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Posted: 9 years ago
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When's the next chapter coming up?
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When's the next chapter coming up?




Hopefully by the end of this week. 😳😳
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Hey LM.. Interlude 16... 😊 😊

and here comes Ishani... the surprising one... 😲 breaking her relationship with Chirag and coming back to him... how rational and logical she was there... shockingly pleasant... both were mourning the biggest loss of their life and she got the additional blow from Chirag but she listened to her heart and for once took right decision... 😲 but as always his one line and their little party is over

and with this come the original Ishani... the brain less one... 😔 it was completely shocking... his one line and everything is finished for her... it's true that he did involved her biggest weakness but what about other things... how she believed that her 11 years with him was a facade... She loved Chirag is ok but how it makes ranveer criminal... kaash ranveer ki baat kabhi dhyaan se suni hoti to manipulation ka matlab samajh ata...

and d thing which pissed me was she didn't listen to him for even once...😡 bringing back some really painful memories of the show coz I still didn't understood why she didn't believed and supported ranveer in spite of him shouting that he didn't killed Chirag... 😕 and now she is turned into a cruel one.. ranveer said only few things but she said everything... 🤢 she was taking revenge from him... how could you Ishani... and swearing on harshad's ashes, Ishani goes really mental in rage... addition was she made him believe that her every word is 100% true... tremendous job... 🤢

actually other than all this their timing was also wrong... had harshad been alive the scenario would've been different... and this ranveer... hareeshchandra ki aulad... chup nahi reh sakta tha... n Ishani ke saamne jhoot to idiot bol hi nahi sakta... I mean he could've controlled d situation now and talked to her later but no..when u first mentioned that alcohol let his tongue loose I was thinking that he also said something but there entire situation is different... usne to kuch kiya hi nai sara kaam Ishani ne hi kar dia.. .Ishani ko bachane chala tha na ab le beta pehle khud ko sambhal.. 😆 but at d end nothing is remaining to be mended... 💔

one good thing in this chapter was her heart still telling her otherwise... screaming at her to listen to it but all she did was shut everything cruelly... but the last few paragraphs was like she knew she did wrong but can't admit, situations are not letting her to see the small light and in future it will turn even bigger agony where she'll kill herself for doing this all in spite of feeling otherwise... u know now her scalpel addiction is getting justified... her weight of guilt is too heavy and all she could do is too punish herself until she make amends...

This chapter was so emotional, specially after her going mad & killing ranveer but one thing, I was expecting something big, I never thought his few words will lead to this... itni badi baat bhi nahi thi ke sab rishte hi khatm kar die... epic example of why one shouldn't take any decision in anger... but since when Ishani can remain rational for long... so suits her.. 👍🏼 and best thing was ranveer had no fault... future mein achchi tarah bhaav khayega... 😉 😉
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Originally posted by: NidsJ

Hey LM.. Interlude 16... 😊 😊

and here comes Ishani... the surprising one... 😲 breaking her relationship with Chirag and coming back to him... how rational and logical she was there... shockingly pleasant... both were mourning the biggest loss of their life and she got the additional blow from Chirag but she listened to her heart and for once took right decision... 😲 but as always his one line and their little party is over

and with this come the original Ishani... the brain less one... 😔 it was completely shocking... his one line and everything is finished for her... it's true that he did involved her biggest weakness but what about other things... how she believed that her 11 years with him was a facade... She loved Chirag is ok but how it makes ranveer criminal... kaash ranveer ki baat kabhi dhyaan se suni hoti to manipulation ka matlab samajh ata...

