Ratri OS..'THE RUNAWAY Bride'...!!

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Hi peeps..

I was having a really off time...
That's when I read this funny OS in another forum which was inspired from DDLj and 3 idiots.
It was so hilarious that My mood changed colour..!!!
So I thought why not write something like that for Ratri...
So originally this is Nidhi's(Nidhi54321) concept I just edited into a Ratri version, making few changes.
Hope you all like it.

The Runaway Bride...

It was Trisha's wedding day. She looked at her reflection in the mirror and sighed. If only he would have the same feelings for her as she had for him, she would have been his bride today, maybe destiny had other plans.

Aarti and Gauri entered. Both appreciated her looks.
"Tumpe red aur pink ka combination bahut acha lagta hai" she heard his voice echo. He had told that during a case when she had went undercover.

Gauri-"Trisha are you sure tumhe aaj hi shaadi karni hai, Raghav aaj raat ki train se Bangalore jaa raha hai..!!"
Aarti-"haan 9.30pm ki train hai..!!


"Waise Gauri, Kajol bhaag gayi thi apni shaadi se DDLJ mein..?" Aarti said excitedly.

"Haan Aur vo Kareena.. Vo bhi bhag gayi thi na 3 idiots me" Gauri exclaimed.

Trisha to herself-kaise bataoon ki koi faida nahi...wo mujhse pyaar nahi karta...tum logon ka bhi assumption galat hai jaise mera thaa.

Turning to them with a face implying mujhe koi farak nahi padta..
"Will you two keep quite! Ye kya bakwas topic hai.. What should I do if these girls ran away" She almost shouted.

Aarti-"Hum toh generally baat kar rahe thee, Hume pata hai tum mein himmat nahi hai" she laughed and Hi-fived Gauri.

"You guys discuss all this generally' ? And And.. Why do you think i would run away. Siddharth is the best for me." She said fixing her dupatta.

Aarti-"usse red pasand hai naa"
Trisha-"Nahi red aur pink ka combination pasand hai..!!"
Gauri-"lekin uss din toh ussne kaha thaa ki usse blue pasand hai.."
Trisha looking perplexed "Nahi Raghav ko red aur pink pasand hai.."
Both-"Lekin hum toh Siddhart kii baat kar rahe thee..!!"

Trisha looks the other way. Gauri-"Trisha kis ko uloo bana rahii hoon...tum sach mein Siddhart se shaadi karna chathi hoo??"

Trisha-"Haan...wo mere liye perfect hai..!! " She said trying to convince herself more than them.

Aarti-"Maine neeche jaa rahii hoon aunty ne kaam diya thaa..!!"

"Abhi bhi time hai Trisha! You know the truth! Just accept it! You love him" Gauri said calmly.

"I don't love Raghav.. Do you get it?" She said to her.

"Raghav? Maine kab Raghav ka naam liya, I was talking about Sid" Gauri chuckled.



"Oh Shut Up! I know you too well .!!" she said making a face.

"Sid has everything i need. He is the best life partner for me" She continued explaining.

"Bas ek cheez nahi hai uske paas!" Gauri said.



"What?" She raised her eyebrows.

"Tumhara Dil.. kyuki vo toh raghav ke paas hai na" Gauri smiled.



"Ohh.. Damn.. You are mad! Let me get ready now! .. Please"

Gauri leaves smiling.

Both go out to meet Rajbir and Bikram and tell that nothing worked.
Bikram-"Plan B execute karna padega..!"
He gives all of them blue-tooth.
Bikram-"Lets do it guys..."
"Guys, Tum sab ready ho naa???" Rajbir asked.



"Yes! Mission Ratri is on!" All shouted in unison


Half an hour later:

Trisha descended down the stairs dressed as a bride.

Everyone looked at each other and smiled.

"Let's do it!Rajbir.. Are you ready" Bikram said over the bluetooth.

Rajbir haan..
He goes towards Siddharth and drops the juice on his sherwaani.
And then apologises and takes him inside to clean.
Bikram was already waiting there . The duo looked at each other and nodded.
Rajbir removed the chloroform napkin and put it on Sid's face and he fainted.

After few minutes, the groom came in wearing the sehra.

Trisha saw him sit beside him. She sighed.

Soon, Gauri came and sat beside her. She looked at her and gave a weird smile. aarti sat the other side and gave the same weird smile. She sensed something fishy and looked at the bridegroom intently. Then shook her head and concentrated on the boring chants by the pandit.

"Trisha.. Listen very carefully" Gauri said in her ear very slowly.

"What?" Trisha asked

"Joi tumhare paas baitha hain...wo...dulhaa."

"I know woo dulhaa hai...so what?" Trisha said getting irritated.

"Ohho! Gauri.. Jaldi bolo.. Meri shaadi ho jayegi Trisha ke sath uske baad sentence complete karogii kya" The man in the sehra spoke up very slowly clearly irritated.

Trisha realised it was Rajbir..!!

She coughed really bad listening to this and glared at the him and then at Gauri. ! Where is Sid?" she asked shocked.

"Tumhe yahaan se bhaagna hoga Trisha.. Ye Rajbir hai"Gauri said

"What? Why? What bhaagna? I'm not going anywhere" She gave her Boss look.

"Vo mera boyfriend hai trisha .., " Gauri told her.


" I didn't ask you to get him here" Said trisha completely shocked.

"Var-Vadhu phero ke liye khaade ho jaaye" The priest announced and the family members made both Trisha and Rajbir stand.

"Maine pehle hi kaha tha.. trisha nahi bhaagey gii !! Yeh sab uss Bikram kii wajah se! " he said.

"Bhaago Trisha...warna humaari shaadi ho jaayegi..Aur agar Gauri ne zindaa chod diya toh Raghav toh definetly mera encounter kardega." Said a tensed Rajbir.

Gauri-"Please bhaago Trisha.."
Trisha was confused and irritated and showed no signs of running away.

Bikram comes in the car at the main door.



Rajbir:-"Main to bhaag raha hoon.. Tum dono apna dekh lo...Marne ka shock nahi mujhe..!!" and started running. Gauri was confused and she too started running behind him.



"Hey! Wait! I'm coming" said a confused Trisha and she too ran behind them.



All of them sit in the car and Bikram drives off.

"Tum log paagal hogaye ho kya... You guys made me run away from my own wedding! You guys are impossible" Trisha exclaimed, taking long breaths.

Trisha-"Waise hum log jaa kahan rahe hain..?"

All look at her shocked.
Rajbir:"Bikram maine kaha thaa naa tera idea stupid hai...!!"
Bikram-"Trisha tum Raghav ke liye bhaagi ho tumhe yeh toh pata hain naa..!!"

Trisha-"..ohh..hmm"

Gauri.."kya hmmm...Uski Train ka time ho gya hai, do you get it"

Trisha was tensed...but said with confidence..."don't worry ..we will be there.."

The three of them looked at her with disbelief.

Bikram to lessen the tension.."haann Trisha...main hoon naa...Hum time parr pahunch jaayenge! Aur Indian railway par thoda bharosa rakhiye.. Train konsa time par aayegi..."Bikram said faking a laugh, trying to be funny.

Rajbir-"Tu hai issliye problem hai...bada aaya ...Rajbir tum dulha banjao kissi ko shak nahi hoga.."
Bikram-"Haan toh kisi ko shak nahi hua , kyun Trisha..?"
Rajbir-"Shak chod...nearly shaadi hote hote bacchi hai meri...tujhe pata nahi shaadi is as good as Aatma hatya..."
Gauri clears his throat listening.
Rajbir closes his eyes...he had forgotten that she was also present in the car.
Rajbir-"Tum se shaadi , aatma hatya nahi hai...", he said smiling.
Trisha-"Acha jo mujhse shaadi karega woo aatma hatya karega..?"
Rajbir silently "woo toh sirf Raghav kar sakta hai..."
Bikram hears and both chuckle.
Trisha -"Kya kaha tumne??"
Bikram diverting her thoughts "Pahunch gaye hum railway station".

