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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Aww my poor DevAkhsi.. I am crying while reading it..awsm update..

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Beautifully written...the sorrow and the pain of separation but the decision made...superbly articulated.

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surbharati

@surbharati

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Nice...I had tears in my ears reading this

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Babina

@Iamshree

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

thnx 4 sharing 😊

GREAT. 👏 os..

Awww I'm crying ...that's so beautiful... Superb

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Shona456

@Shona456

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Hey i hv read so mny stories on this forum..bt this is my only fav OS u hv written!! U felt d characters completely!! DevAkshi convo.. 😭 Dev usi pal mar gya Sonakshi :( he did die.. 😭 his agony..his pain... 😭 excellent piece of writing!! 👏

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

So heart wrenching, but so close to the reality...
Kudos to you for writing it so beautifully...
Sometimes, it is so difficult to decide, whose pain is more... Dev or Sonakshi's... Feel so so sorry for the both of them...
I get to remember a song that is just so apt in their situation... Here are the lyrics...

Pyaar humko bhi hai pyaar tumko bhi hai,
Toh yeh kya silsile ho gaye...
Bewafa hum nahi Bewafa tum nahi,
Toh kyu itne giley ho gaye...
Chalte chalte kaise ye faasle ho gaye...
Kya pata... Kahan hum chale...

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dbrk

@dbrk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Thanks all for such encouraging words and overwhelming response. I have not followed any television serial since i entered my medicine school. I just happen to watch few episodes of love confession and really liked this serial. Also i must say this forum is an amazing platform, u guys rock. Totally disconnected ppl like me also get ideas to write something.
Thanks again

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randommusings

@randommusings

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Hey awesome story..👏

Senti hi kar diya 😭

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