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loved all your comments...
so sweet of you guys!

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gonna post next part n d new page...
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Replies to all your lovely comments!


@vishuv - Haha... therikavidalam illa... nee therikavittutu through ur comments! You will see how he will give her back everything. If I say everything then it means Everything! I really liked your comment... you have related so many scenes with your personal life. I got to see how you would have been when you were a kid like Ruhi... haha. Why so surprised? I used walk holding my parents' hands while walking or mostly my dad carry me in his arms just like Rk... LOL. Actually I didn't notcie that rose petal and rose bud thing before... gad u loved that description dear. LOL, Ruhi got more time to spend with her momma nah so now chanting her 'Mama' more instead of 'Papa'. Aww... finally this Rk earned your respect. Feeling like a huge weight has lifted off my shoulder. LOL! Innocent boy? LOL don't worry Rk will mend his life too. I too liked that end touch Ruhi placing her hands on her parents holding them together. Thanks for your beautiful comment baby!


@ Poorva - ???


@ sapnaf52 - Thanks dear for your sweet comment! Even I loved that scene Ruhi placing hands on her parents' entwined hands.


@ harini_ - thanks for your lovely comment. Yes, Rk is scared Ruhi will hate him once he tells her about the past. Let's see how Ruhi reacts in the future.


@ Seema di - Aww di... I am so glad I made you happy. Glad you felt madhu's reaction so realistic. Yes Rk is making sincere effort so surely he will win back madhu but not so soon. LOL

oh yeah, I know Vivi's fav is blue.. but white too huh? It was pure coincidence that his out fit matched with Madhu's and Ruhi's lol... yeah slip of the tongue. Soon he will get little bold to make open comments. Coming update is all about the house only. It will be so boring! LOL

Yes, Rk will surely tell Ruhi abt the past and Ruhi will decide whether she wants him or not. Thanks for your lovely feed back di.


@ RijaMalik - Thanks dear. Ruhi is such a magic in Rishbala's life.


@ shruthi14 - Bro! Happy to read your heart warming comments! I m really like this Ruhi so much so I could right better scene for her haha... why Ruhi is not letting Rk feed her? Hmm.. when first time he fed her he was a stranger to her. She was so used to eat from her momma's hand so she spat out when Rk tried and from then it became a funny game for her. Say she is just teasing her dad. She will eat one fine day when he feeds her. LOL! You know what? You are one reader who keenly notes all the minute details like Rk placing the palm on her head, Rk massing her legs, all cute little things u notice and appreciate and that really warms me.


@ shruthi14 - hehe.. you are still with Madhu's side? your heart didn't melt for my poor RK? 😭😆 yeah i can understand you point.. he indeed deceived her so its hard to believe that he wasn't acting LOL! Madhu is so insecure becos Ruhi is all she has. without Ruhi she is nothing and This little girl has become one Papa's fan making her momma pissed LOL! You want mom and daughter moment? then you will get it dear. even i feel i have written too much of Rk-Ruhi moments and sidelined madhu's role LOL! now i wanna focus back and give equal screen space to all. Thanks for you brilliant analytical comment!


@ shruthi14 - Thanks once again, Bro. They are trying to be friends but still Ruhi has right to know her parents past nah? See, her parents are not a married couple. Lots of question will arise in future so one day Rk will tell her the truth besides Rk feels that Ruhi loves him in fact worships him like her rolemodel without knowing the truth so he wanna tell her and make her decide whether she wants him or not.


@ shibanipamini - Thanks dear


@ madhumeandyou - Mer, thank you for your sweet words of appreciation. Even I like blue but black, white and purple are my most fav colors. Yes, Madhu is slowly starting to understand things. First she saw the true love of Rk for Ruhi that why she decided to let him in Ruhi's life and one she forgets or at least forgives him then she will take him in her life too. She is actually melting after seeing all the honest efforts he was taking to mend things. Dual marriage? Done! Hehe... so I am also a Theri baby huh... wait! You are a vijay fan? Why most of my friends are vijay fans? Why no one likes Surya? * I am crying* aww... Thanks for liking humdard. All the best for your exams. You will surely get my pms.


@ ananya2010 - thanks dear. Yeah Madhu is really trying to put her past behind and move on but she couldn't. Its just not a scar but the wound is still fresh for her. Rk will tell Ruhi the truth becos he feels she loves him without knowing how he was before and once she does she won't love him. Poor judgement he made there. Ruhi is not like that LOL!


@GERUA - Thanks dear


@ Anntempleton - loved your comment dear. Right from the start u wanted madhu to behave civil and finally she heard you. LOL. True, she can't hate him for too long. Her heart is already melting for him. Thanks dear. I always look forward to read your comment.


@ ice_girl - thanks dear. I'm really thinking to show some good Bittuji - Roma moments. Once I get I will show it.


@ manna43 - Thanks dear. Loved your brief comment. You are so right. She is changing and slowly started accepting his prescene in her life after all she loved him crazily. LOL


@ Anny90 - thanks dear. Even I adore this Ruhi. She is so cute!


@ Sujitharajan - Thanks dear. Glad u liked it.


@ v.p.joshi - thanks dear


@ dharsii - thanks for your lovely comment dear. Yes, Madhu will take time to fully let him in her life. She is still broken with what he did so she is healing slowly. Thanks to Rk for trying seriously. Aww.. yeah even I had tears when Rk cried. Poor boy! LOL


@ keerthiprasad - Thanks dear. Haha... I bet Roma and Bittu will make one super funny pair. Yeah, she also missed him but didn't want to admit it LOL!


@ .Zoya. - Thanks dear. Rk is trying every possible way to assure Madhu that Ruhi will be his.


@ Jyoraj - Thanks dear. Yeah surely Ruhi will be uset but still will love her papa. You will get Roma-Bittuji scene soon.


