IshRa TS - Dafa Ho Jao! (Note - Pg 19 - Aug 15) - Page 12

Originally posted by: ...Forever...

Part 2

Lovely

Emotions written beautifully

Originally posted by: -Anku-

Nids 😳 I love your mood. The mood that is making you write and I hope it never ends for my sake if nothing.

It is almost over now 😆 And I'm glad 😛

I had forgotten about this one and actually went back and read the first part and then the second. Or else if I would just read this one I would probably lose my sane mind and go all out blaming Raman. Residual effects of the confusion I have about his character right now.

Actually I myself had to go and read it once again and watch the scene before beginning to write this part 😆 😆

Raman is like that. Just as you explained, he is a complex man, with a very tight guard around him that allows him to open only rarely. He did gradually let go off every inhibition around Ishita but the moment someone even so as reminded him of his past something happened to him. It must be Rinki''s words like you said or just his ego or the fact that his tongue worked faster than his mind. But every other time where I felt that their fights were a responsibility of the both of them, here I feel like Ishita. She should not have to be the one clearing every mess Raman has to take responsibility, have a realisation and work towards curbing his anger. He can't play with her, one moment sweet the other viticimising her with his acidic words. I love Ishita for doing what she did and I wish she had always done that instead of being so gullible. Probably that would have stopped him from going so far every time.

Absolutely! I think he himself doesn't realise most of the times what he says and does, and the impact his words and actions have on her. He should have been made to realise this long ago, probably the second time he behaved this way with her. She also needed to step up for herself and tell him she's neither Shagun nor someone to toss around as he pleases. Here, there's no question on his love for her, but love alone cannot sustain a marriage.

I simply can't seem to get enough of how well you write, the clarity of your thoughts and the understanding you have of every characters traits, their actions. I don't think I have seen anyone justify and understand nuances of the characters so well.

Omg thank you Anku 🤗 🤗

Wonderful once again and this time I am assuming you will post sooner, guessing by your mood towards writing 😆