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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: anjs
Goodcis, but wud love to see arshi win n shyam loose,

It would be of no use me showing ArShi win & Shyam lose. Bcoz the crime that Shyam had done is something unforgettable. Even if Khushi gets well, she'll always stay under the same nightmare. It's useless showing Shyam lose when he'll win...

Tnx for the comment

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Lily30
Loved the os 👏
Thank you for the pm
Poor Khushi and Arnav 😭 Very emotional
Please write a second part as eager to read more.

Tnx for the comment Didu... I'm sorry Didu I haven't thought of writing second part... That was the end...

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Alicia2012
Wow great short story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story and i feel so sorry for khushi and i really hope arnav can help khushi get out of this helpess. Thanks for the pm

Ali Di this was an OS. This was the end. No another update to this part. It isn't in Arnav's hand to bring Khushi out of the helplessness... Tnx for the comment Didu..

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: gowtu
Emotional one.. Well described...

Tnx for the comment Didu

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: prerna1
very sad and emotional os...

Tnx for the comment Di

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: rarshiaaliyak
loved it ladoo//////////////////
vase dusri post kaha hai...

i mean u said u posted it twice/////////////////////////

Tnx Didu...

Aur dusri post Ko toh Maine reswa kar diya

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Zuriah

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

It truly was amazing n nice chiklet...

Im sure u can make it a two shot or three shot...

People would surely love it...

It really is beautifully written...no direct dialogues. ..only their heart spoke it s emotions...

Hats of to my chota packe t bada dhamaka👏

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neel11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

So painful but love it waiting for the next update

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-Roshini-

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Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Awesome. Want happy ending for it : )

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-SOBTIAN-

@.LadyHitler.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

This is really Awesome!
Specially the last but one paragraph! Shyam didn't get what he wanted but still ArShi and Raizada family lost! Coz Khushi is paralyzed and the fear is still there!
Perfect name for the OS!
And a perfect One Shot! Neither complete nor incomplete! Sequel ki zaroorat hi nahi mere liye!

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