๐Ÿค—)

Take care of your self... Not sure, where you are situated.. but due to the seasonal change, Mr. Flu caught up with me.. So.. yeah meds were blabbering ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ Ok till next time.. Cheeerrrs.. (Hey!!!! Mr. Flu got me and my entire family too. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ)

Love,
Susmita

(Love yaa too, Susmita. โค๏ธ Take care.)

Ps. How are you liking the recent episodes? (Solved in the reply of your comment above ๐Ÿ˜ƒ)



Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks a lot! ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

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Oh Lara! Lara! Lara!
This is superb!
I always wait for your updates and you never disappoint!
You're so fine at this art I don't even have words!
๐Ÿ‘
(HEY!!!! Thanks, buddy! ๐Ÿ˜ณ)

This chappy was quite something ha...
ShraMan are very much cordial much to my happiness.
Sumo thinking of him as a fine man! I like!
Sumo gaping at his adam's apple! I super like!
The sexual tension was so thick I could cut it with a KNIFE!

(Just you wait for it... it's going to be thicker. A ticking time bomb has started. ๐Ÿ˜‰)

Shravan demanding his share in the food...
Beaming like a fool at the hospital..
Excited at surprising her!
Love!

My favourite lines, Sum, that's a word but its ๐Ÿ˜ณ (He probably doesn't know it himself that he called her that. ๐Ÿ˜ณWhat can I say - Shravan is now a besotted husband after all ๐Ÿ˜† )
Sumo's he's going to murder me ๐Ÿ˜†

I'm loving it more each day!
Can't wait for the next part..
Revelation!
I can imagine it's going to be epic!
Thanks for the pm!
Update real soon!
๐Ÿค—

(Yep, I'm nearly done with writing the next chap. Will try my level best to updt Tomorrow. Take care. Love yaa and hugs for your lovely comment. โค๏ธโค๏ธ)

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

awsm loved it

cont soon

Thanks! ๐Ÿค—
Will try to updt tmrw.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

hey Lara...m new to this forum...though I was a silent reader from a month I guess..when I read that you want to hear silent readers views so I thought of commenting here... :) first of all I would say ur an amazing writer dear... one fine day I read all chapters in one go...n then I kept waiting for chapter 26 ...it was like no please post it...m being impatient ...but I kept patient...n I daily check whether u have updated next chapter or not... n also today when I saw chapter 27 ...a smile came to capture my lips... just one request please keep updating soon ...its tough to wait u know ;) n yeah best dialogue for me today was when sumo thought in mind that is he taking me forest to kill me ...hahaha it was hilarious n she felt it .. good luck for next chapter sweety.. :)



YESSS! A new reader. ๐Ÿฅณ
Welcome my dear. ๐Ÿค—

Yes, I so much love to hear from silent readers ... I really do so much. And I'm so extremely glad that you decided to comment. I read your pm as well, dear, and your words are so encouraging! Thanks - a lot se bhi jyada.

I know... I know it gets tough to wait and I really don't like to have my readers feel like that. But I get busy often and that's why can't updt regularly. Really sorry about that, dear. ๐Ÿ˜ญ

You enjoyed that line of Suman's assumation... ๐Ÿ˜† I'll defo now try to apply more internal dialogues like that.

So stay tuned, keep reading. Love yaa, and thanks again.
Again - I'm so very happy that you commented, dear. Hope to hear more from you in the future. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

*I claim all copyrights of this work. Do not plagiarize this story, no part / scene / dialogue of it may be copied, reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means without my (Clara Ricks's) written permission. Plagiarizing my works will be taken as an offence and will be dealt with properly, and know that it is punishable by the forums and law. If you find anyone copying my works, please do let me know.*




Thanks for your likes and comments, readers / friends! ๐Ÿค— Tight hugs and kisses for all your wonderful words. You made me feel really awesome with all the comments. The comments I did not yet reply are going to be replied now, sorry for the delay.


cute-aly has sent me some splendid covers/ banners for this story. And they've made me so extremely happy; excited when I opened my pm box and saw them! WOW! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ Thanks, dear. I'm going to launch Bitter Sweet Symphony on wattpad as well, but that will be on hold until I complete my story here on india forums. (so that I don't break the forum rules)

cute-aly's covers are surely going to be on the prologue of the wattpad version. Will share it with you as soon as I upload it. Make sure to like and comment to get it.

Dedicating this chapter to - anonymousanju. ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ

And, this is a very special chapter. It's Shravan's POV!
Look out for the hints for future and the recent developements everyone. Enjoy...








Chapter 28



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Phir le aaya dil from the film Barfi, by Arijit Singh.

One of my fav songs it is and I felt it's apt for this chapter, for the moment; the epiphany.

If it is possible and time permits, please play the song from youtube and go back to the song sequence of the chapter. I hope you get the feels. In fact I'm my self listening to the song at the moment.

This is kind of an intermidiate chapter after which we will again go back to Suman's pov again. Shravan will come back with his own words and thoughts and feelings in such above combustion situations. lol...



I hope you enjoyed the chapter? Let me know, huh.

Once again, which was your favorite part in this chapter? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Please don't forget to like, and let me know about your thoughts about the chapter and story by commenting. It will really make my day and encourage me to write. Your feedback is my fuel, friends, so keep them coming. ๐Ÿค—

Silent readers, like always I'm going to wait to hear from you again. Lara always waits for you guys.



So, take care till the next chapter.
Lots of love,โค๏ธ
Lara.



P.S. By the way, have you noticed that Kamini and Vandana just made a physical entry in the story? Just wait for the next chapter, the cunning and the dumb duo might start a nasty fire. (*winks๐Ÿ˜‰)

IMP NOTE: People who've both liked and commented on the last chap will get a pm for this chapter. Pm will reach you in a few moments. Tada!






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Posted: 8 years ago
Shravan on the road to redemption.. Officially. Thats a start. i enjoyed the update. continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Wow amazing update it was lara ...u enjoyed it to the core๐Ÿ‘


Thanks, dear! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I hope you enjoy the chapter 28 - Shravan's pov as well.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Firstly thanks for a long chapter. Whenever I read any chapter of your FF I just feel it shouldn't end. And I m content with the length today. Coming to the chapter. It's as amazing as ever. I love how you are not rushing things. Adding every minute detail that helps a lot in visualizing the story. Every feeling, every emotion penned down so well. I love ShraMan's conversation. Everyone of them. Funny or intense, they have that spark. Love how they want to have the last say. Eagerly waiting for the next part. Do update soon.


Awww... ๐Ÿ˜ณ It's sooo sweet of you, dear! Thanks!!! ๐Ÿค—
Glad, that you were content with the length of the chap. I know it's rare I give such long updts. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Hmmm... it's true that rushing things will ruin everything, one step at a time and then tiny leaps here and there - that's what I'm aiming for. It's good to know you're enjoying this approach. Thanks again!

And their sparks are just going to increase and increase in each chapter, so stay tuned. I just uploaded chap 28. Hope you enjoy this new chap as well. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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