@ Tinku_2015 - Thanks dear. Even its surprising me that this is the same Rk who put her through hell. Thanks to Ruhi for softening him and seeding love in his heart.


@ candle_light - Thanks dear. Yeah friendship is just a start!


@ -ChitraRoking- - Thanks dear. Romance btn Rishbala? Well, I will try to show some cute romantic moments but nothing big. Don't forget she still hates him LOL!


@ Mona_90 - Aww.. loved your comment... yeah, Ruhi has become one papa's fan. LOL. Now, Madhu is out of her insecurity so no worries.

Yes yes yes, they are friends now and they are gonna start a new life in their new home. hope this time they bond their relationship with love and trust.


@ kkrnightriders - Thanks dear for your super comment. yeah surely Rishbala will play cupid in bringing Bittu and roma together and Ruhi will play cupid in bringing Rishbaha LOL yes, they will a new life in their new house!


@ --Evil_Angel-- - Haha.. yeah Rk's luck! he is trying hard but the past his biting him. Right, he was ready to face madhu's wrath but not to let her go alone and get lost in a new city... oh and that too with ruhi. so he like a gentleman took them back home safely. Yeah, Madhu has obvious reasons to feel hurt and insecure becos her daughter has become Papa's fan girl. Seems you enjoyed Ruhi's fall LOL!

Oh yeah Rk could have clicked a pic when Ruhi got shy and went under the covers... LOL! i will make a note to write a scene like that LOL, Yep, Madhu seems cool becos Rk gave her enough space to think clearly and reassured that he will not separate mom and daughter. hope things go well between Rishbala as they have decided to be friends now. Thanks for your hilarious yet amazing comment. you will always be in my PM list. don't worry!


@ maangeet.gmmg - Thanks dear


@ .Tanmaya. - Thanks dear. Glad you love their bond.


@ abhiya2405 - Thanks dear. Even I feel bad for Rk but everything will turn for good.


@ shree001 - Thanks dear... loved ur sweet comment. hehe.. even i tease all my nieces and nephews by singing that when they aren't dressed LOL! Even i feel sad but he have to do that and clear everything. he can't carry the burden of hiding the truth from Ruhi so he will tell her one day... and she will make the final decision!!


@ Yasmine16 - haha... loved your comment... you made me laugh. No, he didn't stalk them and match his outfit with them. Trust him please LOL. Glad u too started liking this Rk. I will never lead my readers hate my leads.. LOL haha... you are smart, you know pretty well you wont get Rishbala romance so asked for Bittu-Roma LOL! okay you will get some. I can understand your love for Ruhi. You are even ready to kidnap her haha.. but please don't do that. Ruhi is the cupid here and she will only bringing her parents together so i need her! LOL Thanks for your comment dear.


@ karamjeet - Thanks dear.


@ anish17 - hehe... akka, you are movie freak. every time you get a movie to relate... this time 12B.. i love that movie and i prefer the happy ending with Jothika than the sad one with Simran LOL! Dont worry, Bittu and Roma will get married. I guess it right for Rk to tell the truth to Ruhi akka. I will reason more when I write that part where he will tell the truth. Madhu is actually pretending that she stil hates him that why she is keep on reminding him. its actually a reminder to herself LOL! thanks for your lovely comment akka.

@ rishbalafan9 - aww... baby, thanks for making me happy... you are so right. guys do look so sexy when they carry a baby in their arms. i love to see dad and daughter relation and mom -son relation.. only the opposite gender looks cute LOL! Yes, madhu is opening doors and started trusting him again after all he is making honest efforts to win her. yes, even i wished to see our Rishbala with kids but our dreams got shattered! glad u could imagine thru this story. haha they will surely romance in their new home sweet home! Thanks!

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Here goes a long boring update!!


Part - 13

Rk stepped out of the car first and went around and opened the door for Madhu. Madhu picked her dress up so that she will not trip on it and slowly stepped out of the car and then helped Ruhi to clamber out of the car. When Madhu turned and looked at the building in front of her, her eyes went wide and her mouth parted slightly in surprise. Rk grinned contented seeing her expression.

"What's all this?" Madhu asked after recovering from her surprise. She vaguely had an idea of what was coming up but still she wanted to hear it from him.

"What's written over there?" She asked pointing to the silver metal plated letters stuck on the glass windows of the building. The front side of the building looked as if it was made of glass.

"La tour de Ruhi" Rk read it loud for her.

"Means?" she asked.

"Ruhi's Tower."

"This entire building is Ruhi's?" Madhu asked still stunned looking at the gigantic building in front of her. There was a glass pyramid on top of the building showing it tall and giving a tower effect

"Of course" Rk shrugged. Madhu kept looking at the building dumbstruck.

"Just four floors, okay! No need to get so worked up." Rk said hoping Madhu will close her parted mouth.

"Four floors? But it looks so big and majestic!" Madhu said amazed.

"Bienvenue! Bienvenue!" (Welcome! Welcome!) Madhu was surprised when a tall, curly haired lady engulfed her in her arms giving her a bone crushing hug.

"Vous regardez jolie, ma cher" (You look pretty, my dear) She said with a wide smile holding Madhu at arm's length. Madhu didn't get a word but still she smiled politely.

"Bonjour, Roma. Cela est Madhu... mom amour!" (Good morning, Roma. This is Madhu, my lover) Rk introduced Madhu to Roma as his lover knowing full well Madhu can't understand French.

"Madhu, this is Roma." Both the ladies hugged again. Madhu noticed Bittuji standing behind Roma and outrageously drooling at her. He seemed so smitten on her. Madhu simply rolled her eyes for how Bittuji was behaving like a teenager.

