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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
heheheh no i have a grt editor Zara to help me 🤣
nope its not we have to
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Where's everyone?
Let's discuss the story idea
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry girls m stuck with ramadan and last minute cleaning and the prayers. And we have 3 days left,
Edited by zaaratq - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: zaaratq

Sorry girls m stuck with ramadan and last minute cleaning and the prayers. And we have 3 days left,

It's ok zaara.Whenever I come here,I hardly see anyone. May be all are busy.

I don't think we would be able to prepare our entry.

Shall I write a story and will u make a banner based on that?I will try finishing the story by tomorrow.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thats grt even zara can help u with writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Okay so anybody has any idea what story or what characters should I add?Without people's help,it will be difficult for me to write a story.
Any basic idea bhi chalega!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I wrote the story.I haven't watched any Disney horror movie so I don't have much idea on how the movies are.

The total word count is 534 words including the title.

We have to cut it down to 500 words.U all can make some changes.

Ur opinions,good or bad are welcome.

Here's the story

MISCHELLE MANSION


It was bright sunny morning of April 1st.A big blue car stopped outside a gate.A woman wearing a beautiful white gown and a handsome man in black suit came out.The man looked happy and excited but the woman suddenly turned pale.

"Roger,where did you bring me?"

"Sara,this is our house."

"But where's the house?All I see is a 1000 years old gate and a house that looks haunted."

Roger became tense.

"Sara,I told you I live in a old house."

"But Roger,you didn't tell me you live in a haunted house."

Roger is now getting irritated.

"Sara,come inside.I am sure you will love the house."

Roger carries Sara in his arms and goes inside.Sara liked this but she was still worried and confused.

The house looks old and dilapidated.

When Sara went inside the house,her eyes glowed with happiness and excitement.The house is beautiful and elegant.

"Welcome to Mischelle Mansion,our home!"

"Roger,the house is...is...awesome."

"Sara,I knew you will love it.Come inside."

Sara was mesmerized seeing the large beautiful home.

Both of them hugged each other and were lost in the dreams of a beautiful and happy life with each other.

Suddenly,Sara's eyes fell on a portrait.

Sara released herself from Roger's arms and went towards the portrait.The portrait was covered with dust of many years.

Sara raised her hand to wipe the dust when Roger held her hand.

"What are you doing Sara?Your beautiful hands will get dirty.That's Mischelle,my ancestor's portrait.This mansion is built by her husband in her memory and named it Mischelle Mansion.Both of us are tired.Let's take some rest."

It was 7 o clock and by that time Sara experienced many unnatural and strange things.

Sounds of someone playing a piano even though there's no piano at the home...

Sounds of hundreds of people chatting and laughing even though there are only two people in the mansion,Sara and Roger.

A woman crying inside a locked room...

A baby's cries...

Dishes and utensils falling and breaking one by one on their own...

Sara was becoming more and more puzzled and scared.Strangely,Roger didn't hear any of these and that made Sara even more confused and scared.

"Roger,is this really a haunted house?"

"Sara,I have lived in this mansion for many years.This home is fine.Don't worry.I am sure you will love Mischelle Mansion soon."

"Mischelle!It's Mischelle.This house is haunted by her spirit.I want to see her face."

"Sara,stop and relax!Get ready,we will go out for dinner."

Sara went inside.After she left,Roger laughed out loudly.

Oh poor sara!She is so scared.I am just making her april fool.This is not my ancestor's house but an old dilapidated building.I will take her to our real home and tell her that I was fooling her,said Roger.

Just then Roger heard the sounds of a woman and a baby crying and piano's music.

Roger was puzzled.He then saw a woman standing in front of him.

"Wwwhhhooo aaareee youuu?"

He saw the face.Her face was like Sara.

"Mischelle!",said she in the most scariest voice ever.

Roger then saw the portrait and Mischelle looked exactly like Sara.

He fainted.

"I knew you were fooling me so I too played a prank on you.Wake up,Roger",said Sara.
Edited by .Subha. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: .Subha.

I wrote the story.I haven't watched any Disney horror movie so I don't have much idea on how the movies are.

The total word count is 534 words including the title.

We have to cut it down to 500 words.U all can make some changes.

Ur opinions,good or bad are welcome.

Here's the story

MISCHELLE MANSION


It was bright sunny morning of April 1st.A big blue car stopped outside a gate.A woman wearing a beautiful white gown and a handsome man in black suit came out.The man looked happy and excited but the woman suddenly turned pale.

"Roger,where did you bring me?"

"Sara,this is our house."

"But where's the house?All I see is a 1000 years old gate and a house that looks haunted."

Roger became tense.

"Sara,I told you I live in a old house."

"But Roger,you didn't tell me you live in a haunted house."

Roger is now getting irritated.

"Sara,come inside.I am sure you will love the house."

Roger carries Sara in his arms and goes inside.Sara liked this but she was still worried and confused.

The house looks old and dilapidated.

When Sara went inside the house,her eyes glowed with happiness and excitement.The house is beautiful and elegant.

"Welcome to Mischelle Mansion,our home!"

"Roger,the house is...is...awesome."

"Sara,I knew you will love it.Come inside."

Sara was mesmerized seeing the large beautiful home.

Both of them hugged each other and were lost in the dreams of a beautiful and happy life with each other.

Suddenly,Sara's eyes fell on a portrait.

Sara released herself from Roger's arms and went towards the portrait.The portrait was covered with dust of many years.

Sara raised her hand to wipe the dust when Roger held her hand.

"What are you doing Sara?Your beautiful hands will get dirty.That's Mischelle,my ancestor's portrait.This mansion is built by her husband in her memory and named it Mischelle Mansion.Both of us are tired.Let's take some rest."

It was 7 o clock and by that time Sara experienced many unnatural and strange things.

Sounds of someone playing a piano even though there's no piano at the home...

Sounds of hundreds of people chatting and laughing even though there are only two people in the mansion,Sara and Roger.

A woman crying inside a locked room...

A baby's cries...

Dishes and utensils falling and breaking one by one on their own...

Sara was becoming more and more puzzled and scared.Strangely,Roger didn't hear any of these and that made Sara even more confused and scared.

"Roger,is this really a haunted house?"

"Sara,I have lived in this mansion for many years.This home is fine.Don't worry.I am sure you will love Mischelle Mansion soon."

"Mischelle!It's Mischelle.This house is haunted by her spirit.I want to see her face."

"Sara,stop and relax!Get ready,we will go out for dinner."

Sara went inside.After she left,Roger laughed out loudly.

Oh poor sara!She is so scared.I am just making her april fool.This is not my ancestor's house but an old dilapidated building.I will take her to our real home and tell her that I was fooling her,said Roger.

Just then Roger heard the sounds of a woman and a baby crying and piano's music.

Roger was puzzled.He then saw a woman standing in front of him.

"Wwwhhhooo aaareee youuu?"

He saw the face.Her face was like Sara.

"Mischelle!",said she in the most scariest voice ever.

Roger then saw the portrait and Mischelle looked exactly like Sara.

He fainted.

"I knew you were fooling me so I too played a prank on you.Wake up,Roger",said Sara.


Loved the concept and writing. But I want a different climax. Btw its a one shot or ff that we had to do? Pls check your PM hun.

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