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DASTAAN

Part 7

Nisha(she was shocked...she saw some flashbacks n shouted) RAGHUUU(n she fainted)

Goon 1-yeh toh behosh ho gyi

(they heard some footsteps)

Goon 2-bhai koi a rha hai

Goon 1-abey toh dekh kya rahe ho bhaago

Someone entered with his driver-santram dekho

Santram(he turned nisha n checked)-maharaj ladki zinda hai

VK(he was none other than maharaj Vikramaditya Singh Rathore...he saw nisha's face)-priya

Driver-ji

VK-inka chehra(he touched nisha's face...he cant believe this)vohi aankhen vohi masumiyat

Driver-yeh behosh hain

VK-inhe uthao aur mehel lekar chalo

(the went to Rathore Mansion n a doctor arrived)

Doctor-maharaj she has fainted i think because of shock...aapko yeh mili kahaan

VK-humne suna tha ki hamare yahaan ke janglon mein jaanwaron ka shikaar ho rha hai wohi pta karne gyye the ki humne kisi ke chillane ki awaaz suni

Doctor-ohh...waisey nothing major inhe rest karne dijiye...she'll be all right...main chalta hoon

VK-ji dhanyawad

Doctor-ji

(doctor went from there...in nisha's room she was resting but in her mind some flashbacks were playing)

Flashback Starts

(in 1989)

(in rathore mansion)

Savitri Singh Rathore(SR)(VK's wife)(she has asked a servant)-Rajkumari Pravamvada kahaan hai

Servant-Rani sa woh toh

SR-kya...where is she

VK(he entered)-Kya hua savitri ji

SR-where is ur darling daughter...she is 23 koi zimmedari haiuski ya nhi...kal jab uski by DNSUnlocker"> shaadi hogi toh kya haga

VK-leave it na she is still a kid

SR-no she isn't

VK-arey par

SR-aap jaane dijiye...kahaan hai wo

Servant-woh jungle ki taraf gayi hain

VK-kyaa...wahaan toh jungle jaanwar hain...hey bhagwaan(in a worried tone)hume jungle jaana hai

Servant-j hum gaadi nikalwatwy hain

(in jungle)

(some girls r shouting)

Girl 1-rajkumari priyamvda

Girl 2 -priya aap kahaan hai

Girl 3-now m feeling very scared...where is she...agar kuch ho gya toh...hum rajmahal jaakar kya kahengey

Girl 2-shut up u all...priya

(somewhere in the jungle...a girl is crying)

Girl-hum kahaan hain...hum kho gayee...hum Maa Baba ko kya bolengey...hey bholenath madad kijiye

(she was the royal pricess...Princess Priyamvada Singh Rathore aka Priya)

Priya-oh god

(suddenly she heard a roar)

Priya-sher...nhi maa baba

(she starts crying n starts running)

(her frds were still shouting her name n she was running like a maniac suddenly she has bumped into someone n faints)

(after some time she has opened her eyes n find herself in her room)

Priya-hum yahaan kaise aye...maa baba

SR-aap jungle kyun gyi thi

VK-savitri ji

Priya-m sorry maa but hum yahaan kaisey

Mujhe aap jungle mein mili

(for the very first time she noticed a guy in his mid twentey's...n she rememberd his face...he was the same guy who bumped into her)

Priya-aap

VK-priya he is Raghuvendra Agarwal...he is our area's new senior Inspector

Raghuvendra-hello i m raghuvendra

Priya- hello...but thoda lamba nhi hai aapka naam...raghuvendra

SR-priya

Priya-nhi i mean don't u have a nick name

Raghuvendra-u can call me raghu

Priya-that's better hii raghu

Priya dii

Priya-suhani

(a 5 year old gilr entered)

Suhani-aapko chot lagi

Priya-no yaar m fine...inhone bacha liya(pointed towards raghu)

Suhani-thanks for saving my dii

Raghu(with a smile)-ur welcome aisey wo mera kaam hai n i should go now

VK-arey aap thodi der rukiye na

Raghu-nhi actually kal hi join kiya hai toh bas thoda kaam hai

Priya-thanks Mr raghu

Rahu-ur welcome princess

(n he goes from there)

(in priya's room...she rememberd the bumping session n raghu's eyes)

Priya(monologue)-kisi ki aankhon mein itni gehrayi bhi ho sakti hai(n she she starts blushing)ek minute priya aap thik toh hain aap ek ajnabee ke bare mein soch rahi hain...aapko ho kya gya hai

(Suhani entered)

Suhani-di u r still awake

Priya-hmm hume pta tha ki aap zaroor ayengi isliye

Suhani-di woh inspector kitney acche hain na

Priya-woh toh hain(n she again starts smiling)