"Chercher, qui nous avons ici?" (Look who we have here?) Roma cooed looking at Ruhi. When suddenly all the attention turned towards Ruhi, she got so shy and hid herself behind her momma's legs covering her face with her momma's dress.

"Baby, say hello' to aunty" Madhu encouraged Ruhi to come out.

"Mama, no." Ruhi softly said shaking her head.

"Ruhi, you want chocie?" Rk asked tempting her. Ruhi peeped out and looked up at her dad.

"Then come here." Rk held out his hand for Ruhi. Madhu gave Ruhi a gentle push to step forward and Ruhi slowly walked front looking nervously at Roma.

"C'est mom fille, Ruhi" (This is my daughter, Ruhi) Rk said with so much pride.

"Jolie Princesse, vous etes belle" (Pretty Princess, you are so beautiful) Roma scooped Ruhi up in arms and surprisingly Ruhi didn't protest for her dress being ruined as she was curiously checking Roma's curly brunette hair.

"Papa, noodles" Ruhi bunched Roma's hair in her fist and showed it to Rk. Rk burst out laughing. Like father like daughter!

Madhu looked down at her feet to hide her laughter and embarrassment her daughter caused to her. Then they all heard a subtle cough from the back. It was none other than Bittuji. He got offended when Ruhi called Roma's hair Noodles' just like his chief.

"Bittuji, you should accept it. Her hair looks like noodles only. I'm sure Roma herself is not offended then what bothers you?" Rk teased while laughing. Roma too joined laughing.

"Nothing like that, Chief" Bittuji said and coughed again pretending he really has cough and cold.

"So shall we start?" Bittuji asked. Rk nodded and taking Ruhi from Roma's arms, he walked them to the main entrance. Bittuji tailed Roma, she flipped her hair back and walked ahead with attitude.

"We are not going to our house?" Madhu asked looking curiously at what looked like a bouquet shop.

"Don't you want to check all the floors before we go to our penthouse?" Rk asked. Madhu nodded not sure what was in store for her. She was sure he had planned something big.

"Here, cut this ribbon and step in." Rk passed Madhu a scissors.

"What? Why me? "

"Our shop inaugural and without further question, please cut the ribbon, we are already late."

Madhu reluctantly took the scissors from his hand and also took Ruhi from him and made her daughter hold the scissors too as they both cut the ribbon and the glass doors slid open and they were hit by the fragrance of freshly scented flowers.

"Momma..." Ruhi squealed in her arms seeing the colorful flower bouquets. There weren't only flower bouquets but also chocolate bouquets. Lots of chocolates and candies where stalked up on the aisles at the farther corner.

Roma grabbed a white lily and a dairy milk chocolate bar and gave it Ruhi making her so happy and in return Ruhi gave Roma a kissy on her cheek. Bittuji gave a white rose bouquet to Madhu welcoming her. Madhu took it with a smile and then passed it to Rk to hold it.

"Roma will be looking after "Ruhi's bouquet" shop." Rk said and lead Madhu to the spiral glass staircase in the centre of the bouquet shop which will be taking them to the second floor.

"Amour Cafe?" Madhu asked reading the name of the coffee shop.

"Love cafe. You know Paris is famous for two things one, love and two, coffee so I came up with this name." Rk said grinning sheepishly. "Lovers who come to this coffee house can buy some flowers for their beloved from our bouquet shop and do romantic proposals here."

"Excellent idea, Chief." Bittuji piped in mentally making a note that one he should propose Roma in this coffee house.

"Bittuji will be handling this coffee shop." Rk patted Bittuji's shoulder. Suddenly, Madhu noticed someone at the counter. The person looked somewhat familiar.

"That's our barista, Miss. Sofia" Rk said before she could ask.

"She is?" Madhu wondered whether she had met the girl before.

"You have seen her before, in the park." Rk said hesitantly. Sofia was the same girl they met in the park where a guy ditched her and left her crying.

"Oh yeah, right. By the way what she is doing here?" Madhu asked.

"I told you already she is the barista, here." Rk said calmly.

"But why her?"

"What do you mean?"

"You could have opted... forget it" Madhu didn't know what exactly she wanted to tell him.

"Madhu, she worked in this cafe even before I bought this place. She makes fine coffee. I have tried it and she is too good at her work so I thought to retain her in her job." Rk said with a casual shrug.

"Oh!"

"Yeah, oh! I actually remodeled this place. Roma had a small bouquet shop outside this building and on both first and second floor the cafe was running. There was a gym in the third floor..."

"We have a gym?" Madhu asked excitedly.

"Nope! I converted the gym to a... you will see shortly."

"What you have converted it too?"

"Make a guess?" Rk winked at her. She slightly colored up.

"A book stall?"

"Nope!"

"An art gallery?" Madhu asked. Rk was good at painting so she thought he could have set up an art gallery projecting his paintings.

"Nice idea but no!"

"Then?" Madhu asked impatiently.

"Just a cup of coffee, then we will go see." Rk said with a smile and taking Ruhi back to his arms, he gestured Madhu to take a seat.

"I love this view." Madhu said looking out the window.

"The look will be even better once you see it from our house. You could get a clear view of Eiffel tower."

"Really?" Madhu asked, her eyes lighting up like Christmas.

"Bonjour, Monsieur!" Sofia greeted Rk with a warm smile. Rk smiled back and they chatted a little in French while Madhu curiously watched them.

"Make your order, Madhu." Rk passed the menu card to Madhu.

"Whatever you have make it two" Madhu dismissed not even glancing at the card.

Rk quickly ordered two espressos and a glass of milk for Ruhi.

"What you two were talking?" Madhu couldn't help but ask.

"Nothing, I just asked about her health and told her not to overwork. You know she is pregnant." Rk said.

