The Family Love (CHAPTER 4 ON PG-5) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Unisha123

seems like really interesting. I just saw some of episode of swaragn. But with the ff's i became the fan of character Ragani. Uptdate soon

thanks... glad u liked it...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
when will u continue writting your stories
waiting to read
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome beginning...

Eagerly waiting for your next update
Please pm me

glad u liked it...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

interesting
is it raglak or some new entry with ragini
please continue soon
and don't forget to pm me


note
i request u plzzz continue your other stories too
waiting to read them as well

there is a new entry for ragini...
Glad u liked it...
ofcourse i will continue all my stories...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
thanks for update waiting for it.😳 Love how all three brothers are protective toward ragini.waiting for next update please update soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: xsumi

Loved the start, do carry on xx

thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lizjose

Awww... nice... 😊

thank u...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CH--3

Scene starts with Ragini walking on the road aimlessly. Just then a cab comes & stops near her.

Cab driver- Mam, Kahin jaana hai aapko.

Ragini- Haa, Bahut durr, jaha koi na ho...

Cab driver- Kya?????

Ragini- Merra Matlab Railway Station Janna hai...

Cab driver- JI...

Ragini sits & cab goes towards railway station.

Scene shifts to Baadi---

Dadi comes to Ragini's room. She knocks the door. It was open. She enters.

Dadi- Laddo... She find it empty.

She looks at washroom, which was empty.

Just then her eyes falls on a paper that was kept under pillow. She reads it & is shocked. Tears flow from her eyes.

Scene shifts to Ragini--

She reaches at Railway station. She pays taxi fare & goes inside. She goes to ticket counter.

Man- Aapko kahan ka ticket chahiye.

Ragini sees a train standing & says- Yeh kahan tak jayegi.

Man- Mumbai Central is its last stop.

Ragini- Thhik hai... Ek ticket de dijiye...
She boards the train.

Scene in Baadi--

After reading the letter Dadi runs to Shekher. They all breakdown & cries. A man who came to baadi see & listens all this & goes from there.

He calls someone.

Scene in Mumbai--

In Khanna house all were tensed. Just then Aryan gets a call.

Aryan- Yes... What's happenening in Baadi?

All stand up.

Man- Sir woh actually... Ragini ji has left her house & nobody knows were she went.

Aryan was shocked. He cuts the call.

Janki- What happened Aryan? My Raggu is alright naa... Haaa...

Tell na...

Aryan was just standing like a pillar , not knowing what to answer.

Manav- Aryan...

Aayu shakes him a little.

Aayu- Bhai... Is everything fine.

Aryan come to his senses.

Aryan- Woh... Mom... Dad... He said ki Ragini has left the baadi & nobody knows were she went.

Jankii - What... And she breaksdown.

Manav hugs her & tries to console her. While Aryan, AAyu & Jay were standing helpless with tears in there eyes.

Janki- What happened Manav... How... & why with my daughter
Manav... why?

Manav- Janki control ur self... plz...

Janki- How Manav ... How...


She suddenly stands up & says- Manav i wanna go to Kolkatta... I will go & search my daughter.

Manav- But...

Jankii- No buts... Plz Manav... I have to go ...

Manav- okk... & not just u but i will also come... Ragini is mine daughter too..

Jay- Yes , i will also come...

Aryan & Aayu- We will also...

Manav- No... only i & Janki will go to kolkatta & bring Ragini here...

Aryan- But Dad...

Manav- No Aryan, u just call our man & ask him to try finding abt ragini till we arrive.

Aryan-- kk dad... as u say...

Manav- Aayu u book our flights tickets... okk

Aayu- Yes Dad...

Janki goes to her room & starts packing.

Scene shifts to Ragini-

She is seen sitting in train.

She thinks-"Ek tufaan aaya aur merri purri zindagi tabah karr gaya, lekin abb nahi, ab main ek nayi shuruwat karru gii... ek nayi jagah, naye seher mein, jahha mujhe koi nahi jaanta..."
With these she closes her eyes & tries to sleep.

Its Morning----

Ragini wakes up hearing lots of sounds around her. She sees that Mumbai Central has come. She steps out of the train & station. She with her bag starts walking on the road aimlessly.
Ragini thinks- Main yahha aaa toh gayyi lekin , abb kahha jaau... main toh kissi ko jaanti bhi nahi.
She kept on walking.

Scene in khana house---

Janki & Manav were ready to leave for airport. Aryan, Aayu & Jay were going to drop them till airport.

Manav- Lets go...

Aryan- Yes...

They sit in car & leave. Aryan was driving while Manav was beside him & Aayu Jay Janki sitting in the back.

On the road--

Ragini was just walking , suddenly some one comes on bike & snatches her money bag.

Ragini tries to run but suddenly faits in front of a car.

The car stops. Its none other then khanna's.

Aryan & Manav get down. They see a girl lying. They turn her face. And were shocked to see Ragini.

Aryan (With shock & happiness)- Ragini!!! Dad...

Manav to nods & Aryan picks her up. He takes her inside car. Aayu Janki & Jay were shocked.

Janki- Ragini.. Yaha...

She had tears of happiness.

Janki tries to wake her up.

Janki- Aayu, Dekh isse kya hua..

Aayu- Haa mom, lekin pahele ghar chaliya.

Aryan turns the car & takes to Khanna villa...

Screen stops on Ragini's face...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
How just read the update
Loved update
Can't wair to see Ragini's reaction after she see's her mum
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey nice update... read all the parts at a stretch actually..
So no1 s paired with ragini??
Ragini is theen bhaiyon ki iklothi behen..
Waiting for ur next update.. for raginis reaction on seeing her mom alive..
Btw y dint janki go back for her daughter 2 yrs later after she came out of come???

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