ts- mujhko bhaave galliyan teri galliyan epilogue on pg 74 updt on25/9 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
hahagagaha doodh wala bhaiyaa its was so funny his obe liners like a perfect love sick tho i love them
lafanga ishita said to him mihir darr hi gya ki kahin mihika toh nhi
moti aunty ne kya daanta vechare ko
loved the update di teri galliyan ufff
continue soon waiting eagarly for nxt update
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Posted: 9 years ago
SHOT 2


Raman- main dhoodh wala dikhta hoon tumhe.he said making a dirty face.

That's when ishita look at him from top to bottom.he was a handsome man with a perfect physique wearing a grey shirt along with black formals.his cute dimples were adding charm to his personality.he has a personality to attract anyone in a single meeting and ishita was no exception.she was just looking at him all lost.he was looking too cute with an irritated face of being called as milk man.she smiled a little seeing his irritated face.

He asked again not getting any response.

Raman- bolo,do I look like a dhoodh wala.I mean itna handsome dhoodh wala hota hai kya.

Ishita trance was broken by his voice.

Ishita- (st)ohho toh janab khud ko hrithik roshan samajhte hai.let's see what he wants.

Ishita made a straight face and asked- who r u.

Raman- arey main,pehchana nahi mujhe.

Ishita nodded in no.

Raman- arey abhi savere hi toh mile the hum.

Ishita- hum,savere,kab.

Raman- arey jab tum coffee pee rahi thi balcony.someone waved from down and tum lafanga keh kar ander chali gayi thi .main wahi hoon jisne hi kiya tha.lafanga.he said blushing like a newly wed bride making Ishita some at his cuteness.


Ishita supressed her smile and asked- so may I know ki Mr lafanga yahan kya karne aaye hai.

Raman- tumhara naam janne.

Ishita- kyun.

Raman- fir karni hai.

Ishita- fir? Kyun.Maine kya kiya .

Raman- churaya hai.

Ishita- kya.

Raman- iss lafange ka dil.he said smiling.

Ishita smiled a little hearing his words and said- aisa hai naa lafanga ji.mere padosi bahut khatarnaak hai.agar Maine chillaya aur woh aa gaye naa toh saari aashiqui chaad deni hai.

Raman- aisa mat keh madrasan. I have met ur neighbor. That moti aunty,I was so afraid of her.I thought what if she sat on me.

Ishita laughed hearing his words while he was smiling ruffling his hair.hearing her laughter her neighbour open the door and the same aunty came out .

Seeing Raman that aunty said- what happened ishu,is he troubling u.shall I call the watchman or police.ae ladke chal bhaag yahan se .she said in a go.

Ishita look at Raman ,he made a dirty face making ishita smile more.

Ishita- no no aunty.I know him.mera pehchaan wala hai.

Raman smiled hearing this and said- haan aunty,main jaanta hoon ishu ko.he said trying to keep his hand on her shoulder.

Ishita look at him and glared him.she thought, bahut uchal rahe ho.abhi sahi karti hoon.

She said smiling- aunty he is our new milk man.Raman made a puppy face hearing that while ishita chuckled under her breath .

That aunty scanned him from top to bottom and said- dhoodh wala hai.dekhne se toh nahi lagta.hoga mainu ki.but where is milk.he is empty handed.

Ishita- woh aunty he has come to collect money today .jaa raha hai.

Aunty- OK but don't talk with him laughing so loud.koi sunega toh kya kahega that u r gossiping with a milkman.she said making a dirty face.while Raman glared at ishita.

Ishita- OK aunty I will look after it.

Aunty- OK ishu.saying so she went inside.

Ishita laughed and said- now go from here Mr lafanga.

Raman made a face and come inside her house pushing her a little.he came inside and sat on the couch keeping his hand on his face with a frown looking like a baby.

Ishita- ae hello.I saved u but that doesn't mean I am interested in u.jao yahan se warna I will call security and police.