Madhu looked utterly pissed. He wasn't there for her when she was pregnant with his own child but he was carrying for another girl whom he met a few days back.

"You okay?" Rk asked noticing the sudden change in her.

"Yes" she hissed and looked at Ruhi who was dosing off.

"Baby, don't sleep. Your milk is here." Madhu picked up Ruhi from her chair and helped her drink her glass of milk. Ruhi's order was served first as Rk instructed so.

"Roma seems like a nice lady to me." Madhu muttered.

"Yes, she is."

"So you purposefully moved her bouquet shop into this building?"

"Yeah..." Rk grinned cheekily.

"To hook up bittuji with her?" Madhu asked shooting her brow up.

"Yeah!" Rk looked little embarrassed. Madhu just smiled.

After a minute, Sofia placed their coffee cups in front of them.

Madhu looked at both their cups and gritted her teeth. There was a leaf design on her Espresso and a heart design on Rk's cup. "What's this girl implying by it? Does she have any feelings for Rk?" the very thought ragged Madhu with fury. The Bitch! She just had a break up with her lover and now she is hitting on My Rk when she is pregnant with someone else child? Madhu thoughts hatefully without realizing she was getting possessive for her man.

"Don't you think you are going soft in the head?" Madhu blurted out, softly. Why the hell Rk is showing so much of love and affection to all? Who taught him to love truly? Madhu wondered but the answer was sitting on her lap drinking her milk. Ruhi!

"Pardon?" Rk asked not clearly catching her words.

"Um... nothing... Well, actually why heart work on your coffee cup and leaf art on mine?"

"Oh that! I have tried all her art designs and finally gave my verdict that I liked the heart pattern more and asked her to make me that henceforth. Isn't it looking good?" Rk asked showing the heart design to her. "If you want you can try mine?" Rk offered his untouched coffee.

"Both the coffee tastes the same then what's there to bother about the design? I will have mine." Madhu turned down his offer and took a sip from her coffee cup.

"Come, we will take the elevator to the third floor." Rk led Madhu and Ruhi to the elevator.

"In the basement we have a private elevator... It's a direct elevator to our penthouse and can be accessed only by those who have the code. We can park our car in the basement and head straight to our house without entering into the bouquet or cafe or crossing the building at the third floor. This elevator is for public convenience and they can reach up till 3rd floor and for the 4th floor to reach our house a code need to be inputted otherwise the elevator will stop at 3rd floor."

"For safety purpose?" Madhu asked. Rk nodded.

"And for privacy" he added.

Once the elevator halted at the 3rd floor and the door opened, Rk took Madhu's hand in his. She could tell he was nervous. Why? She wondered.

"L'ecole de danse de MB" Just by looking at the huge lavish dancing hall she could tell what was written on the board. On the right side there was a stage which will give room for at least six members to dance and the entire hall can fit at least 50 members to dance spaciously. Madhu slowly walked into the hall in daze, she could hear only the teetering sound of her heels as she walked further on the hard wooden floor.

Ruhi patted her daddy's chest asking him to set her down on the floor and once he did, she ran into the hall and started swirling with her little hands wide open. Rk knelt down on the floor, his hands spread on his parted knees as he adored his daughter dance in merry. She was in her own world, dancing like no one was watching her.

"This dance school is yours." Rk said softly looking up at Madhu hoping she will say something.

"You will be training different dance forms to students; there is no age restriction for girls..." He smirked "but for boys it's below 16 years." Rk said coolly. Madhu frowned. "Bittuji have already started with the admission process. The dancing school will start in two weeks. We will be appointing trainers too so you won't have too much burden on your shoulders."

"Ruhi, baby, stop it! You will get dizzy." Rk stood up on his feet and walked to a still swirling Ruhi and once she slowed down her legs started swaying and Rk held her securely preventing her fall and hitting the floor.

"Madhu, you are so quiet."

"I can't do this Rk." Madhu whispered.

"Why?"

"No, I can't. Don't force me, please." She said without looking at him and started walking towards the elevator.

"Wait!" Rk ran behind her and grabbed her by her wrist.

"Didn't you tell you wanna start a dancing school and train small kids when I asked about what you were gonna do for a living? You future plans?"

"Yes, I remember saying that but I don't want to take your help."

"Help? This is not help, Madhu." Rk sighed. "I really wanted to do something for you."

"Why?"

"Because I... I..." he couldn't muster up the courage to tell that it was not his guilt but his love for her making him to do everything that will make her happy.

"When you started learning dance, Madhu? 4 or 5?" Rk asked taking a different route.

"3 years old." Madhu replied.

"You are trained in 6 forms of dancing, right?" Rk asked. She had told him a lot about her love and passion for dance and dance was her driving force to aspire to become a heroine. That time she had told him all those information which he surprisingly remembered though he didn't pay much attention to her back then.

"Look, you are really a talented girl, Madhu. You shouldn't let go your talent unnoticed."

"Rk, If I ever do anything then it will be on my own hard work. I don't want to use you or your money as a ladder to my success. I once tried that easy route and you know how miserably I failed in it..."

"Can't you consider this as my gift?" Rk cut her off not really wanting to go back there and spoil the moment.

"Gift?"

"For agreeing to be my friend?"

"I agreed to be your friend for our Ruhi so no, I can't accept your expensive gift."

"Then fine! Pay me rent for renting you this dancing studio." Rk suggested. Anyway the money will go to her and Ruhi's account. Every single penny he earned so far was invested in the building and the building was in Madhu and Ruhi's name.

"You will rent me this magnificent hall?" Madhu asked surprise.

"Yeah!" Rk said the 'yeah' in a 'doh' tone.

"I guess I like the deal. So how much is the rent?"

"10% out of the profit you make with this dance school."

"That's enough?"

