NIBIR FF : DASTAAN (Part 8 updated on Page 3)

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Hey frds...hi m sonal aka sonu...N today m here to present u all...i mean to my K khandaan... my new story

So here we go...

Death...the only reality of life but still we hate it because according to all of us life is beautiful...life is precious...so value it...kyunki zindagi toh ek baar hi milti hai...like really😲

I mean r u sure ki sirf ek baar milti hai...i don't think so...kai baar do baar bhi milti hai😉

Hey m not kidding...i m serious😈

Remember Om Shanti OM...according to SRK

Hamari life na filmon ki tarah hoti hai end mein sab thik ho hi jata hai...aur...aur agar thik na ho toh iska matlab picture abhi baaki hai mere dost😉

So now m presenting u all a story of love , sacrifice , betrayal , revenge , death n REINCARNATION

Yeah i admit that reincarnation is so unreal kind of concept but if u don't like it then plzzz STAY AWAY...but no negative comments

SO here is my new Nibir FF

DASTAAN

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Caracter Sketch

Ramesh Gangwal -he is an Indian but lives in UK

Laxmi Gangwal-ramesh's wife

Nisha Gangwal-their only child

Badi Maa-Laxmi's mom

Digvijay Jain(DJ) -Ramesh's frd n his business partner

Ananya Jain(AJ)-DJ's wife

Saurav Jain-their only child...he n Nisha r getting married

Arjun Kumar- a delhi based business man

Vasu Kumar-his wife

Kabir Kumar (KK)-their son

Aman Kumar-their daughter

Dolly Sharma-KK's best frd...lives with her dadi n dadaji

Nemichand Sharma N Saroj Sharma - Dolly's dadaji n dadiji

Priyamvada Singh Rathore / Priya- Previous birth name of nisha

Maharaj Vikramaditya Singh Rathore - Priyamvada's dad

Arjun Singh Shekhawat - Priyamvada's friend

Shravan Singh Shekhawat - Arjun's younger brother

Suhani Singh Shekhawat - Shravan's wife


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DASTAAN

PROLOGUE

Scene 1

(somewhere in London)

(A beautiful girl is sitting in front of the mirror...someone came there)

Laxmi-Nishu tu kitni pyari lag rhi hai...aur tu kitni badi bhi ho gyi hai mera matlab aaj teri wedding hai

Nishu-Laxmi relax me...aur maa plzz aap mujhe emotional kar rahe ho...n m getting married to saurav yaar...he is my best frd n m sure he will be the best life partner

Badi maa-woh toh hai...chalo Laxmii baraat ane wali hai

(they both left from there)

Nisha-ek ajeeb si bechaini ho rhi ha...pta nhi aaj kya hone wala hai

Scene 2

(Mumbai...an award function)

Host - award for the best young entrepreneur goes to Mr Kabir Kumar

(a guy in his mid 20's goes to the stage n recd the award)

KK-wow...finally...dont worry guys m not here to deliver some long n boring speech(everybody laughs) just one word thanks maa papa Aman n Dolly...have a nice night guys(n he went back to his seat)

Dolly-kuch bol nhi sakte the

KK-bola toh

Dolly(by giving him u r unbelievable look)-suna maine(monologue)iska kuch nhi ho sakta...pta nhi kon si bandi isey pasand karegi

Scene 3

(in London)

Panditji-kanya ko mandap mein laiye

Laxmii-ji panditji

Saurav(in AJ's ear)-maa kaisi lag rhi hai nishu

AJ-chup kar badmash...ley a gyi teri nishu

(saurav was mesmerised by the girl who is soon going to be his wife)

(panditji starts chanting the mantras)

Saurav(in nishaa's ear)-maarne ka plan hai...bohot cute lag rhi ho

(nisha smiles...suddenly she felt something)

Nisha(monologue)-kya yeh sab pehle bhi hua hai...aisa kyun lga jaise this is not the first time(she closed her eyes n saw some flashbacks)

Panditji-ab pheron ke liye khade ho jaiye

(Nisha was still sitting)

Pandit ji-beta khade ho jaiye

Nisha(her eyes were still closed...n she saw a figure)-nhi plzz chod do usey

Saurav-Nishu what r u saying

Nisha-(she was shivering n suddenly she shouted) RAGHU(n she fainted)

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DASTAAN

Part 1

Scene 1

(at gangwal mansion...everybody is waiting outside)

Laxmii-ramesh doctor ko kitna time lagega

Ramesh-laxmii m also tensed na...but doctor is also doing his job

Badi maa-saurav beta tum kisi raghu ko jaantey ho kya

Saurav-nhi badi maa hamarey kisi frd ka naam raghu nhi hai...i don't know whats happening

AJ-shaadi bhi poori nhi hui...ab agla muhurat 8 mahiney baad hai

DJ-its ok Ananya...the most important thing is nisha's health

(doctor came outside)

Saurav-doc...is everything alright

Doctor-yeah Mr Jain...actually she was so excited that's why she fainted

Laxmi-kuch aur toh nhi hai na

Doctor-its okk Mrs gangwal it happens...she will be allright...just give her some time...n u can meet her

(they all entered)

Nisha-m sorry maa...pta nhi kya ho gya tha...kuch dhundhli si yaadein some flashbacks...i don't know what was that

Saurav-its okk nishu...tum bas rest karo...okk

AJ-haan beta u should take rest

(Next Day...at Breakfast Table)

Nishaa-good mrng maa papa n badi maa

Ramesh-good mrng nishu

Badi maa-nishu aaj tu na mere saath guruji ke paas chalna...unhein na tumhari kundali dikhani hai

