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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 4:
Shantivan:
Arnav: SWARA SWARA ...

Sharmishtha: Kya hua chote tum itna kyu chilla rahe ho?????

Ragini:Woh Maa Swara...

Shekhar:Kya hua Swara ko...

Arnav:Kuch nahi hua hai Swara ko... usse bas meri life main problems create karne hai...
Swara comes down hearing all the commotions...

Swara: Problem mujhe nahi apko hai...

Arnav:Oh really toh aaj college main kya tha????Agar yaha rehna chahti ho toh apni had main raho...Tumhe bardast karna meri majboori hai warna kab ka tumhe iss ghar se toh kya is duniya se hi door kar deta...
Swara's eyes welled up...
Swara knew her brother hated her but wishing she should die was something she had never imagined...

Arnav just finished saying this and an owl came and gave Swara a letter...

Swara:Yeh letter...
She opened the letter...

Dear Swara,
We want to meet you there is a serious problem here please contact us immediately...
PS :The enchanted coins still work
Love,
Harry

Swara took out a coin from her pocket and tapped them twice with her wand...
Swara: Harry you can use floo network it's Shantivan...

Two minutes later green lights were seen in the fireplace and Harry Ron and Hermione appeared...

Hermione:(Hermione hugged her) Swara are you alright?????I was so tensed for you...

Swara:What is it Hermione?????Why are you so tensed????

Harry:We found something Swara...A Death Eater has escaped Azkaban...

Swara:Who is it??????

Ron:It's ok Swara you are safe...

Swara:You guys are hiding something from me right???Who is it?????

Harry:Alecto Carrow...

Ron:We all know she will be behind you for killing her brother...

Swara: Obviously she will hunt me down I killed her brother...

Hermione:What is it Swara??????

Swara: Nothing Mione...Just that some people will find peace seeing me killed...

Ron: Bloody hell Swara...Take back your words...You know Mom was so tensed with the news she wanted you back in the burrow safely...

Harry: Swara I know Alecto Carrow won't be able to harm even your nail...You are a true warrior and the war is a proof...

Swara:Guys am perfectly fine no need to worry...And Ron ask Mrs Weasley to relax...I am safe and I can take care of myself...

Sharmishtha: Swara apne dosto ko kaho khana kha kar Jaye...

Swara:Guys please you all have dinner...Ron it's your favourite...Matar paneer...

Ron:Am having dinner let these two decide about theirs...

Hermione:As if we have an option...

Everyone had dinner but Arnav was tensed for Swara...

Arnav:If you guys want the pack can help catch that Death Eater...

Harry:No need where ever my Swara is there then everyone is safe...

Hermione: Swara take care and ya keep this broken mirror piece will help you... Harry has the mirror in the Gordic Hollow...Bye...
Harry and Ron hug her and bid her...

Next Day St Xavier's college:
In the canteen...
Lakshya:Are Kabir yeh Ragini aur Swara kaha reh gaye ab tak nahi aaye

Kabir:Ha I know koi bhi nahi aya bas hum ullu ke tarah aye hue hain...

Kavya:Main hoon na to tumhe kis baat ki chinta hain...Don't tell me tumhe woh Swara pasand aa gaye hain...

Ragini:Kyu Kavya ab tumhe meri behen se bhi problem hai...

Swara: Ragini chodo na kyu zagda mol rahe ho...waise Kavya tum bilkul mere frnd ke sis-in-law ke jaise ho woh bhi kuch jyada hi fashion conscious hain waise woh ek vella ke khandan se hain...

Ragini:Kiske bhabhi hain yeh vella Harry ki to nahi na...

Swara:Not actully but haan in a way u know Ginny is his gf ok Ron ke bhabhi hain woh,uska naam Fleur Delecour hain... Hum sub usse phelgm bulate hain kyunki woh naak se bolte hain...woh actually french hain na...and Ginny and Mrs Weasley just could not tolerate her...when Bill got engaged to her...

Ragini:Himesh Resamiya ke jaise,Tera tera tera suroor ya Aaasique banayaaa...

At the other corner of the canteen...

Sanskar(thinking):Pata nahi kyu par tunne dekhkar mujhe bar bar Maithili ki yaad aati hai...Wohi chehra Wohi awaaz...

Sanskar and others left for their classes...

Khushi entered the canteen...
Khushi: Namaste hamara naam Khushi hai...Aap Zaroor Swara hongi... Arnavji ki behen...

Swara:Haan Main hi Swara hoon...

Khushi:Kya main tumse Arnav ke bare Main baat kar sakti hoon...

Swara: Khushi please mujhe apse koi problem nahi hai...Par acha yehi honga agar aap Arnav ko khona nahi chahti toh aap mujhse door rahiye kyunki Arnav Singh Raizada mujhse nafrat karta hai...
Swara goes for her classes...
Swara goes in the class and finds that only one seat is left in the front rows and that too next to Sanskar..She hesitates but eventually goes and sits next to him...

