The Unheard Cries-An Ishveer OS - Page 3

Ah, from Ranveer to Ishaani 'cause Ranveer is tired of taking all our sadism. 🤣

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Hey, Priyaa! My apologies for the delay!

And coming to your OS, The Unheard Cries, the pain itself oozes through the title. When I first read the title, I wondered who was going to be the one upon whom the tragedy will fall, and it's Ishani. Girls, why is everyone shifting from Ranveer to Ishani? But anyway, whoever is the victim, we love to read them here!

I love the aura of darkness you created here, reflecting her state of mind that was going through the worst turmoil possible in that hour. Darkness in her room completely resembled to the one of her heart and yet she is so helpless.

He is leaving!

Frankly, the thought of Ranveer leaving Ishani always stings me. But then how does one blame him for distancing himself away from her? His unrequited love after all might never be reciprocated, and isn't his heart being broken once enough that he must entertain new hopes only to shatter once again? He can't let that happen again.

But Ishani. She is realizing slowly ans steadily that there's more in her feelings for him that what she considered it to be so far. May be she in love with him? Chirag's betrayal must have left her shattered and she could not pick up the pieces until Ranveer came back in her life. He came, only to leave in the end.

She didn't realize what she felt for him until it was too late. Oh, that feeling of her seeing him walk away forever is so gut-wrenching already.

You have left the ending quite open, so can I assume they met once again, him not moved on and then she confessed what she felt for him? He would have gotten his life back and she hers.

Sighs. I dream way too much.

IN the end, I'll only say, it was a brilliant first attempt and you have justified every aspect of their relationship and agony. Even if it was from Ishani's perspective, one could feel deeply for Ranveer as well. Those little hints were enough to give us an insight in his life and love.

Write more and more. We're glad to have a new writer on the forum! 3 cheers for the new writers! Yay!

PS> I hope I made some sense.

Hey, that's alright. I understand.. J How many should I ask for mine then.he he. :-P

Well when I wrote this OS back then,I didn't actually thought of that symbolism at all,the darkness around her and the emotional turmoil she was going through.It all just happened.And thankfully it made sense & I guess my love for the night sky also contributed to a little extent,I wanted to show darkness . :-P

Aah I understand your feeling for Ranveer.Yes.. His love might never be reciprocated. The depth of his love is too much to be even seen & the pain he has suffered is too much to be compensated. Even while writing about him (now) all those scenes of him in pain is flashing before my eyes(particularly the scene of him crying in the bathroom after promising Harshad uncle that he would unite Ishani & Chirag.And I'm sorry,I just don't want to remind you of those sad things about Ranveer,You must be feeling sad.. but anyway )

To be honest I really don't have words to explain him & his pain.His character is too deep & at that moment I didn't think I could have justified his character,this is also one of the main reasons why I did not write this story from his point of view.His story is too complicated to write for me as of now,there needs to be too much of deep emotions & his thought process .I think I need to improve my writing skills & expressing emotions so I have to do a lot of homework for that..But I really want to write one from his point of view .Hopefully the day will soon come.. -XD

Yeah..She's unknowingly in love with him.She never felt like this for Chirag though she used to CLAIM that she loved him.That's why she could not decode this feeling for Ranveer which is a lot intense.And she also didn't get enough time to ponder given all these things happened so suddenly & as you know our dear Ishani is too slow in understanding..he he..

I wanted to kept the ending quite open.I just wanted to concentrate on one incident ,i.e the emotional outburst of her when she would not find Ranveer & would think he'd gone forever.And life is so uncertain ,you can't really say what'll happen next whether it's good or bad.So I wanted to highlight the uncertainty factor too .I don't know whether I'm making sense or not.. -XD And moreover as I am writing this from her point of view(even though like an invisible observer who can sneak into her feelings ) so,it's just her thoughts.Those who want a painful ending may think that he's gone forever & those who want a happy one can make him comeback, in their imagination of course..he he...

Thank you dear for your wonderful review & encouragement..BTW pardon my grammar ,I need to focus on that..Inform me wherever you find me wrong.. Have a nice day...🤗

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Ah, from Ranveer to Ishaani 'cause Ranveer is tired of taking all our sadism. 🤣

He he.. You are right in one sense. 😆😆