"You are my friend so you will get concession" Rk grinned. Madhu simply rolled her eyes but gave him a small smile.

"Oh one more condition." Rk said. Madhu asked 'what' by raising her brow up.

"I want you to teach my daughter dancing." Rk said patting Ruhi's head gently.

"Ready to learn dance from momma, my baby?" Madhu asked Ruhi, gently pinching her cheeks.

Ruhi smiled sweetly at her momma and nodded her head excitedly.

"So shall we go see our new house?" Rk asked.

"Sure." Madhu nodded and Ruhi stretched her hands up for her momma to pick her up.

"Rk, you take her. My heels are too high and I don't want to trip and fall along with her."

Rk smiled and carried Ruhi in one hand. "If you want you can take my hand." Rk offered with a cheeky grin. Madhu slapped his arm and walked a head.

"Rk, Roma will handle bouquet shop, Bittuji cafe, and me the dance school..."

"Yeah?"

"What you will do?"

"Oh, I will babysit Ruhi." Rk said proudly. Madhu burst out laughing.

"Seriously?" She asked.

"Why? What's wrong in that? I guess there is no better job than looking after my baby girl" Rk asked, offended.

"Sorry, I... I know you will do that job pretty well."

"You think so?"

"Of course Mr. Pacifier! After all you learned to change her diapers." Madhu laughed again. Rk smiled feeling better to see her laugh. Now, he was more confident that he will bring the old carefree chirpy delightful girl.

"So shall we?" He asked as he felt she had laughed enough at his expense. She nodded and pressed her lips tight to suppress her giggle but it only bubbled out.

"What's so funny?"

"Suddenly one movie came to my mind which will suit our current circumstance."

"What movie?"

"Ki & Ka movie... we are Ri & Ma!" Madhu said laughing holding her stomach.

(In Ki & Ka movie, the hero Kabir will be a homemaker and heroine Kia will be a working wife - I loved that movie. Even wished to write a similar story on Rishbala but then I dropped that idea LOL)

"I'm not going to be a home maker like Kabir; I am just going to babysit Ruhi." Rk said with a pout. He surely was not going to do all the house hold chores. Especially no cooking business!

"But I will be as proud as Kabir if you become as successful as Kia." Rk said genuinely.

"Is this not your plan to keep me busy and take my time from spending with Ruhi?" Madhu asked suspiciously.

Rk rolled his eyes annoyed. "You are gonna work in the same building. Once you are done with your dancing classes you will have all the time in the world for your Ruhi and I won't disturb you two... I just can sit at the bouquet shop or cafe and watch beautiful French girls." Rk said in a teasing tone. Madhu simply ignored the end bit.

"Oh and Ruhi and I will spend most of our time sitting in your studio watching you dance" Rk said with a sly wink. Madhu blushed slightly.

"So the code for our penthouse is 0908" Rk said as he put in the code on the pad.

"0908?"

"Ruhi's birthday date and month"

"Oh!" Madhu smiled.

"Here, you go." Rk passed the house key to Madhu gesturing her to open the door.

Madhu opened the door and gasped loudly. It wasn't a house... it was a mansion... with all the luxury amenities. The interior was fully designed with state-of-the-art technology.

"Just look up." Rk whispered near her ear. Madhu looked up and surprised to see a glass ceiling. Well, not the entire roof was made in glass just in the living room there was a huge circle glass ceiling and right under the ceiling there was a huge water bed.

"If you lie down on this cool bed and look up at the stars at night time you will feel like you are in space." Rk said and placed Ruhi on the water better. Ruhi started bouncing on the bed enjoying the coolness under her feet.

"I never knew you were stinking rich." Madhu said in stunned shock. His mansion back home was nothing compared to this gargantuan extravagant incredibly expensive house.

"I pooled all my assets and invested in this "Ruhi's Tower"..." Rk said in a disinterested tone making clear that money was no more he wished to earn. He wished to earn love, care and affection from her.

Luckily the owner of the building where permanently moving to New Zealand so they were willing to sell the entire building to one single purchaser. Rk didn't mind running a cafe or a bouquet shop but he was keen on not having a fitness center that too for men so he threw them out and made it a dancing studio for Madhu and then designed their house to their liking.

"You wanna rest or want me to give you a tour?" Rk asked.

"Wish I could relax my feet, my high heel shoes are killing my feet but I really want to check out the entire house." Madhu groaned.

"Take off your heels." Rk suggested and Madhu did the same and the marble beneath her feet was so cold. The marble, the sofas, the coffee table, the fluffy carpet, the love seats, everything around her was in white. There was a sparkling white piano on one corner of the living room placed on a raised bed. The cushions and curtains were in purple or pale pink. So lively and mild! Nothing too colorful or too dull.

His Mansion back in India had black marble, black piano, black couches and black bean bags. Everything was black and dark!

Is this yet another proof that Rk has really changed to good? He is no more the man with dark soul? Madhu wondered.

"So this is the dining hall..." a glass table with silver chairs. There was a huge chandelier hanging on top. "...and to the right you will find the kitchen. Everything is stalked up for a month in the kitchen cupboards. If you need anything I will take you to the nearby supermarket till you get acquainted with this new surroundings."

"There are four rooms in this floor." Rk said and showed the first room. It was a play room, obviously for Ruhi. There was a little castle for their little princess, a bouncer, a slide attached to the wall, a swing, a car, a bicycle, a range of toys arranged on the shelves, a painting table with all the painting accessories.

"Oh No!" Madhu moaned.

"What?" Rk asked.

"She will mess with everything and turn this room upside down. I will die tidying up this room."

"Oh! You didn't see Ruhi's bedroom yet. More toys are stuffed there too." Rk said nervously.

