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Silverrmoon

@Silverrmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Okay Hammie just found this post so decided to reply ...sry totally forgot about unres back then...👏This is a master piece, so well written and you have literally shown the show's trailer from the beginning till the very end.

The story it started with Viplav's bet till the moment Viplav meets his daughter in Mumbai. He was a Rakshas back then n right now but for Vidha 😆. You are brilliant poet ...Yes Viplav's transformation is phenomenal indeed after he gets separated from Dhani, he has become so matured and wise later on unlike the impulsive Viplav who used to judge things immediately.

Loved your poem and will save it in word 😃 There is nothing much for me to add, this is a wonderful poem and you have gifted, talented writer person...Keep writing more dear...Till then take care. Btw your title is superb now (the one I was speaking of yest ). 👍🏼

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: NusiSg

yeahhh👏 you read it... me happy kushbash now
Ohh Hammie 👍🏼 ⭐️ stupendous dear jst fantastic.. u ve covered Viplov's whole life journeyin ths poem.. showing ur bbrilliance. .😳 certainly took ths celebration to some higher levels dear..!! I love each n every word u spoke frm Viplov's side.. viplov can't be summarised better than ths.. my heart jst swell up reading those lines.. I'm grinning on ths thought that I remain stick frm start till end.. I'm actually proud on us all.. will cherish ths journey forever as ur takes n ur brilliant wrk has made ths journey a fairytale fr me Hammie n I love U fr that. .!! I dun hav enough words to praise u im incapable. . Frgve me fr that..bt I kno my emotion reach u fully n u r well aware how much I adore ur wrk fr Ishq.. Thnx..!!
thanks for your precious thoughts Nus..hammie wishes to thank you for being with me all the way back to my takes.. hammie is blessed to have you as a comitted reader... I know you too are a busy person work commitments... thanks very much for your love and support... hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

oyeee chup kar!lardki ke mafak roona band kar! ghare ,ghare! nautanki! chal gimme a high five..😛

Baji ko tune rula diya bhau.. Tears in my eyes, out of happiness.. What a brilliant piece of writing my dear.. Wow wow wow👏👏.. A big roud of applause for my very talented mate.. Supppeerrrbbb.. Can there be anything better than this on Ishq Ka Rang Safed's one year anniversary..?? There cannot be anything more beautiful hammie..
thanksbarbji... was looking out for you..
Enjoyed reading it so much.. It was beautiful.. Right from the very first line to the last.. Vidha's flower of Ishq is in vidhu's hand.. Viplav's fairy will not let it wither.. Her parents will be reuniting soon and I am eagerly waiting for that special moment..
yes flower fairy made him into sab ka baap!
Bhau, bhau, bhau, bhau.. And I will call u thousand more times like joya didi.. Lekin apun pyar se bulaigi toh ek bar kaafi hai😆.. Aa gale lag ja hammie like a Duji hug😳..
yeshhh erhh you my baji are every ready... and uppar se you get emotional tooo
Hatsss off to u.. May God bless u.. Always keep smiling.. Tumhare chehere pe smile bohot achchi lagti hogi..😳 Mishal, if he visits this forum ever, should read ur posts specially.. The handsome hunk is indeed much lucky to have such dedicated fans..
27th Jan and 10th Aug are the two special dates for us..high5 bhau.. Will be back to read ur next post.. haaan barbs I THINK he left Laagi too .. end of march.. 27th? 28th? march... yaad hai thuje... thanks for your loving, huggy comment... yours hammie roar...

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Was reading this once again hammie and couldn't help laughing out loud in place where u mentioned TORCH, HA HAHA.This is what akram is taught since birth that he is d torch of d clan. I wonder why I didn't strike me before, I loath d whole dialogue thing made by grandparents, HAMARI CLAN TUMSE HI.

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: simple2joy
Was reading this once again hammie and couldn't help laughing out loud in place where u mentioned TORCH, HA HAHA.This is what akram is taught since birth that he is d torch of d clan. I wonder why I didn't strike me before, I loath d whole dialogue thing made by grandparents, HAMARI CLAN TUMSE HI.

tazzz.. thanks for digging this up... I had forgotten about it .. I shall add it to my takes.. with regards to Mishaal ~ torch.. males being the light that carry on the lineage.. Iam not sure where this stems from? other than that a male biological..determines the multiplication of the human race.. however the task needs a female to faciltate the seed. In terms of world cultures.. The Jewish people believe its the woman who carries forward their race ,not the man. Within the Hindu belief ..a female is considered as the personification of the Laxmi goddess..Within present times ,those soceities and nations tend to thrive where the potentials of both woman and manpower are utilized..
With regards to your family , you are blessed that your family has given both you and akkram equality of opportunities to reach your full potentials .. stop being bossy! and picking on akram!
love hammie