OS on Vishnu Gowri- Dear Sister

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Vishnu was lost in thoughts in Vaikunth. Lakshmi looked at her husband who was thinking about something for long time. Now Lakshmi was losing patience
" Hey Narayan, I am seeing you lost in thoughts for sometime. What are you thinking"
" Lakshmi time is coming for me to take the next incarnation on earth. I am thinking about the same"
" Yes Narayan, I know that and this time also I will be coming to support you in the establishment of dharma"
" Lakshmi that is my thought itself. When I incarnated as Ram, you came as Sita and played the most pivotal role not only in establishing dharma, but also set the standards of husband-wife relation to people. This time I want to establish the maryada of another relation if you will allow me "
Lakshmi smiled. Didn't she knew her Narayan. So he wanted to give importance to someone else other than her in his incarnation as Krishna.
"Narayan why are you playing hide and seek. I understand this time Rukmini is not going to be the centre of Krishna's mission, but who is the lucky one who is going to play the most important part in Krishna's life"
" Lakshmi for that I guess we will have to go to Kailash and get the permission. Shall we go"
" Narayan, so sister Gowri has complained that in Ram avatar she didn't get her place, so is it her who is going to accompany you everywhere in Krishna avatar" Vishnu smiled
Gowri was with her family. Both Karthikeya and Ganesh had started their fight and questioning Mahadev while she prepared food.
It was then Vishnu and Lakshmi entered " Pranam Narayan " greeted Mahadev
" Pranam Mahadev" told Narayan. Both Karthikeya and Ganesh took Vishnu and Lakshmi's blessings. Gowri came out seeing her brother
" Narayan why here suddenly " asked Mahadev
" Mahadev I came here to take your permission"
" Take my permission for what "
" Mahadev you know the time for my incarnation as Krishna on earth is approaching. Adharma has increased many fold in this world. So in this incarnation I want my sister Gowri to come along me with as Maya. She will be my protection in this avatar in every step. She will be the medium through which I will do the Leela's and establish dharma on the earth. Through the relation of Krishna and Vishnumaya I want to highlight to the world the importance of brother-sister relation. A sister's contribution in a man's life. Hence came to take your permission"
" Narayan your sister is just waiting for your request. Do you think she will sit here quiet if I deny permission" Gowri smiled looking at her husband who knew her very well
Narayan turned to Gowri " Gowri will you accompany me on this earthly incarnation as my kid sister and support me as Vishnumaya in my leelas"
" Narayan I am blessed to take this role in your earthly incarnation" told Gowri and Lakshmi smiled at her. Yes more than Sridevi, Maya is going to be prominent in Krishna avatar
PS: Guys wrote an OS during Rakshabandhan, highlighting the relation of Vishnu-Gowri. In our community brothers are supposed to visit their sister's in their sasural and give them gifts during Janmasthami. It is in remembarance of Gowri coming as Vishnu's sister to protect him during Krishnavatar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow .. loved reading your OS .. ❤️


Actually was waiting for their scene in show so thanks for writting on them 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Shruthi ..pls do write more like
its refreshing one
@Thushu same here..I so much want their scene in SKR...sigh still hoping for best
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reserved for now 😳
I will pakka unres in the night 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Rakhi, thushi long time even Mahadev-Parvati is not seen. Lanka kand is giving them TRPs, but I had enjoyed Aranya kand.
I guess because the Lanka kand gave TRP Ahi Ravan and then Sahasra Ravan whatsoever is brought.
@Shrutha unreserve as promised 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS, di, and a beautiful idea! Loved the scenario at Kailash, not serious at all! And, thank you for making an OS dedicated to me! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gowri I know you take pride in your name 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Reserved for now 😳

I will pakka unres in the night 😳

Your unres is here 😆😆
Well done Shruthi 👏👏 You have portrayed the brother-sister love extremely well 😳

And your love for Shridevi is duly noted 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai Shruthi. Beautiful one. 😊
Brother sister bond of Gauri and Vishnu. Is something different to read.
And and I am u r latest but a bit late admirer and follower of u r seven vows fiction. 😃
I read four parts today Awesome and just simple.👏👏👏
I read some of u r posts in skr which have a very depth in them . But u story has simple words but have a strong impact. I can visualise the scene while reading..
I will try to read the remaining as fast as possible and will comment. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Shrutha when I had put Gowri's demand at rest, here comes the next Lakshmi 😆😆. You guys dont allow me to write in peace😆😆
@Beautiful thank you dear. Actually Vishnu-Gowri bond is a very beautiful one in Indian mythology. Thanks for reading my fiction. I visualize before writing. I cannot write without visualizing. So happy to know that readers also can visualize the same.

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