SuKor OS: Starry Night - Page 3

@Tabsi and Sailuja Thanks a lot guys!!🤗

I knew it. I knew you had it in you to write something so spectacular that it would blow my mind away. It has been a long time since I read any sort of fan fiction on this forum and I'm glad I chose yours. This was so sweet and heart-warming. I was almost pissed at you for ending it so soon 😆

I'd love to watch a scene like that in the show itself. The CVs could learn a thing or two about subtle romance from this. If there is anyway to start a redemption track for Suraj, this should be it. A midnight stroll followed by a heart-to-heart.

Suraj's awareness of Chakor's restlessness and his method to remedy that was so beautifully penned. Their love for old Hindi songs, the endearing way with which they bickered, exactly like any normal married couple, and how easily they opened up to each other once they were away from that darned Haveli, it was all amazingly depicted by your writing. Chakor couldn't help but feel for him just a little but when he shared his childhood with her. I about melted in a gooey puddle by the time this OS finished.

The ending, Suraj resisting temptation to just touch Chakor and the sudden realization that he's in love with her was so cute. Damn Aradhana, you've raised my expectations regarding the show's progression with SuKor 😆

Amazing job on the OS Aradhana. Loved it to bits ⭐️

Originally posted by: fia21

I knew it. I knew you had it in you to write something so spectacular that it would blow my mind away. It has been a long time since I read any sort of fan fiction on this forum and I'm glad I chose yours. This was so sweet and heart-warming. I was almost pissed at you for ending it so soon 😆

I'd love to watch a scene like that in the show itself. The CVs could learn a thing or two about subtle romance from this. If there is anyway to start a redemption track for Suraj, this should be it. A midnight stroll followed by a heart-to-heart.

Suraj's awareness of Chakor's restlessness and his method to remedy that was so beautifully penned. Their love for old Hindi songs, the endearing way with which they bickered, exactly like any normal married couple, and how easily they opened up to each other once they were away from that darned Haveli, it was all amazingly depicted by your writing. Chakor couldn't help but feel for him just a little but when he shared his childhood with her. I about melted in a gooey puddle by the time this OS finished.

The ending, Suraj resisting temptation to just touch Chakor and the sudden realization that he's in love with her was so cute. Damn Aradhana, you've raised my expectations regarding the show's progression with SuKor 😆

Amazing job on the OS Aradhana. Loved it to bits ⭐️

Originally posted by: bookerina

Dear, dear Fia,

I knew you'd be the one who'd notice ALL the tidbits I liked most about the fic.

You do flatter me! But really thank you sooo much for taking the time out to read it and writing such a long, very kind analysis of a very silly little story.

I was in the middle of writing what was supposed to be an OS for my eyes only (which is now the prologue of Cat Among the Pigeons) when I came across your wonderful first post on the forum. So believe it or not, this fic, by extension, saw the light of day only thanks to you!

Talent lies within how eloquently you can transform a simple story into something so meticulous. God knows the writers of Udaan can barely write a scene with a cow, let alone actual characters. You managed to take something so simple and turned it into an interesting read. Trust me, you deserve all the flattery and more.

Now you're the one flattering me 😳. It warms my heart that my post managed to bring such an amazing person like you on this forum as an active member.

I like the way the way you wrote it. SUPER IS You keep this. SURAJ IS HOW I SEE MORE deeply in love with akor but not yet aware of it.

Beautiful...👏

That was soo good...I loved it

Originally posted by: zajedno

I like the way the way you wrote it. SUPER IS You keep this. SURAJ IS HOW I SEE MORE deeply in love with akor but not yet aware of it.

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Beautiful...👏

Hope such wonderful scene comes out in the serial

Originally posted by: MahaSrilu

That was soo good...I loved it