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This OS is based on the current track.
It is my second OS, I hope you all enjoy. It is a bit long, sorry for that. 😊

Abhi had gone to his Dadi last night and decided to sleep in her room that night. He had locked Pragya in their room and the only place he could get peace right now was with Dadi. It was late night, so he decided to sleep in her room. When he woke up, he realized Dadi was already awake. He talked to her about how he feels and her response shocked him.
"Dadi, I locked Pragya in the room and told her I have no relation with her anymore"
Dadi was shocked but she didn't show it. Instead she said, "You did a good thing, now she will be punished. Afterall, she has forgotten that she is a woman and has no right to cheat on her husband. Cheating only suits men. Theycan go out and cheat on their wife if they are not happy with them, but a wife never can." Seeing Abhi's face she continued. "I mean look at you, you had an affair before marriage and continued it after marriage. You got your girlfriend pregnant and are about to marry her." She stopped and got up off the couch realizing that she had done her job.
Here Abhi was thinking, "maybe she did all this for revenge, she never really had a boyfriend and she still loves me. Oh no, I really told her off last night, now what am I going to do? I know, I will ask Dadi."
"Dadi, maybe she was just faking having a boyfriend to teach me a lesson, how do I find out if she really loves me still?"
"Maybe you are right Abhi. You should try to make her jealous and see how she reacts"
"Good idea Dadi, thank you sooo much" Kissing her forehead, he leaves to put his plan in action.
After he leaves, he goes to his room and realizes the door is still locked. He unlocks it and goes to take a shower. hearing the water, Pragya wakes up and sees that Abhi is here and he unlocked the door. She gets up and leaves the room. Abhi comes out and sees that Pragya is not there. "Now where did she go?" he thought.
Abhi came out of the room and saw Pragya standing outside. He also saw Tanu coming and decided to put his plan in action. Tanu said, "Look what I brought for you Abhi, breakfast, I made it myself."
"Thank you Tanu, since you made it for me, maybe you should feed it to me with your own two hands. Tanu started to feed him, and one look on Pragya's face said that she was jealous and if she had to see any more of this she would explode. She decided to leave, and she started walking down the stairs. Tanu had an evil smile looking at Pragya, which Abhi saw. Before he could react, he heard a scream and saw Pragya falling down the stairs. "PRAGYA" he yelled and ran down the stairs. He got to her and saw she was unconscious. He picked her up and took her to the room, and called the doctor. The doctor came and said that she will be okay. Pragya opened her eyes and saw that Abhi was so close to her and she got scared. She moved away. Abhi felt this and concluded, she loves him and he hurt her feelings. Now she was just scared of him. He had to do something. The next Abhi held a party and invited many people including that Champu, Chumpa, Chumpak guy, whatever his name was. The party began and he saw Pragya near Rachana and Akash, she was also trying to avoid Champak. Everytime she walked away, he would follow her like a creep he was. Rachana and Akash saw this and had enough. They waked over to him and took him to a corner. They told him to back off and stay away from their Pragya Di/Bhabhi. He didn't listen. This was Abhi's chance. He grabbed Pragya and took her away from the guests. Abhi told her "you couldn't find a better competitor then him. I look better and am stronger and you choose him. Does the mustache and dressing remind you of..." he stopped, he wanted to know how she felt about him and this was just going to make her angry. "Remind me of who?" she asked. "S ss sss Suresh." Hearing this she walked off. "Wait, I didn't mean it like that" he grabbed her hand and stopped her, pulling her back into his arms where she belongs. He encircled her waist and said, "I know you don't like Suresh or Champak. But I need to if you like me."
"If I like you, every girl does, what difference does it make."
"I don't care about every other girl, I care about you. Do you love me?"
"Yes I do." He let go of her, grabbed her hand and brought her to the center of the party.
"Ladies and gentlemen, I have an announcement." He got on his knees and said to Pragya, "Will you marry me?" She was shocked and so was everyone else.
"But Abhi, she cheated on you, she cheated on you with that do kodi ki ladka."
"No she didn't Tanu, that was just meant to make me feel how she felt in the beginning of our marriage. She loves me a lot. Ladies and gentlemen, what happened here last week was all a lie and I request that it not be brought up again." "So Pragya will you marry me?"
"Yes." She extended her hand and Abhi placed the ring on her hand.
"But,Abhi, what about me and this child?"
"After you give birth to it, give it to me and Pragya and we will take care of it."
"No, if you are going to do this, I will go back to the baby daddy and live with him." Nikhil was shaking his head.
"But Tanu, I am the baby daddy."
"No, you are not, Nikhil is." She told everyone about the plans that they made and how Nikhil wanted to be the CEO of Abhi's business. What they didn't know was that Purab was recording all of it. "Did you get all that Purab?" Pragya asked him.
"Yep, every bit of the conversation." At that moment the police came in and arrested Tanu and Nikhil.
"Good acting Mrs. Mehra."
"Same to you, Mr. Mehra."
"Thank you Pragya for telling me the truth the day you fell down the stairs. Otherwise I don't know what would have happened."
"I only told you because I didn't know if I was going to live. Thank you Abhi, for trusting me".
With all misunderstandings gone, Abhi and Pragya remarried and had a happy ending after all. Oh and Bulbul came back and lived with Purab. (sorry guys don't know how and why that's up to you all. I got tired of writing and only realized this at the end.)

Please suggest a good title for this, I could not think of anything.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice one
Do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arusan2

Really nice one

Do write more


Thank you very much.
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Nice keep writing
Title "second innings "
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Originally posted by: Maggie11

Nice keep writing
Title "second innings "


Thank you, I will. Thanks for the suggestion.

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