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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Wonderful chapter dear
Interesting story
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Amazing chappy...nice start
Usually jalal is a spoiled boy
But here Jo is the spoiled one
Its very different story
Eager to read more
Thanks for pm
Update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Amazing chapter dr n thnxx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Most of boys who get problem but you in ur story its girl woow interesting dear
Update
Thanku
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Well only one chapter is done, so will not comment longer... As I want to know something more before commenting on it!😉
The prologue was something very intriguing and catchy; but what has increased my interest is your note before first chapter!😲 I really want to know how you unfold the story!

Jodha's character sketch as a spoilt brat is so far realistic, now waiting to see Jalal in this story!
Edited by Shinning_Stuti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Nice update
Grandpa has given the ultimatum to Jo
What a weird requirement of a husband in matrimonial posted by Jo
Precap is still more interesting "it is a job" 😆
Post soon..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
thrilling concept dr. A feeling of suspense is coming... Waiting to read more. Plzzz update faaast. Its a really nice story. Plz don't stop it. Plz plz plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HOPE TO GIVE YOU THE NEXT PART TOMORROW OR WEDNESDAY...STAY TUNED.
IWANT TO FINISH THIS FIRST SO I DELAYED MY OTHER STORIES.






CHAPTER 2

PART 1

Jalal had come before 1pm itself. Mohan open the door for him. He open his chappal before entering the house. He felt the floor very cold. His legs started to shiver with the cold floor below his feet. It's the Italian Marbled floor.

Mohan asked Jalal to seat in the drawing room and went to inform Jodha. He stopped before put his little dirty discoloured bag on the soft sofa. So put down on the floor. He has first time came to this rick family. This house looks like his deep sleep fantasy. So he have to take extra care and precautions. He sat on the sofa in one corner composed and feeling a bit uncomfortable. In his surrounding all the luxury items making him uncomfortable. Unhabituated. He was feeling cold. First, its January, secondly, it's a lonely room with too much precious possessions all around. But he was feeling more hilliness not for all this but for nervousness.

"Jalaluddin?"

Jodha's voice have such sensuality which can easily attract people. He turn around slowly he nods as yes.

Now both have their seat face to face. Taking her skin fit denim legs on another she closely observe Jalal. "No, there is something about him, which is not in the photograph. There is a reckless beauty covering by the colourless dress.

"When will the interview start?" Jalal asked.

"Interview? You aren't here for any interview."

""It's a job for me mam, job of a husband. But I don't have any problem with that. I live in Bidhannagar, with a friend. I cook for him, wash his cloths. And also do those works which he can't do. Basically I am leaving with him not like his friend, but as his servant. In return he gave me room to live and food to eat. I think in your place my duty will be the same. Isn't it?"

She don't know y but some where she don't like him calling himself a servant. She feel a little bad for him. But she smiled heartily. Jalal is not a simple guy as she thought. He has a proudness of his poorness. He didn't have any shame to call himself a poor person.

"Look like you are living pretty good. Then why you left the job?" she asked.

"Who didn't want more luxury mam? I am not different than others. I have come with my luggage. If u give me this job I would like to join from this moment." He pick up his bag and say, "I have 1 set of shirt and pant, a towel, a toothbrush and toothpaste, a pen and a copy, and my innerwear. In my left pocket of my kurta I have my moneybag. That's it. These only the thing I can say as my own."

"Fine, if you think this as your interview, and being my husband is as a job for you, then I don't want to change your mind-set. I will not ask you any GK type questions. But I will play a game with you."

Jalal smile a bit, and thought, this is all a game for you.' If this not a game for you. You will never ever call me with that weird advertisement to be your dependent husband.' Jalal thought.

"Which type of game?"

"you have to tell a story. In which we both will be the central character. If in the end there will be a happy ending, you are lucky. Otherwise..."

"Unlucky." Jalal said in low voice.

Listening to his words she smiles a bit. Then continue, now its 1:3 pm. You have to end the story in between 4:30 pm. You have only 3hrs. And one more thing, in between I will interrupt and I will disorder your story and you have start from the point I left."

Jalal got a bit angry. if you don't want to marry, then why you playing game with the values of marriage?'

"Shall we start?' Jodha said stopping Jalal's thought.

"The characters of us will be the same? Like we are?" jalal asked hesitatingly.

"not necessary. Let me help you. Suppose you are a marketing manager of an MNC. High post. Big money."

Jalal smile a bit. Itsd only a character, not himself. He passed his graduation but there is no such job he can get or he can be given. He is a unwanted person among all those selfish people. No one give him a good job. Otherwise he had never beenhee. Being someone's rented husband. This is called a GAME.

A GAME OF LIFE.

"And you will be?"

Jodha smiled a bit looking at Jalal said, "Escort"

Jalal railed his eyebrow. His eyes gone wide in shock.

"You make my work more difficult for me in the start itself. You have choose such a character where you and I can't even meet."

"I have made your work easy jalal. Corporate house & escort service, is just like Aag or Ghee. Ek dusre ke kareeb ate hi chingaari badhti jati hai... para chadne lagta hai. Sensex ki bhi or bistar ki bhi." She said in his ears in huskey voice.

