Abhigya FF: The Journey with her - Chapter 25 @ Pg 36 (Epilogue added) - Page 27

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Naina- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww, epilogue was adorbs! Great job, once again! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Caught up with more than 5 chapters in one go Nive .. Wow the story really turned out well .
LOL😆 this is one of FF that I felt that I am with Abhi than Pragya ... But last 5 chapters successfully took me to side of Pragya from Abhi .. Glad my journey towards her happened through Abhi's thoughts .. I guess that is intent of your story too ..And you made it Nive 👏

I usually dont think or like characters If they behave or react exactly same as how I do or react to certain situation.I make sure my analysis is not confined to my own and solo experiences .. You failed me Nive .😆 .. I am happy that I came across your story ..

Here I am getting hard time to even imagine what is Abhi going through so .. letting me put myself in Abhi's shoes is kind of impossible thing for me ..
Kidos to you for taking the lead through such difficult experiences which has so much inner clash.. I seriously cant conclude the best way for Abhi. how he should react ..I mean it is out of my thought process how one should react when he loves the girl who caused her parents death.. I seriously dont know Nive ..I am just following what you say about him... I liked him over all but the admiration I had for him in the initial chapters dwifted towards Pragz ..

When comes to Pragya .. Thank you for giving such a beautiful outline to the character .. In the early chapters she is just like any other girl and you made her unique at the end .. 👏👏.. Sorry but I am being a bit self centric in supporting her .. I myself cant spend a happy day if I realize that I hurt others until I say sorry and get the things even with them .. So I could understand Pragya's fear here .. for hurting him every day which will hurt her in turn is quite horrendous future that scared her .. that kind of adds a touch of selflessness to her decision and I admire that quality ..

Will comment on each chapter later .. Thank you for giving a wonderful story ..⭐️⭐️⭐️


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Posted: 9 years ago
Wht?! Ff is over ?!😭
Finally abhi opened up abt wht was bothering him till date ..glad tht he decided to accept tht n told pragya tht..when I saw tht pragya returned the ring ..I was shocked like abhi too...oh..no..whts happening,!! Then I saw wht pragya has written a letter...tht touched me...the sentence 'lets start again ' made me 😃... so happy to see pragya started wearing color n loved abhi's first kiss !!

Epilogue: just loved it !! Abhi driving tht car in snail pace ..tht was lol moment !!


Totally loved it , nive 🤗 !! I am in love with this pragya n abhi more !! Thanks for giving such a read to us !! Do write more !! Waiting for it too !!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Naina-

Awww, epilogue was adorbs! Great job, once again! 😊



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Raji9

Caught up with more than 5 chapters in one go Nive .. Wow the story really turned out well .

LOL😆 this is one of FF that I felt that I am with Abhi than Pragya ... But last 5 chapters successfully took me to side of Pragya from Abhi .. Glad my journey towards her happened through Abhi's thoughts .. I guess that is intent of your story too ..And you made it Nive 👏

I usually dont think or like characters If they behave or react exactly same as how I do or react to certain situation.I make sure my analysis is not confined to my own and solo experiences .. You failed me Nive .😆 .. I am happy that I came across your story ..

Here I am getting hard time to even imagine what is Abhi going through so .. letting me put myself in Abhi's shoes is kind of impossible thing for me ..
Kidos to you for taking the lead through such difficult experiences which has so much inner clash.. I seriously cant conclude the best way for Abhi. how he should react ..I mean it is out of my thought process how one should react when he loves the girl who caused her parents death.. I seriously dont know Nive ..I am just following what you say about him... I liked him over all but the admiration I had for him in the initial chapters dwifted towards Pragz ..

When comes to Pragya .. Thank you for giving such a beautiful outline to the character .. In the early chapters she is just like any other girl and you made her unique at the end .. 👏👏.. Sorry but I am being a bit self centric in supporting her .. I myself cant spend a happy day if I realize that I hurt others until I say sorry and get the things even with them .. So I could understand Pragya's fear here .. for hurting him every day which will hurt her in turn is quite horrendous future that scared her .. that kind of adds a touch of selflessness to her decision and I admire that quality ..

Will comment on each chapter later .. Thank you for giving a wonderful story ..⭐️⭐️⭐️



Thank you Raji 🤗

I was wondering whether you took a break from the FF since I couldn't see your comments for the past few chapters 😆

I am sad that almost everybody switched to Pragya's side now 😭 😆 But Yay!! I was able to make you read Pragya's pain from Abhi's POV.

I was hesitant with the plot because at the end everybody including me want Abhigya to be together. So I was thinking whether people will be comfortable reading such a past between the leads. What Abhi went through this story is terrible but I didn't want that to foreshadow Pragya's emotions. Glad I was successful to some extent.

Thank you for the lovely comment. Will be waiting for your comments in future 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anamika.viji

Wht?! Ff is over ?!😭

Finally abhi opened up abt wht was bothering him till date ..glad tht he decided to accept tht n told pragya tht..when I saw tht pragya returned the ring ..I was shocked like abhi too...oh..no..whts happening,!! Then I saw wht pragya has written a letter...tht touched me...the sentence 'lets start again ' made me 😃... so happy to see pragya started wearing color n loved abhi's first kiss !!

Epilogue: just loved it !! Abhi driving tht car in snail pace ..tht was lol moment !!


Totally loved it , nive 🤗 !! I am in love with this pragya n abhi more !! Thanks for giving such a read to us !! Do write more !! Waiting for it too !!



Aww, Thank you Viji 🤗
All good things have an end (so does all bad things) 😆

We all know Abhigya would be together at the end!! So there should be some drama/surprise element na.. Glad you liked Pragya's letter.

Thank you for the comment Viji!! Will come up with another writing soon and start bothering you!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

that is awesome endingg



Thank you :)

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