Sanskar:Hi!! Swara

Swara:Hi!! Sanskar.

Sanskar:I must say you have a British acsent...

Swara:I was in London...
(Both were taking and Swara got up to pickup a pencil when she tripped over a bag and was about to fall)

Sanskar:Be careful(He pulls her and she falls in his arm)
(Both are engrosed in an eyelock)
Swara:(thinking)I feel so much attracted to this golden eyes as if they are made of molten gold...He is like my angel my guardian angel...Who is so handsome(blushing)...

Sanskar:(thinking)Gosh!!She is so delicate...I wish I could make you mine my sunshine angel...You are so beautiful...Just the most beautiful thing created by God...so perfect...
(She come out of their dreams and sit down on their place)

Sanskar was fine but suddenly someone opened the window and wind blew...
Sanskar got Swara's scent...

Sanskar:Yeh kaise ho sakta hai...Mujhe itne saalo main kabhi human Blood ka temptation nahi hua...Toh aaj kaise...

The teacher entered the class...
Sanskar was feeling very uncomfortable sitting with Swara...
Swara: Sanskar please can you pass me the flask?????

Sanskar didn't reply and was staring at her...He just wanted to drink her blood...

Swara: Sanskar please mujhe flask pass karo...Rehne do main khud le leti hoon tum boys koi kaam nahi kar sakte...
She leans forward and takes the flask...

Sanskar just couldn't control...
Sanskar:(Shouting at her) Samajhti kya ho apne aap ko tum just cause saare teachers tumhe genius Samajhte hai you can freaking control us...

Swara:(Her eyes welled up and She started feeling that she did a mistake coming back)I am sorry...
She leaves the classroom as everyone was staring at her...

Swara goes in the library and spends her time reading...

After the college is over Swara was searching Ragini...She finds her taking to Lakshya... Kavya comes there...

Kavya: Lucky baby tum iss behenji ke saath kya kar rahe ho?????Chalo let's go for a ride...

Lakshya:No Kavya aur tum jao yaha se mujhe Ragini ke saath project complete karna hai... Ragini main abhi aaya mujhe kuch kaam hai...

Kavya:You know what Behenji tum kuch bhi kar lo tum kuch nahi kar sakti...

Kabir comes there...
Kabir: Kavya... Lakshya aur Ragini best friends hai aur agar aaj Lakshya tumhare saath nahi hai uski wajah tum ho...

Kavya:Waise kab tak Lakshya is chipku ke saath rahenga...

Ragini: Kavya chup ho jao warna humse bura koi nahi honga...
Kavya was pushing her...

Kavya:Oh main daar gayi...She pushed her again... (Laughing)Kabir save me warna yeh mujhe Marengi...

Swara sees Ragini getting angry and her facial expressions were changing...
Swara rushes towards her and touches her and her body was burning hot...

Swara: Ragini shant ho jao...

Kabir:Come on Ragini dikha do iss tum kya ho...

Swara: Everyone out of here...
( and everyone leaves the canteen except Kabir) Mujhe Shantivan main Milo... Lakshya ko lekar aao

She disapperated with Ragini...
Shantivan:
Ragini was about to attack her...
Swara:(Took her wand) Expillirimus...
Ragini smashed the table with her fall...

Swara: Tweety...

With the noise everyone came down and Lakshya and Kabir entered...
Arnav:Yeh kya ho raha hai?????

Swara went towards Kabir...

Swara: Pagal ho gaye ho tum jab jante ho Ragini change hone wali hai toh kyu usse gussa dila rahe the...Aaj tumhare wajah se uski jaan bhi ja sakti thi...

Arnav: Kabir I didn't expect such foolishness from you...

Tweety:Swara Madam called Tweety...

Swara:Yes Tweety I want you to get the wolf's Bane potion...

Tweety:Yes Madam...
Tweety gets the potion...
Swara:Yeh Lo Ragini piyo isse...


Ragini takes a sip and spits the contents.
Ragini:Chee yeh kya hai??????Kitna Kawa Hai...

Swara:Tumhe kya nimboo pani laga... Chup chap piyo... Din main do baar...

Arnav :yeh Sab kya Hai... Swara...

Swara:Yeh potion Ragini ki madad karenga full moon tak...Full moon ko jab Ragini ka shaping honga toh she will be fine...

Saying this Swara goes back to her room...

Swara:Pata nahi ab mere saath kya kya honga...
Thinking this Swara goes to sleep...

Somewhere in the forest:
Arjun:Tum theek ho Sanskar...You have killed almost 2 elks and 2 deer

Sanskar:Haan theek hoon...Bas try kar raha hoon ki apni thirst ko control kar sakoon...