and d thing which pissed me was she didn't listen to him for even once...😡 bringing back some really painful memories of the show coz I still didn't understood why she didn't believed and supported ranveer in spite of him shouting that he didn't killed Chirag... 😕 and now she is turned into a cruel one.. ranveer said only few things but she said everything... 🤢 she was taking revenge from him... how could you Ishani... and swearing on harshad's ashes, Ishani goes really mental in rage... addition was she made him believe that her every word is 100% true... tremendous job... 🤢

actually other than all this their timing was also wrong... had harshad been alive the scenario would've been different... and this ranveer... hareeshchandra ki aulad... chup nahi reh sakta tha... n Ishani ke saamne jhoot to idiot bol hi nahi sakta... I mean he could've controlled d situation now and talked to her later but no..when u first mentioned that alcohol let his tongue loose I was thinking that he also said something but there entire situation is different... usne to kuch kiya hi nai sara kaam Ishani ne hi kar dia.. .Ishani ko bachane chala tha na ab le beta pehle khud ko sambhal.. 😆 but at d end nothing is remaining to be mended... 💔

one good thing in this chapter was her heart still telling her otherwise... screaming at her to listen to it but all she did was shut everything cruelly... but the last few paragraphs was like she knew she did wrong but can't admit, situations are not letting her to see the small light and in future it will turn even bigger agony where she'll kill herself for doing this all in spite of feeling otherwise... u know now her scalpel addiction is getting justified... her weight of guilt is too heavy and all she could do is too punish herself until she make amends...

This chapter was so emotional, specially after her going mad & killing ranveer but one thing, I was expecting something big, I never thought his few words will lead to this... itni badi baat bhi nahi thi ke sab rishte hi khatm kar die... epic example of why one shouldn't take any decision in anger... but since when Ishani can remain rational for long... so suits her.. 👍🏼 and best thing was ranveer had no fault... future mein achchi tarah bhaav khayega... 😉 😉






Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm happy that you liked the chapter. ⭐️⭐️ Yeh chapter ne toh mere emotional balance ki dhajiya udaa diya.



Coming to the review, oh yes, a sensible and rational Ishaani amidst the cloud of emotions and senselessness that she was feeling. 😕😕 Everything was slowly falling into place until one line ended it all from each side. And like you said, with that came a brainless Ishaani driven only by rage and impulse. 🥺🥺



In my life, I've seen and observed enough of this to know what rage is capable of making a person doing. 😳😳 Ranveer shouldn't have said what he did, but for Ishaani at that point of time and at her lowest and most vulnerable, it was a breach of trust. 😭😭 Ranveer said what he said because he cared for her, but Chirag twisted the interpretation of the entire statement and screwed with her head more. 😡😡



If only Ishaani had seen it the reverse and had actually paid heed to what Ranveer would always tell her about the art of manipulation... 💔💔 Oh yes, she should have listened to him, but since when was she ever sane when she was angry? 🤢🤢 And the show's logic toh was out of the world only... till this date I don't understand why she couldn't trust Ranveer when he told her that he didn't kill Chirag. 🥱🥱



But then again, if you see it from evidence point of view, there was enough to incriminate him and put him on scene and everyone knew between the enmity between the two. 🤔🤔But still, that was a very stupid and cruel thing she did on the show that too for no good reason. 🤬🤬 Apne saath-saath uski bhi zindagi tabaah kar di. 👎🏼👎🏼



Ahem, where were we? Oh yes, these two sample pieces. 😒😒 Oh yes, she showed her ugly side to him that night... if he broke her trust, then she broke him entirely. 😵😵 Like I told you earlier too, what happened that night was not just one thing but were several things that'd gone wrong that led to what happened eventually.



As to Ranveer, I really, really don't know whether to cry for him or slap him for opening his mouth in the first place, really. And when I said 'alcohol made his tongue go loose', it was one sentence that was enough to set the dominoes rolling. 😕😕 As to Ishaani's POV, you've said it all accurately in this paragraph. 😔😔



You know, this is exactly what I wanted to show, tbh. More often than not in our life, the biggest of incidents stem out of the smallest of things and get blown out of proportion for no reason, and especially when driven by rage. 😵😵 And so was the case over here. There wasn't anything as explosive as one might have thought, but there was a lot of other things in play over here that escalated the matter so much. 😭😭



And like I said earlier too, there was a lot that was going alongside too that led to this - their emotional instability, her breaking up with Chirag, his heartbreak, and not just that, but everything from the last two years of their suppressed emotions finally came crumbling around them that night. And Chirag's manipulation was the final thing required to set their relationship aflame.



