A writer's point of view on story. (I get the CV's)

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

I saw the message from the CV's of the show and I must say I appreciate it. I like that they are actually trying to engage with their audience. Not in a arrogant way or a dismissive way, but in actual fact, wanting to re-assure the viewers.

I am a writer. (Only part time, as a hobby) coz my career is in something else. But from what writing I have done for the past few years I can say, it takes "Time" to build up a story. A story worth watching or reading anyway. It is full of moments, but cannot be full of just happiness and love. I can understand the point of view of the writers in "setting the stage" and in building up characters to come to a certain point. That is good writing. Like one of the CV's said you cant just create situations out of thin air, because that is not realistic. It actually takes a lot of work to set up a scenario for a certain scene to play out. I get it.

The love is there always in stories like this, but it is also a journey. A journey from where two people start and where they end. I trust these creatives, they are NOT like some of those other people out there that promise one thing and deliver the opposite. Never listen to viewer feedback and always do the reverse of what they request. Their hallmark is no respect for their viewers.

But these CV's are not like that, this PH is not like that. I can see where they are going with this, so please CHILL and stop thinking that both Shravan and Suman will marry 4 times before they unite. This is NOT that sort of show! I know these CV's wont let us down and THAT is why I am invested in this show when I am not in any others. I know what will happen on those. But this is one show where I actually have "Great Expectations" and so far they have not let me down.

The main example was the "Urvashi" track. When it looked like an engagement was going to be announced I was mad. I dissed the CV's and said I dont want to watch a track like that where Suman is forced to smile while Shravan pretends to want to be with Urvashi, or worse just doing it out of spite. But I was proven wrong with the way they handled the track and I realized I can actually trust these people. The SAME applies here. However the marriage proposal scenario of Aditya and Suman is different. If Suman says yes it wont be out of Spite, but out of desperation due her Grandfather's ailing health. We can understand where that comes from. Especially after Shravan breaks ALL ties with her. Will she at least not try to give happiness to her Gran-dad? I think that will be her motivation. But will the marriage happen? I highly doubt it. So I think we all need to take a chill pill and watch the show.

Please do leave your comments! Thanks

Edited by MrDarcyfan - 9 years ago

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poppinss

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Posted: 9 years ago

Will Shraman marriage happen or not? As a writer how would you take this story forward.

How do ub think Shravan will react to Sumo agreeing to marry adi?

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Wiccamaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Ideally sharavan should confess out of anger as no intense lover like Sharavan can just take it easily. I remember one small scene from tanu weds manu where Raja Awasthai( he is jealous, possasive like are sharvan) said to Tanu ... humhe sath rah sakte hai ya to tum sudhar jaogi ya main .. kinda of thing ... but she chooses the Manu ..who is almost like Aditya is more caring and loving. Now come to second part ... when she returns back from london .. he is still looking for the same girl .. instantaneously they are back to from where they have started. though in movie they took the Indian way and tanu wents back to manu but actual eternal lovers are tanu and raja ... they fight , shout and slap but love each other with all their flows . sharaman will fight but cant leave each other ... its going to be painfull, bitter but outcome will be same .

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poppinss
Will Shraman marriage happen or not? As a writer how would you take this story forward.
How do ub think Shravan will react to Sumo agreeing to marry adi?

I dont know if ShaMan marriage will happen right now. But I doubt Aditya and Suman marriage will happen. I would hate a cliched "Hate marriage" or "MU marriage" etc. Ideally I dont want it to happen.

Shravan will clearly be shattered even further hearing the news of the marriage. Of course it will confirm to him all the theories that he cooked up that his Father fed him about how women are not trustworthy and independent women even less so.

What I feel is that Shravan is going to put on his mask again. He will act like he dosen't care because he is taking his Father's advice. "Increase your strength because people will use your weakness against you!" He will go and blast Suman (next week's episodes) because he thinks she used him again. Led him up the garden path when he had started to trust her. The fact is, it was VERY hard for him to trust her again. I have covered that a few times in my own stories. He got to that point when things started to unravel again.

