Teri aankhon ki nami

The last scene of today's episode inspired me to write some line for Shraman...

OH MY WORD!

Originally posted by: Mad_Shubhi

The last scene of today's episode inspired me to write some line for Shraman...

Teri aankhon ki nami

Pareshan karti hai muze

Agar ye mohobbat hai teri

To chhalak kyon nahi jati

Mera sukun, mera chain, mera gurur

Aziz hai muze lekin

Teri Judai bhi saath me mile

Yeh jaroori to nahi..

Narazgi jata kar dekh li

Shikve gile bhi ho gaye

Ab ek pyar ka izhaar hai baaki

Chalo ye rasam bhi ada karte hai

Tere lafzon me kai baar

Dekhi hai nafraton ki tasveer

Teri aankhon me magar

Pyar ke siva kuchh nahi tha

Originally posted by: orion23

OH MY WORD!

This is beautiful!

These are your lines?

Damn good👏

Beautifully written, very good 👏👏

Originally posted by: Mad_Shubhi

Thank you Zoya

Yes, these are my own lines. I am deeply in love with EDKV..

iss show ko dekhar kuchh kuchh likhna sikh gayi hun😊

Originally posted by: orion23

That's awesome!

I would love to read more of your works!

Originally posted by: sriarshi

wow..such a beautiful poem👏👏...loved it...please do write more on shraman

Wow beautifully written...really loved it👏

so beautiful...i luved it so much...❤️