At the Railway Station:

The Train had arrived and Raghav had boarded the train.

He was standing at the door, thinking about his lost love. The train had started moving slowly. He was in his own world when he heard someone shouting his name. He could see someone running with the train. He cleared his vision and saw Trisha.

[Please imagine DDLJ music in your mind]



She was running towards him, extending her hand forward trying to catch him. A wide smile came on his face and he too forwarded his hand. Finally they got hold of each-other's hand and he pulled her up in the train.



"Tum shaadi se bhaag kar aayi hoo? " Raghav asked dramatically.

"Nahi aise hii man kar raha thaa issliye shaadi ke jode mein ddlj ka scene replay karne aayi hoon.."she said sarcastically, breathing heavily.

Both of them heard a voice calling out their names and they looked outside to see Gauri, Bikram, Rajbir too running with the train.



"Aree ye teeno bhi bhaage hai...Wow so filmy" he said excitedly and forwarded his hand to each one of them One by one and all were on the train grasping for air.

Raghav looked at all of them with raised eyebrow and a smile on his face.

Gauri-"Wow aaj pata chala simran ko kaisi feeling aai hogi .."

Ek doosre ko Jaldi I love you bolo .. Nahi to hum sab Bangalore pohoch jayenge" Rajbir said in his funny style.

Gauri-"Awww...live DDLJ...wow.." Rajbir chuckles listening to that.

Trisha-"Bolo Raghav.."
raghav-"Kya..."

All smack their heads.

Trisha holds his collar..."Yeh bhi maine bataon..?"

Rajbir-"Bolo naa Raghav, warna mera THE END ho jaayega Trisha ke haaton.."

Raghav laughs.."Okay okay...I love you Trisha..."

Trisha-"Finally...pehel bolte toh aaj hum iss situation mein nahi hote..."

Gauri-"How unromantic Trisha"

Raghav-"Exactly...Trisha ko pyaar karna aata hi nahi hain.."

Trisha fakes anger.."Mujhe nahi aata...tum bhool rahe hoo shaadi se bhaag kar main aayi hoon...tumhare liye.."

Raghav-"Sorry baba...I Love You..."
Trisha" I love you too"

Both hug and everyone else looks in awe.

Bikram-"Guys train ruk chukki hain uttare yaan, honeymoon pe jaane ka plan hai??.."

Both break apart feeling embarrassed.

They get down from the train.
Gauri-"Ek selfie ho jaaye...itna memorable moment jo hain."

*click

And their smiling faces remained smiling happily ever after.

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Tasha1994 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome dear .pls check the pm I sent u dear
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Have you taken adequate permission from Nidhi before using her story dear. It can be a problem if you haven't... I hope you understand.
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Awesome os dear ,it was too funny
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Note:- This is just to make it clear ..
.I had already taken her permission before penning this down...
Thanks for your concern...
Also I would like to say that the story is soley hers, so all applauses to her...
I just edited into a Ratri Version..!


Happy Reading. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: annikaa

Note:- This is just to make it clear ..
.I had already taken her permission before penning this down...
Thanks for your concern...
Also I would like to say that the story is soley hers, so all applauses to her...
I just edited into a Ratri Version..!


Happy Reading. 😊

it's ok dear.was concerned as IF takes strict action if u had not taken permission.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this was soo awesome dear soo hilarious.loved to see the friendship between Raghav trisha rajbir Bikram and gauri. loved the ddlj type scene soo much could imagine Ratri In it .thanks for this awesome story dear .simply loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Have you taken adequate permission from Nidhi before using her story dear. It can be a problem if you haven't... I hope you understand.




Sure I do Dii.. 😊
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It was so good concept merging those from two of my favorite movies. Thanks dear...
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Really awesome story dear
Will give d detailed review later on
I hope u don't mind

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