FF Bitter Sweet Symphony-Thread 2. ch 33 - pg 128

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Silverrmoon

@Silverrmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#311

Hello Lara 😃 thank you so much for the PM...wow you are so talented my dear...such a brilliant chapter...loved the way shravan took care small needs of sumo...and they way sumo felt peace, very safe with him being near him...she could peacefully sleep after so many sleepless nights thanks to sharvan who has been there for her...I'm loving each and every chapter of yours...this is such a beautiful update and it gives a magical feeling...aacha hai pillow shravan bana hai 6 foot pillow 😆...once again this is a master piece and I'm always in awe of your work...Till then take care.

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Crazy4edkv

@Crazy4edkv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#312

beautifully written as usual !!!

thanks lara for the update

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Caught up with the last 2 chapters...phenomenal progress...at least on Shravan's side. He has come to know about her reasons for the marriage...the loan...the payoff! But poor Suman, she is still int he dark...still struggling with her pain, and her survival, and her ability to pay him back every dime of the money.

I am so looking forward to the next parts...dying to see how Shravan keeps detached...or how much he will be drawn to her...to her innocence...her pain...her suffering.😛

Plz update soon!

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ast.1302

@ast.1302

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#314

This is going amazingly good..n it is sooo afdictive that i read all d chapters in one go..it is literally breath taking..commendable creativity..looking forward to d next chapter..update soon..n pls PM me..i have both liked n commented..a tight hug to u..loads of love

~Aisha

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coolgirl7

@coolgirl7

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#315

awesome update👏👏 cant wait for suman's reaction when she wakes up...

plz update soon

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Aayushi

@aayra24

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#316

Hey ..just came across your thread and let me tell u it was AMAZING

Thanks alot for the efforts u are putting in

Don't forget to pm me

Waiting for the update..

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Palak

@Sanhkika

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#317

dear waiting for next part update soon plss
ur all part is like waoo

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#318

*I claim all copyrights of this work. Do not plagiarize this story, no part / scene / dialogue of it may be copied, reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means without my (Clara Ricks's) written permission. Plagiarizing my works will be taken as an offence and will be dealt with properly, and know that it is punishable by the forums and law. If you find anyone copying my works, please do let me know.*

Dedicating this chapter to - " miss_writer " 🤗

Chapter 23

*Removed*

Obviously, there would be another heated conversation and that too probably with the whole hospital stuff included in it. 😈 (I totally exaggerated about the whole stuff thingy :P )

And friends! I really... really... am sorry for these late updates this days! Reasons for this inconvenience are so many that I wouldn't irritate you by pointing them all out. I just want to say that I'm trying to update faster than this, please have patience with me. 😭

Pm's will be sent tmrw individually to those who have both liked and commented on the last chapter. So, please don't forget to like and comment! Tell me if you've enjoyed this chapter, and if you did then which part is your most favorite? And can you feel the slight change in air, regarding Suman's emotions or feelings or whatever you name it? And sorry for the lack of romantic moments after Suman woke up 😆 , this romance needs some time to develop and a slow burn is always the most awesome, right? 😉

Take care, love you all.

-Lara.

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#319

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Beautiful Update yet again❤️

What stole this update for me was the way you described Suman's feelings while Shravan slept beside her and she did not know. Extremely beautifully penned.

The way Shravan was concerned for Suman cause of her nightmares gave me feels.

I loved the ending specially,lets see how Suman deals with it.Bring it on😎

Needless to say you never fail to surprise me every time with your update.You are one of my favorite writer her.

Update Soon.

Edited by SleepyPsycho - 9 years ago