"Anyway, you are going to babysit her so you play with her and clean up the rooms once she retires to bed every night." Madhu said coolly and walked out to check the next room leaving Rk worried.

"Papa!" Ruhi poked her head out of her blue color make shift princess castle and smiled happily at him. For this innocent smile he was ready to take all the strain.

Rk took Ruhi to the see the rest of the house assuring to bring Ruhi back to her play room later when she threw tantrum not wanting to come out of her castle.

"So a play room, home theater, a library and only one spare room in this floor?"

"Yeah, that spare room is Bittuji's and one day I hope Roma will share it with him."

"Oh cool"

"Now come, I will show the other four rooms and the swimming pool in the second floor."

"There is a pool?" Madhu asked shocked.

"I love to relax in swimming pool so I built an in-home-pool. And only from there you will get to see the best view of Eiffel tower."

"Then please take me to the pool room first." Madhu insisted.

He led them to the staircase & turned left and unlocked the door. The swimming pool occupied the space of the four rooms down floor. It wasnt too big but a medium sized rectangular pool. Pool water looked blue in color just like the shy. The pool room had a floor to ceiling glass wall so that they could see the clear sky. Oh and the magnificent "Tour la Eiffel" view was breathtaking.

Ruhi got tired with the day's excitement so she wasn't interest to play in the pool but preferred to doze off on her daddy's shoulder.

"I guess we should put her to bed." Rk announced. Madhu nodded.

"Rk, Ruhi is still a baby... She might get scared and search for either of us in the night so I dont want her to sleep on her own in her room... You better put her in my room."

"Alright! She can sleep in her room at day times and at night your girl will be by your side." Rk said with a smile & took Ruhi to Madhu's room. Ruhi's room will be in the middle of her mom and dad's rooms. So it will go like Madhu's room, then Ruhi, then Rk's and then a gym room.

"You like your bedroom?" Rk asked placing Ruhi on the comfy bed & kissed her forehead lovingly.

"It's beautiful. Thanks for arranging everything to my taste." Yet again everything in her room was white paired with fuscia color. She had a TV in her room too, walk in closet, a balcony with glass railing. The house was fully designed in white & glass yet so elegant & calming, not at all boring. Her bathroom was big with a oval shaped bath tub, cubical shower, two sinks, shelves & toilet. Rk said to her that his room was a replica to hers so she decided to check it later and Ruhi's room was also as spacious as theirs but decorated in bright colors and play things.

"I guess I am tired too. I will also take a short nap with Ruhi."

"Cool!" Rk smiled & decided to walk out of her room when Madhu called him.

"What?"

"Rk... Thanks." She gave him a small smile.

"Please don't! You have nothing to thank me. This is just nothing. I didnt do anything to impress you but to give the best to you and to our Ruhi. Thats it."

"I will pay you for letting me stay in this house just like how you decided to rent me the studio" Her house in mumbai was rented and she decided to transfer the rent amount to Rk's account. She was clear not to enjoy the luxury coming out of his money.

"Madhu, please! Don't insult me. I don't want your money." Rk said with a huge sigh.

"Neither do I. I don't want your money. I don't want to bath in your wealth." Madhu said stubbornly.

"About renting the studio I can see your logic, you wanna a make a career of your own so I reluctantly agreed to collect rent amount from you for the studio but this is home, Madhu. Our home! Didn't you say so? I want us to live here as a family. A happy family! Please try to understand." Rk pleaded.

"Okay" she agreed softly.

"Thanks!" Rk said and quickly scurried out of her room fearing she will put yet another condition. He had enough of conditions from her!

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Sofia is my French teacher's name. I love her so much. If I was a boy then I would have proposed her long back when I was in 12th std. So yeah in her memory I used her name 'Sofia' for this french girl! 😆

Thanks!

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According to me...I am unresing this soon LOL! Coz I just read it an hour before and now came to comment 😆 Han yes...nan therikavittuten 😆
After reading I understood how RK is gonna make all her dreams come true 😃
Oh wait...I somewhere read Poorva's comment...she is learning Tamil I guess...Instead of saying "Neengal oru arputamana eluthalar" she has written "Neengal oru apputhaman eutter" LOL! I had a good time laughing 😆 Glad she is learning our semmozhiyana tamizh mozhi 👏
Yes...I am so surprised coz I wasn't a good girl like you. I will do exactly opposite to what they ask me to do 😆 So if they help me to walk...I will pry their hands away and walk on my own and fall down...but not get their help and follow their words LOL 🤣 But later on I became a good girl 😳

Again I am drifting away from the story 😆 I seem to love talking whatever comes to my mind 😆 So Ruhi's birthday is on 9th August? 😆 That's so clever of you...right too...you both are babies 😆 I actually kept Madhu's birthday on yours in Chain my Heart LOL!
Moreover you updated the story on 8th Sept...which means on 08/09 just like your birthday 09/08 😆 LOL! You are so smart akka 👏

He built a Castle for his daughter 😲 I somewhat expected to have both Madhu's and Ruhi's name. Even RK would like that but he is smart enough to understand that Madhu doesn't like such things. She will get intimidated and his surprise will go down in the drain 😆 It's better that he does something for her after she accepts his love 😊


Sure enough..he is using French to his advantage 😆 He introduced her as his lover 😆 Poor Madhu! She would have turned into a Kali if she had understood it's meaning 😆 I hoped to see RK being a translator...just like Deepika did it for SRK in Chennai Express
Ruhi rightly said Noodles! Bittuji is already possessive LOL 😆 Roma is irritating him by showing her attitude 😳


RK is so romantic. Smart too! Has indeed did a lot of hard work and planned the whole Tower so meticulously...So Bittuji and Roma are going to handle Amour Cafe and Bouquet shop respectively! Love guru RK 😎

