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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Riahshroff
Read all 4 parts together.
Very nice story 😳 Ishra resolved everything especially Raman realised his mistake and stopped her from going was nice 😊

Thanks dear😃

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vidya.anand

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Posted: 9 years ago

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haaye Ann...kitna dreamy dreamy story tha...read it fully back to back

loved how u transformed the drunken night scene. the morning after and how u made Ishita back out knowing Raman marrying Shagun was a good twist. 👍🏼

The entire plot where Shagun's evil mind was brought out easily, flawlessly was too good...hope something similar happens in the show too.

Pihu apni aap Ishima ke paas aajayegi...and Shagun out of everywhere.

Last scene was sone pe suhaaga...picture perfect family and I could visualize it happening..

Thanks Ann for writing and bringing all our wishes into the story! 😉 🤗

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fugitives123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
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haaye Ann...kitna dreamy dreamy story tha...read it fully back to back

loved how u transformed the drunken night scene. the morning after and how u made Ishita back out knowing Raman marrying Shagun was a good twist. 👍🏼

The entire plot where Shagun's evil mind was brought out easily, flawlessly was too good...hope something similar happens in the show too.
Pihu apni aap Ishima ke paas aajayegi...and Shagun out of everywhere.

Last scene was sone pe suhaaga...picture perfect family and I could visualize it happening..

Thanks Ann for writing and bringing all our wishes into the story! 😉 🤗

Thanks u so much Vids 🤗 It means alot coming from a writer I admire alot. So sweet of you to take time to read this even though you were not so comfortable reading on writing on the current track😊