5thoct#Devakshi ss In Tears And In Laughter part 3&4 updated

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Devakshi ss In Tears And In laughter


To have and to hold
For better, for worse
For richer, for poorer
In sickness and in health
To love and to cherish
Till death do us apart...



Excited?? I am!!! How about you guess the storyline while I type the first part.
Will update by evening or tomorrow. Sorry will not be able to send the pms for the further updates.
Tell me tell me what do you think of this new story. More the comments earlier the update. Kudos!!



INDEX:
Part un: We are insatiable, but I love us- below
Part deux: Who is the boss now?- page 3
Part trois: Can't help but love you- page 6
Part quatre: Expecting the unexpected- page 6
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About storyline, I have no idea. But please, update fast! I am excited!
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Part un: We are insatiable, but I love us


Sonakshi's Pov:

Remember there are times when reality feels too much like a dream to be real. And times when dreams are too real only to be woken up to face the so called cold reality. There are also times when you live the in between. I'm living that right now.

In my dream I see myself dressed up in an ivory gown whereas Dev looks dashing in his black tux and we hold hands as we recite our wedding vows. But the scene buffers just like watching a video online with poor connection. Something is pulling me back to reality. I try my hardest to stay and not wake up but the irresistible force finally persists me to open my eyes.

I'm awake.

My eyes flutter, trying to clear my vision and adjust itself to the surroundings. I'm still very dishelved and the room is dark. The bed feels all too familiar and so does the ambiance. It's something I've woken up to quite a many times.

I feel a delicious weight settle over me and it presses me deep down into the mattress, covering me completely. Our legs entangle and I feel his face tucked between my head and neck. I giggle when I feel him nip on my shoulder.

"You're awake" Dev's husky voice reaches my ear. His breath fans my neck as a sweet tingle runs over my spine.

5 months. 5 damn months of our relationship and yet this man has the same effect on me like he did the first time we met.

"You woke me." I complained making him look at me. He gave me his child like smile and I melt right then and there. My breath is stuck in my throat as I watch the beautiful man before me. He was so, so beautiful, there was no word to define how much. He was the epitome of male beauty.
My fingers on their own accord reach up to his face and in a feather like touch I brush my fingers on his lips and hear the hitch of his throat. It's almost flattering to know I had this effect on him.

"Should I be sorry?" He asked in his ever so sexy morning voice. It's raw, ruffled, deep and a complete turn on.

I traced the slight stubble that had outlined his jaws, which looked sharp enough to cut diamonds.

His stubble was another huge turn on for me, including so many other things I'd rather not talk about. I loved how his stubble tickled my cheeks when he kissed me and also the scruff mark it left on my neck when he nuzzled me.

I rose my fingers to tame his ruffled morning hair. He looked so sexy and edible at the moment. But then he looked so all the time.

"You should be if you don't get back to what you were doing." I told him with a coy smile.

He grinned at me, showing me his perfect set of white teeth and got back to kissing and nibbling on my neck.


I traced the outline of the reflection falling on the mirror. My hand automatically reach for my swollen lips and I grinned impishly and then laughed.

We were insatiable and inseparable.

I don't know what else to say other than that. My lips are bruised and swollen. My hair is a complete mess. My kohl's smudged. My neck, shoulders, bosoms and many other places have numerous hickeys. I'm standing inside Dev's washroom, before the mirror, in only his shirt and my panties and laughing like a fool. But what could you possibly tell a happy girl?

I'm so happy at the moment. I've been happy ever since Dev happened to me. My best thing. I've been happy ever since I've been in this relationship.

I know we weren't doing it right by hiding it from our families, but it had its own benefits.

There was no one hovering over us and teasing and taunting and demanding to know when we were getting married or what were our plans for the future. And then there was the most needed privacy. I knew everything would happen on its own accord. For now this was enough.

And then 2 months back we'd taken a bold step forward. I wonder why it took us three months to do IT. But as I said everything happens at its own time. And I wouldn't change a thing about it.

Our first time. A smile spread on my lips. It had been simply wow. No book, no magazine, no one in this universe could describe how I felt then. How we felt.
It had been so wonderfully overwhelming. But then I guess 3 months of love and togetherness and even longer months of sexual attraction would do that to you. Or may be it was just us.

I don't remember how we did it, I just remember how it felt.

Magical and overpowering.

