SS:Tackle with Love FINAL UPDATES PG 15 FEB 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone I started this Short Story, I hope you guys like it .I didn't use many of the characters in the show.Suman family only consist of her mother and grandfather. As for Shravan his parents are together ,there's no Nirmala and Ramnath issues in this SS . Hope you all give you feedback😊*Sorry for any grammatical mistakes im a bit rusty😆

Tackle with Love

In Delhi there was a famous hotel called The Exquisite Palace, almost all the rich celebrities stayed in this hotel for its best quality and comfort. It was best known for their main floor restaurant they made the best delicate dessert and the main course was to die for. Suman Tiwari worked there as a waitress, she was fun, loving and very beautiful. She had this charm that made all the clients awed of her .She would get tipped really well for her first class service and her genuine hospitality.

Suman looked like a normal girl with a normal life, but that wasn't the case. As Suman was growing up her parents would argue and fight all the time and it affected her a lot. She became a bully at school she took her anger and frustration on poor little nerds who did nothing to her yet she would mock and laugh at them with her gang .Everyone knew her for Sumo, she was always in detention and got in trouble for not doing her homework. During her last year of high school her whole life flipped upside down, her father left her and her mother and never came back. Suman wasn't stupid; she knew her father was having an illicit relationship with someone else. This incident changed Suman forever; she became mature and responsible really fast. She promised herself to always take care of her mother Priya who was living with lots of regrets and pain. They moved in with Priya's father and Suman grandfather who lived alone in his Tiwari Killa . He was so happy to have them in his house and gave them so much love and support .The years passed Priya became a school teacher and Suman was school trying to get her economics degree, though her passion was cooking .She always tried new recipes and they were loved by her family who encouraged her to keep trying new dishes .They were all content and shared a beautiful bond with each other that no one could break.

One day Priya had a stroke and Suman dropped all her studies and started working at the hotel full time to pay off for all the treatments. Her mother was much more important to her than her education. It's been two years and Priya was recovering really well she started speaking coherently , her facial movements and arms movements were significantly better yet mother she was suffering from paraplegia and was on a wheelchair. But Suman never stopped hoping and was never going to give up on her mother. Suman was her mother's best motivator. She was taking care of both her mother and grandfather who was quite independent only when needed food or his morning tea.

Suman was rushing out work ,it was almost 8pm and her mother was always worried .She came in the house only to see Priya on the sofa knitting away while watching her favourite Oprah Winfrey episodes .

"Hello my beautiful Mama!" She said tightening her arm around her, Priya smile as Suman sat next to her.

"Hello Beta how was your day?"

"Good, did Preeta come today?" Preeta was a caregiver for her mother as well as a housekeeper.

"Yes and said that tomorrow she can't some, it her wedding anniversary "Sumo couldn't stop but chuckle, Preeta was really a funny character .She was also a good friend.

"By the way Mrs.Chada called, her son is ready to married "Priya teased her daughter

"Oh Please Mom you know how much I hate that Chada family, they do nothing but gossip about others .And about their son ..." Sumo made a vomiting expression "Never happening"

Priya laughed "Ok Ok fine, but tell me do you have someone you like?"

"No mom it's like the millionth time you're asking me this week When there is someone I promise I will tell you"

"Promise?"

"Promise" Suman said smiling "Where's Nanu?"

"Upstairs sleeping after listening to Kishore Kumar's golden songs for the 100 time "They both smiled knowing how fond he was of his record player

Precap

"OK so what can I get you guys?"She said sweetly

"First tell me if you recognize this guy!"Pushkar asked with a wide grin.

Shravan was reading the menu giving his brother a cold look .Suman smiled confusedly "Umm Sorry I really don't know."

Shravan gave her an annoyed glance not giving any importance

"You're giving up so easily, this is so unlike you ..."

"Look pushkar I have so many tables to serve, I really don't have time for this
"

"Ok Bhaiya tell her who you are "

"I don't find the need to tell her who I am!"

Suman noticed his curt tone and looked at him intently

Pushkar finally told her "Sumo meet Shravan Malhotra, remember the nerd you always teased "

Shravan...Sumanfroze on her spot, she felt a huge guilt rising within her...After everything
she did to him in the past obviously he wont be friendly with her

Part 2https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-duje-ke-vaaste/4678191/ss-tackle-with-love-final-updates-pg-15-feb-11?pn=3

Part 3https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-duje-ke-vaaste/4678191/ss-tackle-with-love-final-updates-pg-15-feb-11?pn=4
Part 5https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-duje-ke-vaaste/4678191/ss-tackle-with-love-final-updates-pg-15-feb-11?pn=8
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nileshni679 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start. Really want to know how the story will unfold. Please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is Amazing👏
Thank God,For a Change Ramu is not Evil here😆
Precap is Bang😃
plz plz update Soonish😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing story
Totally different yet same
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nileshni679

Nice start. Really want to know how the story will unfold. Please continue

Hi Thank you so much ,hope you will like the ucoming parts as well :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .shivi396

This is Amazing👏
Thank God,For a Change Ramu is not Evil here😆
Precap is Bang😃
plz plz update Soonish😛

Hi Thank you so much I just wanted to keep it simple. The story is a little different you will see 😳
Edited by billo77 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gurveen

Amazing story
Totally different yet same
Continue soon

Hi thank you :D yes Suman doesn't have a pct but you will see a similar context to the show
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing start
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you Eternity:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alone111

Sounds intrstng
Plz continue

Thanks hope you will like it even more as the story progresses :)

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