Ramesh-maa plzz...not again...i mean theses babas n all r fake

Badi maaa-arey hum koi jaadu tona thode hi na kara rhey hain hum bas kundli dikhayenge

Nisha-its okk papa...badi maa m coming

Scene 2

(delhi...at Sharma house)

Dadi-matlab tu na chahve hai Kabir ko

Dolly-nahi dadi...i don't love him...he is just a frd

Dadi-kyun na karey hai pyaar...chora accha hai padha likha hai...kamata bhi accha hai aur uski maa ko tu pasand bhi hai

Dolly-Vasu aunty bohot cute hain but unka beta sadu hai...i don't know dadi but woh na khoya rehta hai kuch toh hai jo woh dundhna chahta hai

Dadi-toh thare ko key pareshani hai

Dolly-dadai i want someone who is caring n fun loving...aur kabir ka pta nhi usey kon sambhaal payegi

Scene 3

(at Kumar Mansion)

Aman-bhai but whats the problem

Vasu-haan tujhe kya problem hai

Kabir-mom plzzz...dolly is a nice girl but i don't love her...we r frds that's it

Arjun-but kabir

Kabir-no dad plzzz...no more discussion i have to go

Aman-where

Kabir-Jaigarh

Vasu-ab jaigarh kyun

Arjun-koi property ka issue hai

Kabir-mujhe do din baad jana hai tab tak no more disturbance

Aman-hum aapko disturb kartey hain

Kabir-yep

Scene 4

(at guruji's place)

Badi maa(BM) n nisha-pranaam guruji(GJ)

GJ-pranaam...nisha beta aapka vivaah nhi ho paya...hamein dukh hai

BM-wohi puchna hai...yeh na iski kundli hai...dekhiye zara

(GJ was studing the kundli...n he smiled)

BM-kya hua sab thik hai na

GJ-Nisha beta aapka vivaah isliye nhi hua kyunki ladka galat tha

Nisha-ji...GJ i know saurav...he is a nice guy

GJ-toh humne kab kaha woh bura hai...bas tumharey liye nhi bna hai...tumharey liye shayad bhagwaan ne kisi aur ko chuna hai

Nisha-matlab

GJ-punar janam mein vishwash karti ho

Nisha-u mean reincarnation

GJ-haan reincarnation rebirth or punar janam

Nisha-no...i mean its so unreal

GJ-i know beta...we r in 21st centuary so its hard to believe but aisa hota hai...infact tumhare saath hua hai

Nisha-no no no no u must be kidding but lemme tell u bohot kharab joke tha

GJ-nisha beta m serious...okk tell me do u love saurav

Nisha-he is my frd

GJ-par mera sawaal pyar se related tha

Nisha-i don't know may be

GJ-or may be not

BM-guruji isney na jab yeh 10th mein thi ek sketching competition mein ek temple ka sketch banaya tha...main dikhati hoon aapko

(BM showed him the sketch)

Nisha-badi maa that was my imagination

BM-tum ruko

GJ-yeh imagination nhi hai...yeh mandir Rajasthan mein kahin hai...humne khud dekha hai bas abhi yaad nhi a rha...hann yeh toh jaigarh ka mandir hai...bohot purana hai

Nisha-no how can it be possible n jaigarh...woh kahaan hai

GJ-India...tumhe apney sawalon ke jawaab dhundhne hindustaan jaana hoga...kyunki saurav tumhara humsafar nhi ban sakta kyunki koi hai jo maut se bhi ladkar tumhare liye lauta hai aur tum par sirf uska haq hai

Scene 5

(AT gangwal mansion)

Ramesh-this is stupid...have u gone mad...India punarjanam...this all is stupid...tu kabhi india nhi gayi...woh jagah bohot alag hai nishu

Nisha-so what papa...i want to go

Laxmi-ramesh is right u r not going anywhere

Laxmi-but maa

Laxmi-go to ur room right now

(after half n hour...in nisha's room)

Saurav-hey nishu

Nisha-saurav...listen mujhe india jana hai

Saurav-what...but why

(nisha narrated him the whole convo)

Saurav-koi aur bna hai tumhare liya

Nisha-i don't know...but i want to know...par woh flashbacks wo naam...Raghu...i want to know...i mean who is this raghu...plzz help me sirf tum mujhe India ki flight mein bitha sakte ho

Saurav-u know we r frds best frds toh main tumhari help karunga...ab jo bhi hoga dekha jayega

Nisha-yayy(n she hugged him)

(After 4 hours...at Airport)

Saurav-dekho maine aunty se kaha hai ki hum bahar time spend karne aye hain...n haan here is ur tickets n visa...yeh mera card hai incase uncle tumhara card block kara dein toh

Nisha-thanks saurav

Saurav-now go

(nisha hugged him again)

Nisha-bye saurav...u r my true frd

saurav-call me okk

nisha-sure

Scene-6

(at jaigarh palace)

(a man in his mid 70's was watching a pic...pic of her only daughter...priyamvada)

Maharaj Vikramaditya Singh Rathore(VK)-priya aapko gayye hue poorey 25 baras honey waaley hain par aaj bhi humein aisa kyun lagta hai ki aap hain

(a 30 year old girl entered)

Suhani-bade papa aap phir yehi photo dekh rahein hain

VK-kya karein hum aaj bhi hamara man nhi manta ki priya nhi hain

(someone entered)

Arjun Singh Shekhawat(AS)-par woh ja chuki hain...woh bhi 25 saal pehle

VK-hum jaantey hai Arjun par hum kitne majboor hain...aap toh unke best frd they na phir aap bhi unhein nhi bacha paaye

AS-aaj bhi humein is baat ka afsoos hai ki hum Priya aur unke Pati Raghu ko nhi bachaa paaye

