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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: elsanna

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Unres

Chap 1
So swara has got many cute friends... n my hp with just imaginig their convo 😉
Arnav r swara m takkkar may dy become friends soon 😳
U revived my memiries of asr... n what the 😛

Chap 2

Sansku makes d entry
Next sansku metting swara...

Do update soon 😳

Tanishka

Thanks for your comments Tanu😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Congrats dear
Superb story with different concept
loved to read about supernatural stories like vampiers
Both chptrs r Awsome
loved it
update soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: anu012

Congrats dear
Superb story with different concept
loved to read about supernatural stories like vampiers
Both chptrs r Awsome
loved it
update soon

thnks for pm

Thanks for your comments Anu😉
I am glad you liked my concept😆
I will try to update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
CHAPTER 3:
Shantivan:
Ragini:Maa humara breakfast hum college ke liye late ho rahe hai...

Arnav: Princess aaram se breakfast karo I will drop you off...

Ragini: Thanks bhai...
Swara just came down...and was going out of the house...But Tweety appeared there...

Tweety:Madam Swara...You have not taken your wallet...

Swara: (blowing a kiss to her and taking out her wand)Thanks Tweety...Accio Wallet(The wallet was in her hand)

Sharmishtha: Swara tum kahi jaa rahi ho?????

Swara:Haan maine College join kiya hai...

Arnav:Konsa college?????

Swara: Waise am an adult according to both Magical as well as the muggle world...Toh apko pharak nahi padna chahiye...but still maine St.Xaviers join kiya hai...

Ragini:Are Swara hum bhi waha pe padhte hai tum chalo humare saath...

Swara: Thanks Ragini but main khud chali jaungi...
And she goes away from there...

Arnav: Ragini chodo yeh sab aur apna khayal rakhna...You know you are shaping...Koi bhi takleef hui toh just call me...

Ragini:Haan bhai ab chale...

St. Xavier's Campus:
Swara entered the campus and found it weird that everyone was staring at her...
Just then a guy came to her...
Guy:Are you new here?????Hey am Kabir Rajput...

Swara:Ya am new here... Swara Singh Raizada...

Kabir:Are you related to ASR?????

Swara:Yes unfortunately he is my elder brother...

Kabir: Swara you are The Alpha's sister...

Swara:(sarcastically)No wonder you are smelling like a dog...
(She leaves from there and goes for her classes)
Ragini and Lakshya comes there...

Ragini:Kya hua Kabir??????

Kabir: Nothing do I smell like a dog Ragini????? Tumhari cousin bol rahi thi...

Ragini(laughing):No...Tum Swara se mile...

Lakshya:God Ragini woh kitni akdu hai...

Ragini:Akdu nahi ghussa hai bhai se...isliye usne apna gussa Kabir pe nikala...did you relate her to bhai...

Kabir:Haan I told her you are Alpha's sister...

Lakshya:Chodo yeh sab let's go...

In the canteen:
Swara comes back from her class and noticed that Ragini was having her food alone...
Swara: Ragini akeli kyu bethe hoon??? Tumhare friends kaha hai????

Ragini: woh Lakshya ki aur Kabir ki football practice mein hai so maine socha kuch kha loon...

Lakshya and Kabir comes there...
Lakshya:Hi Swara...

Swara: (smiling)Hi you must be Lakshya...

Kabir:Hey Swara...

Swara: Whatever...
Swara sees Three people entering the canteen...

Swara:Who are they???

Ragini:They are the Maheshwaris Adopted family of Durga Prasad and Annapurna Maheshwari...The girl there in Anarkali is Parineeta Maheshwari...She is studying while her husband handles the business...Aur woh dono Arushi and Arjun Maheshwari both are dating...

Swara(Sees a handsome guy entering)Yeh Kon hai???

Ragini: Yeh hai Sanskar Maheshwari...He is the only one who is not taken... College ki sari ladkiyaan uski deewani hai...

Swara:He is so handsome...Lag raha hai Bhagwan ne usi fursat main banaya hai...

Lakshya:Sochna bhi mat Swara...Arnav aur Maheshwaris don't get along...

Swara: Whatever...
The bell rings and everyone goes for the class...

Maheshwari Table:
The Maheshwaris are shocked seeing Swara...
Sanskar:Aru how is this possible??????

Parineeta: Sanskar shant ho jao we will find out yeh ladki yaha kaise?????

Arushi: Sanskar Jo tum samaj rahe ho woh yeh nahi hai...Shayad yeh hi mera vision tha...

Arjun:I think we should go shayad I can try influencing her mood...

Sanskar:I can't read her Arjun...

Parineeta: Maybe because of those Wolves...

Sanskar: Maybe let's go...

In the Classroom:
Everyone was seated and Sanskar could find an empty place only next to Swara...He sits next to her...
Swara(smiles)Hi I am Swara...

Sanskar: Sanskar Maheshwari...
The class teacher comes inside...

Teacher:Good morning class welcome to my class of Archeology...and Ancient Ruins...I am Professor Patil...

Swara(smiled)She remembered her days in Hogwarts with Hermione learning the same subject...