Arushi:Relax Raat Ko try hunting a bear or lion shayad aaram mile...

Sanskar:Pata nahi Arushi...Kya tumhe koi vision aaya????

Arushi: Nope... Don't worry everything will be alright...

Sanskar:I Hope so Chalo let's go back...main ab theek hoon...

They go back to Maheshwari Manor...
Sanskar's bedroom:
Sanskar:I am sorry Swara Main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahta tha par tum mujhe door raho yeh hi behter ...I hope kal ki subah ek nayi dosti ki shuruat lekar aaye...

Here I end the chapter 4...
How was it????Give me your views any suggestions...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Chapter 4 was nice...love harry's and rons care towards swara...arnav stil cared abt his sis...that's nice...loved the story..keep going
krishna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: bilvyina

Chapter 4 was nice...love harry's and rons care towards swara...arnav stil cared abt his sis...that's nice...loved the story..keep going
krishna

Thanks for your comments Krishna😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Awsome update
loved to see arnav & swara's frnds care for swara
story become more interesting
cont soon
loved it ...

thnks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Hi Mansi,😊
Ch-4 was awesome!!!👏
Again Swara and Arnav's quarrel and Arnav wants Swara to die??😕 Poor Swara.😭
Oh!! Now Alecto Carrow wants to kill Swara!!!!😡😭
I was good to see Harry, Ron and Hermione's care for Swara.😃 Even Arnav was caring when he heard that his li'l sis, i.e., Swara is in danger.😉
Now who's this Kavya?? Kabir's gf or Lucky's gf??😕 Khushi wants to talk with Swara, but Swara didn't alow her to talk with her due to Arnav. SwaSan r attracted towards each other.😳 Sanskar sees Maithli in Swara??😕 Mansi, plzz try to solve this Maithli part soon.😳 Oh! But after getting Swara's scent, Sanskar was thirsty for Human blood??😲 That's why he scolded her!!😲 Poor girl.😭 This Kavya is too bad!!😡 Telling bad words about Ragini!!😭 Swara got angry at everyone for provoking her sis.😉 Kya changes hone wali hai Ragini mein??😕 Tweety is s cute.😳 Aww! Sanskar felt bad for behaving rudely with Swara.😉 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome update
loved to see arnav & swara's frnds care for swara
story become more interesting
cont soon
loved it ...

thnks for pm

Anu Thank you so very much for your comments
I am happy that you are finding my story interesting
I will try to continue soon😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: spatika

awesome update.
continue soon

Thank you so much for your comments dear😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Mansi,😊
Ch-4 was awesome!!!👏
Again Swara and Arnav's quarrel and Arnav wants Swara to die??😕 Poor Swara.😭
Oh!! Now Alecto Carrow wants to kill Swara!!!!😡😭
I was good to see Harry, Ron and Hermione's care for Swara.😃 Even Arnav was caring when he heard that his li'l sis, i.e., Swara is in danger.😉
Now who's this Kavya?? Kabir's gf or Lucky's gf??😕 Khushi wants to talk with Swara, but Swara didn't alow her to talk with her due to Arnav. SwaSan r attracted towards each other.😳 Sanskar sees Maithli in Swara??😕 Mansi, plzz try to solve this Maithli part soon.😳 Oh! But after getting Swara's scent, Sanskar was thirsty for Human blood??😲 That's why he scolded her!!😲 Poor girl.😭 This Kavya is too bad!!😡 Telling bad words about Ragini!!😭 Swara got angry at everyone for provoking her sis.😉 Kya changes hone wali hai Ragini mein??😕 Tweety is s cute.😳 Aww! Sanskar felt bad for behaving rudely with Swara.😉 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

OMG Aheli thanks for your comments😉
First such a long comment on this story
Arnav and Swara's relationship will improve soon
Arnav's care is obvious
Alecto Carrow... I would say let the story continue for your answer
Kavya was Lucky's gf she is just a chippku irritating gf
Swara and Khushi will talk soon
Swasan are attracted yes soon but I doubt that they will be close due to Sanskar's thirst
And Ragini's transformation is soon
Thanks for your comments
And I will try to continue soon😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

OMG Aheli thanks for your comments😉
First such a long comment on this story
Arnav and Swara's relationship will improve soon
Arnav's care is obvious
Alecto Carrow... I would say let the story continue for your answer
Kavya was Lucky's gf she is just a chippku irritating gf
Swara and Khushi will talk soon
Swasan are attracted yes soon but I doubt that they will be close due to Sanskar's thirst
And Ragini's transformation is soon
Thanks for your comments
And I will try to continue soon😉


Haahaa!!!😆 Welcome.😃 Will eagerly wait for the next part.😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Nice chapter
Waiting for swasan freindship to start

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