Shravan singh Shekhawat(SS)(arjun's brother)-uncle aapko nhi lagta ki aap bohot jada soch rahein hain hamara matlab hai woh kabhi nhi lautne waali

AS-shravan

SS-sahi toh keh rahe hain...vaise bhi sahi hua matlab unhone shaadi bhi toh ek non rajput se ki thi...sare samaaj mein humein beijjat kiya tha toh i guess she deserved that

VK-yehi toh rona hai...ki vo apni shaadi ke do mahiney baad hi...woh kuch waqt bhi nhi bita paayi...kaash raghu aur priya ko thoda aur waqt milta...unki zindagi khushaal hoti

SS-ab toh yeh hone se rha...she is gone...ab nhi takraane waaley wo dono...hain jo nhi is duniya mein

Scene 7

(at delhi Airport)

(nisha was in hurry so she was running...while running suddenly she bumped into someone n they both falls on the ground)

Nisha-what the hell...my phone

Kabir-ur fault

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DASTAAN

Part 2

Scene 1

(at delhi Airport)

(Nisha was in hurry so she was running...while running suddenly she bumped into someone n they both falls on the ground)

Nisha-what the hell...my phone

Kabir-ur fault

Nisha-like really tum girey

Kabir-bhaag tum rahi thi

Nisha-u know what u r blind

Kabir-yeah right...i guess u r the one who is wearing glares n that too inside the airport...toh andha kon hua

Nisha-don't act smart okk

Kabir-look who's talking...jhagda tumne shuru kiya

Nisha-mujhe na tumharey muh hi nhi lagna...n u know what mainey suna tha Indians guest ki respect kartey hain...whats that...atithi dev something like that right

Kabir-its atithi devo bhava n it means in India guest is equivalent to god

Nisha-really...actually i can see that...kitni respect hai na guest ki

Kabir-tum guest kam pest jada lag rhi ho

Nisha-tumne mujhe pest kaha...u u u r mammal

Kabir-thanks...better than cockroach...i mean pest

Nisha-tumne mujhe cockroach kaha...tum tum hippopotamus

Kabir-still...better than cockroach(with a smirk)

Nisha-u don't have etiquettes

Kabir-wo wo wo wo etiquettes haan...com'on lady do u know the meaning of etiquettes...n as u said ki tum hamari pest sorry guest ho...wanna ask something

Nisha-what

Kabir-wapas kab ja rhi ho

Nisha-go to hell

Kabir-thanks...because hell is better than ur company

Nisha(with an irritated look)-whatever

(n she went from there...she hired a taxi n goes to a hotel)

Scene 2

(at Gagwal Mansion)

Ramesh-what...India

Saurav-ji uncle

AJ-saurav r u mad

DJ-woh kabhi India nhi gayi hai

Laxmi-saurav...do u have any idea ki tumne kya kiya hai...u have done a huge blunder

BM-saurav nishu ko kuch nhi pta hai...u know na woh kitni problem main fansti hai kon sambhalega ussey

Saurav-plzzz ramesh uncle...try to understand agar woh nhi jati na toh wo hamesha adhoori si rehti...n she is not a kid

Laxmi-pta nhi saurav...but anyways call kiya usne

Saurav-not now

AJ-karey toh batana hamein

Saurav-sure mom

Scene 3

(outside the hotel)

Nisha-yaar...nice hotel...but my phone...saurav pareshaan ho rha hoga(suddenly she bumped into someone)what the...u hippopotamus

Kabir-not again...u cockroach

Nisha-don't u dare

Kabir-what

Nisha-stop calling me that

Kabir-what r u doing here

Nisha-woh toh mujhe tumse puchna chahiye...tum aur itney bade hotel ke bahaar...lemme guess watchman ho na

Kabir-watchman hoga tumhare papa ka damaad

Nisha-papa par mat jao

Kabir-ur IQ level is so high yaar

Nisha-i know(suddenly she rememberd his words)wait saurav is not watchman ok

Kabir-saurav haan...waisey tell me something uski life ka koi aur laksh nhi tha jo usne tumhe chuna(with a ROFL look)

Nisha-u know what just let it be...bye

(she went from the... inside the hotel)

Receptionist-how can i help u man

Nisha-i want a room n can u plzz tell me is there any flight to jaigarh

Receptionist-flight to jaigarh

Nisha-yeah...if u have any idea

(dolly entered)

Dolly-sorry but domestic flights band hai...n that too for 3 days

Nisha-no

Dolly-yes...urgent hai kya

Nisha-yeah...matlab mujhe jana hai

Dolly-thik hai hum aapke liye taxi arrange kara dengey...u can go by road

Nisha-thanks...thank u so much...ohh hii m Nisha

Dolly-hii m Dolly

Nisha-aapka hotel hai

Dolly-nahi mere frd ka

Nisha-mujhe ek international call karni thi...n my phone...all because of that hippo

Dolly-hippo

Nisha-no like...nothing

Dolly-u can use my phone

Nisha-r u sure

Dolly-yeah

(Nisha took dolly's phone n she dialled saurav's no)

Saurav-hello

Nisha-saurav

Saurav-nishu...where r u yaar...kabse phone try kar rha hoon...n wait yeh kiska no hai

Nisha-meri frd ka

Saurav-ur frd...india mein

Nisha-leave it na ghar mein sab kaisa hai...is everything alright

Saurav-yeah everything is fine...nishu u r fine na...dekh tune promise kiya hai tu 20 - 25 din mein laut ayegi

Nisha-arey haan baba pakka...chal ab bye

Saurav-accha bye...but call me okk

nisha-yeah

Receptionist-mam ur keys

Nisha-ur phone...thanks

Dolly-ur welcome...aap apne phone de dijiye hum thik kara dengey

nisha-thanks a tonn yaar...here is my phone

dolly-sarwat mam ko unkey room mein le jao n robin ko bolo yeh phone thik karwayega

