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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello people😊,I'm a new member here and a great fan of NiBir😃. I honestly admit I started watching NAUC after entry of Kabir😆. I like trio of Nisha, Kabir and Viraj though.
Regarding this forum, I was a silent admirer😳 until now from few months and finally got time to create an account.
I have read some amazing stories on NiBir and Niraj and they're just awesome👏👏👏
Thanks for creating a thread of NiBir stories too👏
Well, I had also written an OS though it's so short but I thought of sharing...
Thanks in advance whoever likes it🤗 and critics are also welcomed whole-heartedly... Also, I'm a busy person😆 so I can't guarantee when I would comment next...
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Nibir OS:A broken vase

"I don't remember," I said

"I do remember," She said

"I don't know" I said

"I do know" she said

"What's wrong with you?" I glared.

"Whatever that is wrong with you is wrong with me" she averred whilst crossing her hands.

"God! Why did I marry her?" I looked up irritated.

"God! Why did I marry him?" She copied me.

"Just stop it okay!" I exclaimed glaring at her.

"You stop it first" she stated.

"Arey yaar I didn't break that vase" I spoke annoyed.

"Only you were there inside the room and that vase was perfectly okay before that" she reasoned displeased.

"So, that's not enough evidence that I broke it" I declared.

"That's enough to prove you broke it. Moreover, you didn't like it from the day itself it was kept there" she explicated.

"Yeah but still it doesn't prove that I broke it" I said

"So, the vase broke itself or what?" she raised a brow.

"I don't know" I said upset now.

She sighed and leant her head at the headrest of the bed closing her eyes.

"I didn't break it" I quickly said and pulled quilt over my face.

"Don't admit" I heard her saying and sat back on the bed.

"Why are you fighting with me on trivial issues?" I spoke frustrated.

She opened her eyes and sat straight, "Breaking of that vase is not a trivial issue" she glared.

"Of course yeah, it was gifted to you by your ex boyfriend right?" I jeered disdainfully.

"Shut up!" She shouted.

"Why are you so angry now? I didn't say anything wrong" I sneered.

"It was gifted to me on my first event success" she gritted her teeth.

"Yeah by your ex boyfriend" I narrowed my eyes.

"A word next and I'll forget that you are my husband!" She pointed her finger to me.

"As if you really remembered it until now" I fumed.

The next moment my face was hit by sudden stroke of water. She splashed it from the glass kept beside the bed.

I wiped my face and crashed her to my chest pulling her.

She frowned.

I sighed, "Sorry"

She hugged me mumbling, "Sorry"

"Why were you fuming so much? I'm only your ex boyfriend" I pouted.

She lashed my arm lightly.

"What? That's true!" I chuckled.

"I know but don't say all those things, it hurts when I remember them" she spoke softly.

"Nishaaa, look we're together now" I broke the hug cupping her face.

"Hmmm yeah" she said

She added a bit angrily, "Dare not call yourself my ex boyfriend next time"

I smiled, "okay"

After a slight pause I chortled, "I'll call you my ex girlfriend next time"

"Kabiiir" She lashed my arm again but this time hard.

"Ow! It pains yaar!" I spoke annoyed whilst rubbing my arm with my hand.

"It pains too" she frowned.

"Okay you are my wife and I'm your husband. Is that fine now?" I smiled

"Absolutely fine" she smiled.

"Okay then a goodnight kiss?" I smirked.

She rolled her eyes and started to lie on the bed.

"Yaar Nishaaa" I shook her slightly as she lay with quilt completely covering her.

"Just sleep" She said underneath quilt.

I stated irked, "You are so boring"

"Same to you" she said reflecting my displeasure.

"Still I love you" I sighed.

"Same to you" she spoke again.

"Why do you copy my words always?" I chuckled taking the quilt over me.

"Because you say the same words my heart says" she said and snuggled closer to me.

I wrapped her in my arms and kissed her forehead muttering a goodnight.

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Anmol333 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all welcome to the forum😊
And thanks for sharing such a cute os... Loved it😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

First of all welcome to the forum😊

And thanks for sharing such a cute os... Loved it😳



thank you so much😳
Well I've read "The Known Stranger"
It was amazing👏 and would soon comment there
(kindly bear with me I've just created an account😆)

And I'm following "The Journey Of Love" and would love to read the next chapter😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice dear 😊
Nibir nok jhok was enjoyable
But a question who broke the vase
I am Ritika 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice os ... cute fight 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aNibirFan



thank you so much😳
Well I've read "The Known Stranger"
It was amazing👏 and would soon comment there
(kindly bear with me I've just created an account😆)

And I'm following "The Journey Of Love" and would love to read the next chapter😳



Thank you so much dear 😳

And about journey of love you have to wait little.. I will update it this month😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to forum 🤗
Lovely os
Do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it's lovely😊👏
do write more...
welcome to the paagal world😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey... welcome here... amazing OS... i like the way u remained true to nibir's character... quite a good attempt... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

Nice dear 😊
Nibir nok jhok was enjoyable
But a question who broke the vase
I am Ritika 😃

Thank you Ritika😳
well it's an open- ended shot ,so left it to readers 😆

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