RV to sab se chun-chunkar hisaab lega ab. 😈😈 But so will Ishaani. *coughs*



Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️
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Congratulations for this new thread Baby... 🤗

and many more to come.. update fast fast... 😉 😉


and next is thanks to our gang... Anu, Ash and MM... for their huge contribution... 😊 tum sab ke bina ye mumkin na hota... 😆 😆




Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 And haan, yeh inn teeno ke bina mumkin hi nahi hota. 😉😉
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Book 5: Walking Through the Night

Epistle 81: A Tale of Two Cities

A/N: Hey there everyone! :D :D Here is the next update! :D :D

Happy Reading! :D :D

23rd October, 2007:

It's been ten days without her.

Time flies by so soon, no? It just feels like yesterday when I bid her goodbye at the airport, promising to return back to her soon. But it's been ten days now since I last saw her. Since I last heard her voice. Since I last heard her laugh. Since I last saw her smile. But I guess this is what will make us stronger. Keeping away from each other for the next two years until I can return back being her equal. The distance is what will keep me strong to fight the world all by myself.

It's what will be keep me going.

Life over here has been better than I expected it to be, to be honest. The language is definitely an issue since they speak too fast and use too much of a slang when talking. But I'm getting used to it anyway. Like Ishaani had warned me, the locals here are rather racist, but they seem to subjectify Indians on the whole. Rich or poor doesn't matter really since everyone is treated the same way. And for once, my status doesn't make me feel inferior. I don't like being shepherded like a fleet of sheep like the way they seem to judge us by our colour, but since when has anyone been fair?

This is just a new kind of discrimination, that's all.

I share a room with two other Indians, who are just as useless as I could hope them to be. Apparently, the Indian mentality never changes even outside the country because Indians in general have an issue with befriending people belonging to the servant's class, I think. The Australian chaps are no better either, but atleast they still seem to treat us like human, albeit inferior ones.

But still, they somehow seem to like me because I haven't faced any problem with them so far. On the contrary, they've been rather civil with me on my face. If they have things to talk behind my back, it doesn't matter to me honestly. When you've lived through the hell that I've lived through when it comes to the abuses and the whips, this kind of feels like a child's play. We servants are made of thick exteriors.

My roommates feel jealous when I'm not ragged or bullied like they are. Well, after what I've faced, just being laughed upon or being called names isn't even insulting. I've had much, much worse. My roommates are just coming out from their spell of illusions. I've already been snapped out of it since the past eleven years.

But this is something that I can live with because this city has got loads and loads to offer! I'm done roaming quite a bit of Sydney and it's one really, really beautiful city. Both at day and at night. The rains over here are rather unpredictable though, but it's thrilling nonetheless. Ishaani would have loved this season, especially with the multi-coloured flowers. Those were always amongst her favourite things to visualize, really.

The climate, architecture and the beauty of the city is sure to bamboozle her!

But the best thing of all is the campus! The campus must be one of the most stunning things I've ever seen in my life so far! And I'm not exaggerating. Luscious gardens, Neo-Gothic structures, rich architecture and an even better faculty! They're yet to introduce two more subjects for my course next week, but so far whatever lectures I've had, they've been fun! Others find them mundane, but I think they're rather engaging and I'm learning loads. It's a little difficult to keep up with the pace of their speech and the amount of research work that we have to do, but since I'm in the habit of it already, I find it rather interesting.

Speaking of which, I've seen quite a few of the popular places around here already. And I'll list them up for you right now before I start listing them in my travel log book. So, here goes!

