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Sona257

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Posted: 9 years ago

i'm feeling that it's incomplete.. hope you make a second part

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..optimist..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh God! That was heart wrenching!

Shyam left but leaving Khushi is such a state

Khushi and Arnav, what they might be going through... They feel...Helpless...

Beautifully written Chhoti... It was perfect, not that id needed a sequel... But glad you wrote one... because happy endings always spread happiness 😊

Do provide the link of the sequel in your first post here... that's will help readers 😊

Love,

Neha

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Posted: 9 years ago

It was really touching.. Amazing job writer

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Shilpa

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey the shot beautifully described the word helplessness...

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Shamz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wooow what a way to write it
Please continue this likes TS or SS

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