Suhani-aap hans kyun rahi hain

Priya-kuch nhi...good night

Suhani-good night di

(next morning...a servant entered)

Servant-rajkumari priya woh inspector sahib aye hain unhe raja sahib se milna hai par woh aur rani ji toh 2 din ke liye bahar gyye hain aap unse mil ley

Priya(after hearing raghu's name she again starts smiling)-hum aate hain

(she went downstairs n saw Raghu)

Priya-hllo

Raghu(he was mesmerized by her look...she was wearing a pink colour anarkali n looking so beautiful but he controlled himself)-hii...aapke pita

Priya-maa aur baba do din ke liye bahar gyye hain aap baithey

Raghu-mujhe toh unse hi milna tha

Priya-aap humein bta sakte hain

Raghu-R u sure...its related to ur kingdom

Priya-ohh tab toh u should tell

Raghu-i think actually m sure

Priya-what happend Inspector sahab aap bolengey

Raghu-mujhe lagta hai ki yahaan jo jungle hain jahan kal aap mujhe mili thi wahaan jaanwaron ko maara jaata hai for their body parts u know leather ke liye

Priya-aapko koi galatfehmi hai humarey yahaan aisa nhi hota aur forest department ne kabhi complain nhi ki

Raghu-because they r also involved

Priya-how could u so be sure

Raghu-kyunki mainey suna hai n kal jab aap bhaag rahi thi toh mainey lion ki awaz suni phir ek gun shot hua but aapko sambhalney ke chakkar mein main ja nhi paaya aur aaj jab gaya toh body nhi thi

Priya-haan awaaj sunkar hi hum bhaage the but is sey kuch saabit toh nhi hota na ho sakta hai ki kisi ne apni jaan bachane ke liye yeh sab kiya ho

Raghu-i don't think it possible...i didn't even find a drop of blood seems like kisine wahaan se saarey sabot mitaye h

Priya-aisa nhi ho sakta matlab

Raghu-its ok princess it happens

Priya-aap humse kya chahte hain

Raghu-hume aapki help chahiye

Priya-kaisey

Raghu-i have a plan

Edited by SONAL30 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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NOTE :
Hey frds hii
I have decided to continue this story but my previous thread was closed toh i have decided to open a fresh thread
Waisey i don't know how many of u r still intersted so m not pming anyone if u want pm toh like this post i.e. this note one😊
Will update the next part soon
Edited by SONAL30 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sonu😃
Thank u sooo much for continuing this story🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Was really intrigued by this story and was eagerly waiting for its update😆
I m so happy to see you are continuing it
Ab mujhe yaad nahin hai ki maine tere uss thread pe comment kiya tha ya nahin
magar story continue hone ki khushi mein dekh mine is d first comment on ur story😆😆😆
yay
but itna keh rahi hoon, ki iss story ka plot mujhe bahut interesting laga hai👏👏👏
like Nibir nok-jhioks and the dosa friendship😳
i m really excited to knw what happens next😆
Tune suspense bahut acche se maintain kiya hai👏👏👏

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Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Sonu😃

Thank u sooo much for continuing this story🤗 🤗
Was really intrigued by this story and was eagerly waiting for its update😆
I m so happy to see you are continuing it
Ab mujhe yaad nahin hai ki maine tere uss thread pe comment kiya tha ya nahin
magar story continue hone ki khushi mein dekh mine is d first comment on ur story😆😆😆
yay
but itna keh rahi hoon, ki iss story ka plot mujhe bahut interesting laga hai👏👏👏
like Nibir nok-jhioks and the dosa friendship😳
i m really excited to knw what happens next😆
Tune suspense bahut acche se maintain kiya hai👏👏👏

mihuu🤗
OMGEEE inni long comment😃
love u mihu😃
m writing the next chapter...will try to post it today itself warna kal pakka😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONAL30

mihuu🤗

OMGEEE inni long comment😃
love u mihu😃
m writing the next chapter...will try to post it today itself warna kal pakka😃

great😃
i knw main teri stories pe bahut regularly comment nahin karti hun but will try to make up for it😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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DASTAAN

Part 8

Scene 1

Next Morning , in the forest

(Some guys r roaming in the forest)

Guy 1 - tujhe poora yakeen hai ki yahaan humein kuch milega yaad hai na kal kya hua tha

Guy 2 - arey pta hai pehle wo rajkumari a gyi thi phir wo inspector par tu fikr mat kar raja vikramaditya aur unki patni jaigarh mein nhi hain aur wo inspector ko bhi mainey bahar jaate hue dekha hai aur mainey suna hai ki paas ke kuch animals bhaag kar yahin aye hain

