SuKor OS: Starry Night - Page 4

Originally posted by: SprihaJA

So beautifully written.. I actually imagined sukor in the whole scenario.
I am not sure if we are going to get something like this in the show anytime soon so we will need such awesome piece of writings to Feel better So please keep writing and do update your Ff Asap.

Originally posted by: Etna_Dia

Aradhana, this was so well written 👏

What a flawless style you have, really artistic!

The way you combine emotions, actions and thoughts in your writing is really impressive. I could visualize the scenes perfectly in my mind.

Love the way you captured the essence of their characters.

But most of all I liked that you introduced all of those childhood memories. Suraj and Chakor also have their story and their connections and not everything was always bad. Some of their interactions were really funny and I'm glad that you emphasized this. I wish to see in the show also such a heart to heart discussion regarding their childhood.

And I totally loved that you mentioned Bhagya. I think that she is the strongest connection between Suraj and Chakor. She is actually the one who brought Chakor up and along with her husband took care of her education. I believe that she brings balance to their story because the wrong done by his father to Chakor was somehow corrected by his sister.

Originally posted by: ...sandy...

Wow.. One beautiful night of Sukor with full of sweet things.. 👏😳 You penned it down so beautifully... Loved it yaar.😳

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome os