IshRaHu FF || Zindagi Ab Bhi Muskhuraati Hai || (Prologue 14/08/16)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm super happy yaar! Two back to back fantastic episodes with my babies back with a bang. Thus, I couldn't help but want to pen this fic on how these two would work together to bring their girl back on track ...!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE


RAMAN IN THE LIVING ROOM

[HIS PHONE RINGS]

"Haan bolo Shagun koi kaam tha?"

"Nahi, just that I was thinking ke can I bring Pihu here. Uska favourite South Indian khana banaya hai..."

"Nahi uski zaroorat nahi hai Shagun. Agar Pihu ka dil chaha; Ishita uske liye bana degi but tumse ek request thi ..."

"Bolo naa Raman"

"Tum Pihu ko time do Ishita ke saath bond karne ke liye. Please zyaada call yaa regularly ghar math aaya karo warna Pihu ke mind se tum nahi jaa paogi... Acha chalo I gotta go now"

RAMAN HAS DISCONNECTED

[SHAGUN'S SELF TALK]

"I don't believe this! Uss Isheeta ke aate hi sab mujhe bhool gaye. Magar main bhi Shagun hoon; itni aasaani se toh main Pihu ko nahi jaane dungi ... aakhir woh toh meri ATM machine hai."

RAMAN ENTERS THEIR BEDROOM

[ISHITA IS BLABBERING]

"Mera yahaan se chale jaana hi sahi hai... Pihu ki aankhon mein khud ke liye nafrat dekhni roz mujhe ek nayi maut maarti hai... meri bachi ko meri zaroorat nahi hai ... uske Papa hain, Adi Bhaiya-Ruhi DiDi hain... woh khush rahegi... haan mera chale jaana best hai...!!"

[RAMAN RUSHES TO HER & JERKS HER WHILST HER LEGS GIVE WAY AS SHE CRUMBLES TO THE FLOOR/ HE KNEELS TO HER LEVEL]

"Aye Pagal Madrasan chup kar; Meri Madrasi Sherni hai tu; Bheegi Billi math ban!"

"Nafrat karti hai woh mujhse Raman! Meri apni beti mujhe dekhna toh dur; mera naam tak lena pasand nahi karti. Murugan ne mujhe saza di hai ... maine Shagun se uske bache cheene aur aaj meri hi bachi mujhse zyaada Shagun ko chahti hai"

"Aye chup... ek dum chup! Tune kissi se kuch nahi cheena; Adi-Ruhi apni marzi se tere paas aaye. Teri wajah se unhone Maa kya hoti hai yeh jaana! Humaari Pihu Shagun ke haaton mein pali; yeh humaari majboori rahi... humaare haalaaton ki wajah se. Shagun ne kya khaak parvarish di Pihu ko? TV serials ke aage Pihu ko kuch nahi dikhta! Uske baat karne ka thang dekha hai tune? Kapron ki toh baat hi math karo!! Jaise tune humaare Adi-Ruhi ki zindagi ko sawaara theek waise hi hum ab apni Pihu pe mehnat karenge! Pihu bachi hai Ishita ... meri galti hai nahi bataya usse ke uski Maa tu hai par ab tere saath milke; apni uss galti ko sudhaaroonga!"

[WITH HOPE & PERSEVERANCE THEY WOULD WIN THEIR LITTLE ONE OVER]
Edited by DiVan_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'd appreciate if you'd leave your valuable feedback behind! Thank you for reading!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Di
I loved it😉
I loved ishra convo
Don't make pihu hate Ishu too much
Let ishra handle her in a mature way plz
One small request if u write in English it's better for people like me who don't understand hindi much😊
Continue soon

Vara
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue
Will be waiting for update
Update soon
Plz add ishru and ishdi scenes too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Brilliant prologue
Loved it
continue soon
Pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Lovely prologue
Ishra 😳
Continue soon
Do pm me when you update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its brilliant and very interesting continue

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