Guy 1 - okk then lets try to find them

(they both were searching for animals suddenly they heard some noises)

Guy 3 - bhai shayad koi animal hai udhar

(Guys 1 & 2 goes there n they saw some cows n goats)

Guy 1 - arey waah aaj toh bohot accha paisa milne wala hai

(guy 2 pointed a gun towards the animals n he was about to shoot them but some policemen came there who were hiding in the bushes n held all of them)

Guy 1 - yeh sab kya hai

(Raghy n Priya too came there)

Guy 2 - tu toh bahar gya tha na

Raghu - naah that was a trap

Guy 3 - trap

Priya - yep a trap to catch u all red handed...u all know ki this is a crime n dad told each n everyone to not kill or hunt animals still u guys...dont u know this is wrong...aap log aisa kaisey kar sakte ho i mean how could u do this

(priya was talking to them suddenly a guy took his gun n pointed it towards priya but raghu saw it n he pushed priya...he came forward n the bullet hit him

Priya - Raghu

Policemen - sir

Scene 2

After 4 hours , In the Hospital

(Priya was crying badly)

Arjun - priya stop crying dear that wasn't ur fault

Priya - Arjun sab hamari galti hai I m the only one who is responsible for this mess...mujhe zaroorat hi kya thi wahaan lecture dene ki see just because of me raghu is suffering

Arjun - i can understand priya but

Priya - but...but what arjun u can't understand i mean that scenario was very scary...that bullet...blood...everything was

(she again started crying , doctor came there)

Arjun - doctor is he alright

Doctor - Rajkumar Arjun he is absolutely fine bullet bas choo kar nikal gyi well u were lucky

Priya - unhe hosh kab tak ayega

Doctor - it depends may be within 2 to 3 hours or it will take 24 hours also or more than that but u don't worry he is out of danger now

(Doctor went from there)

Arjun - priya listen I have informed ur mom n dad n they r coming but right now i have some work property ka work hai n it's really important otherwise tumhe yun yahaan akela chod kar

Priya - arey it's ok arjun

Arjun - take care okk

Priya - I'll

(arjun went from there , priya goes to raghu's room n watch him)

Priya (monologue)-I don't know why i felt restless par life mein first time aisa lga jaise I will loose something,something which is very precious something which is really close to my heart..kya kiya hai raghu tum ne mere saath...sirf do mulakaton mein aisa lag rha hai jaisey tum hi mere sab kuch ho

(priya's mom n father entered)

VK - priya beta

Priya - baba...maa

(she goes to them n hugged them tightly...she starts crying)

VK - priya raghu will be alright beta he is a police officer

SR - haan beta aap chup ho jaiye

Scene 3

(In a godown , a guy was scolding his men )

Guy - ek kaam dhang se nhi hota tum logo se

Men 1 - sorry saab ji

Guy - sorry...tum logo ki wajah se mere 7 aadmi police station mein band hainaur agar unme se kisika muh khul gya na toh tum sab ke saath main bhi dubunga n the worst part is ki wo Inspector bhi ICU mein hai...god i don't know mainey kaisey gadhe paal rakhe hain...lsten abhi m going to hospital sab wahan hain agar main nhi hua toh bas...mere toh apne hi mere dushman hain...main nikalta hoon but clear this mess mujhe wo sab bahar chahiye samjhe

Men 2 - ji saab ji

Scene 4

(Hospital , Arjun entered)

Arjun - how is he now...is he stil unconscious

VK - aapka property ka case solve hua

Arjun - haan ab sab thik hai

(Shravan came there)

SR - shravan beta

(he was looking tense)

Arjun - aap kahaan the shravan...itna kuch ho gya aur aap ab a rahe hain

Shravan (in a stammering voice)- wow o bhai hum busy the

Arjun - kahaan aap toh lawyer ke pass bhi nhi aye aapko yaad hai na humein property ke liye sign karne the

Shravan - nhi bhai wo my frd was in some trouble that's why i was with him

Arjun - thik hai but why r u stammering

Shravan - wo subah se bhaag rahe hain na frd ki help ke chakkar mein isliye

(suddenly a nurse came)

Nurse - Inspector Raghuvendra ko hosh a gya hai

Priya - kyaa

Arjun - let's go

Precap - Priya Raghu moments

Edited by SONAL30 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update 👏
I think shravan or arjun mai kuch toh gadbad hai 😆
Update soon
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Too good lovely plz post next part soon
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Awesome chapter👏 👏
Loved it...
Shravan or arjun pe doubt ho raha hai wahi log hi animals ko marte honge 🤔
Waiting for Nibir I mean priya and ragu moments eagerly


Please please continue kudrat waiting for its update from long...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome work Sonu🤗...update soon yaara😉

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