Rang Barse- A Devakshi OS

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wonderful OS lily and Mahishee⭐️

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Mahadevi

@Morana

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Very very well written, DEv in your OS is a bit more mellow than he's in the show , though I do wish he was a little less khadoos in the show as well, so yeah I loved his characterisation the best in this OS/

Surprizingly you two are really in tune with each other in regards to writing because it never feels like two people has written it, the flow is totally unbroken and beautiful.

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1017333

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

You guys I loved it!
Plzz collaborate more and write more of this awesome stuff!
Dev's symbolism for holi and his angst regarding his childhood was so beautifully portrayed and
The thoughts which sona voiced out were lovely!
Thanks for the pm and keep it up!
Proud of you guys :)