The major issue here is that he does not know a lot of FACTS. He is blind to his Father's true nature and does not know that 90% of the issue in his parents marriage was due to his attitude and mistrust. Then he also doesn't know that 100% of the issues between him and Suman are because his Dad does not want them together. He has NO idea that the Father who appeared to support him despite his reservations about him and Suman was actually playing a double game. Suman could tell him this, but after the Nirmala incident, it was VERY clear that Shravan will never believe anyone over his Dad and that is the reason Suman does not say anything.

The ONLY way this mess will be resolved is by Nirmala and Shravan knowing the actual truth of what happened between his parents. THAT is the way I would move the story. I would move it with Nirmala and Shravan meeting and over a period of weeks him coming to know the truth and through that realizing the bigger picture of his Father's hand in the MU's between him and Suman!

Edited by MrDarcyfan - 9 years ago

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya
Ideally sharavan should confess out of anger as no intense lover like Sharavan can just take it easily. I remember one small scene from tanu weds manu where Raja Awasthai( he is jealous, possasive like are sharvan) said to Tanu ... humhe sath rah sakte hai ya to tum sudhar jaogi ya main .. kinda of thing ... but she chooses the Manu ..who is almost like Aditya is more caring and loving. Now come to second part ... when she returns back from london .. he is still looking for the same girl .. instantaneously they are back to from where they have started. though in movie they took the Indian way and tanu wents back to manu but actual eternal lovers are tanu and raja ... they fight , shout and slap but love each other with all their flows . sharaman will fight but cant leave each other ... its going to be painfull, bitter but outcome will be same .

I have not seen Tanu weds Manu. (Maybe I should). In the case of Shravan and Suman there will be a lot of intensity and showdowns in the future before they get to the point of being one. This is a journey kind of story not a destination kind of story. That is what we have to keep in mind as we watch it.

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

You know, last week cvs scared me..but my trust on cvs is intact..i trust edkv cvs...i hv lot going in my mind regarding the tracks cvs have opened in last two weeks but i unable to pen down...cvs have put more than 6 tracks in one go if thinking properly..so its clear that they need time to set all the tracks and bring out conclusion from those tracks..

I completely trust cvs.,nd i m sure this time also they will bring out something unique from their creative hats.

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KostinsQueen

@KostinsQueen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Mandy , I agree with you

Many from us still trust cvs , but just little bit disappointed with the phaila hua raitha all around .Now this promo & spoilers r giving goose bumps.But we should definitely appreciate the PH & team , atleast they came forward to say something, not unlike other PH's who never bother to reply back.

Total fandom has two options now

1. TO go with the flow without expectations so that we can enjoy the ride with whatever we get

2. To quit watching if they think that the show is not meeting their requirement...

That's it , we don't have other options, and whatever we got last week , is not at all changed story that was planned long back before sending msgs to Tarunima, many r thinking that they changed the story after fans bombarded her with msgs but no that's not true . Even i decided now to go with flow now

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spshastr

@spshastr

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
You know, last week cvs scared me..but my trust on cvs is intact..i trust edkv cvs...i hv lot going in my mind regarding the tracks cvs have opened in last two weeks but i unable to pen down...cvs have put more than 6 tracks in one go if thinking properly..so its clear that they need time to set all the tracks and bring out conclusion from those tracks..
I completely trust cvs.,nd i m sure this time also they will bring out something unique from their creative hats.

i THINk there are 2 main tracks

1 ADITYA SUMAN

2. NIRMALA Ramnath

Everything else is around that

6 kahan se aaya?

I am yet to watch if they take this as aditya suman same journey as nirmala ramnath and then close that bigger picture after sharman marriage or before

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chicksoup

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Posted: 9 years ago

Love U Mandy! 🤗

All that U wrote! 👍🏼

It seems we have survived the scars! 😉

🤗

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: spshastr

i THINk there are 2 main tracks
1 ADITYA SUMAN
2. NIRMALA Ramnath

Everything else is around that

6 kahan se aaya?

I am yet to watch if they take this as aditya suman same journey as nirmala ramnath and then close that bigger picture after sharman marriage or before

i said na..i can't put my thought in words now...😆

But smita i m telling you tera bahut bada popat hone wala hai..😛