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Helee n Rhea.. finally..got ur name..nice to meet u too...

It is beautiful Helee and Rhea. It is very very very well written with the essence of SwaSan captured beautifully. 👏👍🏼

Originally posted by: swakriti

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First of all such a cute & beautiful story Helee & Rhea. Both of u r like jai nd veeru while writing a joint story, read all the three parts and i feel like begging u two for more. When both of U 2 team up, u r hit jodi just like swasan. Uzi dear such a beautiful shaayri.

Coming to the story, it is as beautiful as whatever they r showing in the show(the sab tera, soch na sake, swasan bg & sansku's bg sequence). I am imagining swara coming through a pipe just to be with her love, her soul Sanskaar. She so beautiful apologized for the mistakes she did unknowingly, that my heart went for her at that moment only. These two souls understands eachother so beautifully that u will fall in lv with them whenever u see them.

By the way my beautiful writers, swasan hv same kind of figure, so that shirt should hv suited her perfectly, perhaps technical error(omg i want swara to wear that black color shirt of sanskaar in the show too). Sahil dancing jhingalala was epic, sr cvs should tk some inspiration from u 2 & show us something like that in the show too.

And last but not the least thanks for the bed sharing scene of swasan, i always wanted to see them sharing a small bed 😆

Thank u again for writing this story 😊

Hello Pari 🤗 .. I really don't know what reply should I put here..sorry if it seems lame.. thanks for your such a wonderful comment dear 😳
She is my Helee partner 😃..thanks Pari.. Uzi's shayari was a wonderful addition
No one can be like Swasan .. they are very unique 😳

Thanks for reading the story. I am glad that you liked it.. Swara's apologies are always heart melting even in the show. Happy that you liked the pipe climbing scene and could connect it with the story😆..

No.. How can they have same kind of figure 😲.. Helly is so petite. But yes Sanskaar shirts would have suited Swara perfectly 😳 .. You liked Sahil's dancing 🤣.. we also wish something like this happens in SR . it would be too much fun

I am glad that you liked bed sharing scene of Swasan 😳 . I too want the same.. CV's please take a cue

Thank you for reading our story.. and leaving behind such a beautiful comment 😃
Love ya :)

Helle n rehea very nicely explained the hesitation of swara I liked the ts throughout...

Do come with more such ideas 😳

Originally posted by: Harmony...

Hello Pari 🤗 .. I really don't know what reply should I put here..sorry if it seems lame.. thanks for your such a wonderful comment dear 😳
She is my Helee partner 😃..thanks Pari.. Uzi's shayari was a wonderful addition
No one can be like Swasan .. they are very unique 😳

Thanks for reading the story. I am glad that you liked it.. Swara's apologies are always heart melting even in the show. Happy that you liked the pipe climbing scene and could connect it with the story😆..

No.. How can they have same kind of figure 😲.. Helly is so petite. But yes Sanskaar shirts would have suited Swara perfectly 😳 .. You liked Sahil's dancing 🤣.. we also wish something like this happens in SR . it would be too much fun

I am glad that you liked bed sharing scene of Swasan 😳 . I too want the same.. CV's please take a cue

Thank you for reading our story.. and leaving behind such a beautiful comment 😃
Love ya :)

I have a proof.. see this pic Pari .. Swara is petite :)

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Yaar why you guys ended this story
Please make it a ss it is a superb story please please
Superb update
Swasan conversation was loved it ❤️
Please continue soon

Hello Sujay :)
Thanks for reading our story.. I am glad that you liked it 😃
We wrote the whole story in one go.. it was actually meant to be an OS but then it got very long.. Will see what we can do :)

Thanks for your comment :)

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Helee n Rhea.. finally..got ur name..nice to meet u too...

Well part 2 n 3;were brilliantly penned down...u wrote dialogues between swasan soo beautifully..sansku was at his teasing best..even swara was not less.. she equally tried to counter him...it was cute..swara wearing sansku shirt n him drooling..n finally swasan slept together..wondering what happen next if someone came to meet sansku n found them together in this situation..it would be embarrising...

Overall paisa vasool..

Love

Talia

Hello Talia 😃
Thanks for reading the story.. I am glad that you liked all the updates
I am happy that you liked Swasan's conversation. Afterall the thing which was most needed in this track was a proper communication and confrontation of Swasan.

In someone enters in the room later.. It would be much more embarrassing for them than for Swasan. If it is MM family then they will stand as silent pillars in the hospital room and just stare at Swasan (like it happens nowadays in show).
Thank you for dropping such a paisa vasool and a beautiful comment here 😳
Love..
Rhea

Originally posted by: MishtyShona

It is beautiful Helee and Rhea. It is very very very well written with the essence of SwaSan captured beautifully.👏👍🏼

I so so so wish the SR cv's had shown something to this effect. You ppl wrote much much much better than professional script writers. They learn a thing or two from you guys.🤗🤗

Do consider writing another installment wherein the morning after is described. I would love to especially see Sujju ka reaction on seeing SwaSan together.😉😆

thank you Mishty .. glad that u liked the story 😳.. thanks for reading it :)

SR CV's have lost their brains.. anyone in the forum can write a better story and dialouges than them.. We will teach them.. woh bhi free me😆.. on a serious note.. they can write good scenes .. but are not writting it now

Will think about the last part 😳... we didn't wanted to include any KMH between Swasan .. so excluded her..

thanks Mishty for your beautiful comment 🤗 ..

Originally posted by: elsanna

Helle n rehea very nicely explained the hesitation of swara I liked the ts throughout...

Do come with more such ideas 😳

thank you Tanishka🤗.. glad that u liked the TS.. :)
sorry for late reply.. will surely do 😳
once again thanks for leaving a beautiful comment