Sarwat-sure mam...mam this way

Scene 4

(at gangwal mansion)

Laxmi-saurav r u sure na she is fine

Saurav-yeah aunty...uski frd ka no tha...maine save bhi kiya hai

Laxmi-uski frd ko call kar lena

Saurav-sure aunty

Scene 5

(someone knocked nisha's room)

Nisha-come in

Robin-mam ur phone...n yeah mam taxi aney wali hai...aap taiyaar ho jaiyey

Nisha-thanks

(dolly entered)

Dolly-all set

Nisha-thanks yaar

Dolly-its ok...hamarey yahaan athithi devo bhava

(nisha remembered kabir)

Nisha(monologue)-what the hell...m thinking about that hippo

Dolly-chalein

Nisha-yeah

(outside the hotel)

Dolly-woh rahi taxi...ek second call hai

Nisha-sure(she goes towards the taxi)

(Kabir entered)

Kabir(to taxiwala)-chalein

Nisha-tum

Kabir-tum

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DASTAAN

Part 3

Scene 1

Kabir(to taxiwala)-chalein

Nisha-tum

Kabir-tum

Nisha-what r u doing here

Kabir-where

Nisha-inside the car

Kabir-main jaigarh ja rha hoon

Nisha-excuse me...i m going okk

Kabir-okk...then go na

Nisha-yeh taxi meri hai

Kabir-ji nhi yeh taxi meri hai

Nisha-look hippo...this is my taxi

Kabir-nope this taxi is mine u cockroach

Nisha-meri hai

Kabir-nhi meri hai

Taxidriver-sir ji madam ji...yeh taxi meri hai

Nibir(together)-bich mein mat bolna

(Dolly came there)

Dolly-guys what happen

Kabir-doll where is ur frd

Dolly-she is my frd(pointing towards nisha)

Kabir-no ways...yeh jayegi mere saath...never

Dolly-correction...tum jaogey iskey saath because she was the one who booked the taxi

Nisha(with a winning look)-aur yeh hippo mere saath nhi ayega

Dolly-hippo...kabir really...wow this is new(kabir glared at her)no i mean like i know ki office mein sab tumhe dusht daanav bulatey hain but hippo is new

Kabir(with a what the hell look)-dusht daanav

Nisha-how innovative na...i mean dusht daanav(suddenly she realised what she said)taxiwaaley bhaiya chalo

Kabir-chalo...but where haan

Nisha-jaigarh...meri taxi hai mainey book ki hai toh jaigarh bhi main hi jaongi na

Kabir-doll

Dolly-nisha plzz yaar kabir ko kaam hai usey lekar jao na...plzz...for me

Nisha-ok fine...but just because u r insisting otherwise iskey jaisey bandey ke saath

Kabir-excuse me...mere jaisa banda...what do u exactly mean by that

Nisha-it means like

Kabir-like what

Nisha-u r watchman na...so i thought ki

Dolly-wait...who is watchman

Nisha-mr hippo

Dolly-nisha he is the owner

Nisha(with a shocking look)-kiska owner

Dolly-he is the owner of this hotel

Nisha(with a its impossible look)-really

Dolly-yeah...n he is my best frd n yeah he is a nice guy so u can trust him

Nisha-tum keh rahi ho toh...but koi psycho killer toh nhi hai na

Kabir(with an angry look)-tum na yahaan khade hokar time pass karo...m going...chalo bhaiya

Nisha-arey...m coming...bye dolly

Dolly-bye...bye kabir

Scene 2

(at saurav's office)

Saurav-(he was trying nisha's no)(the no u have dialled is not reachable)what the hell yaar...nishu where r u yaar

DJ-saurav do one thing

Saurav-what dad

DJ-try her frds no

Saurav-yeah good idea dad...thanks

DJ-i have a meeting so m going

Saurav-bye dad

DJ-bye

(he dialled dolly's no)

Dolly-international no...yeh kiska hai

Saurav-come on yaar...pick up

Dolly-hello

Saurav-hey hii m saurav nisha's

Dolly-boy frd

Saurav-no uska would be husband

Dolly-okkk...aapko mera no kaisey mila

Saurav-woh nisha called me na...remember today morning

Dolly-oh yeah...but she is not here

Saurav-then where is she

Dolly-woh toh jaigarh ke liye nikal gyi

Saurav-damn

Dolly-saurav...is everything ok

saurav-yeah miss...miss

Dolly-hii m Dolly

Saurav-dont know yaar...m confuse

Dolly-is there any problem

Saurav-okk listen...m coming to india

Dolly-aap india a rahe hain

Saurav-yeah...n if u don't mind toh kya tum mujhe mil sakti ho plzz...look just a request yaar...if u r not comfortable then

Dolly-no its completely fine...aap a jaiyey phir baat kartey hain

Saurav-thanks

Dolly-anythime

Saurav-bye then...see u tomorrow

Dolly-yeah bye

Scene 3

(on the way to jaigarh)

Nisha-tum thoda side mein hokar baithogey

Kabir-tell me one thing how much place u need to sit

Nisha-meri taxi hai

Kabir-toh kya...itni si ho aur jagah do logo ki lekar baithi ho

Nisha-tumse door hokar baithi hoon

Kabir-kyun main bite karta hoon

Nisha-may be

Kabir(he was trying to control his anger)-listen stop it ok...i m in a trouble thats why m here otherwise tumharey saath main 10 min na baithun

