The Family Love (CHAPTER 4 ON PG-5)

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This story starts after Laksh & Kavya Marriage. Kavya is positive in this ff. Ragini decides to move on. She leaves Kolkata & goes to mumbai. What's waiting for Ragini in Mumbai. Happiness or Shock? Stay tuned to FF...

Cast--
Tejaswi Prakash- As in Ragini Gadodia/Khanna... Daughter of Shekher & Janki. She has been told that her mother has died in a blast when she was just 3 months old. Ex- wife of Laksh Maheshwari.

The Khanna's --
Hiten Tejwani-- As in Mr. Manav Khanna. Husband of Janki Khanna. Father of Aryan,Aayu,Jay & Ragini.

Gauri Pradhan Tejwani- As in Mrs Janki Gadodia/Khanna, Wife of Manav Khanna, ex-wife of Shekher Gadodia. Mother of Aryan , Aayu, Jay & Ragini.

Piyush Sahdev-- As in Aryan Khanna. Son of Manav & his 1st wife Anamika (who died due to cancer, when he was 2 yrs old) He takes Janki as his own mother.He loves his family alot. He is MD in Khanna groups.He is eldest of all.

Ravjeet Singh-- As in Aayu Khanna. Son of Manav & Janki. A lawyer by profession. He loves his family alot. 2nd Son & Younger then Aryan & Ragini.

Yuvraj Thakur-- As in Jay Khanna. Son of Manav & Janki. A doctor by profession. He is cute & charming, youngest of all... Loves his family alot.

Maheshwaris----
Nagesh Salwan as Durga Prasad Maheshwari
Shalini Kapoor Sagar as Annapurna Durga Prasad Maheshwari
Sonica Handa as Sujata Ram Prasad Maheshwari
Amar Sharma as Ram Prasad Maheshwari
Tarun Singh as Adarsh Durga Prasad Maheshwari
Akanksha Chamola as Parineeta Adarsh Maheshwari
Varun Kapoor as Sanskaar Ram Prasad Maheshwari
Helly Shah as Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari.
Namish Taneja as Laksh Durga Prasad Maheshwari
Roop Durgapal as Kavya Laksh Maheshwari.
Khyati Mangla as Uttara Ram Prasad Maheshwari.

Gadodia's--
Deendayal Gadodia- As in Serial
Parvati Gadodia- As in Serial.
Shekher Gadodia- As in Serial
Sharmishta Gadodia- As in serial.



NOte-- Nobody knew that Janki is alive.
So how is the Intro...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ck.. new ff.. good going.. keep writing...
Is dis RagLak ff?? Or a new entry coming??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept story should be good
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Start!
So Jhanki is alive? Interesting

Is it new entry with Ragini or RagLak 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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seems like really interesting. I just saw some of episode of swaragn. But with the ff's i became the fan of character Ragani. Uptdate soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome beginning...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Please pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting
is it raglak or some new entry with ragini
please continue soon
and don't forget to pm me


note
i request u plzzz continue your other stories too
waiting to read them as well
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the start, do carry on xx
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CH-1
This story starts after Laksh & Kavya Marriage. Kavya is positive in this ff. Ragini decides to move on. The gadodia's bring Ragini to baadi. Ragini does not say anything & walks towards her room.
Dadi- Laddo...
But Ragini signals her not to say anything. She walks inside her room & closes the door. Tears flows from Ragini's eyes. She cries. Ragini takes out Janki's pic from cupboard & holds it near her chest.
Ragini-- Why did u left me Maa, plz... I need u Maa, today your daughter need u... I cant live here maa, i wanna come to you, plz Maa ask ur god to call me... plz... She cries hard holding Janki 's pic.