Raman- bula lo.I don't care.do I look like a milkman.main bechara PSR enterprises the marketing head,Raman Kumar bhalla,mujhe dhoodh wala bana diya.I am very angry and not going anywhere.koi apne Raman ke saath aisa karta hai kya.huh bolo.he said with a cute pout.

Ishita was just smiling and looking at him.who is he,don't know from where he came and claiming himself as her Raman.but one thing was sure that this handsome hunk has some kind of charm which she is not able to resist.his every action was making it impossible for her to resist him.

Ishita came and sat beside him and said- ek minute,apne Raman.yeh kab hua.

Raman blushed and said- if u r my would ne wife then I belong to u only naa.

Ishita- ur would be wife.yeh kab bani main.and don't u even know the name of ur would be wife.

Raman- yes of course, u r Mrs Raman Kumar bhalla. Of course soon to be.

Ishita- this is not my name.so don't act over smart and go from here.she said angrily.

Raman folded his hand and said- gusse se bologi toh nahi jaaunga,pyaar se bologi toh mar bhi jaaunga.

Ishita smiled a little and said- please go.i am alone today.and if anyone see u here then they will start gossiping.please raman.

Raman- ok,saying so he gave ishita his hand to drag him out.

Ishita- what this.

Raman- drag me out of yr house.

Ishita-why,cant u go urself .

Raman- i dont feel like going leaving u alone naa.so u please shoo me out.

Ishita - pagal lafanga.she said dragging him out of her house.

He hold her hand and pinned her to the wall.he softly caress her face and tuck a single strand behind her ear and said huskily in her ears- but I like that name only.bye soon to be Mrs bhalla.he said pecking her hair softly and went before ishita can react.

Ishita was standing still in her place remembering his talk and touch when her trance was broken by her original dhoodh wala ,when he said,didi ji dhoodh le lo.ishita smiled at him and took the milk.

On the other hand,Raman was on nine clouds after talking to her.yes he still don't know her name but he was feeling great after talking to her.he went to his house happily and hugged toshiji tightly.

Toshiji- oye puttar.kya hogaya why u r so happy.

Raman- I met her maa today.he told her excitedly.

Toshiji- kisse puttar .

Raman- teri hone wali bahu se.u want me to get married naa ,today I met her.


Toshiji-kya tu sach keh raha hai.mera puttar meri bahu pasand kar laya hai.oye good good.kaisi hai meri bahu.

Raman- she is very beautiful maa.

Toshiji what her name.

Raman- I don't know but know her address.naam bhi pata kar lunga.kab tak bachegi mujhse madrasan.

Toshiji- madrasi hai.

Raman- haan ,koi problem.

Toshiji- oye nahi.mere puttar ne pasand kiya toh no problem. She said smiling and Raman took her in tight hug.

At night ,ishra were lost in each other's thought.ishita was smiling remembering his words while Raman was excited to meet her next day.soon they slept in each others thought.

Next day,Ishita came out of her washroom wrapping towel on her head ,after doing a little puja ,she came to the balcony with a mug of coffee.when stand and start sipping the coffee as usual when she saw someone waving his hand from down wearing a leather jacket.

Ishita look keenly and saw it was her lafanga aka Raman.it has been rained all night so the weather was little chilly and foggy ,he was feeling cold and rubbing his hands feeling cold still he was there just to have a glance of her.she went inside in place of waving hi.Raman's face fell seeing her going inside.

He was sitting there trying to get a glance of her when a little boy came with a mug of coffee and give it to him.

Raman smiled and look up only to find her standing there smiling and signalling him to have it.he took it smiling and soon they both were busy in enjoying their coffee looking at each other.