Nisha-toh mat baitho...jaao...waisey bhi

Kabir-i know i know...this taxi is yours

Taxiwala-sir ji par taxi toh

Nibir(with an irritated look)-pta hai taxi tumhari hai

Nisha-waisey bhaiya aapka naam kya hai

Taxiwala-madam ji jugnu

Nisha-wow

Jugnu-waisey madam ji aapko jana kahaan hai

Nisha-jaigarh

Jugnu-haan par jaigarh mein kahaan

Nisha-that toh i don't know but my destination is jaigarh

Kabir-ohh padhi likhi ganwaar aisey kaisey...kahin bhi jaogi kya...kyun jana hai kisliye jana hai kis se milna hai...kuch toh pta hoga

Nisha-thats none of ur business

Jugnu-madam ji but sir ji sahi keh rahein hain na

Nisha-kisi ko dhundhna hai

Kabir-kisko

Nisha-nhi pta

Kabir-tum pagal waagal ho kya

Nisha-yeah but not more than u...hippo

Kabir-hey my name is Kabir

Nisha-really waisey tumhara naam tumharey character se match nhi karta

Kabir-whatever...i just hate u

Nisha-mutual feelings...i mean same here

Jugnu(monologue)-in dono ne mujhe pagal kar dena hai

(after 3 hours)

Kabir-jugnu ji gaadi kyun rok di

Jugnu-pta nhi sir ji koi problem ho gyi hai shayad

Nisha-aisey raat mein yahaan aisey road par...kaisi jagah hai

Kabir-oh hello...we r stuck here...i mean in middle of the road n u r complaining about the place...u r weird yaar

Nisha-not that yaar i mean m alone aisey

Kabir-tumhe dekhkar bhoot dar jaaye...kisiki himmat hai tumhe kuch kehne ki

Nisha-shut up(with a tensed look)

Kabir-okk jokes apart u r not alone ok...main hoon

(nisha felt some unknown feeling...something positive)

Jugnu-sir ji time lagega

Nisha-kitna

Jugnu-4-5 ghantey

Nisha-no

Kabir-what yaar jugnu

Nisha-hey kabir woh dekho(she pointed towards a hotel)

Kabir-hotel

Nisha-hmm...lets go...thoda so lengey...m feeling sleepy yaar

Kabir-nisha pagal mat bano...just look at this place...i mean this is so shady...dont know kaisa hotel hoga

Nisha-so what...hamein sirf 4-5 ghantey hi toh rehna hai

Jugnu-jaiye sir...main bula loonga

Kabir-m still not convinced

Nisha-kabir

Kabir-fine

(they entered the hotel)

Kabir-nisha listen...its not safe

Nisha-darr rahe ho

Kabir-nisha shut up...hamesha majaak nhi hota hai

(a creepy n leech kind of man came there)

Man-ji sir ji

Nisha-room chahiyey

Man(he glared at nisha n smiled)-kyun nhi ji

(kabir noticed that)

Kabir-room

Man-100 rs / hour

Nisha-itna sasta aur hours ke hisaab sey

Kabir-will u plzz shut up

(kabir gave him 500 rs)

Kabir-room

Man-yeh lijiye chabi

(in the room)

Nisha-not bad yaar

Kabir-mujhe yeh nhi pta ki kon jada bada pagal hai tum ya main

Nisha-ab kya hua

Kabir-hum wapas ja rahein hain

Nisha-m not coming

Kabir-nisha we r going back...taxi was better

Nisha-main nhi a rhi hoon

Kabir-fine raho yahaan m going

Nisha-go...wapas mat ana

Kabir-never

(he goes from there)

Nisha(after 15 minutes)-sach mein gya (she heard some loud music) ohhh god aadhi raat ko itna loud music...yeh doosrey room mein hai kon...dekhti hoon

(she goes to the next room n knocked...a gunda type of guy opened the door)

Nisha-aap log plzz(she saw the environment of that room...bear...ciggarattes...5 drunk guys)m sorry(she just turned to go back suddenly a guy pulled her inside)chodo mujhe plzz

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DASTAAN

Part 4

Scene-1

(she goes to the next room n knocked...a gunda type of guy opened the door)

Nisha-aap log plzz(she saw the environment of that room...bear...ciggarattes...5 drunk guys)m sorry(she just turned to go back suddenly a guy pulled her inside)chodo mujhe plzz

(Nisha was trying hard to escape but those goons are strong n she is loosing...she was shouting for help n crying)

Nisha-leave me plzz...chodo mujhe

Goon-bewkoof samjha hai kya

(Nisha saw him he was about to touch her...n then his lusty eyes...they all were animals...she stopped protesting n closed her eyes...suddenly she heard a loud scream n she opened her eyes)

Nisha-kabir

(kabirr was so angry n he was beating those goons n they all were begging for their life)

Kabir-teri himmat kaisey hui usey haath lagaaney ki...main tujhe jaan se maar dunga

(within seconds they all were lying on the ground)

Kabir(he held nisha's hand)-lets go (n they closed the door n came down)

Nisha-par taxi toh kharab hai n i guess they will chase us

Kabir-i know yaar (he saw a jeep)wo dekho

Nisha-jeep

Kabir-hmm...lets go(they goes towards the jeep)waah chabi bhi hai

Nisha(she heard a noise)-Kabir they r coming

(Kabir starts the jeep)

Goon 1-abey rook(he took out his pistol n shot them)

Goon 2-sirji woh toh gyye

Goon 1-arey toh pakdo unhe warna saab ji humein nhi chodengey

(kabir was driving so fast)

Jugnu-yeh toh sir ji madam ji theey...arey sirji mere paisey apna samaan toh lete jao main kya karunga

Scene-2

(next morning)

(at Indiragandhi International airport)