Scene Shifts to Mumbai--
A big Villa is shown. Its "The Khanna House". A room is shown. A Lady was standing there with a pic in her hand. She was looking tensed. Just then a man enters the room. He looks at her & goes to her.
Man keeps his hands on lady's shoulder.
Man- Are u okay Janki?? (Yes, the Lady is non other then Janki.)
Janki- Yaa, I am fine.
Man- You very well know u cant lie from me.
He notices the pic in her hands. (Its Ragini's pic)
Man- So u are thinking abt Ragini.
Janki- Yes Manav, but i dont know why i am feeling as if something wrong as happened. Something wrost...
Manav- Janki, you know na today is such a big day for her & u are thinking like this.
Janki- I know Manav, but...
She was cut off ,
Manav- But what Janki... U know i have asked our man to attend the wedding & record each & every moment for u. And till now half of her wedding rituals wld have been finished. So dont think like this. Haa...
Janki Nods. Manav goes to get fresh.
Janki thinks- You will never understand a mother's heart Manav, i just hope nothing wrong has happened.
She sits on the bed thinking & tensed.

Flashback--

26 yrs ago---
That was the day when Janki had confronted Shekher after coming to know abt Shekher's affair with Sharmishta. She also came to know that Sharmishta was preganent with Shekher's child. She was broken after knowing this truth of her husband. She went to her room & cried. She sees her 3 months old daughter sleeping peacefully. She thought something & tied a knot from fan. As she was abt to put it on het throat, little Ragini started crying . Hearing her cry, Janki ran to her. She made her silent & again made her sleep. She looked at the knot she tied & thinks,
"How can i be so selfish, no, i have to live for my daughter & i will live" she was determined. She slept holding Ragini tightly."
But She never knew that God has other plans for her.
Next day she woke up & got ready to go to temple which was her daily routine. As she got out of her room Parvati came to her with folded hands,
Parvati- I am sorry Janki, my son did so wrong with you, please forgive me...
Janki holds her hands & says- No Maa, what are you saying, u always treated me like our own daughter, our relation will never change.
Parvati nods...
Janki-- Maa, i am going to mandir, plz keep Ragini with you.
She gives Ragini to her & leaves, while leaving she looks back at Ragini & smiles.
Janki arrives at temple & does pooja. Just as she was walking down the temple a bomb which was kept in a box blasted. Ppl started to run all over. Many were injured & Janki was injured badly, she was bleeding & fell on floor. She thought abt Ragini & faints.
One day she got her concious & opened her eyes. She found herself on the bed of a hospital. Nurse saw her & went to call the doctor.
Doctor comes & checks her.
Doctor - finally u are out of coma after 2 yrs..
Janki was shocked.
Janki- 2 yrs...
Doctor- Yes... Okay now i will inform ur husband.
Janki thought he is talking abt Shekher. But instead a well suited man entered the ward.
Doctor- Hello, Mr Manav Khanna... Finally your wife is out of coma.
Manav smiles a little. Janki looks at him & he notices it. He knew she wld have lots of questions.
He asked Doctor & nurse to leave & himself sits next to Janki...

*** Flashback Ends***

As someone shakes Janki a little. She comes out of her thoughts & finds Manav infront of her.
Manav- Madam, whose dreams are you seeing, haa, Your Rishi Kapoor, infact i am young then him.. huh...
Janki smiles & says- Manav... You will never change... hai na..
He back hugs her & keeps his chin on her shoulders & says-- Never... My beautiful wife...
Janki smiles, just then a boy enters the room...
Boy- Mom... Dad...
Janki & Manav moves away. Boy closes his eyes.
Boy- Sorry ... I did not saw anything. I am going...
He turns...
Janki- Jay stop...
He stops... She holds his ears & says- Shaitan... Say what happened & now open ur eyes...
Jay opes his eyes & smiles cutely.
Jay- Mom, its dinner time... I & bhai's are waiting ... come soon ... Saying this he run away...
Janki & Manav looks at each other & smiles at his antics...

Screen splits on there smiling faces...

So how is this chapter...
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Originally posted by: lizjose

Ck.. new ff.. good going.. keep writing...
Is dis RagLak ff?? Or a new entry coming??

Thanks...
U will know soon...😊

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