Ajj din chadheya tere rang warga - (2)
Phul sa hai khila aaj din
Rabba mere din yeh na dhale, woh jo mujhe khwaab mein mile
Use tu lagaade abb gale, tenu dil da waasta
Rabba aaya dar de yaar de, saara jahaan chod chad ke
Mere sapane sawaar de, tennu dil da waasta
Ajj din chadheya, tere rang warga

(Baksha gunaaho ko, sunake duwaao ko
Rabba pyaar hai tune sab ko hi de diya
Meri bhi aahon ko, sun le duwaaon ko
Mujhako woh dila maine jisako hai dil diya) - (2)
Aasmaan pe aasmaan usake de itana bata
Woh jo mujhko dekh ke hase, pana chahu raat din jise
Rabba mere naam kar use, tenu dil da waasta
Ajj din chadheya, tere rang warga

(Maanga jo mera hai, jaata kya tera hai
Maine kaun si tujhase jannat maang li
Kaisa khuda hai tu, bas naam ka hai tu
Rabba jo teri itani si bhi na chali) - (2)
Chaahiye jo mujhe kar de tu mujhako ata
Jiti rahi saltanat teri, jiti rahe ashiqui meri
Dede mujhe jindagi meri, tenu dil da waasta
Rabba mere din yeh na dhale, woh jo mujhe khwaab mein mile
Use tu lagaade abb gale, tenu dil da waasta
Rabba aaya dar de yaar de, saara jahaan chod chad ke
Mere sapane sawaar de, tennu dil da waasta
Ajj din chadheya, tere rang warga - (3)
Din chadheya, tere rang warga
Ajj din chadheya


That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for ur responses.


Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice start dii
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm
Sorry for the late reply
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Posted: 9 years ago
excellent update di
interesting start
loved it loads

for raman.
its love at first sight
he has become crazy in love

the scene with the neighbour is funny

and the ultimatum is ishita thought raman to be a milk man
poor raman

waited for 2 hours
drank lot of tea
only to be called as dhoodh bhayya by ishita
i pity him

thanks for pm di
please update soon

SORRY for the late
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Posted: 9 years ago
haha...
funny update...
he fall in love with her in very 1st sight only...
hahaha..
cute he is..
hiz bd mihirs scene was nice..he again goes to her place bt was lock..
nd old lady scold. him..lolzz
poor him..he ran frm der..
he waited fr her..nd 10 cup chai pi li...baapre...
pakka diabetes ho jayega RKB ko...
bt she came..
nd he finally ring the bell..
nd she thought its doodh wala bhaiyya...
hahaha.. really Funny update di...
hope ishi will not b rude to him...
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb lovely
he fall in love at first sight love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
res
unres

awww..
he is soo cute re..
soo soo cute...
he was irritated whn ishu called him doodhwala...
ishu is impressed with hiz charm..
nd was smiling...
loved that part..
nd dat aunty..
lollzz..
she is protective abt ishu it seems..
nd RKB went inside without invitation..
Mrs. RKB [:->]
loved that part
ishu is suljhi hui ladki..
loved the way she react whn he was behaving like totally lost aashiq..she dint panicked..
that was nice..
toshiji to accepted her..so der is no problem from RKBs side..
hope ishu k side se bhi koi problem na ho..
whts her background actually.. its suspense actually.. we dnt knw anything except appa is retired person..she is leaving alone der..
wht abt amma!
is she alive?
vandu bala???
nd wht abt mihika!
whd did she live!with ishu only kya??
reveal that soon di...
and update next asap...
its goona b my favourite story...
want next asap..
plzzz plzzz
Edited by Sk-Sharmin - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cute update
Raman doodh wala...hahah
Ishuta too lost in him..handsome hunk..
Aunty came again..ishita saved him..
He is so cute..he went inside ..his cute pout..
He has decided she is his wud b wife
He came again n waved her hii..
She sent him coffee..awww
Loved it
Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update di
Raman fall in love with her at first sight
Interesting
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
raksha what a surprise???i can't imagine abhi yeh update milne ki but kya likha h chooo cute update,,,m loving it really...

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