A girl:Sir do you believe in the legends of our Dehradun...

Prof.Patil: Which legends Maya?????

Maya: About the Werewolves and Vampires?????

Prof.Patil: aaj kal ke bacche...Aap log aaj ke 21st century ke log hote hue bhi in baate main believe karte ho???????

Ragini:Par sir humare Dehradun main yeh sari manyataye hai...And log in shaktiyo ko mante bhi hai?????

Prof Patil:Ok jab aap log ko debate karna hai toh bataye yeh Jeev kaha se aaye????

Swara:Sir kya aap Bhagwan main mante hai?????

Prof Patil:Haan manta hoon...

Swara:Kya apne unhe kabhi dekha hai??????

Prof Patil:Nahi...par mehsoos kiya hai unki shaktiyo ko...

Swara:Toh sir yaha ke logo ke liye yeh manyatayo ko issi tarah mehsoos kiya honga...

Kabir: Maine suna hai Vampires bohat Khatarnak hote hai????

Maya:No Vampire se zyada Werewolves Khatarnak hote hai...I mean they can even hurt their loved ones...

Kabir:Oh really tumhe blood sucking leaches zyada pasand hai??????

Swara:Sab vampires insano ka khoon nahi pete...There are some vegetarian Vampires too...

Arushi:(Thinking)How can she be so sure about the vegetarian Vampires?????

Sanskar: Main bhi yahi soch raha hoon and she believes in our existence...

Parineeta:Kahi yeh bhi humari tarah toh nahi hai na?????

Arjun:You mean a Werewolf??????

Parineeta: Shayad...

Ragini: Seriously Swara Vegetarian Vampires...Yeh concept hi bohat weird hai...

Swara:Hote hai Ragini... They drink Animal blood and Wine...Aur blood ke hisaab se unki eyes ka colour change hota hai... Like Golden due to animal blood and red due to human Blood...

Lakshya: (whispering)Ragini manna padega tumhari behen ko she is smart I mean she knows so much...(loudly)Tumhare Werewolves ke bare Main kya views hai...

Swara was going to say her theories but she saw Arnav entering with the Principal...

Swara: Werewolves are stinking dogs jinhe sirf apni padi hote hai and they give a damn about their loved ones Bloody mongrals...

Arjun:Lo Pari Bhabhi iske aur apke views are so same...

Arnav entered with the Principal...
Principal:I Don't think you all need an introduction about him I am here to inform that ASR is now a trustee of our College...

The bell rings and everyone leaves...
Sanskar wanted to talk to Swara...

Arnav: Swara Chalo I need to talk to you...

Swara:Par humhe apse koi baat nahi karni...
She goes back home...

MAHESHWARI MANOR:
Adarsh:Toh tum log vapis aa gaye...How was college????
(He hugs Parineeta)

Arushi:Bhai you won't believe aaj kya hua college main!!!

DP:Kya hua Arushi???

Arjun:Humne "Maithili" ko dekha!!!!!

AP:Kya???? Sanskar kaha hai woh theek toh hai na...

Entering the house...

Sanskar: Woh ladki Maithili nahi hai...Aur mujhe is baat par koi discussion nahi chahiye...
With this he leaves the hall and goes in his room...

So here is Chapter 3 of my story...
how was it????Give me your views any suggestions... 😉




Edited by Princess_Mansi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Hey dear Mansi,😊
Very very very interesting update!!!!👏😉 So finally the Maheshwaris' entry.😃 Loved SwaRagLak and Kabir's moment, as well as Sanskar, Arushi, Arjun and Pari's moments.😃😃 SwaRagini in same college.😃 Even SanLak and others.😃 And what can Arushi sense by watching Swara??😕 Sanskar is already attracted towards Swara!! 😉 And now who's this Maithili?? What's her relation with the Maheshwaris??😕 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Hmm
The plot is thickening
Interesting
Swasan connection shuru😆
Isme Pyaar ki ek kahani bhi add kiya kya? Maithili 😉
New new suspense
Lage raho!
😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Superb update
loved it
ur story become interesting
who is maithali????
update soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Very interesting and lovely update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey dear Mansi,😊
Very very very interesting update!!!!👏😉 So finally the Maheshwaris' entry.😃 Loved SwaRagLak and Kabir's moment, as well as Sanskar, Arushi, Arjun and Pari's moments.😃😃 SwaRagini in same college.😃 Even SanLak and others.😃 And what can Arushi sense by watching Swara??😕 Sanskar is already attracted towards Swara!! 😉 And now who's this Maithili?? What's her relation with the Maheshwaris??😕 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Hey Aheli thanks for your comments
I Don't want to reveal too much of my story's suspense
So let Maithili wait for now
You will get all your answers in the next update
I will try to update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Hmm

The plot is thickening
Interesting
Swasan connection shuru😆
Isme Pyaar ki ek kahani bhi add kiya kya? Maithili 😉
New new suspense
Lage raho!
😃

Hey Ashum
I am happy you liked the plot
Ya Swasan connection started
Maithili let her be a suspense for now😉

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