Kahani DMG ki...hey raaam!

DOWN WITH DMG!
Ok not really....

But after last weeks pointless drama, this is all that is left to say. I am majorly disappointed with everything that happened on last weeks episodes and i think the creatives should literally go and drown themselves in chullu bhar pani.

So my question to everyone is if we were in place of the creatives...where would we take the storyline? I am not talking Fanfiction style description...but story ideas. Pankit visits the site and for all we know so could the creatives- it is after all the first link on google.

So fire away- Your ideas, and comment on mine as well...

My thoughts: Short term.
I would expect Armaan to not talk to Riddhima as much as he is now. I would expect him to TRY and revert back to old Armaan. TRYing to flirt, TRYing to annoy but unable to because he just cant anymore. Hence, he should be frustrated at himself for not being able to eradicate her from his life.

Riddhima- Should be cautious and observant of armaan. Was he serious? How hurt is he? Is he ignoring me? Remembering everything that happened between them. Trying to justify herself in her head but unable to. Hence the frustration of Armu not giving her any bhav + her own mixture of guilt bubbling inside her.

Then, One incident (after at least 2 weeks) is needed where she cries her heart out at something armaan says (snide comments about ridz's hypocrisy) or does(eg with another gf maybe?)...and reveals her reasons for doubting armaan eg 'tum kya samaghte ho, jhokein ki tarah aa kar tum kisi bhi ladki ko bas aise hi...main vaisi nahin hoon' and then armaan says 'mujhe pata hai tum vaisi nahin ho. tum to (lots of taarif of ridz and why he loves her)...aur is hi liye main tumse....tumse...pyar karta hoon. apne andar jhaank ke dekho riddhima, aur socho...' and then he leaves her (in the rain?) thinking.

Well, i have to go now- so ill add to this later.I have to say i cant think straight atm so the above may not be a great idea but hopefully we can toss a few ideas around and see where we would take this. Hopefully the creatives get some hint, somehow.😉

Please Do SHare...

Aah Erm... I have a bit to add on this and well dare I say, something I tend to disagree, but right now in a hurry ... will get back and chip in....

Yea good thought Krystall.. 👏 👏 👏

maybe most of our ideas wld be similar but anyways ...wht I wld feel

1) Arman, immediately after the Heer Ranjah eppy, cannot sprung back with his Masti attitude, he wld be little tensed, & aggressive, more with himself and tries to take it out on him, whenever he sees Ridzi, like banging the Locker door, or being very serious & curt with the patients that includes Nana, which hurts NAna, so thn he realises his mistake & explains to NANA, but doesn't ask for an opinion instead he wants to handle the situation himself altho NANA asks him to be his self.
Armaan tries to be his old self, but whenever he sees Ridzi, he losses his senses and gets so lovey dovey, he gives a very "I don't care attitude " with her.Th e pranks played are also very careful.He starts dating, but his mind is somewhere else always...so even his dates get bored with him.He doesn't date to make Ridz jealous, but to get away from the thoughts of Ridz,but he fails to do so. This irritates him a lot.

Riddhima-After the eppy, in her bedroom, she tries to recollect wht happenned...and feels that she had some feelings for him, but first she tries sort out what is stopping her.She finds that armu's behaviour is weird, from being very angry to suddenly being ok, infact givin no Damn abt her.SHe tries to be normal but feels very upset from inside.she feels he is connected to her only professionally.But not as a friend ...like b4, where he used to be for her everywhere.She tries to talk to him ,try to get into his convo, but he avoids her( that pains to him too)..

This continues for a week, then she witnesses how Atul is consistent about Angi & how much he loves her.Atul explains how he feels whenever she comes near to her , , even one of the patient who is the tarot card reader...(is bck in the hospt) tries to make her realise abt her feelings..or maybe Kirti in her own way gives a good advice to ridzi after watching the duo being away frm eachother ,then ridz gets reminded abt her romantic endeavours which she had with Armu & how much he cared abt her.She feels teh omens of the past of her mother's incident was holding her bck.Even she feels tht maybe arman is not very serious coz he never has expressed abt his love to her.
One fine day when all friends are sitting and discussing abt Love(atul, Armu ,sapna & Ridz)..armu shows his bitterness towards LOve, whereas Ridzi, tries to explain love is so pure ...etc..then pagers beep and atul & Sapna leave...and armu starts questioning wht wld she know abt love...thn she argues why wldn't she.Then he gets a call from his Gf & plans a date...Ridzi gets super duper J...Armu walks away she follows him, then she pulls him and takes him to teh terrace.And starts fightin abt why is he avoiding her & wht wld he kno abt love as his love changes like his T shirts , how can any1 trust a person like him who is never serious...and she wld say for all we know u wld never expressed to any1 abt love.HE sez Bas ...and then he sez u don't talk abt LOve, u have no feelings...I loved only one gurl in my life.Then in the argument she sez...Oh really then she must be MAD.Then he sez YEs, she is MAD , Ruthless, Feelingless...Just like U.she sez-Like me.She is a bit nervous now as he is coming very close to her with full anger till they reach the chhat deevar ..YES U!!! MAD ,RUTHLESS,FEELINGLESS...yet soo innocent, soo beautiful,soo caring, soo pure...soo REAL...sooo Riddhimma..his eyes very intense and steady Riddhimma its U( she still confused...but knew wht is coming..she wanted those words)....I LOVE U Riddhima...I really LOVE U.SHE SEZ..aRMAAN & CAST HER EYES DOWN..HE BRINGS HER CHIN UP SO THT SHE WLD C HIM.She sez armaan and then then her pager beeps...heheh.He pulls the pager and looks at it...she sez armaan mujhe jaana hai..he sez hmmmm very close..Basket I love U!!! she feels like a current passing thru everytime he sez tht..she loves it.She closes her eyes takes a deep breath, pulls the pager & open her eyes...I love u too,she sez huskily & runs Away.