LOL akka! Now your love for your French Mam is now known to all 😆 She would have been very happy to see how her student remembers her so beautifully through her writings! Pen is mightier than a sword right 😃


Madhu getting jealous? i preferred the other way around 😆 I want the dance classes to start...with lots of boys above the age of 16 joining 🤣 But I can't see it happening...Bittuji is so loyal towards RK...I think RK would be jealous of Madhu teaching dance to a 16 year old boy but not her own hubby 😆
Yippeee! Ruhi is gonna be her student...since it's clear that RK is gonna baby sit Ruhi he is going to enjoy the show like at first...when he first saw her. But now not eyeing her lustfully...but lovingly with passion 😳


The best thing in the whole surprise...is the dance hall! Akka...the Ruhi tower and Coffee shop is quiet predictable. But you surprised me bringing Sofia and more by fulfilling Madhu's wish of starting a dance school 👏 How thoughtful of RK! Glad Madhu didn't accept his offer...yes...she was doomed the first time, she believed him. Now with her confidence and thoughtfulness...she took a wise decision. I am so proud of her! She is going to give a tough time to Right Kameena...sorry..she is doing that already 😆

Loved Ruhi's baby dance 😃 Madhu is going to carve her into beauty and perfect her steps! I am so in love with this Madhu 🤗

RK is changing...his colors and tastes...is that suppose to mean that he changed for good? I hope so...I specifically liked the choice of colors he chose in furnishing their home...white, fuchsia...etc. Sorry akka I forgot the other colors 😳


If there is something I don't like...then this is it...RK calling Ruhi as "my daughter" instead of "our daughter" or sometimes referring her as "your daughter" to Madhu. I prefer both of them to say " our daughter" 😃

I think you are changing the meaning of "boring". LOL akka! If this is boring what should I call a real boring update? Worsta? LOL 😆 This is a beautiful, lovely, long update. It showed the depth in which RK understood his girls...how thoughfful he was to include both Bittuji and Roma, even Sofia. He didn't want any girl to suffer like Madhu because of men like him. It showed the love he had for Ruhi...to build a Castle for her providing her with comfort. The respect and love he had for Madhu...separate room for her as she doesn't want to stay with him and his love...by constructing the dance hall as per her taste...giving her enough freedom. Not to forget...he is providing life for so many people who are working there.

I turned a bit serious I guess.I like and adore Ri and Ma...Haha! like Ki and Ka. I love that movie and love that story with Rishbala! But I do think that I love RK and Madhu in that role here rather than in a new story 😊 It's my opinion 😳 RK can baby sit Ruhi and Madhu teach dance. How lovely! Ruhi would only be too happy to be with her Papa...whenever she misses her Momma she can intrude her Mama's dance classes and enjoy her dancing! It's a plus for RK too 😉

Thanks for PM! 🤗
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fabulous update dear...👏
Loved it too much...
wow...rk purchased whole building for ruhi & madhu... rk kept the building name as Ruhi's Tower... Loved it..
finally bittu Ji's love oops...Roma's entry...

rk taking advantage of madhu for not understanding french language...but I liked it when he called madhu as his lover...

"papa noodles" ohh my god...I laugh hard... funny scene... truly like father like daughter...🤣
poor bittuji is offended in hearing roma's hair referred to noodles by his chief & ruhi...

bittuji is thinking to propose roma in the cafe...good going bittuji...