Dolly-where is saurav yaar...mobile mein picture to dekhi thi par hai kahaan

(then he saw a guy...she goes to him)

Dolly-saurav

Saurav-dolly

Dolly-yeah

Dosa(same time)-namastey(she greeted him)hii(he forwarded his hand for a handshake)

Saurav-ohh sorry namastey...lets go to the cafe n then talk

(they settled down in the cafe...waiter came)

Waiter-ur order sir

Dosa(together)-one cold coffee with ice cream for me(then they looked at each other n smiled)

Waiter-sure for both of u

Saurav-yeah(waiter went from there)hmm...so u love cold coffee with ice cream

Dolly-hmm...just love it...u too

Saurav-me too but nisha hates it she like masala tea

Dolly-just like kabir...he only wants masala chai

Saurav-wow...vaisey did u talk to them

Dolly-nhi yaar...main subah se try kar rhi hoon...they r not even picking up my calls

Saurav-i also tried nisha's no woh bhi nhi utha rhi hai...mainey land hotey hi try kiya...yeh dono bas thik hoon

Dolly-hmm

Waiter-sir ur order

Saurav-thanks

(they had their coffee n left for the hotel)

Scene-3

(outside some dhaba)

(Kabir stopped the jeep...nisha was sleeping)

Kabir-oye sleeping beauty wake up

Nisha-where we r

Kabir-taj mahal par

Nisha-shut up

Kabir-rajasthaan border shuru honey wala hai

Nisha-but those goona...woh kahaan hai

Kabir(with an irritated look)-arey how do i know yaar

Nisha-kabir m hungry

Kabir-dhaba hai na kuch toh milega

Nisha-r u serious kabir...dhaba i mean just look at this place...so unhygienic

Kabir-ohh princess Victoria...khana hai toh khao warna jaaney do

Nisha(monologue)-jeep mein dekhti hoon

(she was searching the jeep when she found a box)

Nisha-kabir...look what i got

Kabir-kya Kohinoor diamond

Nisha-see na...look at this box

Kabir-shayad apple hongey

Nisha-how do u know

Kabir-arey look at these papers na...apples ko aisey hi store kartey hain

Nisha(excitedly)-wow(n she opened the box)what the(with a disappointing look)salt

Kabir-kyaaa

Nisha-yeah...namak hai

(kabir saw some white packets...he felt something fishy...he torned the packet n tasts that thing)

Kabir(with a terrified look)-crap

Nisha-what...u never tasted salt kya

Kabir-nisha yeh salt nhi hai

Nisha-ohh u mean chuhe maarney ka powder...u ate it...spit it...spit it right now

Kabir(with a can u plzz shut ur mouth look)-duffer this is drugs

Nisha-kyaa

Kabir-tabhi usney hum par goli chalayi...i guess 4 to 5 crore ka hoga

Nisha-tumhe bada pta hai

Kabir-haan this is my part time job...supplying drugs

Nisha-sado mat

Kabir-crap...we r in a huge trouble

Nisha-kabir...lets go to the police station n tell them

Kabir-yeah lets go...wait

Nisha-what happen

Kabir-bad idea

Nisha-matlab

Kabir-police ko pta hai

Nisha-r u sure

Kabir-yep I m

Nisha-how

Kabir-last night hamari taxi kharab honey se pehley humne baliya check post cross kia ab next check post rajasthan border hai...iskey beech mein koi short cut nhi hai sirf ek raasta hai

Nisha-haan toh

Kabir-if they have crossed baliya check post toh it means police ne unhe chod diya...drungs honey ke baad bhi...toh police unke saath hai...aur ab agar hum rajasthan border mein enter karengey toh check post par pakdey jayenge

Nisha-so now

Kabir-hum phas gyye hain...ek taraf kua doosri taraf khai...aagey jayengey toh check post par pakdey jaayenge aur agar peechey gyye toh

Nisha-woh goons humein nhi chodengey

Kabir-exactly

Nisha-toh ab

Kabir-toh ab...

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DASTAAN

Part 5

Scene 1

Kabir-hum phas gyye hain...ek taraf kua doosri taraf khai...aagey jayengey toh check post par pakdey jaayenge aur agar peechey gyye toh

Nisha-woh goons humein nhi chodengey

Kabir-hmmm

Nisha-toh ab

Kabir-toh ab...hum rajasthan jayengey par...lets do one thing

Nisha-great idea...go for it

Kabir(with a what the look)-great idea...tell me one thing what's the idea

Nisha-tumne bataya kab

Kabir-exactly...jab bataya nhi toh accha kaisey ho gya

Nisha-woh...woh...tumney socha hai accha hi hoga...waisey what's the plan

Kabir-whatever...we r going but not by car or taxi

Nisha-toh

Kabir-by bus

Nisha-u mean public transport...i mean bus is a public transport na

Kabir(with an irritated look n sarcastic tone)-it is...untill n unless princess Victoria aapkey London mein log car ki jagah bus na kharidtey ho

Nisha-shut up u hippo...n for ur kind information its queen Victoria not princess voctoria i think u should brush up ur GK

Kabir-u too cockroach...and yeah i know its queen vicotia but just look at urself...itni sit oh ho(suddenly nisha dragged him)kya kar rhi ho

Nisha-hippo...woh dekho(she pointed in a direction...Kabir saw there)goons yeh yahaan kya kar rahey hain

Kabir-lunch karney aye hain

Nisha-but abhi toh breakfast time hai na

Kabir-joke tha

Nisha-joke...u hippo just look at ur surroundings n the situation...yeh koi joke karney ka waqt hai

Kabir-yeh toh jeep ki taraf ja rahe hain

Nisha-haan toh wo jeep unki hai(suddenly they heard a gun shot)