1. The Sydney Opera House:
Location:
Bennelong Point, Sydney
Description:
One of the world's great icons, the Sydney Opera House is a UNESCO World Heritage Site and the star attraction on the glittering harbor. This graceful building, shaped like shells or billowing sails, perches on a finger of land surrounded by water. I snapped a couple of photos while gliding by on a harbor cruise, relaxed at one of the restaurants, strolled around its exterior, and took an organized tour of the magnificent structure, which encompassed theaters, studios, exhibition rooms, a concert hall, and a cinema. I also got to learn about the history and get a behind-the-scenes look at this famous building. This is a flexible ticket that allows you to join any one of the tours throughout the day, departing every half hour from 9am to 5pm.

2. The Harbour Bridge:
Address:
5 Cumberland St, Sydney
Description:
This is city's best-known landmark prior to construction of the Opera House. Supported by massive double piers at each end, it was built in 1932 and remains the world's largest steel arch bridge, connecting the harbor's north and south shores in a single curve rising 134 m above the water. Along its length run two railway lines and eight lanes for road traffic, the direction of which can be varied according to traffic flow. Pedestrians can stroll across on walkways or join a guided ascent through BridgeClimb for a breathtaking panorama of the city and harbor.

3. The Rocks:
Address:
66 Harrington St, Level 6, The Rocks, Sydney
Description:
On a tongue of land protruding into Sydney Harbour, the Rocks historic area was once home to the Gadigal aboriginal people and later became the country's first site of European settlement. The name of the Rocks comes from the rocky coast on the west side of Sydney Cove, where the convicts pitched their tents. Today, more than 100 heritage sites and buildings jostle along the narrow streets including Sydney's oldest surviving house, Cadman's cottage, built in 1816. The Rocks Discovery Museum, which traces the area's fascinating transformation from traditional aboriginal lands, to convict slum, to tourist hotspot. Afterwards, I even managed to wander around the narrow cobbled streets with their souvenir shops, restaurants, cafs, and aboriginal and contemporary art galleries, and shop at the market stalls. Guided tours run the gamut from aboriginal heritage walks to photographic excursions and nighttime ghost tours.

4. The Queen Victoria Building:
Address:
455 George St, Sydney
Description: This is a high point of Sydney shopping is the Romanesque-style Queen Victoria Building ("QVB"), linked by underground arcades with Town Hall Station. Originally built as a market hall between 1893 and 1898, this elegant building is crowned by a high central dome surrounded by 20 smaller domes. After decades of neglect and even plans for demolition, this grand sandstone building was restored to its original state in the early eighties. Today, more than 200 high-end shops line its light-filled galleries. It's worth a visit even for those who shun the shops, just to admire its successful restoration as well as its beautiful stained glass windows and mosaic floors.

5. George Street:
Description:
The oldest street in Australia, George Street was once a nameless track trodden by convicts fetching supplies of water. Today, it's one of the city's major traffic arteries where high-rise office blocks, shops, and historic buildings converge in an incongruous jumble. An architectural highlight is the elegant Romanesque-style Queen Victoria Building replete with graceful domes, stained glass windows, and high-end stores. Nearby, the Sydney Town Hall (1869) is a major city landmark sporting a medley of architectural styles (it's been compared to a richly decorated wedding cake). Another architectural standout is the neo-Gothic St Andrew's Cathedral completed and consecrated in 1868. Shoppers will find plenty of stores in the area. Designer boutiques and jewelry stores line the Victorian-style Strand Arcade, while Pitt Street Mall, one block east from George Street, and is one of the city's major shopping precincts.

6. King's Cross:
Location:
William St and Darlinghurst Rd, Sydney
Description: About 2 km east of the Central Business District (CBD), Kings Cross or "The Cross," as locals call it, is Sydney's multi-faceted red light district with an intriguing, Bohemian past. The area was an artistic quarter around 1920, until it evolved into a popular haunt for beatniks during the 1950s and, later, hippies. During the Vietnam War, the area started its slow slide to depravity when large numbers of American troops came here on "rest and recreation" leave. Despite its less than savory reputation at night, during the day, it wears a different face. Backpackers from the many hostels in the area huddle at hip cafes, boutique hotels beckon, and foodies come here to dine at the trendy restaurants. Look for the large Coca-Cola billboard, at the intersection of William Street and Darlinghurst Road, which is often referred to as the "Gateway to The Cross".

