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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
amazing
loved it
JJ non jhok
haha
update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Hmm. ..it's something which till date have not read
Each and every part is making is desperate to know what will happen next
His story I think will impress jodha in all the way
And she will agree herself to marry him .
Update soonish buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Its nice but I shocked jalal its real imeagin
Continue dr
Waiting what next ?
Thanku
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
This chapter had some x factor to attract a reader with a 'distracting' attraction. It was raw, bold and dark... and the touch of mystery makes it more deadly.
I think the most interesting part of this story is the way it's getting unfold slowly. A story inside a story! Imagining how it would have been portrayed in a film. 😆 😃

I don't know but can have a wild guess that this Jalal has some connection with the story's Jalal? And somehow, at some point this game will become relevant to Jodha's life?😕 Hmmm I know I am very bad in guessing stories. 😆 So I must be wrong. 🤣

Update this one soon! The others can wait. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
What an amazing story dear.Totally different concept I have read your another stories also all are amazing.keep it up dear.pls update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
amazing
Jalal's story was out of the world
hahaha
update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Nice story.all chapters r awsme.now d game bil strt.thanx frr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

This chapter had some x factor to attract a reader with a 'distracting' attraction. It was raw, bold and dark... and the touch of mystery makes it more deadly.

I think the most interesting part of this story is the way it's getting unfold slowly. A story inside a story! Imagining how it would have been portrayed in a film. 😆 😃

I don't know but can have a wild guess that this Jalal has some connection with the story's Jalal? And somehow, at some point this game will become relevant to Jodha's life?😕 Hmmm I know I am very bad in guessing stories. 😆 So I must be wrong. 🤣

Update this one soon! The others can wait. 😆



(in bold) no dear... its just a story but jodha will deeply affected by this story at the end...just have patience...😉

amake dom nite de yaar..dudine duto chapter dilam...r parchina type korte😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Awesome update
Bechara jalal..he is educated but still he don't have a job
He is living like a servant
Jo told him to tell a story

You updated the second part also
But now I'm commenting on the first part 😆
Sorry for being late
I will read the second part & comment
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Story mein story
Quite interesting
Loved it ...waiting for next part
Thanks for pm

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