Jalal gulp his asliva. She was so close to her. But he can't be the one. He is not in her level.

He start the story...

Precap:

The story contains LOVE SEX BETRAIL AND REVENGE

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2 part 2

the Story part is in red colour and the Present part is in black...so when u read make that in mind.😉

hope you will not offended...


contains a slight 18+content

One day Jalal and Ritesh were drinking whiskey. Jalal is not drunkard but just for his friend Ritesh. Today he pick a glass of whiskey.

"have ever have sex?" Ritesh asked.

No, jalal never experienced that. Not only because he didn't want ot have this but didn't got chance to explore the world of pleasure. He want to have sex with a person he loved. Not someone random. So still now he isdecentand determind towardshis job an lifr. Ritesh nad jalal are friends for many years. He is a xecutive officer of another MNC.

"kargea? Ek accha maal hai."

Jalal looka t him listening the word "maal"

"tune kabhi kia hai kya?" jalal asked.

"yeh to daily routine me ata hai yaar mera. But its not nessecity for me. Ajkal kahi din hog aye, khudko bhari mehsoos ho raha hai. But koi to mile jo halka karde. Ajkal hai hi nahi koi accha. Ab yeh ek hai. To chahta hu, mere pehle ekbar tu trial karke dekh le."

Jalal didn't say a word. His ears are burning listening those cheap words. Ritesh look at him for a moment, then giving a naughty smile and said, Life is what you make it. Ganguly become Prince of Kolkata with playing by left hand and you only give milk on gods head. A*****e!!

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Jalal have started to arrenge the storyline for the upcoming story.

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That day he said, "Yes I will do."

Ritesh look at him like he have never seen him before. Then laughing slightly asked, "kar payega?"

"Yes" Jalal only nodded. He have to do this otherwise Ritesh will spread the news of him being a purely virgin being in corporate world and didn't get marry still in this age or he will make fun of him saying him impotent.

Ritesh throw his mobile towards Jalal. "There are some clippings. Before going you should do your homework."

Jalal was today going as per their plan. 5th floor. in the lift his heart started to pumping hard and hast. Beating was increasing by crossing each floor. In some time he is going to sleep with a girl, which he never thought in his wildest dream. He was sweating in excitement and nervousness. Yesterday till morning 3-4pm by watching those clipping he arranged everything. Where to start and where to end.

Lift door opened Jalal hurriedly going out of the life, just then he hear a voice.

"Its 4th floor."

Jalal look at the girl turning around. A boy entered the lift and gave her a naughty smile. They know the under business was going here.

Lift reach on 5th floor. And Jalal without waiting for a second hurriedly went out. Already 2 people saw him. He literally running through the corridor. He don't know where he was going?

Ritesh said him yesterday, "booking have done. You have to go t the reception and say your name." that time Jalal was too much nervous. Don't know how to face a girl and afterwards.

Receptionist person asked his name. he was stammering.

"iii am Jaa...jaalaallluddin Mmmuhammmad!!!!"

Receptionist look at the register then said the room number. When he going, receptionist said, "have a good time sir!!" and smiled naughty. Jalal closed his eyes and went towards the lift.

Here he is standing in front of the room. Pressed the bell. But where is the girl?

"Jalal? Jalaluddin Muhammad?"

Jalal got a little shock by turning around. That girl in the lift. Don't know to say yes' or no' so he just nodded nervously.

"Come in" she open the door fully.

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It's been 10 minutes she went to bathroom. He was sitting and having a glass of water. He don't know why but just looking at her his all nervousness has gone for some time. But now she isn't in front of him, his nervousness again getting heavy on him.

With the click of the bathroom door lock he look up. She changed the dress. And suddenly it crossed the modesty and taken towards the danger line.

Jalal's eyes were scanning those area which is 144 areas for every male. Its not that Jalal's eyes never went to those area. In his college life he have noticed by corner of his eyes to the females who was sitting in his front. But its for the first time its so close, so clear to him.

Jodha sat in front of him crossing her legs. Yes Jodha is the name she carry. Btu this must not be her real name. in this profession the y have to change two things in the basis of client. One, name and two, clothes.

She came towards him. Her breast line is now clearly visible to him. His heart beating furiously again.

"Get bold dear. The beast inside you to wake up. Wake up your desire fresher. For this two hours I am all for you. Jalal." She said seductively.

From her mouth the word Jalal' made him suddenly wild and bold. Throwing her body on the bed, detaching her every cloth from there body, he started to explore her. Explore the world of desire passion and pleasure. His lips wetting her body with wild smooched. Her moan give him the courage to move further. The moment he entered her, her warm core gave him the pleasure of losing his virginity. Though it was very much painful to him. Stoking her in out hard, hearing her moan with his name make him to feel like he can live his life being in her arms for ever. He didn't have tasted this part of life. Both of their body started to melt each other, becoming one. Unknowing to them they are becoming one to be together always.

Precap:

In story

Aftermath

Jalal's shocking confession to Ritesh

Preasent

Jalal and Jodha's some little talk and the story continues.

Edited by Senapatichandri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unres Di
Nice chappy Di
Felt bad for jalal
What kind of game is this just kidding
A story gonna start
Update soon Di

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