And after that there was no going back. I don't remember spending a single moment apart when we were ever alone ever since.

Dev never made me feel like we were having sex. It always felt more intimate and passionate. He was more than anything I'd asked or wanted. He was my everything.

His family was off to a trip to Haridwar as a compensation to Nikki for having to miss her college trip due to Neha's wedding. Dev had very conveniently used work to skip it and made Ranveer, Neha's new husband to take care of the family. And my family was visiting Elena's mom in Kolkata thanks to which we were spending this extra time together.

But all good things come to an end and this would too when Dev's family would return 2 days later and mine a week after. But we had two days and a week.
Ha! Told you, inseparable.


Dev's Pov:

I tried to concentrate on the movie and pretended to ignore her gaze on me. I know she was watching me, but payback is a b***h. Ha!

Previously when we had sat down to watch a movie or in my exact words, to make out, Sonakshi had outdone herself and told me she really wanted to watch the movie. I'd been shocked initially and asker if she'd truly meant it. She'd seriously told she had and promptly began watching the so called movie, leaving me to sulk.

In between of my sulking and brooding session I'd felt her fingers lightly brush my thighs. It was just momentary and I had decided not to make too much of it. Then it turned to a few more of 'unintentional' and 'innocent' touches and then it had occured to me what was going on. She was playing me. Big time.

So after that I pretended not to know what she was trying to do and concentrated on the movie. But to be honest I didn't have a clue of the plot.
First I'd been too busy trying to change her mind and then too busy dwelling why I couldn't change her mind and then too distracted to concentrate on something as trivial as a movie.

I could still feel her eyes on me, poor girl, must be wondering what caused my change of plans. I'd managed to keep the pretence for an hour, but then who really wanted to watch a movie when you had your hot, sexy girlfriend beside you?

I turned my neck to look at her and our eyes met. I swear Sonakshi Bose did the most irresistible bedroom eyes.

My fingers curled around her bare knees and jerked her to me. She squealed, shocked at my actions and then giggled when I moved her so that she could straddle me. My heart instantly lifted at the happy, playful sound. If only she knew how happy it made me to see her smile or hear her beautiful laughter. If I had it my way I'd make sure that the beautiful smile never left her face.

She cupped my jaw with her soft palms and joined our lips. I removed the hair off her face and pushed it back, before fisting it there and pulling her closer. My other hand caressed her bare thighs, moving up to her hips and then her waist. I heard her groan when my fingers brushed the side of her breasts before I finally rested it behind her neck.

"Such a tease." I mumbled in between our kisses and she laughed.

I trailed my kisses to her cheeks and then to the shell of her ear. Gently putting it between my set of teeth I pulled at it, earning another sexy groan from her.
My kisses travelled up till the back of her neck, but the collar of my shirt that she was wearing restricted me from going any further.

"You look hot in my shirt." I whispered as I kissed her collar bone.
"I do." She agreed. Modesty could go to hell. But honesty was the best policy wasn't it ?

The abrupt ringing of the phone disturbed our moment. I moved a little apart irritated and seeing it was her phone that was ringing gave her a displeased look. She mouthed 'sorry' before reaching for it and settling back on my lap.

"Hello Elena" Sonakshi said to the phone making me aware of the caller.

Ah! That crazy cousin of hers.

"Yes I'm with him." Sona told her . I gave her a knowing smile.

I don't know what Elena told her but whatever it was made Sonakshi turn beet red.

I gave her a questioning twitch of my eyebrow and she shook her head biting her lower lip. I pulled it right out causing her eyes to snap up to mine.

"That's my job" I muttered to her with my eyes narrowed.

The phone conversation continued for another 10 minutes or so involving Sona fluent Bengali and Elena's squeaky yapping.

"What was she saying?" I asked her when she finally placed the phone down.

"Nothing much." Sonakshi replied, running a hand through her wavy tresses.

"So all that 10 minutes of yapping was nothing?" I asked her with a mock-disbelief tone and earned a glare in return.

"Just that they maybe back a couple of days earlier." She told me seriously and I felt my face fall. It immediately recovered its smile when I saw her grin at me.

What a tease!

I tickled her waist playfully and she squirmed and giggled.

"No stop." She squealed as I continued my tickle attack.

I knew she was very ticklish. Her stomach and the back of her feet were her ticklish spots.