7. The Hyde Park:
Location:
Elizabeth Street, Sydney
Description: Amid all the din of the central business district, Hyde Park is a sanctuary of sprawling lawns, shady picnic spots, flowers, fountains, and fig trees. Like a mini Central Park, this welcome patch of green, named after Hyde Park in London, offers prime people-watching - especially at lunch when city workers come here to kick off their shoes. The park's bronze Archibald Fountain (1932) commemorates Australia's alliance with France during WWI, while the art deco Anzac War Memorial (1934), in the southern half of the park, honours its victims. At the north end of Hyde Park, in Queens Square, are three fine Georgian buildings, masterpieces of the convict architect Sir Francis Greenway: the Hyde Park Barracks, St James' Church, and the Supreme Court. Built by convict labor in 1817-19, Hyde Park Barracks was restored to its original condition in 1975-84 and now houses a museum on the history of Sydney portraying the lives of the first involuntary 'settlers'. On the east side of Hyde Park is the Australian Museum with the largest natural history collection in the country.

8. The Art Gallery of NSW:
Address:
Art Gallery Rd, The Domain, Sydney
Description: Surrounded by beautiful park lands, the Art Gallery of New South Wales is one of the country's most distinguished art museums. The building dates from 1885 and houses spacious light-filled galleries and Grand Courts with collections ranging from works by the European masters and Asian artists, to evocative contemporary art from around the world. The gallery also houses one of the largest collections of aboriginal art in Australia. After admiring all the masterpieces, art lovers can relax at the caf or restaurant, or browse the gallery gift shop.

I'm yet to visit a lot of places yet, but this is just the beginning. There's still loads and loads of explore. But I miss Ishaani. Exploring all this with her. It was our fantasy uno and our only mutual fantasy - to travel the world. Become independent. This has been my first step out into the real world. And so far, it's been a rewarding experience. But what good is any of this without her beside me?

There hasn't gone by a day when my heart hasn't choked at the thought of her. At the thought of how she'd be able to fend off this world without me. About how she'd be able to cope without me. She's weak... she's vulnerable. She'll never admit it to anyone, not even to herself, but that doesn't change the truth. And whenever she's at her vulnerable most, I'm always frightened. Not for myself, but for her own well-being because she always makes a shell around herself, throwing herself and drowning herself into emotions that weigh her down and tax her out. She isn't adept at handling those kind of emotions.

Not a day goes by when I wonder whether my decision of coming to Sydney was the right one or no. I can see the pros and the cons, the former clearly outweighing the latter, but that doesn't mean that it makes it any easier upon me. I've left my Universe behind just so that I could bring her back a better world that could sustain the never-ending weight of the stark realities that our universe consisted of. I don't know what to do without that universe until then.

Oh, how I miss Ishaani! Her essence, her scent, her smile, the sparkle of her eyes... everything that is just her. Everything that just makes it worth living for. Everything that makes me want to leave all of this and run back to her and pull her into my arms, and never ever let her go again. I don't want this reality without her even though I'm killing myself just for her. And every minute away from her makes me realize how... incompetent I'm without her. How incomplete I'm without her. How... lost, I'm without her.

And this is what pulls me up again. No. If I want to spend the rest of my life with her, I'd have to drink away the next two years of my life like a bitter medicine. It was for the greater good. Not just for mine, but Ishaani's as well. I have to succeed for the two of us. I have to die repeatedly each day for the two of us. Just so that we can ultimately survive in this power-hungry and money-driven world. Just so that I can give the two of us a better future even though everything was on chance. Everything was upon destiny.