Kabir-police

Nisha-but police toh unke saath hai na

Kabir-kya pta

Goon 1-ACP Ajingya Sharma

ACP-tujhe kya laga hamesha bach jayega

Goon 1-dekh tu ismey mat pad

ACP-mana kuch police officers tera saath dete hain par sab corrupt nhi hotey

Constable-sir ji drugs

ACP-tu toh gya...jeep toh teri hai na

Goon 1-hamari hai...par yeh jeep mein hum nhi aye

ACP-what do u mean

Goon 1-I mean sir ji ki hamari jeep kal raat chori ho gyi thi...kyun bhaisaab(he asked a guy who was standing there)

That guy-ji sir iss jeep mein toh ek ladka aur ladki theey

Waiter-ji sir ji koi 24 - 25 saal ki ladki aur ladka tha

Everybody-ji sir ji

(goon 1 smiled)

ACP-dhundho un dono ko(he goes to the goon)mujh se toh bach gya apne baap ko kya bolega...maal toh gya

Nisha-god...hum toh aur phans gye

Kabir-bus...nisha wo bus nikal rhi hai...chalo

Nisha-but kabir...we have to tell them that we r not involved

Kabir-not now...lets go

(they rushed towards the bus)

Kabir-thank god bus toh mili

Goon 1-dhundho unhey...saab ji humein nhi chodengey

Scene 2

(in the bus)

Nisha-what was that...humein unhey bolna chahiye tha par nhi...hum aur phans gyye

Kabir(he sat next to her)-kya trip hai yeh...pehley drugs phir gunday ab police

Nisha-jabsey tum meri life mein aye ho na pta nhi meri life kya ho gyi hai...tum na kahin chaley jao...meri life se door...i mean first drugs then woh gundey n ab police...sab tumhari galti hai...i hate u i just hate ur face

(Nisha speaks in an angry tone but it hurts kabir he wasn't sure what he was feeling but it did hurt)

One passenger-a gya rajasthan check post

Conductor-welcome to rajasthan ji

Scene 3

(at Jaigharh Palace)

(An old servant entered)

Servant-maharaj kya dekh rahe hain

VK-aaj hawayein kuch jada hi tej nhi hai...aisa lag rha hai ki fizayon mein alag hi sukoon hai

Servant-maharaj hawa hi itni tej hai...aisa lagta hai jaisey toofaan aney wala hai

VK-toofan toh aney wala hai...par kahaan yeh toh bhagwaan hi jaaney...kisi ke aaney ka sanket de rhi hain yeh hawayein

Servat-maharaj kabhi kabhi aap bacchon jaisi baat kartey hain...ab a jaiyey khana lag gya hai

VK-chaliye...par kuch toh honey wala hai

Scene 4

(at shekhawat palace)

(arjun singh entered with an angry look)

AS-shravan shravan kahaan hain aap

SS-kahiye bhai sa itna gussa kyun

(suhani also came there)

AS-tum shikaar par gyye theey

SS-ji

AS-r u mad don't u know hunting is banned

SS-hum rajwadey hain...hamarey liye sab allowed hai

AS-just shut up...ek bezubaan jaanwar ko maarkar kya haasil kar lete ho tum

Suhani-jaaney dijiye bhai sa kuch logon ko samjhaney ka koi faayda nhi

SS-aap chup rahiye pati hain hum aapkey

Suhani-plzz aapney jhooth bolkar dhokha dekar rishta joda humsey humne yeh shaadi apne parivaar ke liye ki hai

SS-aisa kuch nhi hai

AS-sharavan stop it right now woh tumsey 15 saal choti hai n we all know ki kya hua tha

SS-humney dhokha nhi diya bas woh kiya jo sahi tha

Suhani(with teary eyes)-aap na ek baat ka khyaal rakhiyega jurm jitna bhi bada ho saamney ata jaroor hai...koi kitna bhi shaatir ho bhagwaan sabka insaaf karta hai

(n she went from there)

AS-sudhar jao...10 saal ki beti hai tumhari...uskey bare mein socho

(n he too went from there)

SS(he shouts)-humein koi saja nhi dega kabhi nhi...humne kuch galat nhi kiya kuch bhi nhi

Scene 5

(Nisha was sleeping but she felt a hand on her shoulder...she opened her eyes n saw a unknown face)

Nisha(with a jerk)-who r u

Guy-sorry to disturb u aap thoda side ho jaiye mujhe bag rakhna hai

Nisha-aap yahan kaisey...where is kabir

(she was searching kabir n shouting his name)

Conductor-kya hua madam ji

Nisha-woh jo mere saath theey wo kahaan hai

Conductor-3 stop pehley utar gye

Nisha-nhi...nhi(n she starts crying)

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DASTAAN

Part 6

Scene 1

Nisha-woh jo mere saath theey wo kahaan hai

Conductor-3 stop pehley utar gye

Nisha-nhi...nhi(n she starts crying)

(she came out from the bus n starts shouting his name)

Nisha-kabir kabir u cant do this yaar arey main toh hoon hi pagal kuch bhi bolti hoon...kabir where are u yaar

(then she heard a voice)

Voice-hey cockroach...stop shouting...just because of ur harsh voice my ears r hurting

Nisha-kabirr...yeh toh kabir ki awaaj hai(she starts watching here n there)

Kabir-oye princess Victoria bus ke upar dekh

(she saw at the top...he was sitting there)

Nisha-tum bus ki chhat par kya kar rahe ho

Kabir-chhat

Nisha-i mean roof...yeah roof

Kabir-ohhh bus ki chat(n he starts laughing)