Madhu getting jealous seeing RK's concern for sophia...😉
RK built a dance school for Madhu... how sweet of you rk...now madhu can fulfill her dream...
You have beautifully described their home...I loved their new home...😊
Waiting for next part..
Thanks for pm dear😊
p.s. i already behind mannat ( Srk home)...you are increasing my list dear...
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Hai ka..
MIND-BLOWING update ka.Seriously loved each and everything..
Aww..This RUHI is Damn Cute and Adorable and everything (add more adjectives ).i just love her..the way She shies the way she blushes the way she talks the way she Speaks each and everything makes me love her more..Aww Rishu matched once again with the Girls..oh oh..Boy r u stalking her dress or wat??
Rishu u earned my respect for u man wen u told u gonna say Everything to Ruhi..i seriously went sad yaar and I was crying ..I know on knowing the Truth Ruhi won't hate u she will forgive u wen u come back for Her and Madhu..I felt sad wen he purposefully stayed away from Ruhi for Madhu..
Ruhi listened to her Papa very well and Rk gave his phone to her to make her forget to pluck the stones of her dress.
Madhu and Rk became Friends that's so good..i loved the way wen they shake their hands and Ruhi being a Cupid kept her tiny hands on their hands..that wasa scene to watch for..
Bittuji learning French..Rofl yaar..Roma aunty abhi se Tang kar rahe ho Bittuji ko.thats not fair..Di pls show some Romantic scenes between Roma and Bittuji it will be Fun and Hilarious..i know Madhu and Rk's romance is too far..so asked for Bittuji's.rofl.. Waiting to know wat is the house that Rk made for his Family..
P.S. AKKA PLS PARCEL RUHI TO ME..she is such a cutie pie I just Want to pull her cheeks and give her a big kiss on her cheeks..Thanks for d Scrap ka..pls post next soon..Can't wait for it..Thank u..
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Hai ka..
I think I need to find more words in Dictionary to Praise this..I already said Fab.Amazing,Awesome,Mind-blowing and all in ur Previous updates but now I can't find a Word to praise this..I totally loved it to the core..The way u explained each and every single corner of the Tower is totally Mind boggling ka..
I thought it will b some big Building wich Rk will gift but seriously didn't thought he will place a Tower that too on Ruhi's name and Property is in Madhu and Ruhi's name... 👏 ..I totally loved wen he said "Ruhi tower "..not only Madhu my reaction too was like that..
Oh oh Finally Bittuji's lover mde an entry..Roma..Aww..Rk don't u think u r taking advantage of Madhu not knowing French..Lover haan..intro was cute..Aww.that Bouquet scene too was cute,Second floor for Coffee shop..oh oh..Boy u r getting Romantic day by day Hun..u gave it to Bittuji to handle Cafe..Wah boy..This Bittuji is behaving like a love struck teenager thinking to propose Roma..oh oh..* whistle * ( I don't know how to whistle if u know u can make a whistle here lol ).Rk behaving like a Love Guru for Bittuji..keep it up boy..U kept Sofia on ur cafe..Thats so sweet of u..Knowing her Condition u kept her..U have Really Grownup as a Mature man from Reckless Rk..i like it..Madhu feeling Jealous haan..Continue..but don't forget he is only for u..
Third floor for Dancing hall..Wen u said Rk gonna give everything back to Madhu I thought how but seriously now I got it..he wants to start her Career..This boy is Really Grownup..He agreed for Renting her hall..Madhu u go girl..Paris is waiting for ur Dancing Career..Aww..Rk gonna babysit her BABY..choo chwweeet..Madhu u watched Ki and ka and comparing urself with Movie.Good Girl..Ha ka..Y u gave 9 th august as Ruhi's birthday..Atleast u should have used 16 Sep.it would have been so nice..lol..Just kidding he kept Ruh's birthdate as a Code..
Aww..Finally Penthouse..I am getting Dizzy here akka parcel some Frooti or Mazaa to me..He made an Outstanding House..Loved each and everything he described yaar..Ruhi's room,play room,Living room,theatre and a library and Both Rk and Madhu's room..I felt sad wen he said they r living in Separate rooms..Aww..This Swimming pool seriously I so loved it.Madhu yaar stop feeling insecure he wont separate u and Ruhi and This man have invested each and everything for this Tower..Seriously man u grownup as MATURE RK FROM RECKLESS RK.(Thanks to u ka u made it) Rk just wants Love and Affection from her..U gained my respect.Madhu yaar pls stop renting everything.U only said na u want a Happy home then who rents that..
We R Understanding Rk bcoz We Read his thoughts were as Madhu she cant..so she got insecure feelings..
P.S.THANKS FOR D SCRAP AND THIS STORY KA..Akka u forget one thing u didn't explained Rk's room..lol..Can't wait for next update soon..Eagerly waiting..DARE U SAY THIS IS A BORING UPDATE..I AM ANGRY ON U..HOW COULD U SAY THIS..U KNOW IN EACH PART MADHU OR RUHI WAS THE STAR OF THIS STORY BUT IN UPDATE RK IS STAR..
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Haha sudha ,I kept him busy " 🤣🤣 reminds me when bittuji was blushing and acted like a new bride when they reached Paris 🤣
But jokes apart that man really sacrificed everything for his chief ❤️
Hope Bittuji Roma get married soon ,I mean in this story 😆
Po SUDHA I don't have words for ruhi and Rk ,I'm just jealous on seeing their bonding like madhu 😆 but I love them ❤️
Aww madhu was blushing and trying to be friend with Rk for ruhi 's sake 😳
Kuch kuch hota hai madhu Ku 😆being with with Rk that's y she is changing though she is not accepting her feelings ,for that rk have to work hard 😳 first madhu sacrificed and lost everything now its rk's turn 😳
But I don't know why rk wants to tell everything about their past to ruhi ? Past is past na we should forget everything and move on .yeah I know she deserves to know coz she is also a part of their past deeds but when u have bright future y u need to rekindle the past and ruin the present ?
On the other part ,it would be good decision if he tell her the truth coz better know her past from her parents rather than from third petson and hate them. if he confess also I'm sure ruhi would be mad first then she will forgive him like madhu for his love on them 😳 ( happy ending so obviously madhu will forgive him 🤣)

Haha rendu view la solli confuse pannitana ? 😆
Sonna enna aagum ,sollati enna aagum nu think panni paarthaen 😉 like 12B movie story maadhiri 😆
Superb update sudha
Thanks for the pm 🤗
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Long bore update huh idhu 😡😡
Adi vilum innoru thadavai un updates bore nu sonna 😡
Do u know how much I enjoyed reading this beautiful update .nee bore update sonnadhum kovama varudhu
This update showed how Rk has changed and how he is trying his best to make madhu and ruhi happy ❤️ his love is very palpable ❤️ he worked hard and put all his savings properties to give a happy family life to his love ( ruhi and madhu ) ❤️
His ideas are brilliant 👏credits goes to u only sudha 😊
Konjam mediator job um panni irukaan 😆 I mean bittuji Roma love Ku 😳
I loved the idea of dance studio it reminded me when he first met madhu who was dancing on stage 😳 andha dance thaan rendum peraiyum meet panna vachudhu ippo re unite panna useful a iruku ❤️ excellent idea
Aww y madhu is so dumb 😆 he said Amour ' when he introduced to madhu to Roma and his coffee shop name is Amour Cafe ' rendu thaiyum connect panni meaning Kandu pudichu irukalam la she is not genius like me 🤣 dumbo madhu 😆
Haha ' papa noodles ' cracked me up sudha 🤣bittuji reaction 😆 semma love pola bittuji Ku Roma mela 😆
Rk proudly said that he will babysit Ruhi but he was worried when madhu said that he have to clean all the mess 😆 but he is happy to do any thing for his cite little angle 's smile 😳
Hehe Madhu is jealous n Sofia 😆 love her possessive jungli billi avatar ❤️
Thank you so much for this wonderful update sudha I could imagine Ruhi's tower very well 😳
U described everything so lovely " ma cher " 😉❤️
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the msg 🤗




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