But that doesn't mean that I won't try. I won't give up without a fight. I've never learnt what it was like to give up. And now is no different. Ranveer Vaghela may have been a lot of things to the world, but the one thing he wasn't was a quitter. I'll fight life head on, just like always. I'll give everything I have to conquer what I've set out to win. And so all that I can focus upon right now is my dream. My goal. My destination.

And at the end of it all, my horizon.

Ishaani.

23rd October, 2007:

It's been ten days without him.

Wow, time flies by so quickly, isn't it? Just feels like yesterday when we said goodbye... But well, in spite of it feeling like yesterday, every second of his departure has weighed itself upon me. It's a different world without him and his warm embrace. And yet, it's been going better than I expected it to go so far. I don't know why that's so. Maybe it's either because I've been keeping myself too engrossed with my hobbies, or else the world has tamed down a little with respect to me. And so far, it's a relief.

Or maybe it's because I've created a relief for myself.

I've been doing a lot of painting recently. Art has always been something that I've been mental behind, especially ever since Ranveer made that portrait for me. I don't know what it is about that painting that I love so much, but it changed my life that night. Because for the first time, I realized the power of art. Not just any power, but the extraordinary capability that art had to let the human emotions bleed away into colours. There's even the piano that I so adore playing, but there's something different about painting.

And so, in the last ten days, I've found a new source of distraction - painting. Just colours and strokes blended above the emotions and feelings that pour upon the canvas. But they aren't just random abstracts. No. They're not. They're paintings of myself and Ranveer from several of the pictures that I have of the two of us together right from the time we met eleven years ago. And just like that, I decided. I'd paint our life upon the canvas. Picture by picture, colour by colour, emotion by emotion. I'd depict our story through paintings.

Our untold stories, through paintings.

So far, I've finished seven paintings already. Papa was surprised by the speed and accuracy with which I've been painting, because having seven concise paintings with just the finishing touches remaining is not all that easy. It's rather difficult and many would cite it impossible too. But that's the passion that art infuses within you. Once you start, there's no stopping. Once you begin to bleed, there's no stemming. Once you begin pouring your emotions out on the white canvas, there's no turning back. Once you begin narrating your intimate stories, your soul is on paper. In a blend of colours.

It's an addiction, Papa tells me. Once you begin to express, you cannot stop. Not until you've emptied yourself of all your emotions. He's worried that I might be taking this too far because I'm crawling into a shell in the form of artistry after Ranveer's departure. But this is what keeps me sane. This is what makes me feel alive. Feeling these emotions course through me as I give them colour of a lifeless sheet of paper. This is what gives me the strength to see through the day when I let the strokes write my destiny for the next day.

This is what gives me the strength to cope against the gaping void that's Ranveer. To fill in the empty space of where his smile would create an explosion of the liveliest emotions within myself. This is what fills in the loneliness and makes me feel whole... complete... secure in his embrace. In the memories of his embrace. Ranveer always tells me that emotions should never be repressed; they should be let to flow in any form. And especially for a person like me who is never able to bear pain for the sake of others.

And yet for his happiness, I did the same thing.

I don't know whether what I did was wise. But I did it nonetheless. And now, there's no looking back. All that I can do is pick up the pieces of my shattered bubble of oblivion and use to them create a shield for myself. Maybe I can protect myself from all those emotions then that tingle within my heart every time my mind crosses over to Ranveer or whenever the loneliness starts to seep in.

It's difficult, living with these emotions that threaten to break you every single moment, knowing that you cannot give up because there is no option to give up. It's only a fight with yourself every single day as you have to be stronger and stronger, taking every ounce of energy it takes to emerge victorious against yourself and your demons. And art is my weapon. My only strand of sanity to pull through this "sacrifice" that I so nobly made. There was nothing noble about a sacrifice because the cost that is to be paid is often not worth it at all in the end.

But the world still cannot know that Ishaani Parekh can be weak. Vulnerable. No, that is only for me to bear. That is only for me to fight. This is my darkness, and only I can overcome it. And Ranveer has left behind the weapon for me to use. Art. Years ago, he found life in the birth of a myriad of colours when he'd have rather preferred the simple colour of death. Now, it's my turn to carry forward the legacy and find life amidst the same myriad of colours.