I thought abt two more ways to bring them together...but I think This itself has become like a FF 😆 Maybe sometime later

How was it..was it very abrupt when Ridzi confesses????

Ash.

i really really wish that the creatives read these ideas

eagerly awaiting the disagreement sareeta! although I have to say if the disagreement is on my direction of the storyline- I myself am not happy with it. I wrote it @ 1 am as i was half asleep! Am pondering about a better direction.

Thanks for your fabulous contribution ashvez! You're right they are a bit similar. Liking the idea that their true feelings are revealed during an argument....since thats what they do best! and they start the conversation about love- that will let us know about the standpoint of other characters about love as well. kewl.

I cant believe no one else has any ideas?!?!?!? *shock horror* are you all happy with the way its going??? hehe.

i agree to a certain extent..

as in.. after armaan being madly hovering around ridhima.. and always day dreaming i couldnt believe that when he fell over her in the staircase scene he got angry i was expecting some romance not mind challenging dialougues ...

according me after the play

armaan : he should have not spoken to ridhima at all...he shud have ignored her or else been sarcastic to her.. make her realise that she has really lost armaan...

ridhima: in reaction to armaan should have been sensitive to armaan his feelings.. his ignorance she shud have tried talking to him ... manaofying him...and shud have questioned herself on her feelings for armaan ... that night she shud have remembered all her encounters and arguments with armaan

anjali: she shud have been angry with atul for spoiling her track in the play but she was just normal ... and she shud have been a lil more friendly or sensitive to atul... as per the continuation after the play...

atul: he shud have been overwhelmingly behind anjali taking care of her

and reminding of the bloopers ... i wonder who let anjali and atul out of the malfunctioning lift it seems as if the creatives are suddenly replaced the story dint show a sign of continuation...

sapna: i am just so annoyed with how her character is being shaped up cant she understand shubhankar is so much elder to her married with a daughter and even if he is a widower hes openly showing intrest in dr. keerthi... her 10 steps to be a gud mother and unecessary sympathy towards shubhankar is really annoying me its just showing hieghts of stupidity in her character rather than a sensitive sensible intern which initially her character was to be... its being senseless how abruptly shes out of her depression and all set to be a mother

thats all from me sorry if it did not make sense no offense meant just my version of of how the track shud have moved ...
love
anu

Thanks Krystall ..for ur lovely comments & appreciation...Initially I felt the confession was quick...but keeping the storyline which is currently goin on...I felt ...that the MOST AWAITED & VALUABLE WORDS have to come out...coz this chuppa chuppi is taking the nerves out of us.
And everytime I hear him asking"Tum mere Liye Kya mehsoos karte ho ,apne feelings ko Mat roko"...kills me.. 😡
So, I thought its high time for confession...I took the argument track...coz thats what is goin on now...so I can't suddenly make hot romance between them...dont ya think I was trying to tread very carefully...hahahhaha 😆.

the other track which I thought was little more romantic and ridzi falling all over armu...and both of them playing Hide-N-seek, I shld say Armu playin more...brings a smile when I think abt it. 😳 😳 😳

Ash.

I did like and didnt like what happened in DMG to last week's extent.

Armaan all over Ridz, and tensing thingy, didnt work out for me.

AtAn was good, worth watching.

Ghosh...Ridz ko kya hogaya hai?

Everything, was over the top last week, esp Sapna, what is wrong with her, one sentance that I will never get bored off...cant understand Shubhankar and Keerti

ashvez: hide and seek? Hmm....that one should be interesting. Do post.

@ anu: Yeh...pretty much similar stuff too huh? I agree on the sapna bit. Its childish and immature. How does she expect to be a good mother with that kind of childish behavior? And her eyes after reading that book....aaargh.

As for mine. I really cant think of a better track yet but I thought it was really important for Riddhima to break down and start crying and let everything out since she usually keeps her feelings bottled in?!?! My opinion.

last weeks epi's wer not ethical
it just possible
armaan wz shown so depressed wen she left
n then when she came back he's messin around!
n ridz first she says no n then she's tryin 2 make him angry
when people who r in luv r suppose 2 pain away not deliberately give it!