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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi I'm Tara this is my 1st story on Premeer.. Im Soo Thankful Athi For Your Encouragement Today I Am Able Write Story And My Very First Post On IF Prem: Heer Heer Heer yar tum kab se ready ho rahe ho (Prem room me aate hai ) Heer: bas 5 min Prem ..prem: pichle 1 ghante se 5 min 5 min keh rahe ho aur mujhe bauje ke daat sune par rahe hai. ..no more .. .. (Heer apne earrings theek karte hue ..) Heer: Prem tum kaise pati ho mein ne first time sari pahani aur tum ne bataya bhe nahi ke mein kaose lag rahe hu ... mujh par gussa he kar rahe ho? (Prem: was silent,staring at her) Heer Prem batao na mein kaise lag rahe hu???? Prem mein ajeeb to nahi lag rahe ye ..ye sari mujh se samal nahi rahe hai ..prem mein change karlu?? Mein koi salwar suit he pehan late hu??? Prem kuch bolo na ..kuch to bolo ...premmm ..Prem: haan Heer chlia kyu nahi ho? Mein yahi to hu ..tumhare samne.. Heer mere samne ho par kaha khogai ho?? Prem: Heer wo mein ..Actually Heer: Prem mujhe kuch nahi suna ..mein . ..going to change this stupid sari.. Prem: ruko tumhe change kyu karna hai??? Bohat khubsurat lag rahe ho (Heer: who was shooked Prem jo kabhi tareef nahi karte wo us ketareef kar raha hai??... Heer checking prem's fore head ..) Prem: ye kay kar rahe ho??? Heer: Tumhare tabyat to theek hai bukhar to nahi hai?? Prem: kyu?Heer: Wo tum mere tareef lar rahe ho na first time es liye pucha.. Prem :Heer shut up ...Jaldi karo hum already late hai ..bauji hamara wait kar rahe ai neeche. warna hum dono ko daat pare ge (Jaldi jaldi mein heer sindoor lagana bhool jaye hai.. prem heer come downstars ) Prem: Bauji chale .? Lalit: haan (At party: Heer's best frind Ash ) Ash: Heer Heer: you are Looking beautifull Heer..Heer: Thanks Ash ..Heer: Tum bhe bohat pyari lag rahe ho Ash: par tumne sundoor kyu nahi lagaya? (After some time ..ek lady aate hai Heer ke pas ) Lady: Hello beta Heer: ji Namaste Lady: Naam kya hai tumhara? Heer: Heer juneja Lady: ohh tum Lalit Juneja ke bati ho??? Heer: haan wo mei.. (lady ko call aa jata hai ) lady: mein abhi aai beta next Day (Ramu ka ..To lalit ..) sir aap se milne Koi Aaye hai Unhone apne naam Daljeet Rampal bataya hai Lalit: aacha tum jao me aata hu (lalit come downstars ) Daljeet: Namazte Mr JunejaLalit: Namaste mein ne aap ko pachana nahi? Daljeet: par mein aap ko janti aactually hum Canada mein reh tethe 2 months hue india mein aai hue aur apne bete ke liye larkedhoond rahe hu Mein ne aap ke beti Heer ko dakha kal party me... Mujhe wo bohat pasand aaimere bete Manmeet ke liye ? Lalit: par ye aap kya keh rahe hai? Daljeet: Han juneja ji hum aap ke bete heer ko hamare ghar ke Bahu banana chahate hai ..Dakhaye mein apne bete ke tasveer bhe laai hu Wo 2 hafte mein apne studies pure kar ke india aai jaye ga.aap tab us se mil liye jiyea Lalit: Deljeet ji: aap ko koi galat fami hue hai Heer mere beti nahi hai ..mera matlab mere bati jaise hai par wo asal mein mere beta prem ke patni aur es ghar ke bahu hai .. .Daljeet: kya: ? Par Heer: ne ko kaha wo aap ke beti hai? Heer: I'm sorry Aunty ji mein aap ko bata he rahe the aap ko call aa gaya aur aap waha se chali gai the Daljeet: oh haan I'm sorry beta I'm sorry juneja jiI PH room Heer: Prem tum hans kyu rahe ho? Prem: hans nahi raha hu khush ho ra hu Heer: es mein khush hone wale kya baat hai ? Prem: haan to dukhe hone wale bhe koi baat nahi lekin dakho aaine me mere Heer udaas hai Heer: Prem wo ..(Prem puts his hand on Heer's mouth) Prem: mein kuch bolu? Heer: haan naseeb hai mera jo tum mere zindagi mein aai warna pata hinahi chalta ke es seene mein dil bhe hai aur ye dil srif tumhare liye dharakta hai Heer: I love you Prem Prem: I love you tooo 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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All the best Tara 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow new story !!!!
congo for ur first topic!!! 🤗

I can't believe it Tara its ur First story
Because It was fabulous & different story !!! ❤️
Premeer were so cute !!!
I just loved it !!!

Keep writing 😃
Luv u!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh Wow Tara! 😲
I didn't know you were a writer too. 😃

Good job on your very first story here 👍🏼

Oh and Prem's final dialogue before the I love yous are exchanged was just superb!! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congo Congo Tara for first post
It was fabulous , different and cute story
Premeer were so adorable
just loved it
Keep it up and keep writing 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow its really so cute
Keep it up Tara
Superb
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank you @Dhanya @Fatima @Bhagyshari @Sana @Naziya
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