"No stop Dev. Don't." She gasped in between her laughing tirade.

I had managed to manoeuvre her to lie back on the couch with me on top of her.

I stopped when I felt she couldn't endure anymore and just watched her. Right now with her hair sprawled all over her, her face red, gasping for breath and her chest brushing against mine as she took deep breaths to inhale enough of oxygen, she was the most beautiful sight in the world.

"I love you Sonakshi Bose." I confessed like I was telling her for the first time. She stopped whatever she was doing and turned her neck to look at me.

No matter how many times I tell her the next time I did it would feel like the first time.

But I wanted to tell her. It was simply impossible for me to hold it back.

"I know." She whispered a smile gracing her lips.


Sonakshi's Pov:

"Elena told me maasi had found a suitable groom for me and wanted to know if I was interested." I confessed the main part of my conversation, as we sat cuddling on the couch. I felt Dev instantly stiffen beside me before his eyes implored mine.

"And?" He asked after a momentary pause.

"You'll die when you hear my answer." I told him cheekily, trying to lighten the situation.

My smile encouraged him to a small smile of his own and then nudged me to continue.

"I told her I'd planned to join a nunnery and separate myself from all the pleasures of life." I told him causing his eyes to widen and for me to laugh.

"Then?" He asked as if I was telling him a grave tale.

"Then masi turned still silent and passed the phone to Elena. I know it isn't the end of this. I can already imagine a earful of hearing I'll get once my nani and parents are back. I'm sure Masi thought I was always going to marry a traditional, Bengali boy of her choice." I told him laughing.

"Were you?" He asked a little sober.

I took a few moments before answering him honestly.
"I guess I'd have. I mean that is what is expected of me and I didn't mind it either. After all there is nothing wrong in it. But now what I hadn't expected was falling for a certain Mr. Dev Dixit who'd turn my entire world a complete 360 degree."

My answer had managed to restore the gorgeous smile on his face.

"Would your parents approve of me? A traditional but non-Bengali boy?" He asked as he curled a strand of my hair around his fingers and looking at it as if it was the only interesting thing in the universe.

"First and most important it wouldn't matter who I married. If he kept me happy my parents would be happy too. Secondly my parents already love you. Infact my entire family loves minus the extended family since they don't know you. Elena can't stop praising you, Dada loves you because you made his sister fall in love, Dadi loves you because a) you're hot b) you're my hot boss. Mom loves you because she thinks you go out of the way to help and protect me.Dad loves you for your obvious dedication to my safety and health and also because you're an honest man. Thirdly aren't you a little older to be called a boy." I finished off in my signature teasing tone.

"I loved hearing the first and second one. About the third, how old do you think I am?" He asked annoyance clear in his tone.

"Ummm...how old are you?" I asked him pretending to think.

"Ehhh, I'm not that old." He told me in a reprimanding tone.

"How old really?"

"Sonakshi"

"Dev" I mimicked his tone.

"Young enough to bear a few children" he snapped brave and upfront.

His bold answer left me gaping.

"Dev." I yelled as I smacked his shoulder, a deep blush making its way to my face. He laughed at my flushed face.

Where is my Mr. Aubodhro who thought 50 shades of grey was a book on colour schemes???



Done. Done. Done.
Warning in advance: some of the contents of this fiction might be a little too sensuous and sexy. So if you're not up for it you can discontinue reading it. I'll update it anyway. Later do not tell you weren't warned.
I finished the first chapter. So tell me how you found it with your likes and comments. Silent readers make your presence obvious with your likes at least. Suggestions, compliments, criticism all are welcomed.
Loads of love,
Harsh
Edited by Ksgrkfan - 9 years ago
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Too hot to handle 😳
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Beautiful❤️ and HOT!☺️☺️
Can't wait for update.😳
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It was beautiful!!
Very well written, and loved the hot parts 😉
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Your writing is amazing. Loved reading every bit of this. Please write more 👏
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Originally posted by: uthraa.m

Too hot to handle 😳

thanks gal. And yeh toh bas shuruat hai😉
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Originally posted by: masooma98

It was beautiful!!

Very well written, and loved the hot parts 😉

thank you so much. I loved the hot parts too.😆
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Originally posted by: rukiaa

Beautiful❤️ and HOT!☺️☺️

Can't wait for update.😳

thank u. Glad you liked it. I thought I should write something to warm up in this cold season😉

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