How I crave return back into my small world of the oblivion and security that only his embrace could provide... Back to the shelter of my shield, my invisible benefactor.

And at the end of it all, my horizon.

Ranveer.

Constructive criticism will be more than welcome and sorry for any typos. :D :D


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Hey LM!!!
So I M Finally back here...
Seriously feeling so proud...
Yet not wid review...
Sorry for that... 😔
I want to catch all ur chapters first which I've left...as I told u...
After that I'll try to give u reviews ...
Hopefully before ur interludes starts again... 😉
Ok..I m jocking bt I will do as soon as time permits...
Keep it up & thank you for beautiful chapters & Story... 😆
Thnx for PMs... :)
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Hy dr... Awsome update.. So niz of u dr... Eagerly waiting for your next... Keep smiling dr... 😆
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Hi LM how are you?
Finally an update i was waiting for it so much
And now start the book most difficult to read you know when I got to knwo about this book I thought it will be the most difficult of all because all previous had their love and care for each other there developing relationships but it his book it will be artfully replaced by that jerk and also show negligence and stupidity of ishani which I hate the most. But I am sure this will be one remarkable thing because I trust your writing.
Finally he is there with his all thoughts running to one person ishani and how vulnerable she must have become. You know what I feel in current scenario he has not stopped loving her no matter how much he denies it's just he lost his ability to express that live because of immense burden of pain due to his heartbreak or rather this mere existence break.
For a change he is not different her because outside you ar ejust an Indian no matter whatever the background is. And racism of Australia was very bad in recent times but baa has prepared him too well to face any wrath or comments all this doesnt matter. And yet his roommates are interesting creatures I mean seriously inspite of leaving such place staying in a strange place where people are waiting to eat you instead of helping they are getting I to this background check they should appreciate that even from a meagre background he have came that far . I wonder how do such people progress. So he liking the place and is exploring also.
I like this one thing about ranveer that instead of being sissy about his background he choose to enjoy life even at whatever meagre ways he have for it he is sissy only if ishani I says something.
I wonder why didn't ishani visited him in 2 years I mean girl he wouldn't have been able to afford but you could have flied back but then leaving her love of life would have been equally difficult for her now.
This must have taken lots of planning in detailing about those iconic structure along with their way to reach. I am impressed with this.
I guess finch has not came yet.
Now comes the part he knows very well how vulnerable she is alone and is at her worst best and the poor guy is bearing the separation just for the sake of having a chance I mean he had the heights of hopes.
But ishani's condition makes me empathies towards her (till now) thus girl seriously form knwo how to survive without Him. She is using painting as a possible distraction to pour her emotions and relive all those moments of her life.
She must be thinking there is something wrong with her that her evry loved ones leaves her.
And this line of vulnerability shows how much she hated that no one should know her as a weak no wonder she got in that ugly rage with dollops of manipulation did that job for her
She always search for a weapon to pour her emotions like scalpel, nails, painting.
Painting well this have interesting relation in this ff there is one painting she is waiting to replace one she is loathing at and now thses myriad of paintings I can sense this has got to do a lot in future. Is it going to happen that her plans of depicting her relation with ranveer on canvas will be replaced by chirag without she realising it or is it its going to be left midway.
Well I like this chapter for o e more reason that chishani wasn't mentioned which I am dreading like anything.
Thnx for pm
Waiting for next
PS Those excerpts from caffeinated love indicate towards an ending is that book linked tot hem entirely because I thought ranveer have used their relationship details in that book which is based on a fictional character just out of curiosity
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harisha39

SUCH A BEAUTIFUL EPI WAITING FOR THE NEXT...AND CONGRATULATIONS FOR THE NEW THREAD AND I AM VERY SURE IT WILL BE THE BEST AS USUAL👏





Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And thank you so much for the wishes too! ❤️❤️

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