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Ketki

@ketki61

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Appreciated some clarity
Remember Mills and Boons romances - I am sure we never got any clarifications from them.
Fictions are imaginations of a creative writer, who share their creative - love it and personally Respect it a lot.
Waiting for the story to continue
Pl share your PW's
Take care
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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Happy with the flow as this is a fiction where you can create your own fantasy world with no rules and regulations. Waiting for the story to continue.

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..preeti..

@Preet123456

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

The track is going really well. Geet has taken time to understand Maan, from professional to personal front. Also, she can see the different Maan, who is also a normal human being, vulnerable. His behaviour regarding kids, how he does not ask for any right on them. He has not behaved any wrong with her after that incident, always respected her and her decisions. Sometimes circumstances are really different that we need to take the wrong decisions, but here perspective matters.

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

I enjoyed the track

Sometimes people cannot talk or atleast open up

Then they need privacy those words u had explained

Through Aashi that geet needs answers from maan

Maan he cannot come directly and say sorry for what

He did and claim the kids but he can try to share his

past which develops a bond of trying to understand

Each other and geet love only maan that u made very

Clear and maan also love her I love the way the plot is

So please don't giving any thought to discontinue

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Teaser

Everyone admired Aashi's taste of interiors and antique pieces she chose for her house decor.It was expected as wife of top architects firm owner and herself a fashion designer..On day when Aashi brought old piano from his grand father's ( nannu who was not any more ) house..Param made fun of her still dared not to ask her that it didn't match living room decor.

She smelt it...There was huge husband wife clash for one week where to place it. Aashi's didn't want to hide it and to put it in any dark corner .

It was Geet who sorted out matter n suggested to shift in dinning area. Param felt it strange but he left with no other option.So now it was part of dinning area ..

(intentionally in smaller size)

Geet never tried to be on piano when ever visited but it always attracted her. So what made her today to play these notes ?..Unknowingly how close these were to Maan's heart.

( Pyar Ko Ho Jane Do...Pyar Mein Kho Jane Do..initial music of piano )

He was listening her silently standing far near to stairs.When she was deeply engrossed in rhythm..Suddenly her hands stopped playing feeling his presence around..She turned back.He was there...

Why he was this much disturbed ? Why his eyes gone wet.

" Maan" Geet words broke his trance " Aap yahan...maine socha aap so gaye ? "

"Tum yeh dun (tune) kaise jaanti ho " totally numb he came close to her.

"Aapko yaad hai ? " she replied.He nodded his head.

"Agar yaad hai fir rokka kisne hai...kyo nahi baha dete ( flow away ) is dil per pade pathar( or can say heavy heart ) ko is dun ki lahron per "

Her hands again started to play same tune...After few minutes.He couldn't resist flooded with thousands of emotions he joined her...

Pyar Ko Ho Jane Do ...Pyar Mein Kho Jane Do

Aaitbaar Kiska Hai...Intezaar Kiska Hai

Abhi Na Hua To Phir...Kabhi Nahin Kabhi Nahin

Which bond binds them with music and what beautiful revelations from his past ll be there in front of Maan which he never knew...?

Why kids' names sound exactly like Maan's when Geet n Vicky hated him Mannat at starting n Arhaan at last...?

If almighty can forgive hardcore criminals .Didn't he deserve one chance to live ? When no one knew what was hidden in his past...Why a strong heart teenager turned out to be a stone heart to face the world for sake of his dear ones.But what he got in reward just hatred...

I thing its gonna be one of two last updates for the end of this track...

Edited by Sonia.KN - 8 years ago

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

ab gimmme update jaldi wait ni hota

beautiful teaser

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turbulence

@turbulence

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Splendid teaser sonu. Are maan n feet connected by some old thread from their past? Waiting for update. And tu meri zindagi, tanha sathiya ki teaser kab milegi? Try to post those too I miss these wonderful tales.

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1029644

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Nice teaser...waiting to know their past n how Geet n Mann knew the same track

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Donnaa
ab gimmme update jaldi wait ni hota
beautiful teaser

aise he khyal aa gaya...I posted still have to write...but it is exactly what I wanted to express...even no one considered why Geet gave name to kids which sound like Maan's name ...Mannat's name at starting and Arhaan's name at last...there is a reason n this is discloser