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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 1

Party was over at Mahotra House organized by Shravan Malhotra , Preekar was in their room enjoying Ahem Ahem , Ramnath too went to sleep with peace as her son is safe now .Sumo stood at a corner with tears rolling down ,Kamini approached Suman

"Suman Puttar , kya hua ..thum ro kyun rahi ho "asked Kamini with Fake concern

"wo kuch nahi chachiji , kuch nahi " answered Suman wiping her tears

"Nahi nahi puttar ji , aise kaise , dekho thumhara chehra kithna dull hai , ab thumhari bhi shaadi hone jaa rahi hai , aur thum aisa sad kyun ho ? aur thumne kuch khaya bhi nahi ..." saying this she called bahadur ji to get some food to Suman , unfortunately Bahadur ji is carrying a tray of juices , with out saying anything Kamini took 2 glasses from the tray .
Bahadur ji stood shocked at this , but he didn't dare to speak ,(actually those were alcohol mixed juice galsses for Lalaji & Varun )

"le ..puttar , yeh juice pee le " handed a glass juice to Suman

Suman too took a sip but due to that awfull taste she just spit it & said "Chachi ji , iska taste bahuth ajeeb hai " said Suman with disgusting face.

"Hainn...kharab ?? juice ka taste kharab kyun hoga puttar ?" saying this she too took a sip & she too sensed something wrong , but she loved the taste & finished the glass in one go saying that is special juice which Shravan brought from London.

"Le Puttar , thu bhi peele " she forced Suman to drink the whole juice .

"Haa chachiji , yeh taste ab acha lag raha hai , mujhe ek aur glass chahiye Chachiji " said Suman

"Ek kya Puttar ji , yeh lo poora tray hamare liye pada hai "Kamini pulled the tray from Bahadur ji & both started to drink enjoying

Both finished off 4 glasses each , and laughed like mad scaring Bahadur ji , Knowing the situation Bahadur ji ran to downstarirs to call Lalaji , but he met Shravan on the way & explained the total situation ,both ran to terrace to see Kamini & Suman dancing & Laughing .

Shravan was shocked to see them , in that state & ran to them ,"Chachi , yeh aap kya kar rahe hai "
Seeing him , Sumo cried loudly & said "chachi ,...dekho na Shravan mujhse bath nahi kar raha hai "
"Hainnn, Shravan puttar yeh main kya sun rahi hoon ? thum Suman se bath kyun nahi kar rahe hai ?" Questioned Kamini
"Chachi , aisa kuch nahi hai , pehale aap andhar tho chaliye " Shravan tried to convince knowing the situation .
"Acha , pehale ise Ghar chodke aaja "Said kamini

" Main nahi javoonga , Aditya chodega ise ,"he turned to Bahadur ji and asked "Aditya kaha hai ?"

"Wo, unka maa kaa phone aya tha , tho wo chale gayi sab " replied Bahadurji

Shravan was disgusted at this & turned to Kamini & Suman. Mean while ,Lalaji came running with Varun " Oyeee Soniyoo , kya kardhiya thussi , chalo andhar chalo ...Agar bhaisaab dekhenge na tho bada siyapaa ho jayega , oyee Varun puttar pakado apni mummy ji ko " and he turned to Shravan , "Shravan Puttar , Suman ko jaldhi ghar chod ke aaja , uske ghar waale pareshan honge "

"Par Lalaji ..." he tried to say something , but lalaji & Varun left taking Kamini with them .

He Sighed & turned to Suman "Chalo " and took few steps ,stopped & turned to see Suman standing at the same place with out moving .

"Maine kahaa , chalo , Suna nahi Thumne "he almost shouted , but she didn't move from there , Shravan's anger raised & he approached Suman ,again Shouted "Come let's go " & dragged hoding her hand , but she didn't move.
He turned to see her ,and was confused to see her smiling " WHAT ?" he asked her ,She raised her both hands & said "uthake le jao "

"WHATTT ? Suman chup chaap chalo " Said Shravan in a stern voice. But Suman sat down on floor & said raising her hands "Main nahi avoongi , agar chahthe tho mujhe uthake le chalo "

Shravan was melting deep inside his heart ,but composed himself ,lifted her in his arms.
She was staring him when he carried her to the car & lifted her down.
'Shravan ..."she spoke softly , but he made her to sit in the car with out letting her speak.
He reached his seat & started the key in ignition.

After a few minutes , suddenly Suman Shouted "STOPPP ', Scaring Shravan,he applied brakes at once which made them both swing in a rhythm ,car came to halt with screeching sound ,Worried Shravan asked her "Kya hua ? "

"wo ...Shravan , mujhe bahuth pyaas lag rahi hai , mujhe paani chahiye " said Suman with a puppy face .

Shravan controlled his anger , searched for water bottle ,but Phooti Kismath , he didn't find any bottle in the car ,"Dekho , main water bottle leke avoonga , thum Car se math utharna teek hai ?" he asked her

She nodded her head like a obedient child .

Shravan came back with water bottle ,but he saw the car empty .He searched around but he didn't see her ,worried , he shouted her name few times "SUman ...Suman ",but he didn't see her anywhere .He asked a passer by , if he had seen any gal , and was informed that a gal in orange lehanga was doing some chaos in the next street.Shravan confirmed that it was suman & ran in the said direction .There he saw a few people in crowd & went near the crowd ,he made his way through the crowd & was shocked to see Suman eating (read Toosing ) & selling Paanipuri full on TALLI MODE.


PRECAP : "I ... I ...I ...LOVE ...I ..LOVE " troubled Suman saying & Shravan stood listening to her in shock & surprise.

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okay guys , i'm not good at writing but i really wanted to write about a Talli Suman , so i attempeted this.All chappals & Jhoothas are accepted , No tomatoes plz😆
Sorry for Typos.


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Joyness thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is indeeed a super awesome rixe...just loved it...please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HASUUU
Tune aakhir likh hi diya 🤣
Chalo acha hai Issi bahane confession toh hoga
Aur GC ki baat dyaan mein rakhke 2nd part likhna ok 😉

Edited by FangirlForever - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HASU Talli Suman so cute please continue.. I think sumo should really become talli now and confess😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hasu good one yaar... pls continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hasuu I never knew you could write so well.
This is amazing.
I am loving the story so far.
Drunk Sumo,bring it on.
Update Soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tu ne likh hi liya...😆
Accha hai, talli confession will be sooo good🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hasu 🤗
Omg
This is superb yaar
Talli suman..treat to watch
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hasu pls update soon
You have done great work it's fab
🤗
Chupi Rustom 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HAAASSSUUU
THIS WAS SO FREAKING AWESOME
NEXT UPDAATE JAAALDDDIII❤️

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