Imaginary episode#18

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello edkvians aka shramanians🤗

Our forum writers are doing amazing job by writing such a beautiful imaginary episodes and one more imaginary episode is going to join the list coz its sunday night that means imaginary episode night

Sorry to writers of imaginary episode #17 coz i m yet to read the episode.,will read it soon as i get time..i apologise for the delay in reading..😒

Enough of my blabber..😆 coming to imaginary episode #18.😃

This imaginary episode will be based on imaginary episode #17 precap..here is the glimpse of it.

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PRECAP:

"Sumo sab meri galti hai"

"Kya keh rahe ho Shravan?"

"Sach keh raha hoon. Yeh sab meri galti hai"

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try to include the precap in the imaginary episode #18

So its already 10 pm IST.

note :

1) this episode will end by 11 pm IST.

2) if you put a res for writing episode, then you will have only 5 min to write (unres) your part of story after previous res is unresed by other writer.

3)anyone can participate.

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potterginny

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unressed.
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"Sumo..."
"Hmm..."
"Kuch kehna hai tumse.."
The tone of his voice was indicating fishy news but Sumo decided it was best not to show it right then. Slowly getting out of the embrace, she took his hands in hers and looked up in his eyes expectantly. "Hmm..sun rahi hun.."
"Yeh...(looks at their entwined hand in his lap and takes a deep breath)...kal jo bhi hua, Aditya ne jo bhi kiya...woh meri galti thi Sumo."
"Yeh kya keh rahe ho Shravan?"
"Haan Sumo, saari galti meri thi...woh..Aditya ki bachelor's party mein maine use humare relationship ke baare mein kuch inappropriate baatein kahi, yeh sochkar ki use bhi apne life mein utni hi hairaani ho jitni mujhe ho rahi hai.."
"Kaunsi inappropriate baatein Shravan?"
"Sumo...I can't say it...tum naftrat karne lagogi mujhse...nahi...please"

Edited by potterginny - 9 years ago

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potterginny

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Posted: 9 years ago

Where is everyone? 😕

Edited by potterginny - 9 years ago

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

Koi nhi hai...

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"nafrat" she said surprised thinking this is what he thinks about her..this is what he knows about her..

shravan's heart sink with the only utterance of one word by her because it was not a mere word she said rather there was something emotional in it "nafrat". And he knew ..he himself once again hurt her...

"sumo ... mera... matlab... " shravan said understanding her dilemma..but was cut in between words by suman.

"tumhe lagta hai ki main tumse nafrat kar sakti hu, nafrat toh dur ki baat main tumse jyada der rak naraz bhi nhi reh sakti toh nafrat ki toh tum baat hi mat karo"

Edited by zindgidilse - 9 years ago

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neverlandspirit

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Posted: 9 years ago

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"Shravan tum KYU nahi samjhte ke tumse kabhi nafrat nahi kar sakti hoon. Kabhi nahi!" she says, placing her hand against his stubbly cheek.

"Par yeh jaane ke baad ke maine Aditya ko humare bare mein kya kuch nahi kaha, tum kya, main khud apne aap se nafrat karne laga hoon!" he couldn't even meet her eyes as he uttered the words.

It freezes her soul, the agony in his voice and it makes a cold shiver run down her spine at what he was implying. But she pushes away those stupid thoughts away just as soon as they come to her mind. "Shravan theek-theek batao, aisa tumne kya keh diya Aditya ko."

And somewhere in the dark crevices on her mind, she prays that he hadn't let her love for him down, that he hadn't insulted their relation beyond repair.

"Maine humari dosti par daag laga diya Sumo" he says in a voice lower than a whisper.

Sumo feels her world stop spinning. Because no matter what happened between them, no matter how much they loathed each other currently, no matter how much they yelled and insulted and annoyed the other, they always, ALWAYS respected the pure relation that was their friendship. And now to hear him say that he had carelessly flung years of their friendship around like dirty laundry burned her heart.

Her hand falls away from his face, eyes void of any emotions. She feels herself getting up from his bed and walking towards the door. The movements however were so mechanical that her mind doesn't even register her own actions.

How could he? she thinks to herself barely hearing him screaming after her...

Edited by neverlandspirit - 9 years ago

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potterginny

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Posted: 9 years ago

Shravan's loud wail screaming her name broke something inside her. His voice slashed her mind, ripping it apart into infinite pieces, never to be joined again. There was a ferocious battle between two of her greatest virtues, on one side her love for the broken man who broke her soul and the other with her ego to protect herself from further breaking apart. As much she was tempted to go back in the room and get dissolved in HIS hug, she was disgusted to stay in the same place where he was.
She slowly trudged down the stairs, each step heavier than previous one, crossing the living room, the porch out the main gate to her car. Sliding in to her seat, she couldn't help but go back to THAT day, 11 years back, when she was the culprit and HE was the one who had his soul get ripped apart by her. He was the one that LEFT that day, leaving her screaming on the middle of the driveway, waiting for a chance to express her guilt. And that was the day when they truly lost each other. She never explained, he never listened. But now as she came to think of it, she understood it all. He believed in her, she proved him wrong in his beliefs. 11 years later, the tables turned, turning them away from each other, forever.
"No. This is so not happening again. This cycle has to stop. Today."
She knew exactly what she had to to. They had lot of talking to do. Ten years worth of talking. No, a correction. A lifetime worth of talking.

Edited by potterginny - 9 years ago

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unresed my part of episode

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Wiccamaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sumo Tum sun nahi paogi ... aur main kah nahi paooga...

Sharavan... baat kitni bhe buri ho main sunne ko taiyar hoon ... tum bolo to sahi

Sumo vo baar baar mujse hamari realtionship ke baare main pooch raha that... too ... (again sobbing ) to maine kaha ke hamare beech sab kuch hai jo lovers ke beech, husband wife ke beech hota hai... again crying bitterly.

Sumo completely stunned and unable to comprehend the sudden revelations.

Sumo ... I told you naa I have betrayed you .. I betrayed our relation. ( he again hits his injured fist on floor which makes Sumo to notice him again. )

Sharavan no please dont do this ... you naver betrayed our friendship ... we were not friends when you did this... you yourself said that day in PCT ke hamare beech koe rishta nahi hai... so you didn't breach the code of friendship.

Aur jis din tumne mujhe Aditya se save kia us din bhe to tumne kaha... ke tum ye kisi ke liye bhe karte.

Sumo ... Aaisa kyo bol rahi ho... main maar jaonga ... main kudh ko kabhi bhe maaf nahi kar sakta.

Sharavan tum ab ek guilt se bahar niklo... tumne kisi third person ke liye kuch kah bhe diya to kya badi baat hai... aur maine kaha tha naa ahsan hai tumhar mujh par puri jindagi ... Jo usne kia uska tumhari baat se matlab nahi hai.

Eska sirf aur sirf ek baat se matlab hai ... vo hai mere footi kismat .. ke log mujhe nikalana chte hai apni jindagi se aur main hoon ke main marti bhe nahi.

Please take care of yourself its my request ... I hope kee tum maan loge ...

Leaves the room ...

Pushkar please take care of him.. I am leaving.

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Edited by Wiccamaya - 9 years ago