The Unheard Cries-An Ishveer OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Stryker-

res but very well written :)

Thank you.. 😃

Originally posted by: mas123

Wonderful job Priya... Very very well written. Thanks to LM and EH too to motivate you and woke up an author inside you. Keep writing...

Thank you dear.I'm glad that you liked it & 'll try to write better..😳😳 he he..yeah I am really thankful to them for motivating me for the romance genre...😳😳😆😆

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Beautifully written! ❤️

Thank you Bloomfield.. ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Wow such a lovely OS ,amazing yaar 👏👏

Thank you so much...😃

Originally posted by: o_gudiya

Hii priya..

Hope u r fine...

Beautifully written yaar...

Wonderful job cutie...

Do pm me when u updated the next..

Take care and keep smiling..😳

Heya...I am all fine.😊. & thank you so much for the encouragement 😃😃 Well..this is a one shot dear,so there won't be any chapters further..But I'll PM you when I'll write the next.😉😳.. & thank you once again & you too take care...😳❤️

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Hey, Priya. Res. Will reply at the earliest possible time.

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Unreserved. >>>

Ah, so much for the sadism and romance, no? 😈 A really good first attempt, Priya! 🤗 The scenario reminded me much of Fire and Ice's Shot Two and LM's epistle 80. I miss Fire and Ice already... 🤣 (just finished writing the last chapter, yet 🤪)

Coming back, Ishaani loves Ranveer. Inevitable their love is. Just can't be without striking them both! Wonderfully written!

Love,

Anamika.

ha ha..I'm pretty biased you see..A sadist really..😆😆 & thank you for the encouraging words.. Well I have not read fire & ice yet.. 'll let you know once I finish that...😳😳 Ishveer's love is the one thing that made me believe in love,true love indeed...😳😳❤️

Originally posted by: _priyaa_

ha ha..I'm pretty biased you see..A sadist really..😆😆 & thank you for the encouraging words.. Well I have not read fire & ice yet.. 'll let you know once I finish that...😳😳 Ishveer's love is the one thing that made me believe in love,true love indeed...😳😳❤️

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

So, you really are one for IshVeer?😲

Hehe, sure.😃

Same here. ❤️

He he...not at all.. Ishveer's sadness makes me sad ...But I like angsty ones a bit more, because I believe its where ur true emotions pour out.. u can see the depth... :-) :-) in that sense a sadist...he he...

I feel exactly the same. I'm that context, we both are some kinds of sadists. 😆

Hey, Priyaa! My apologies for the delay!

And coming to your OS, The Unheard Cries, the pain itself oozes through the title. When I first read the title, I wondered who was going to be the one upon whom the tragedy will fall, and it's Ishani. Girls, why is everyone shifting from Ranveer to Ishani? But anyway, whoever is the victim, we love to read them here!

I love the aura of darkness you created here, reflecting her state of mind that was going through the worst turmoil possible in that hour. Darkness in her room completely resembled to the one of her heart and yet she is so helpless.

He is leaving!

Frankly, the thought of Ranveer leaving Ishani always stings me. But then how does one blame him for distancing himself away from her? His unrequited love after all might never be reciprocated, and isn't his heart being broken once enough that he must entertain new hopes only to shatter once again? He can't let that happen again.

But Ishani. She is realizing slowly ans steadily that there's more in her feelings for him that what she considered it to be so far. May be she in love with him? Chirag's betrayal must have left her shattered and she could not pick up the pieces until Ranveer came back in her life. He came, only to leave in the end.

She didn't realize what she felt for him until it was too late. Oh, that feeling of her seeing him walk away forever is so gut-wrenching already.

You have left the ending quite open, so can I assume they met once again, him not moved on and then she confessed what she felt for him? He would have gotten his life back and she hers.

Sighs. I dream way too much.

IN the end, I'll only say, it was a brilliant first attempt and you have justified every aspect of their relationship and agony. Even if it was from Ishani's perspective, one could feel deeply for Ranveer as well. Those little hints were enough to give us an insight in his life and love.

Write more and more. We're glad to have a new writer on the forum! 3 cheers for the new writers! Yay!

PS> I hope I made some sense.