Nisha-bohot hansi a rhi hai

Kabir-nhi yaar but seriously chhat(she glared at him)okk okk sorry...n u said na ki u hate me n don't want to see my face toh socha tumhe apna chehra na dikhaon

Nisha-you hippo(she also goes there)bhaiya chaliye(driver started the bus)

Kabir-u know what u r so weird yaar pehley khud sunati ho phir dhundhti bhi khud hi ho

Nisha-emmm woh actually...i m sorry

Kabir-kya kaha tumne sorry...right

Nisha-did u said that right in a sarcastic way

Kabir-no...n yeah apology accepted

Nisha-thank u sir

Kabir-okkk...waisey chilla kyun rahi thi

Nisha-u idiot i thought u left me

Kabir-itni acchi kismet kahaan hai meri...tum toh mere gale hi pad gyi ho

Nisha-kya kaha tumne

Kabir-u know what m feeling sleepy good ni8

Nisha-11 bje hain woh bhi dopahar ke

Kabir-so what tum toh so chuki na now lemme sleep

Scene 2

(at hotel room...saurav heard a knock on door)

Saurav-come in

Dolly-hii

Saurav-hey

Dolly-aapki baat hui nisha se

Saurav-nhi yaar aur tumhaari

Dolly-i have tried his number but he is not picking up

Saurav-i hope they both r fine

Dolly-humein bohot darr lag rha hai...Vasu aunty se toh humne kuch kaha bhi nhi hai

Saurav-same here yaar Ramesh uncle called me but mainey unhe bola ki she is safe...i just hope nishu thik ho

Dolly-nishu

Saurav-yeah main usey nishu bulata hoon

Dolly-awww thats so cute...u love her so much na

Saurav-love ummm i don't know yaaar...look we r childhood frds n our parents said ki shaadi kar lo n we said yes...thats it...hum dost hain

Dolly-tabhi tumne usey yahaan aney dia...matlab agar usey koi aur mil gya toh

Saurav-toh main sabsey jada khush honga

Dolly-wow i really like ur thoughts

Saurav-thanks waisey do u love kabir

Dolly-god not again yaar meri dadi ye ques pooch pooch kar mujhe roz tang karti hai...i don't love him he is my best frd thats it

Saurav-okk

Dolly-toh ab kya karna hai

Saurav-no idea

Dolly-get idea

(n they both starts laughing)

Dolly-chalo main tumhe delhi ghumati hoon

Saurav-gr8 idea...lets go

Scene 3

(Kabir opened his eyes n felt a light weight on his shoulder n he saw nisha's angelic face...she was looking so innocent n beautiful)

Kabir(monologue)-nhi jaanta kyun par main chahta hoon meri har subah aise hi ho jab mujhe tumhara chehra dikhey(n he starts smiling...nisha shifted a bit n he realised that the sunrays r disturbing her sleep...he moved closer to her n tried to block the sunrays by using his hand...she felt better n again went to sleep)yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai kyun main itna possessive ho raha hoon kyun mujhe farak padta hai ki woh khush hai ya nhi

(nisha woke up n saw him...they both were so close n she was lost in his dark brown orbs)

(they both were staring each other suddenly the bus stopped n they came back to reality)

Conductor-toh bus is dhabe pey 2 ghantey rukegi jise jo khana hai kha le waisey bhi lunch ka time hai

(Nibir too came down but they both were ignoring each other)

Kabir-tum kuch khaogi

Nisha-nhi woh(suddenly she saw something)not again

Kabir-what

Nisha(she pointed towards some goons)-gunday

Kabir-yeh toh wohi hain

(goons already saw them n they were coming towards them)

Kabir-inhey toh main chodunga nhi

Nisha-pagal mat bano...public place hai humarey saath saath bakki logo ko bhi pareshaani hogi

Kabir-so

Nisha-run

Kabirr-what

Nisha-yeah mr hippo bhaago

(they both starts running n those goons were chasing them Nibir ran towards the jungle)

Scene 4

(after some 15 mins)

(somewhere in the forest)

Nisha-hum hain kahaan

Kabir-jungle mein

Nisha-waah i know that but jungle mein kahaan

Kabir(with a r u serious look)-jungle mein bhi directions hoti hain

Nisha-whatever uss taraf chaltey hain

(they again starts running but they stopped at a place)

Kabir-ab yeh kya hai

Nisha-waterfall aur aage raasta bhi nhi hai

Kabir-this is not waterfall this is our dead end

Nisha-dekho kabirr(suddenly someone pulled her)aah

Kabir(he turned n saw the goons)-chodo usey

Goon 1-bohot bhagaya tum dono ne ab bas

(Kabir was about to hit that goon but he put the gun on nisha's forehead)

Goon 1-maarega maar na

Kabir-leave her right now...agar usey kuch bhi hua na toh

Goon-toh kya

(his chamchas came forward n starts beating kabir...they were beating him so ruthlessley n kabir was badly injured)

Nisha-plzz leave him...chodo usey plzzz(she starts crying)

Goon 1-thik hai ji oye madam ji keh rhi hai chod do inhe

(his chamchas left kabir)

Kabir-(he stands up n pointed a finger towards their boss) usey chod ab

Goon 1-arey madam ji ne kaha tujhe chodney ke liye

(goon 1 pushed kabir lightly n because of his injured state kabir lost his balance n nisha shouted but that goon held his hand)

Goon 1-madam ji ab bolo

Goon 2-sir iski wajah se hamara sara maal gya

Nisha-plzz don't do this chod do usey

Goon 1 -accha ji toh lijiye madam ji chod diya (he left kabir's hand n kabir fell in the waterfall)

Nisha(she was shocked...she saw some flashbacks n shouted) RAGHUUU

Edited by SONAL30 - 8 years ago

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